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Hoo boy, yeah. Still in the fic tutorial, for better or for worse. I do think you do a very good job of moving the tour along. There aren't these pauses to the chapter for exposition like before, save for that bit in the beginning. That one gets a pass since it's kinda framed as being stated to...

So, I actually compiled a trio of recommendations as part of the ongoing Heartache campaign. And because I'm lazy, I'm going to copy-paste it. So, presenting... Amby's TR underrated PMD sampler platter for possible Review Blitz consumption! For these recommendations, I'm picking fics from...

Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Path of Valor Synopsis: When a dreepy princess, two classmates, and their servants are sucked into an alien world ruled by a tyrannical deoxys, they kickstart a chain of events endangering the omniverse. With the fate of all worlds hanging in the balance, can this...

Chapter 77: City of Unfortunate Events It wasn't quite the level of chaos Seifer had seen in the shaky videos of Venish, but that wasn't for lack of trying. Various muscular pokémon ran down the main street, tossing small seeds at nearby shops and restaurants. A few lobbed the seeds up toward...

I know I got assigned this for V-Wheel, yet I don't find myself with all that much to say about the chapter over all. It's not a bad chapter by any means. I just think some of the stuff at the healer's den failed to hold my attention because the fic has, at this point, established a pattern of...

Chapter 76: Hot Off the Press The Renegade cannot reconcile that the Benefactor embodies the Old World. That is why he ruined the Great Harmony. Why he relentlessly seeks the Benefactor's destruction. For every attempt the Benefactor makes at repairing the Universe, the Renegade lashes out...

Chapter 75: Old Stomping Grounds TO: Emperor Paradox FROM: Cassius RE: Missing Sage I remain unable to acquire any direct Aeon scriptures that identify exactly who the fairy sage is. It seems the only Aeon materials in all of Radiance belong to the Ryujin... who keep them confined to their...

Maybe one year the Blitz timeframe I want will win and I can feel confident offering some sort of prize. But that will sadly not be this year. RIP. :sadbees:

Well, there were fewer date options this year, but for the third Blitz in a row, it looks like the option that aligns poorest with my own schedule is going to win out. I'll be away for a solid chunk of the Blitz. I... would say I'm genuinely amazed this keeps happening, but by now it's pretty...

Huzzah! Forward progress that didn't involve getting into a fight. I think this chapter might've had a longer word count than a couple of the previous ones? Or I'm just seeing things. But it felt brisker in spite of that because the team's able to get through multiple set pieces before shambling...

Chapter 74: Lingering Secrets Entry 3501 Why why why why why why Why can't it just get out of my head? I'm not some renegade. Wanting to rid the universe of a monster is natural! People just refuse to see reason! I must get more power. The power to stop Eternatus. XxX Seifer stepped...

Oh, hey, look, they ran into the chief and had a big ol' scuffle because of it after all. Though the, uh, misdeeds alluded to in the previous chapter sound more like cases of miscommunication killing judging from what follows. Which is... always something people will have mixed feelings on...

Chapter 73: The Place Where I Belong Entry 1902 I found an empty planet today. Practically routine for me with all the wandering I've done in my life. And yet something strikes me as off about this place. Sure, it's empty. But as I float around its sky, I can't help but feel like it's not...

Sometimes you can have some fun with bit characters.

Chapter 72: Matters of the Heart Entry 2508 What is this feeling? Whenever I'm around Chiron it's like my light has weight behind it. Not in a bad way, mind you. But maybe this is what it's like when I hear people talk about beautifly in their stomach? With Chiron, it's like the past doesn't...

Still one of my favorite things to write to do this day.

Author's note is at the end. Small warning for mentions of death. XxX You are MC-TF-001. Today is activation day fifty. You sit patiently on a cold, white, steel floor, watching your pack of white coat meatbags— no, humans intently. C://PACK/SHORT_BLACK_FUR praises you for not believing the...

Chapter 71: Going Against the Flow The Renegade stole a fragment of the Universe when he destroyed the Great Harmony. Though the Matriarch tried to reclaim it, the Renegade displayed unmatched ferocity. He clawed away more of the Universe in every clash against the Benefactor. Our faith in the...

Can’t say I’m surprised. “Amby didn’t read the assignment.” Oh well. C’est la vie. Congrats and thanks to the judges. Doubt I’m going to be revising because my limited writing attention has to go to my fic, which increasingly looks like it needs to be fully drafted by a certain point or it will...

Calling it now: dey gonna escape and be problems in the future. Maybe downgraded from arc villains. Unless there's some bigger force at work that sinks their fangs into them. So, this right here speaks to two problems. The first being that this renders the initial start to the scene as clunky...