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From his hiding place under the couch, Tabitha wished the Shinx had beaten up that freaky creature. Then he wouldn't have to watch it float about, nipping the ears of that Delphox. Not that he liked the Delphox, either. Constantly swearing--in front of a child. Tabitha might work with an...

Tabitha scratched an ear with his hind paw--he still wasn't used to feeling that. What on earth were these things? A... wee-yoo? And that Delphox was drinking some sort of alcohol--Tabitha crinkled his nose at the scent. The upsides to being a Mightyena were also downsides: being able to smell...

I'll keep this in mind and not point out too many things I see. This review might end up being a bit bare-bones because of it, but I'll see what I've got. Second paragraph and already I think this is just gorgeous prose <3 Not sure "only" would be the correct way to start this sentence; might...

Wrote a little review for Outside the Frame. +1 Chapter +1 Theme Edit: Starlight, Star bright, Has reviewed another chapter tonight: Chapter 1 of A Home Far Away +1 Chapter +1 Theme

Hi Neb! I quite enjoyed The Inalienable Dreamless, so I figured I'd give this a look! I've never read The Curious and the Shiny so I might not get quite as much out of this as some others. But I'll give it a look! :D You use "while" twice here, and it feels repetitive imo lolol nice name Oh...

Tabitha blinked several times and yawned as he raised his head and shook his fur-- Fur? He bolted to his feet--oh, crap--he was a Mightyena! His heart raced. How did this happen? Was this one of Team Aqua's ploys? Was Courtney's crazy curse infectious and turn people into Pokemon? And where...

Of course, happy to help and good luck with it! I totally get feeling the rush to churn out more chapters, but a rule I think most fic writers tend to stick to is quality over quantity. So even if you plow ahead and write the first several chapters, it might be a good idea to make sure to not...

Ye review for Raingurl, Make It. +1 chapter +1 theme 1108 words

Amen to that. Hi! I came here because I heard 1. Hoenn, 2. rain (Kyogre???), and 3. more Hoenn. Hoping Mightyena is going to crop up in that list soon. So I've gotta give this story a shot! As said before, welcome to the forums! Always wonderful to see stories by new people :) First paragraph...

Meh, Starlight will join. Transversal, crossing the backs of legends +1 theme +1 chapter * at 968 words

You review me, I review you! All right, so I was intrigued when you said that this was inspired largely by the manga. I've never read the actual manga itself BUT I have read summaries and tbh it might be my favorite Pokemon medium; it largely inspired the latter half of my own fic! (The RSE...

:D Hey OSJ, I found some more fertilizer for your plants! Well I do intend to post it all, it's just the 900 reviews on the first chapter pointing out the same problems by each different person made me realize it needed a rewrite lol. And unfortunately for myself my brain is ENORMOUS and I've...

Thank you both so much for taking the time to read and comment on this! They were both a delight to read, and I'm glad you both seemed to enjoy yourselves as well. Now what do I do with your body Oh haha I might as well let you know to stop yourself while you're ahead; Drowning is on a hiatus...

Mad Libs, my one weakness! Here's something ~icy~ ____ sang softly as he ____ his baby ____. ____’s cries gradually ____ to ____ as she ____ angrily at her brother with bright blue ____. He sang the old ____ over and over again—the ancient ____ was the only remotely-____-melody that came to...

I can't help but notice there are plant themes in all of those (except Breloom, but fungus is close enough, right), and several are at least part grass or bug type :P I started doing the Pokemon Picker but I just kept choosing every Water-type I saw lol

Reviewed four chapters of Do Psychic-Type Pokemon Dream of Electric Sheep? at ~1500 words. Reviewed four chapters of The Suicune's Choice at ~800 words.

Yeah I say no such thing. ANYWAY, here for your review! As you know, my reviews tend to be 0% crit and 100% gush so I hope you're all right with that! Did the ranger's name begin with an "S" and end with an "arlight Aurate" Oh gosh I hate studying ecology and climate. They're so hard and...

Hey Espy! I am here for your Blacklight Prize Review. I'll review chapters 4-6 this time around! Since I pointed out some grammar stuff in my previous review and I know that I'm still not caught up, I'll refrain from pointing out grammatical errors. Feel free to let me know if you'd like me to...

Oh, where do I begin? I never should have joined Team Aqua--I never should have turned Betty or my parents away, I never should have tried to take on all the responsibility Team Aqua gave me, I never should have tried to have my Pokemon fight against others when they had no chance... I never...

Posted a one-shot at 6,000 words.