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CHAPTER 8 REVIEW Man, Curio really doesn't like trainers lol. Though the chapter began with a heartwarming reunion between Tony and Shine, I was still glad Tony was pretty chill about the whole thing. I was worried he'd at least be bothered Shine took some money, or he'd wonder what happened...

REVIEW FOR CHAPTERS 6 AND 7 Decided to pick this story back up again this morning. Chapter 6 was pretty short, but sweet. I chuckled when Barley and Shine were exchanging their 'Diancord' handles. CongressofDunsparces and Childish Gambi—I mean Audino sound funny as hell. The little world...

REVIEW FOR CHAPTERS 4 AND 5 I had said before I'd get back into this fic, and I decided to follow up on that today since I virtually have nothing better to do. I've decided to be reading and reviewing two chapters at a time for my dailies. To start things off, my memory of the past three...

I finally sat down and read the third chapter after all this time. So far it didn't seem all that different from the previous version of it, though one could say that's a good thing. I found that stuttering Lucario strangely cute though lol, poor lad. The thousand claws are about yukky as I...

Chapter 2 Review Just read up the second chapter now. I don't remember much from the last version of it, so I can't really compare my opinions on this one compared to it. In any case, I liked a lot of the interactions in this chapter. Dialogue is definitely one of the things you've got nailed...

Chapter 1 Review Boy, this review sure ended up being long overdue huh. Uni has been kicking my ass for a while so I'm sorry for the delay. When I heard you'd revised the story, I expected bigger changes honestly, but I'm glad it's mostly the same familiar story I read a while back. The...