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She then turned to me, her eyes fixed on mine like it was the first time she truly saw me "Every day you wake up, and put on your mask. That mask everyone sees but you don't, and I too can see through it now. But let me ask you; Do you truly want to be that person? Are you willing to? Are you...

I do get it can be a bit distracting, but the first chapter has to be like that because of... reasons. I think it will be a good idea to make a quip to that in the next one, thank you for your observations. :veelove:

Thank you for your feedback! Ugh, I can't believe I didn't notice that when reading :quag: Slaver is a synonym for drool and slobber, but it's rarely used and people usually think of slavery. I didn't want to repeat "drool" since I had used it not long before but should have gone with slobber...

Chapter one Good morning! The first thing I remember is the heat. It started as a soft warm feeling in my body, I couldn't tell if it came from inside or outside, because it felt all the same. A gentle grasp embracing me in its bosom, where I rested, eyes closed, feeling completely at peace...

Prologue New Life The warm sunlight bathed the meadow as the star began to rise on the horizon. Soft white clouds cutting out against the still dark sky as they waited for their celestial friend to join them in the heavenly vault. Their fluffy shapes being slowly colored over by the gentle...