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To avoid accidentally missing copy pasting part of a review into the post like *last time*, I've decided that it's better if I split the line by line comments and general chapter comments one by one. So, let's start with the next batch of chapters! Nice breather chapter and a way to cap off...

Hi, I somehow never reviewed anything of you and this fic has been catching my eye for a while so here I am for the first chapter! A Nuzlocke fic about Platinum where the human character is caught in a death loop is... Quite interesting. I'm always a fan of timeloop stories! This was a nice...

Hello Tango! Since chapter 9 was a bit short, I went and read from chapter 9 through 13! Merry Christmas Eve! So, a lot happened in these chapters! My favourite has definitely been Roland's introduction. I like that you could make him feel like an actual threating opponent by actually making...

Hello, this fic caught my eye because of its premise so I decided to check it out for this first week! So, this first chapter was a nice setup to the story, we can already see some changes compared to canon thanks to the main character being Serena and not a random nobody. And they are...

If there was nothing there that upset you, of course. The rating is just indicative, I'm not sure I even used the correct one, probably not at this point, maybe I should change it...

Hello! This fic immediately had my attention since it was a oneshot in this past year's contest, being about Porygon from such an interesting point of view. I ended up reading all five chapters, so here's my review of them! This was a really nice read, it feels like someone who's hobby is...

Do you like the two version exclusive Pokémon professors we got in Scarlet and Violet?? Yes?? Good, because that's pretty much all I've written almost 300k words about! No?? Good, because in that case, you can read about them suffering, being only sometimes dead, or both!! Timeslip Here on...

Hi Tango, starting this blitz by continuing our review exchange! Here's my review for chapter 6,7, and 8! (I kinda had to keep going after 7 lol) So, these three chapters felt quite important both from a character point of view and from a wordlbuilding one, with lots of little hints getting...

Sorry for the long delay, I reviewed chapters 3, 4 and 5 to compensate! So these were a bunch of really interesting chapters! There was a really nice mix of character moments with Gentleman and Rick's talk that gave some interesting perspectives on both, there was also some interesting lore...

So this chapter comes out at a very important moment: almost exactly three years ago was when I first started writing this fic. Almost three years later, it's grown in something that let me get back into writing, meet a lot of new people, and generally has constantly been at my side for three...

Thanks everyone for taking part in the event, I'm really happy to see that a couple of people reached all the way to the A rank! The prizes are as follows: - Rank A: choose any {1} Pokémon you want, it can be anything, mythicals and legendaries included. It will be shiny. In addition, you...

I wouldn't mind trying to help with the logistics team this year!

Congratulations to everyone who participated in the Z-A Royale! I couldn't participate as much as I wanted to but I still had a lot of fun and hopefully it was the same for you. As for the prizes, I please ask everyone who took part in it to make a post here tagging me so I can see it and tell...

For Timeslip it's really simple: I'm just going to copypaste the definition.

So, post chapter thoughts: this felt a bit more like an "intermediary" chapter compared to the previous one, but it makes sense since he had a much more personal connection with the Club Leader there. I liked how you still gave some unique characteristics to the members of the club and I'm very...

Day 12 112 words for Timeslip Day 14 468 for Timeslip Day 15 1200 for RP 573 for Timeslip Day 17 116 for The Imitation Game 403 for Timeslip 2872 words total Fluffyhead +4 level Raiki +2 levels Fluffyhead attacks @Negrek 's Prill T retaliates against @System Error 's Slib Raiki retaliates...

These replies are... incredibly late, but let's get to them little by little!

Day 11 616 for The Imitation Game, +3 levels 616 words total T retaliates against @System Error 's Slib! +70 rank up points My Trainer Card Timeslip Progress: 4/4, Day streak: 1 Words remaining for next level up: 310 Total words written: 39651 The Imitation Game Progress: 4/4, Day streak:1...

Day 10 1545 for Timeslip, +4 levels (almost to level 100!) 278 for RP +1823 words total Fluffyhead retaliates against @Phoenixsong Osteologos Raiki retaliates against @System Error's Bambooster +140 rank up points My Trainer Card Timeslip Progress: 4/4, Day streak: 1 Words remaining for...

Here for the prologue and chapter 1 as promised! So, the first impression of the overhauled version is definitely night and day compared to the first version I read! I really like how you used the prologue to set up both some wordlbuilding and to explain the care game in a fun, not too...