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I actually didn’t enjot this chapter much. This is probably a personal preference thing because the other people really liked it, but yeah, not for me. It felt like nothing happened – the plot didn’t progress (except for the end), the characters didn’t make any decisions and weren’t explored...

I noticed this in the first chapter as well, but I really liked the description and little details in your writing. It's all over your writing, but I especially liked your description about them walking through the forest, the Pokemon watching them and just a mention of leaves crunching under...

I... don't actually have much to say because I have no idea what the hell is going on. That's in a good way though. I couldn't stop reading. This chapter's flow was flawless. Those single-sentence paragraphs are a brilliant hook, and I felt like everything had just the right amount of...