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Chapter 9: Through Fire “Look out below!” That was the only warning the goron guarding Dodongo’s cavern got before a bomb flower — tossed from a cliff above — landed on top of the boulder. He curled and rolled away just as the flower exploded, shaking the ground and throwing dust into the air...

Chapter 8: The Gorons “Link, look out!” The skull kid rolled to the side just as a tektite leaped from a higher cliff, hurling itself at Link. As he sprang back to his feet, he reached for his sword, swinging in a wide arc. Blood gushed where he sliced the beast open, spreading across the...

Always love me some drabble Bingo. I'd be down to help hand out cards this year if needed.

Escape Morning came far too soon. Dawn light trickled into the makeshift prison, dappling Haru's face. Despite getting relatively decent sleep, exhaustion clung to her bones. She wished she could get some more rest, but the branches shifting overhead indicated otherwise. Susana's long claws...

Conflicting explanations rush through your mind. Baru: I— Baru: It's not— Baru: I meant— Baru has passed out. For now, you can no longer be Baru. Please select another named character.

You don't have a disguise in your BAG! You have one good idea. You have zero good ideas. Baru: H-hey Sparkles. What are you doing here? Sparkles: I could ask you the same thing. Baru: W-well I was just getting lunch is all. Sparkles: What a coincidence, so are we! We could eat together...

The way I see it, you can't get hurt if they can't get through your defenses, soooo.... Priority: I don't know enough Consider: Why you feel a sense of urgency

Thanks for the reviews as always! One day I'll have the energy to go back and reply to everything. On the Same Page Everything ached. Though the oran berries had alleviated the worst of Nip's pain, the evening's walk flared his bruises and scratches and burns all over again. Exhaustion made...

Chapter 7: Heartpounding Grave Tour The walk to Kakariko village was shorter than Link expected, but the sky was nearly black by the time he began the long trek up the mountain path. Despite Navi's suggestions to keep quiet as they made their way up the winding road, lest they attract...

Chapter 6: Castle Crawl This time, Link was careful to edge along the cliff side, keeping out of the guard's line of sight as they approached the overpass. It was difficult out in the open. But once they were on the other side, it would be easy to keep to the shadows. As he neared, he noticed...

Hi Canis, I’m here to fufil my catnip. I’m only going to cover the prologue today, but I went ahead and read both. The intended prologue is probably honestly just below my personal gore tolerance, so please note that it could color some of my thoughts on it. That said, after reading both I...

Hey Namo. Thought I'd pick up a chapter for drive-by tag. It looks like the last one I reviewed was was “part 93,” which looks to be chapter 84 going off of ao3, so I'll be covering chapter 85 today. It has been a while since I read these chapters, but I do remember well enough that going to...

Hey Desert! I saw that you uploaded a chapter recently, so this feels like a good time to get a little caught up. I'll be starting book two today, and we’ll see where we go from there. Book 2 chapter 1 I don't have much to say about the first couple scenes, but it does very quickly get me back...

Haven't had a chance to do editing on a mawile icon, so we'll just stick with the standard this time.

Chapter 5: Humans and Monsters "Wait!" But the drawbridge did not wait. Link skidded to a stop, teetering dangerously and threatening to topple over into the moat below. Navi bumped against his chest, giving him the slightest of pushes back towards stable ground. He fell back with a thump...

Chapter 4: Cracks Using a warp rune was a new experience for Link. It felt different from a skull kid's teleportation magic — or the closest approximation he knew. His attempts at trying to use the skill always felt cold and empty, like trying to push through a solid wall of nothingness. Skull...

Hi Gyeig. Jumping in with a quick drive-by review for Diner’s review event! I'll be covering chapters 7 today, and will hopefully be back for more later in the event. Impressions first before I get to overall thoughts. I think it's really cute that Blitzer is so excited to use his fire to...

Level of Prize: Forum Companion Type of Prize: Mawile. If I get a chance to customize it I'll edit it in here. Preferred Method of Contact: Discord Level of Prize: LV 1 Type of Prize: Art (Planning to get a humanoid character, if that makes any difference) Preferred Method of Contact: Discord

I stumbled across this while looking for something short and sweet to review before the end of this year’s review blitz. While if I remember correctly you’ve pretty much completely shifted away from fanfic, I hope that some of the stuff I bring up here might be useful for you, none the less...

Hi Walrain! I’m trying to pick up a few last-minute points for review blitz and realized I haven’t reviewed anything by you yet this year. But reading your stuff is always a treat, so here I am! To start off, I think the way the story is framed, with us unable to hear Nida’s side of the...