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part three you got this out speedy quick! it's a really nice conclusion to the story and feels just right for the tone you've established—i said in a previous review that this fic has a storybook-like quality to it, and this ending is right in line with that. carrie spends most of her time...

couple for the night. chapter one of streets of lago, 1,294 words, +1 for theme. chapter five of osas, 616 words, +1 for theme.

5. stirring shadows i feel like the takeaway from this chapter is that wes is really, really resisting his fate as anime protagonist. seems like orre's troubles run deeper than wes expected! snagem is one thing, but it looks like there's a whole other group of bad guys working on creating...

1. 1st street: little crow hey flaze! i promised you i'd check this fic out and after osj's recommendation in the chat earlier, i decided today would be the day. and i'm glad i did! this definitely seems like the type of fic i could really get into, and there's a lot of stuff to like about...

reviewed CD chapters 7-8, 980 words, counts for theme.

these reviews are a little shallower, and i apologize for that; i'm really tired and have a big drive tomorrow and wanted to get these reviews out while i was still in the zone of these chapters! but also, these chapters aren't quite as political as the preceding ones, so i did have a bit less...

reviewed chapters 4-6 of eoe, 2,586 words (beeg boy), and i believe it qualifies for the theme despite your attempts to hide your glorious point count from us on the spreadsheet.

i told myself i was only going to review chapter four and here we are. just prefacing this by saying that this fic was a fun read before but i'm really getting into it now. gonna be pretty torn between finishing this and salvage up the next week or so, i expect. it's pretty late as i'm writing...

reviewed chapters 5-6 of continental divides, 1,463 words. don't think i hit the theme.

gonna reply to some replies first. --- chapter 5: boots on the ground i really like this chapter a lot. before this point, i think mark comes off as very much like an all business type. magma is pretty much his life, and the parts of his life that aren't magma are basically just there as a...

also logging a review for LC, chapters 31-33, 1,120 words, doesn't qualify for theme.

31: eight months later timeskip! timeskip! so jade is in johto now, with four badges no less. four badges in eight months is pretty good time, although i guess her team is already trained up—i guess that means a pokémon journey would take around two years for the average trainer? it's...

logging a review for the suicune's choice, chapters 5-6, 1,037 words. don't believe this one qualifies for the theme but once again may be wrong.

5: the safehouse i really like the way haru's decisions are contrasting with his family's expectations of him. i wonder how long he'll be able to hide that from them. religion and science are frequently cast as being at odds—i don't necessarily think that's true, and it doesn't seem to be the...

got in a review for the legendarian chronicles, chapters 29-30, 887 words. i... think this counts for the theme on chapter 30? i might have missed something though.

LC! we're back babey! 29: aftermath i took an accidental break from this fic a while ago, just because i sort of stopped keeping on top of it and never really got back to it... but my memory of the last dozen (?) chapters or so is a lot of nonstop action. i expected more of that coming back...

couple more to report for the day. part two of bouquatro, ~730 words, qualifies for theme → +2. of sand and shadows chapters 3-4, ~1,260 words, qualifies for theme → +3. dragon's dance chapters 3-4, ~920 words, qualifies for theme → + 3.

the traveler: part one this chapter is a nice look at the impact of industrialization on johto. it seems like the region is in a period of transition at the time this fic is set—electricty is a new fixture in cherrygrove and lots of people are still distrustful of the corporatism that's taking...

3. change of plans we met rui in the last chapter, but this one felt devoted to really giving us a feel to her character. i was really surprised to learn she was 21—you did a great job making her feel younger! wes cites the ponytails but for me it was, well... basically everything else, haha...

part two wow. i'll be honest, this chapter really exceeded my expectations. there's definitely some melancholy sprinkled throughout the first chapter, but overall the fic maintained a very bouncy, whimsical vibe. the last leg of this chapter really raises the stakes, though. it's so easy to...