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Blitzy New Year Disclaimer: Reviews are generally stream of consciousness stuff. Feel free to take with a grain of salt or ignore them entirely. And since it's been [checks watch] 18 months or so, my memory's going to be a bit foggy on some of these details, but I remember some sort of issue...

Chapter 9: Note that your chapter title cannot be seen on the forum's darker themes. I really do recommend not colorizing your chapter titles for us colorblind peeps. Was? That kind of implies the place doesn't exist anymore. 😅 As opposed to, y'know, annoying the people waiting for them by...

Ch 6: It’s the credits song from Gunvolt Chronicles! :D -If it were me, I’d italicize that opening paragraph to make it read like the character’s thoughts, since it’s in present tense. Actually, this pops up a handful of times in the Mossy Town stuff. -Did that one-shot orb actually kill the...

Merry reviewmas Ch 1: Oh boy it’s that 3DS Zelda game people like -Legit unsure what the naming inspiration behind Gen is. Dr. Google notes it’s British slang for information and he’s faking amnesia, so… maybe that? Actually I don’t know your nationality. -Okay, so Gen’s a human from, I guess...