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1. I'd be happy to do Evil POV, Pokemon Isekai and anything goes! 2. I'll be free for at least the rest of July. I don't know what my life will look like come August. 3. I have no preference as to whether I'm the first writer or not. I haven't done these before, just FYI. Thanks for putting...

Oooh I love this! Thanks so much for starting this thread! I work for a church, so I also read a lot but it's mostly liturgical documents and spiritual writings. From those, I think one I would universally recommend is The Power of Silence by Robert Cardinal Sarah. He sugarcoats nothing and...

Hello everyone! After much procrastinating and some editing, I've revised the one-shot I entered in the Myths and Legends contest earlier this year. I tried cutting down the exposition in the first two scenes and changed some of the earlier character interaction. I also cleaned up wording and...

Hello! This is a day late, but here's the latest chapter! It's long... again. These things will get shorter at some point, I promise. I hope you enjoy! Chapter 8 The sun beat oppressively down on the seashore. The pale sand burned beneath Maressa’s feet as she struggled up the sandy coast...

Hi everyone! Here's the next chapter. Hope you all enjoy! ^_^ Chapter 7 “Breloom-Breloom-BREEEEEE!” “Cut it out!” Derek trudged down the hallway as Breloom hopped excitedly about him, chirping non-stop. This was NOT a wonderful day! He was tired of being at sea and he wanted to be in a...

Congrats to the winners and a HUGE thank you to all the judges for your work in giving us such wonderful reviews! I'm very grateful to have participated in this contest and that you all put in so much effort despite the large number of contestants and short time period! Thank you so much!

Hello hello! I have owed you this review for so long and am finally getting around to it! First off, gotta say I internally squee'd when I saw Steven. I don't even know what his role is in this story or what his attitude will boy, but as a Hoenn fan I am very excited. Interesting. So Pokemon...

Things in my life are actually unrelated to what you're probably talking about; it's just health conditions appearing suddenly in my family members that we don't yet know how serious they are, so maybe everyone will be okay, and maybe not. My sister's family was threatened and robbed so they're...

Hi everyone! This is another fairly long chapter. If you have any thoughts or critiques, I'm happy to hear them! Enjoy! Chapter 6 "Please?" Claydol groaned, firmly denying the request. “Come on. It’s easy, and what else are you going to spend your time doing? All you do all day is float...

Chibi Pika's notes are hilarious haha. I'm glad you shared these with all of us for us to see! Best part of the whole game. I find it hilarious that 1. The thumbnail is my post saying "I don't know how to defend myself without giving myself away 2. Two posts in succession are my saying to...

While Discord has been blowing up with people raving about this game, I want to thank Negrek here for all the work you put in! This was so much fun and (from what I can tell) so well thought out. I had a blast and I see that the others did, too! I didn't realize outing myself as the seer was a...

A few weeks late, but better late then never, amiright? I want to apologize if I come across as overly nitpicky. I just pointed out whatever stuck out to me, and that just happened to be more than usual this time around. Overall, your stuff is still very good! Anyway, let's get into it...

Ooohhh can I get a Mightyena to accompany me please? :D

Woops, a quick thing I want to reply to that I didn't get to before: Fair enough! Another case of me not characterizing the Pokemon enough before delving into the plot. Her Seaking is much more timid and easily distressed than her other Pokemon. Her Pokemon all have backstories, but it isn't...

If it's not too late, I wrote a review for The Fall of The Freak by The Walrein here! The Mafia game has been eating me alive o_o But now that the thread is closed for a bit I can finally turn to other things lol

Hi there! I noticed you hadn't had reviews yet and poetry is something I don't come across much on these forums, so I thought I'd stop by and give it a look! I gotta say that, overall, I think this really works. You do a good job of writing in iambs, though it gets a bit inconsistent at parts...

I don't know how to defend myself without giving myself away ;_; If I tell you I'm innocent, will that make you guys feel better about me? :D

I'm going with Persephone (and not just because she was the first to try and lynch me). I strongly trust what Dragonfree says and I can tell that qva has a lot of support for her as well.

lol I'm so sorry, I didn't mean for it to come across that way. That being said, I feel that there is sufficient reason for the mafia to choose to target you as well. Uhhh I feel like that's not a good idea. I'm not a fan of taking a random shot in the dark without much incriminating...

My thoughts: Sparkling Espeon's story corroborates Dawning Winds's. But then the intended target would have been qva. I would have thought they would go after Chibi, since Chibi is good at this game (at least that's what I can tell from looking at last year's thread). If Dawning Winds swapped...