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"I'm pretty obvious about why I help people," Darkwhite said. "I'm just in it for the fun!"

Turn 5! Rayquaza is down, Kyogre and Groudon are up! Shield isn't doing so well, but it seems like they're trying to go for a Supercell to turn the tide. Shield is beefed up by a lot from Supports to force the team to target Shield for nothing... Can they break through? Actions: 4: Astrid 3...

"A fine effort, but it won't be enough!" Rayquaza shouted, weaving out of the way of Icetales' seeds. He knew what that would do to him, and there was no way he was going to let it connect! What he didn't realize was that this coordinated assault made the Seed the least of his worries...

Turn 4 summary: Seyka: Haste I Nip Vix: Calm Mind, Elixir Nip: Shadow Spike Rayquaza x4 Shiron: Focus, Shadow Maelstrom Dave: Taunt Shield x2, Assurance Rayquaza Astrid: re:Psych Up Brisa Attack; Recurve Iceberg, Focus, Heal Bell Dave Nip Starr, go to front (free), Wind Up Cabot: Iron Tail x3...

Magnezone buzzed something to Alakazam, who in turn grunted and nodded. Gengar and Weavile just scowled. Typhlosion, however, stood a little higher and looked to Crobat, then said some rallying cry to the others, which called them to attention. Silver watched Typhlosion's speech--something that...

Darkwhite huffed and shook the remote. "You're cheating," she said with a glare.

Turn 4: Rayquaza's strength is waning, but Shield is trying to make him last. A Blinding Meteor and a Gale has been set up, and a Magical Aegis is blocking Magic attacks this turn! Shield's Protects are down, too! Actions: 4: Astrid 3: Brisa, Cabot, Celeste, Curio, Dave, Icetales, Nip...

They next volley came in a wave like before, and the announcer was getting in the rhythm as he gracefully weaved between stray blasts. "Team Spectrum is on the offensive again!" Incineroar announced. "But it looks like Rayquaza is weathering every single blow!" "Hang in there!" Shield urged...

Silver considered that. "...Y'know, that's actually not a bad idea. Maybe I'll observe you guys during the fight and see what they have to say about it. I'm in no position to do commanding yet, but maybe after seeing that fight, I'll... get something." Typhlosion and his team seemed...

Thanks to you both for the reviews, and I'm glad that you've enjoyed the first chapter! I was actually a little worried about this one because it felt like a slow start, but I think the focus on characterization really helped things out. Glad the gamble paid off! If I had to make predictions...

Turn 3 summary: Tricky: Energize II Brisa Astrid: Recurve: Psych Up Magic, Iceberg at Shield; Shadow Recurve Psych Up, Terrain Orb and Cautious Seed; Escape Orb and Max Elixir; Wind Up Vix: Fire Blast x2 Weavile Icetales: default attack at Rayquaza for the Protect, Mist, Radiant Cheer on...

Topping off the week with one more themed review, this time for Shulk's Lycan-cyrstal, chapters 1-3. >400 points, so 1+1 again, for a total of... I think I'm at 18 now?

Hey Shulk! I'm here for the blitz, and while I thought you might have had Fay here, this is also the only work I'm aware of from you, so I may as well give this a read instead! So, I'm a big fan of Orre, so I hope I can see some references to that here and there later, such as Nik mentioning a...

"Killed? Pffft. Like I'd ever kill someone!" Darkwhite twirled around, absentmindedly thinking. "At least, I don't think so. But you definitely ignored those last never have I evers. How come you aren't shaking your candles away, huh?"

"They all came flooding back when I saw my Grass form," Owen said. "It was so freaky that it reminded me of when the same thing happened to me back home. And from there it kind of all just..." Owen made a vague, exploding gesture with his hands, then sighed. Typhlosion was trying to contort his...

"It's called a nickname? Duh! Get it right!" Darkwhite pointed an accusatory finger at Jesse. "You shake your thing and lose already! Both of those totally applied to you because you spilled Brisa's emotional blood or whatever! Also you just said you beat up a Legend so that totally counts."

Darkwhite lunged forward. "Never have I ever swore in a dumb accent like Jesse's!"

Another one, taking on all the fics that I've been meaning to get to for Blacklight purposes... this time The Makings of a Hero, chapter 1! This one is >350. Once again, 1+1

Heya Fuse, this is a review of the first chapter! I think your first few paragraphs did well in establishing the central conflict of what appears to be a short story. Good start, because it means you didn’t dabble with too much backstory than necessary, and you can probably sprinkle in those...

Darkwhite rolled her eyes and shook her remote unceremoniously. "Really? I'm Mew. I've seen, like, everyone."