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Logging a review of 8 chapters for Path of Valor. 2104 words here.

Reviewed Amby's "Path of Valor". My newest review is here. 2104 words counted by me, so 8 points, and I also reviewed 8 chapters, so yeah, 8 points! Although I reviewed the prologue earlier on, as you can check right here, so by the theme I should have one extra point, so 9 points, bringing my...

Well Amby, this is it. As I promised I’m making a large, beefy review for your story. I say this everytime I’m making one of those large reviews, but my comments are fresh. As soon as I’m done with a chapter, I already make the review for it, so the content stays on my mind. Another detail that...

Shiron sighed, taking a deep breath. "...Look, I don't have much experience with... Shadow attacks. You and I are the newest additions, but... I'm here if you need support, Saltriv. You're a nice Pokémon. I believe in you."

Shiron tilted his head. "I'm sorry, Saltriv... I didn't. What happened?"

Shiron raised an nonexistant brow. "Are you sure...? Well, if you're not, you can tell me. And I can try to help!"

"...I'm with Vix. No big crowds for me. Anyway, nice to see you Saltriv!" Shiron gave them a thumbs up. "Sunbathing? I didn't know Chikorita did that, but I guess it makes sense."

Shiron walked around the hall, yawning, when he noticed Saltriv's room. The Marshtomp got close enough to the door. "Hi, Saltriv! How are you doing?!" He asked.

...Actually, logging two more reviews for today. Oh well. The first has 263 words and the second has 294. Adding to a total of 557 words. Adding that to the previous one and I wrote 2060 words in reviews today, lol Path of Valor The Meaning of Power

Jesus I couldn't help myself and posted more reviews. Oh well, here we go again. First, I reviewed Amby's "Path of Valor". It's here. 263 words, so 1 point. Secondly, reviewed Cress' "The Meaning of Power". Right here! 294 words, so 1 point. If my calcs have been correct, I should have 34...

Hi Amby. Like I said before I'm reviewing PoV... Well, it's not the 2k word review. Yet. For now this is only covering the prologue! Anyway, I don't get why you're always saying bad things about this, I enjoyed it. A lot, in fact, I got hooked on that Phantom scene. A unique enemy, so it...

Hi Cress! Here for the Blitz! Wow, this chapter was so fun to read! Truly, an amazing experience from start to finish. I'll give you my thoughts now, but to be honest, I'm really impressed with your work! Okay. So we have Silver, the rival from the Johto games, as the protagonist. A nice...

Logging five reviews today. A total of 1503 words for all those reviews. The envy of eden The End - Rekindled The Legendarian Chronicles PMD - Stargazer Chronicles Continental Divides

Hi. Today has been a good day for reading and reviewing, so here I go. I have five reviews today. The first one is this one, for "The envy of eden". I counted 251 words. So one point for this. The second one is here, for "The End- Rekindled". Now this one is a bit special, I reviewed this...

Hi. Here for the blitz. Guess this is the third trainerfic I'm reading today. Oh well, this one is set in Hoenn?! Oh yeah! Hoenn is my favorite region from them all! This first chapter was fun to read. I'm gonna give you my general thoughts on characters, description and I'm ending the review...

Hi. Navar here, decided to check one of the trainer fics out for the Blitz. With that in mind I just finished reading the prologue. You made it with two very distinctive scenes, so I thought about making my review about both of those scenes! Alright, here I go! So we start off with a scene with...

Hello! I reviewed this fic before for catnip, twice actually, haha, what are the odds? Oh well, since the blitz is happening I decided to review another chapter of this fic, maybe even catch up with it? Oh well, here I go! I liked this moment. Worldbuilding, right? It was nice of you to add it...

Hi Kint, Navar here! Since I’m feeling better now, I decided to read and review the first chapter here for the blitz! My review style is mostly me rambling about the cool stuff, so I hope you don’t mind that, and enjoy it! Without further ado, here I go! For starters I gotta say I loved the...

Shiron panted, exhausted from that enormous battle. Finally, it seemed to be over... Or was it? Kyogre yielded, but a Legend like that wouldn't give up so easily, right? "M-Maybe he actually did give up...?" The amphibian's gaze turned to all his teammates. Everyone did great in that battle...

Turn 6 Shiron: Focus and Call on Astrid