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Special Episode 4 Review I apologize for being late with this Vwheel review. Been undergoing some irl situations right now, but anywhere here goes. It's been quite a few years since I've last read this behemoth of a story of yours and so I've forgotten quite a couple of things about as of...

Just finished reading chapter 10 and bruh, quite a lot happened in this chapter. We're finally given a lot more context as to what was going on this whole time. We learned more about Rhy's past as a hunter and his icy relationship with Zena. Speaking of the milotic, I like her relationship with...

Just read up the ninth chapter. I enjoyed how you described Rena's hiding place with the calm waters and vast open area echoing all sounds over and over. Owen blocking Star off at the beginning brought a chuckle out of me, and Owen's tail flower being able to glow just like his old tail flame...

Holy crap, the eighth chapter was just one bombshell after another lmao, and hooray even more answers, though there are still new questions of course. I knew from the last chapter that there would be other guardians, but I didn't expect that Owen's mom and Anam would both also be guardians. Even...

Chapter 7 is finally out of the way. I don't want to sound biased or anything, but I enjoyed Star's character a lot in this chapter. She was playful and mischievous, just as you'd expect from Mew, so kudos on that characterization. That said, this chapter finally gives us a semblance of what's...

Ooooooooooh, chapter6 was pretty fun to read and I can already see that you're beginning to unravel some of the mysteries at this point.... While also adding more of them on top. I still wonder if the time Owen dreamed Nevren attacking him was a distant memory or really just a fever dream as he...

Just read the sixth chapter. It was an enjoyable read as expected and also made me ask several questions, also as expected. I wonder what was up with those 'ghosts' from that calm cave and just how they're related to those orbs. Speaking of the Orbs, I can't help but wonder just what kind of...

Alright, 4th chapter has been read now. I must say, I'm really liking all the mystery that's been getting built up in this story so far. What with Owen's peculiar experiences, the odd tension between Rhys and the alakazam guy whose name I'm too sleepy to be able to remember right now, as well as...

Okay, I've read the third chapter now. A pretty splendid chapter with tons of fun moments and whatnot. I'm really liking Owen's character more and more as the story goes on, which is a good sign. Not that I ever disliked him to begin with. I wonder what exactly it is Rhys is hiding from Owen...

Just read the second chapter, something I probably should've done sooner. It was a pretty well done chapter, and the few fight scenes flowed pretty good as well. For some reason It surprised me how quickly the effects of healing berries kicked in here, but that's probably because I've been...

Just read the prologue and the first chapter. I gotta say, you've got a good thing going on here. There were quite a few details I really liked, like how you've gone ahead and created custom pokemon moves outside what canon provides, and how fleshed out the world's concepts feel. I still have my...