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Logging a review for Salvage. 11 chapters, ~2900 words.

Okay, I can’t copy/paste from FFN so it looks like I’m not pointing out my thoughts line-by-line so this will be shorter and more cohesive than my usual reviews. My apologies for getting this Blacklight review to you ludicrously late! I figured the least I could do was at least give you a solid...

Might as well add my latest: The Best Boy: Everything is absolutely the best ever and I love my trainer so so much but oh my gosh now he loves those Houndoom even more and everything is the WORST

Hey hey! Apologies for being quite late, but I am here for the catnip review! I know this fic already is quite a few chapters in, but I'll give the first chapter a look. I'll point out things as I see/think of them and then give the meat of my review at the end. Quick question: why refer to the...

Logging reviews! Home is Where the Hoenn is: 2 chapters, 700 words Butterfree The Suicune's Choice: Chapter 5 The End: Rekindled: Chapters 20-21, more than 200 words A Home Far Away: Chapter 1 Outside the Frame Transversal, crossing the backs of legends: Chapter 1 Raingurl, Make It: Chapter 1

I see "Hoenn" and I am here. Hi! I'm trying to get myself back into reviewing again, so I thought I'd take a look at this (largely because of the title ^_^;). I liked what I read so far of Legendary Adventures and you have incredible beta readers so things are looking good! I THINK you don't...

UPDATE POST Hi everyone! After my unannounced hiatus, I am back with more chapters of Drowning! Chapters 1-7 have been completely rewritten from scratch. This was to reflect my current writing style (they were close to 8 years old), to flesh out more character backstory and give more background...

Hey! Here for your very long overdue I-have-no-excuses-and-I'm-sorry Blacklight review! Right off the bat, I love that this is written addressed to someone specific. It definitely feels very unique and gives a stronger personal touch. Gosh, I absolutely love all of these specific memories. So...

Happy birthday, lovely! I hope your day is wonderful and full of tea!

Logging 7 chapters completely written from scratch: Chapter 1: 2,800 words Chapter 2: 5,300 words Chapter 3: 3,900 words Chapter 4: 4,600 words Chapter 5: 5,800 words Chapter 6: 7,500 words Chapter 7: 7,000 words Should be a total of 36,900 words, if my maths is right. I have a few reviews to...

Sweat poured down his face as he sprinted forward. Heart racing—muscles burning—chest searing—head pounding. The air he breathed didn’t feel enough. But he had to go on—he couldn’t give up! Out of the corner of his eye—there! His opponent had passed him and was away like a bolt of lightning...

Tabitha grit his teeth as he saw his attack only served to make the disco ball brighter, funkier and more vivid than ever before. He turned his face away from the array of rainbows, his eyes falling on the small Ralts stoicly holding the photo of Gen. Tabitha walked over and peered at the...

"Why not do it yourself?" Tabitha called to Lee as the Lycanroc slunk outside. "You'll have the satisfaction of revenge; it's very cathartic." As Lee disappeared, Tabitha placed his paws over his ears and glared at the ball of mirrors in the sky. The music was deafening, the strobe lights were...

"Well, now, THIS makes it sound as if your partner is still alive! So I think we can safely say that it was not Palkia." His eyes roved over the ghost Lycanroc and the Oshawott. "I take it, then, that one of you is partnered with her. And don't you realize what that does to yourselves? One of...

"Sorry to break it to you, but I've had Hoenn police and Team Aqua on my tail over the course of several years. None of them have been able to detain me, so I wish you the best of luck." He looked at the Ralts clutching the tiny Oshawott. Getting up, he slunk over to her, his vermillion gaze...

Tabitha looked at the microwave that had taken Palauans place and surveyed the rest of the room. He smiled. “Yes, since I’ve been here, I have not lied. Palkia tried to kill me—and instead killed himself.” He addressed the Oshawott. “I don’t know if the phases of the moon had anything to do...

Hmmm I tend to not make "New Year's Resolutions" per say as much as I change up habits by season. But! If I had to say what I plan to commit to: - Upload revised version of Drowning - Once revisions are posted, post a new chapter every 2 weeks - Continue posting every 2 weeks until fic is...

"Ah... Thank you." Tabitha still had no idea what was happening but at this point he would try to roll with it. But that last thing-- "Darkwhite's killer isn't alive? What does that mean? Is there someone else eliminating those of us here? Someone outside?" "But can't the Oshawott do that? He...