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  1. Ambyssin

    Pokémon Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Double-Edged

    Merry Blitzmas Disclaimer: Reviews are generally stream of consciousness stuff. Feel free to take with a grain of salt or ignore them entirely. 3: Yes, I do believe that's a name. -The initial group meet up bit has similar padding problems that I mentioned last year, where it feels like every...
  2. Ambyssin

    Pokémon Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Double-Edged

    Generally speaking, this kind of onomatopoeia stuff is better suited for visual mediums like comics, not written works. How very, uh, anime? Do animals exist in this world? If not, how would the non-humans know what a goose is? This also applies to the prose from Meowth's POV using epithets like...
  3. Ambyssin

    Pokémon Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Double-Edged

    Merry reviewmas! This is probably going to be redundant to what other people said. Oh well. @.@ Prologue: Someone’s about to die, aren’t they? -Very purple prose in those opening few paragraphs. I’m not entirely sure if Nevada here is supposed to be a dig at some rural town there or, like, in a...
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