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  1. Adamhuarts

    Pokémon Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Agents of Fate

    Hello. Just read the second chapter of this fic and these are my thoughts on it. I like how you wrote the opening segment with the unnamed Commander. The way you narrated the opening paragraphs was pretty good, first telling us a bit about the commander's physical characteristics as well as...
  2. Adamhuarts

    Pokémon Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Agents of Fate

    Okay, finally got my ass and decided to give this story a review. This a bit overdue and I apologize for that. Anyway, I'll just get into it now. Right off the bat, I think you did a good job at setting the tone of the story. I also like the angle you took for the main conflict. In many...
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