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Review of Chapter 10

Chapter 34 - Crossroads “Ah… you have finally returned, George.” The darkness of the night gave way to a clear sky. George worked his way to his feet, once again finding himself in the vast clouds of his dreams. It had been some time since he’d last been here, but he remembered it well...

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Review of Chapter 29

Chapter 33 - The Bitter Revelation Skal was setting up the campsite by the time the others reached the top. There was a noticeable lack of vegetation here, and not iin a natural way, either. The little bits of green that did have the audacity to have popped out of the ground here had been...

Review of Chapter 28

Review of Special Episode 2

I'm so lazy that I never actually replied to the earlier review. Gonna knock out two birds with one stone.

Review of Chapters 8 and 9

Review of Chapter 26 and 27

Chapter 32 - Evaded What a day it had been. That was the common thought shared between most soldiers that had participated in the raid on Greenfield. A light jubilant mood had settled in among them; they’d pat each other on the back, groom each other’s fur, and congratulate one another on a job...

Chapter 31 - Illusions A chill hung in the air as the Gardevoir said her piece. The two hadn’t known her nor the Aggron standing strong right next to her for more than a minute, and yet they were being ordered to follow their lead. Just like Soldiers would, just with black scarves and patches...

Review of Chapters 6 and 7

Review of Chapter 12

Thanks again for the review, @windskull

Chapter 30 - Attacked The wind whisked past, causing a ball to just barely miss the door of the hovel. It bounced, fell, and rolled to a stop by Blitzer’s feet. He stared at it for some time, let out a groan, picked it up, and repeated the same process, stopping to either fiddle with his blue...

Had 4.5 points donated to me by @Spiteful Murkrow . Level of Prize: Forum Companion Type of Prize: Samurott Preferred Method of Contact: Discord

Chapter 29 - An Awful Plan Rain fell upon Agate Township, accompanied by the hollow howling of a northwestern wind. It wasn’t rare that the wind would flow straight from the Dragonspine Mountain in the centre of the continent, but it wasn’t ever a pretty sight, today more so than ever. The Post...

Review of Chapter 1.4

Review catchup! @Spiteful Murkrow @windskull