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As promised. This is, of course, a blitz review so it will be my more scatterbrained bullet points. So, let me know if you have any questions. Prologue -Now when you name a character Rufus I must immediately go into :absus: mode as someone who's played FF7 and its Remake. Though given the...

I think there was a bit of improvement here. Far less thought-as-dialogue and the POV seemed mostly centered on Arian. This included during the skirmishes that followed. Which, yes, are mook fights and did still take up a significant chunk of the chapter with the ending already promising us more...

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All right. You want three chapters? I'll give you three chapters. But it's my blitz style. Aka not what you're used to. 15 -Stains on an inn floor are totally water leaks and definitely not any other kind of fluid, bodily or otherwise. [lenny face] -Lyle, beggars literally cannot be choosers...

As promised. I don't think you've seen my reviews before. For these things they tend to be stream of consciousness bulleted points. So let me know if you have any questions. 1 -Interesting decision to skip over the isekai portion itself and just have Solder already having been a quilava for an...

Blitzy New Year! Disclaimer: My blitz reviews are stream of consciousness styled rambles. Let me know if you have any questions. Despite the listing of your influences the summary reads more like the child of Pirates of the Caribbean and Skies of Arcadia dressed in a PMD onesie. Off the bat...

Blitzy New Year! Disclaimer: My blitz reviews are stream of consciousness styled rambles. Let me know if you have any questions. From what I remember last time, there was fire dog gerbil thingy but then Koa was already thinking about his next destination because teen I guess. I am unlikely to...

Chapter 78: Water-Type Under the Bridge Entry 2201 The newcomer has spoken with a couple of Sages. They said it was just simple questions. About the world. About the Sages. About me. Apparently she ran away from her home. Otherwise, she's kept mostly to herself. Something about her aura feels...

Week 1 rec goes to @Inkedust's Pathways of Arcadia. Still in its infancy at the moment, but folks on Discord seem to like the worldbuilding that Inke's put into this so far. For my standpoint, without spoiling the actual content it is a world whose lore is centered around a particular trio of...

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Can I catch up with this fic before the end of the week? Probably not, but it won't be for lack of trying. Back to Fire Emblem we goooooo. SE 1-3 -I personally disagree with the structure of the first parts of this chapter. Rather than making them extended flashbacks (in what's already an...

Yeah, that's quite true for the game itself. I don't really establish a timeframe for the recording but I considered that recording to have come from before Rose went all in on his dumb Darkest Day idea and needed Leon around to tame Eternatus. He's basically Pokelon Musk. Left to fanon to...

Eh, I figured I'd just finish things out at this point. I'm not that far right. [checks chapter word count] [chuckles] I'm in danger. 66: It's one six shy but this number does get a chuckle out of me since everything's gone to shit. Happy accident. -Sleeping on the top bunk? But I thought...

I suppose in that sense, it was mission accomplished for you, then. XD That's because second-person is haaaaaaard and writing anything beyond a one-shot is haaaaaaaaaarder. I seem to recall Persephone wrote in second-person, but I'm not sure if her current project still uses that POV or not...

Blitzy New Year! Disclaimer: My blitz reviews are stream of consciousness styled rambles. Let me know if you have any questions. Since I last read, apparently this fic was finished! 🎉I doubt I can do all the remaining chapters, though. At the very least, I do remember that, last time, Lance got...

Blitzy New Year! Disclaimer: My blitz reviews are stream of consciousness styled rambles. Let me know if you have any questions. 1: Well, is it the first chapter or the prologue?! Make up your mind. :screm: -Is Edward a serperior? That's my best guess based on the opening description here...

Blitzy New Year! Disclaimer: My blitz reviews are stream of consciousness styled rambles. Let me know if you have any questions. I am still a ways off ever catching up, which is fine. Last I checked, an onion had crashed the village to destroy Haru's worldview. 16: Not me realizing I hadn't...

Blitzy New Year! Disclaimer: My blitz reviews are stream of consciousness styled rambles. Let me know if you have any questions. 12 -Yeah, there's probably a more elegant way to introduce Team Anima rather than multiple paragraphs of exposition. Like describing their accents as the conversation...

Blitzy New Year! Disclaimer: My blitz reviews are stream of consciousness styled rambles. Let me know if you have any questions. Prelude -Interesting framing tool to have this written out as one side of dialogue to sell the storyteller aspect as best you can in a fully prose format. -Vulpix and...

This is a standalone one-shot written as a present for a 2018 holiday gift exchange. The requested prompt was "overcoming a loss." I'm archiving it here for posterity's sake. I do not consider it representative of my current writing abilities. It's set in the world of Pokémon Mystery Dungeon...