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Koa's chest tightened at Icetales' question, and he felt slightly nauseous, though he kept his face neutral with practiced ease. It was the one thing he could do since he was used to keeping up a calm mask at that sort of question. He offered a shrug, keeping his gaze carefully even. Part of...

Quick review time! Wow! I have to say this story has improved greatly since I last read it. I absolutely love the revisions you made. The dialogue feels very good and colloquial, very natural. I also deeply adore the choice to rewrite the final battle, and replace it with a match against Dorien...

Koa listened intently to Icetales story. He wasn't used to someone opening up to him, although then again he rarely asked people anything personal. Mostly to avoid anyone asking him anything. His heart twisted as Icetales continued to speak. To have to leave everything behind, to be forced to...

Koa perked up. If anyone might understand how to control one's shadows, Icetales would understand. He was about to nod and agree, then he hesitated slightly. What if his training session ended up like his one with Brisa? "I... I'd like that," he said slowly, offering a smile to the regal...

While in the infirmary, Koa decides to keep a close eye on Zinc, and her comings and goings. As he continues to recover and be able to walk around a little more, he sometimes follows her discreetly. He's hoping to see if she does anything odd while around Sword/Shield, or if she shows any weird...

Logging 3 hours of writing today and a review I wrote for a Bingo prompt https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/sinnoh-bingo-fics-an-adventure-though-diamond-and-pearl.713/post-32173

I thoroughly enjoyed this, for a number of reasons! (advanced apologies if this mini review is a little rambly/disjointed). First of, the prose was nice. A lot of internal thinking/narration. I've never read DPA but I am fascinated eternally by all things Cyrus, and the idea of him eventually...

The final piece to my wonky puzzle of bingo prompts is complete! https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/tales-of-pokemon-bingo-prompts.696/post-32156 Introducing: Anger Point! A story about a budding psychic trainer who must contest with the burdens placed upon her and the...

"So, who will it be?" Inertia Matsumodo gazed at the assortment of pokemon before her. Espurr, Reuniclus, Drowzee, Abra, and even a Munna and Ralts. A Chingling in the back, along with a Gothita. There was even a single Sigilyph among the group, which was surpising. Her parents had really gone...

Koa nodded emphatically in agreement as Icetales described teamwork. It wasn't far from the things he'd tried to teach his own pokemon. Everyone supported and looked out for each other. Koa shrugged, keeping his expression neutral. It felt harder and harder lately to brush things off like he...

Koa was briefly caught off guard by the gesture and froze, at a loss for words. Warmth spread through him at the compliments. His eyes shone with delight, even if he remained mostly aloof. "I - you-" he stopped and caught himself. "Thank you," he said quietly. Perhaps Icetales did have a point...

What on earth does panacea mean? He wondered to himself. Icetales was so strange, yet he kind of like it too. it was fun, talking to him. At the compliment, Koa's eyes sparkled with delight. His attacks had been far from perfect, yet Icetales had been impressed. Koa's smile faltered, but...

Koa hated hospitals. They only served to remind him in some way of his failures. Of how he'd found a way to screw up again. It had been some days since his disastrous fight in the Worldcore, which had left him... well, he couldn't even walk out of there. His body still ached. although more than...

Logging 60 minutes of writing from earlier today

Koa watched them work, his mind running over the Mews words. Letters? Swimming? Why did that sound familia- Unown. His eyes widened. He opened his mouth, wanting to ask more, then stopped. Sword was already asleep. And wasn't the team worried about a spy? Maybe best not to say too much...

(to be clear, I'm not sussing Lexx. Rascal just wants to bite him lol)

Rascal rolled her eyes and stamped her foot. "Annoying." She muttered and growled to herself. Her gaze darted toward the scrawny kid and she sized him up. If he was really a trainer, he didn't seem like much... Not much spine, she guessed. She felt like unlike the white haired boy, Wes or...

Koa lay on one of the many beds in the infirmary, his gaze distant and his thoughts scattered. That battle had been... He shook his head to himself. He didn't want to dwell on everything. Instead, he focused on the Mew they had rescued. Sword was her name, apparently. He watched the monitors...

[[So there's two options. Mafia did try to kill someone but failed. Or mafia killed no one. The former may be more likely. The real question is... Who here might have seemed the most surprised no one died... If an attempt was truly unsuccessful... Do we even know how many mafia there are? Is...

[[So there's a good chance its not DawningWinds then but. I'm still hesitant to make any definitive guesses yet, although there's no way to really know I suppose]]