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I will always advocate against Cosmo as a POV character because he works better outside the perspective. XP 3spooky5me dungeon. Once they actually reached the weird stuff. Felt a bit weird to have all the mushy-gushy love stuff happening in the middle of the exploration, even if it is pointed...

Ha. You're still a whippersnapper from where I'm standing. You know what they about when you assume, Ozzy. Noooo he's got the traumatized protagonist blood spot it's never been more joever 😭 Just like real taxis! :V Hey, I know that guy! There's probably some stuck in his whiskers and he...

43 -This chapter's going to be singing-themed, which means it's about that prim— oh, yep, there's Marigold. -Huh. This tense opening with the girls pinged me as familiar... and I think that this is actually the "later" chapter I had skimmed over points of to try and see if I could draw any...

Let us continue. Though it's not formally labeled as such, the constant past/present shifting that's happening here coupled with your explanation about how there was once a 30k word :unquag: chapter makes me feel like this is the Fenn's backstory special episode. 38 -I can't honestly peg the...

I'm apparently a glutton for punishment. Or I just want a little custom vulpix sprite. Either way, fuck it. We ball. 32 -C'mon, Ozzy. You can tell Finch that Swift doesn't like you because daddy issues. -Oswald's priorities are all over the place that he's emblematic of that old "I have no idea...

Merry blitzmas! Disclaimer: My blitz reviews are stream of consciousness styled rambles. Let me know if you have any questions. Since this is going chapter by chapter of these fairly old chapters I'm probably going to focus mostly on the plot. And may not cover that many of them, since a decent...

Okay that was an unexpectedly long chapter for the early fic. One with a... fair amount of basic exposition. About the guild, the hub city, the country(?) they're in, etc. All of the tense confusion issues I mentioned from the beginning are here in spades, but at least this is all first-person...