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Seeing that you went through the effort of re-writing the fourth chapter, it's only right that I also give it a re-evaluation of sorts by reviewing it again. It's been a while since I read the previous version of the chapter, and I don't really remember most of what's new and what isn't aside...

Okay, so I finished the fourth chapter just now. I liked some of the character interactions and the mayor's species was not what I was expecting haha. Aside from a few typos here and there, I liked your prose for the most part. After reaching this point in the story I'm starting to feel worried...

I just read the third chapter. It was a largely uneventful chapter apart from the very last scene which foreshadows a possible new threat for Nip and possibly the village in extension. It was interesting seeing the contrast between Nip and Harus worldviews, with her having an atheistic and vegan...

Aright, I just read the second chapter now. There's not really much for me to say about it I suppose, but I do want to comment on the interesting portrayal of how pokemon in this world seem to live differently depending on where they are, which makes sense. We have the ones in the south who...

I just read the first chapter, and I must say I quite like this story. The characters were lively and I could tell you had a lot of fun writing them. With the dynamic of Haru the grounded one, Shimmer the obnoxious princess type and Muse the mysterious one, you've got quite a lot to work with...