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Glad you liked it. I was sorta aware of the second-person risks and still somehow underestimated the effort it'd need on my part. XP The idea was that, in the lab, their thinking is more mechanical. A sort of binary "black and white," so when something doesn't fit their parameters, it causes...

Glad you enjoyed it. The second-person was definitely tough to write. XP SwSh never explains the who or why behind this silvally existing, but I figured this absolutely sounds like the type of shady thing Rose's megacorp would be up to behind the scenes, so I just rolled with it. It's a good...

In the first half he is processing things more like a machine and it isn't until the helmet's on that his thinking is more... organic. I even made an effort to have the prose reflect this, but avoiding contractions in the first half and then gradually implementing them. I don't think it's ever...

Yeah, that's quite true for the game itself. I don't really establish a timeframe for the recording but I considered that recording to have come from before Rose went all in on his dumb Darkest Day idea and needed Leon around to tame Eternatus. He's basically Pokelon Musk. Left to fanon to...

I suppose in that sense, it was mission accomplished for you, then. XD That's because second-person is haaaaaaard and writing anything beyond a one-shot is haaaaaaaaaarder. I seem to recall Persephone wrote in second-person, but I'm not sure if her current project still uses that POV or not...

Author's note is at the end. Small warning for mentions of death. XxX You are MC-TF-001. Today is activation day fifty. You sit patiently on a cold, white, steel floor, watching your pack of white coat meatbags— no, humans intently. C://PACK/SHORT_BLACK_FUR praises you for not believing the...