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Pokémon Tail of Time
Interesting so far. In the beginning it relies a little too much on telling rather than showing though. Like, incorporate the story of the door and why the town is more avoided into the conversation instead of putting it all in a single paragraph. But I'm liking Chaplin and her curiosity, and...- Word Count: 74
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- Forum: Fanfiction