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It wouldn't be that hard if Mint was dueling him. Mint's deck is like mega legendary for the fic. As would the minds of many, most likely. No worries. Even reading late you usually pick up on stuff pretty well! She walked out to meet them in the field outside the stronghold. She wasn't near...

Always nice to hear from you! Chapter 11 and 12 puts you right at the best part of the plot in my opinion. I honestly wasn't sure what I was going to do if I had lost the duel with Seth. That game was brutal! I added a bit to it. He thinks it's Seth. Claire was unable to narrow things down...

I did try to convey how Mister Gentleman gradually thought differently about Mint as things went. Mint, in turn, also was thinking of him more and more as they traveled. Much of what was happening was in Mint's mind which we aren't seeing from her perspective. Sounds good. Oh yeah that makes...

Reply To review of chapters 9 and 10 If I wasn't before your review, I certainly am after! :veelove: Indeed! Also, if you want to call him Mark for now in reviews, you can. Might make it easier. If/when he is confirmed NOT to be Mark, then you could always switch it up. Good. Sounds like it...

Hey! Always nice to see you stop in, Shini! It was more entertaining to subvert expectations, so that's what I did! :veelove: The effect of the card in-game is unique but it's not particularly powerful and has no bearing on duels. It DOES however act as a key to the Ghostmasters fortress which...

I think it has gone very well so far! The new version is already posted and the link is in my signature below. I've written 23 chapters of it and have recently posted 12 of them. I believe it has 5 more chapters left to write and it will be done. The revamp turns the majority of the prologue...

She just seems younger because Doduo is like a cute animal and she already had some fun experiences with Doduo. Hard to see her differently since Doduo is always around the Gentleman. Perhaps there will be more on her character later if she is not around Doduo... Wow you guessed it!! :wowzard...

Hey, Shini! Nice to see the next review come in! I know you have been busy writing and probably recharging from it too, I would imagine. No worries on the delay. So many grammar spelling comma issues. Thanks for picking them out! I went and fixed them all. Always nice to see a new review...

Ok, well hopefully with the fixes I added in, this will keep other readers from having a similar train of thought. Thanks for discussing it. I went back and read it. Yeah... it doesn't make sense how he so easily assumes and accepts "Axel" is the same "Axel" from about 1,000 years ago. For all...

Always nice to get a review in from you, Shini! A two part chapter and another chapter on top of it? Nice! :veelove: Yeah... sorry about that. I promise that was the worst of the exposition in the fic. In a nutshell. I'm glad you found the material fun and interesting. I'd be in some...

Hi Nekodatta, Thanks for having some positive things to say. The main takeaway for me on this is that I need to expand the duel details without going overboard with it. I think that is a fair critique and one I plan to take a close look at to address. Regarding what the cards do, that was...

Hey Spiteful. I've read through the review. I can definitely say this is by far the most critical review I have received and likely is the most critical I will ever receive. That is because it is my hope that my fic will continue to improve. I appreciate that your review did not come across as...

Reply To Review For Chapter 2 - Part 1: The Undersiders One of my favorite lines in the chapter. :mewlulz: Unfortunately I do not, but it certainly sounds relevant! A very true statement... All Doduo have maschocistic tendencies, but the Doduo who follows the Gentleman indeed is the one we...

Yeah... I'm still not sure. I appreciate you trying to explain though. Don't worry about it. Ah ok! That makes sense. Eh, It's my fault and it worked out anyway. Don't worry about it and thanks for the review! :veelove:

Hi candy! Thanks for the first review! So... I don't see specifically what you are referring to here and the way it is described makes it hard for me to tell what I could do to improve it... Clarification here would be helpful. Thanks! :veelove: Good thing I had an explanation not long...

Wow hey Matt! Glad to see you pop in! Card game blindness shouldn't matter too terribly much for the fic. I think you could enjoy it much more than you are thinking you might. I'm glad the changes are to your liking so far! I'm also working on a total overhaul revamp to my prologue which...

No worries and thanks for getting a review in for 2 chapters! :veelove: In a nutshell! Thanks! This is when I started taking more creative liberties with things and wasn't following a strict gameplay route. I'm glad you enjoyed the characters and that won't be the last time you see the...

Chapter 5 - Part 2: Encryption of The Future And with that, my third duel with Axel resulted in yet another loss on my part! Axel continued immediately from where he left off. "So I don't want us to run out of time, but I ask that you believe me that I am Axel and that our foe returns every...

Chapter 1 - Part 2: Water & Fire (17) Upon entering, I noticed the floor was comprised of small seashells that had been flattened and presumably cemented to the floor. There were a couple large puddles in the entrance room. I visited the lobby for my routine water. Apparently the water from...

Thanks for the review, Umbra!