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Just checked out chapter 1.3, and it was a good chapter as always. Ngl, even though we followed the perspective of one character all the way through, I had forgotten her name by the end of it and only knew she was a girl halfway through. That may just be my lack of attention, but then again it...

So, I finally got to the chapter Pixie gets introduced, and I can already understand why a lot of people seem to like her. She surprisingly has a lot of personality as well as an ego for a pokemon. Her conceited nature reminds me of a stuck up princess that's actually better than everyone but no...

Okay, finally read the actual first chapter this time around. It feels strangely different from the 1.8 chapter I read a while back, as if the two chapters are from different stories entirely, but that just means there's a lot I don't know yet and have to read on to find out more. I must say...

Just read the first chapter. I must say, I wasn't expecting it to be written in second pov, and since there aren't a lot of stories like this on the forums, it was a welcome surprise. The only part of the chapter I didn't like were the hard to pronounce Hawaiian names, and the first few scenes...