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lolllll so when I saw Chapter 8 was out, I was like "Yay! I'm gonna be the first to review it!" only to see you've gotten like 5 reviews since then 😅 Well isn't that a mood. GIBS! I used to use four-dot ellipses until I was told that three-dots are correct in novel writing; idk if you've...

Hey hey, here for Catnip! Apologies for how late this is; I reviewed the prologue and first 3 chapters to get a gist of the story and a feel for how it goes. I don't think I have much to give that hasn't already been said by kintsugi, haha. After receiving such a wonderful review from her, this...

I think I was most amused by Joshua becoming an appletun and then only being known as J-Dapps. And omg his end was the most hysterical thing I read XD I also died when reading B's scene with the boss in Part 10. I literally cried from laughing. Everything about this was so great and I loved the...

You reviewed my one-shot on processing grief, now looks like I'm reviewing yours :P Ngl, I came because I saw lapras and thought that's what this story was about. But I was not disappointed! I usually avoid stories with any suicide but I think this was tastefully done, in part because it's...

Published another chapter of Drowning at 4,564 words. Also did a the review thing for Starfall at ~1100 words.

Here's Chapter 14, right on schedule! Not one of my proudest chapters--it's a lot of doing and talking. Any comments and thoughts are appreciated! Chapter 14 Phoebe glanced around the room apprehensively. The Gym Leaders and Elite Four of Hoenn sat around a table. Large windows encircled...

Heya! I'm here for your Blacklight prize review! You certainly know how to craft an attention-grabbing title; the name alone of this piece made me think it would be something grand which the premise also promised! This turned out to be a story that made me think and had more of an impact on me...

Published a chapter of Drowning at 5,403 words Reviewed chapters 12-13 of The End:Rekindled Submitted a fic for The 7 Day Fic Challenge!

Day 1: Share a fic you liked when you were younger or the first fic you can remember reading. Hoenn League: A Brendan and May Adventure by Breezy (Serebii | FFNet version) Summary: Look at the title Rating: K+ Words: 300,00+ Status: Complete This was the first fic I ever read and it has...

Here for chapters 12 and 13! Chapter 12 was real good (I forgot to actually take down notes/thoughts as I read it, so this'll be brief ^_^;) Enigma came across as legitimately scary. Up until now, others had mentioned he was scary and high-ranking but when we saw him he was usually with...

I decided to do a bonus chapter! This fic was originally about the low-key lives of grunts, and I wanted to write a bit more about that, even if it isn't the main focus of the meat of the fic. You can skip this chapter without missing anything plot-important; I just wanted to make more use of...

Reviewed chapters 1-11 of The End:Rekindled, 1500 words Chapters 1-5 of Places We Call Home, 1375 words Chapter 6 of Continental Divides Wrote 400 words. And published another chapter of Drowning.

Hello hello hello! I've seen you around a lot, both here and on Serebii and I always thought you were cool and I enjoy talking to fellow Christians. I read some of Pokemon:Life when it was on Serebii and I like your writing style. I know this fic was finished there, but when I saw you were...

I'm so glad to see this being updated again! And we get to see Team Aqua's ship, to boot!! It's like an early Christmas! Ah, I hear these words almost every day. Well, not exactly these words, but stuff along these lines. It's always interesting looking at these arguments and the...

Hello hello! I'm here for your review prize for Blacklight! I'll be reviewing chapters 1-5, picking out some lines that stuck out to me, with the meat of my review coming at the end. I don't have much to say about the prologue, but I really like it. I really enjoy the imagery of all the...

Here's Chapter 13 (on schedule, for once)! I don't have much else to say about it, but I hope you enjoy! Chapter 13 The streets bustled with people while the colorful garlands hanging from the buildings swayed in a gentle breeze. The sky was dotted with winking stars, occasionally covered by...

I love the direction this took! I was able to guess The Walrein from the rapid-fire comedy and Negrek from the jab at Team Rocket's acronym. I thought these were really clever! The Ditto culture stuff got me XD Thanks, Sparkling Espeon, for running this and thanks to all the others for making...

Read Ch 3 of PWCH, read ch 8 of The End:Rekindled and wrote 2,260 words today.

Read ch 2 of PWCH, ch 7 of The End:Rekindled, and wrote 3,500 words today.

Spent an hour writing (finally getting around to editing woooo), read ch 6 of The End: Rekindled and read a chapter of PWCH.