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Merry reviewmas! Ch 4 -Oh boy, a Bethesda chapter. This is gonna go great. [brick'd] -Raskin's exhaustion reminds me of an adrenaline crash, so to speak. Nifty. -Sid's right. The bait-and-switch letter thing seemed pretty obvious, though I think that's the point? -Not sure if you were using any...

So, after three chapters, I can say the writing style is quite similar to what I read of Fractured Elements. A fair bit of exposition given through Raskin's inner monologue, which I guess is better than "as you know"-style explanations. Though it still would've been nice to find more... organic...