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Chapter 11 Heh, I like it when fics make fun of silly game mechanics. Somehow I have the feeling that being a Team Rocket Grunt means you’re working for more than 40 hours per week. Damn, all that hard work and they don’t even get free snacks? D: How come they don’t just record these...

I'd like to pick Weavile as my partner.

It's because Lance said "They won't miss me anyway", was talking about wanting to go, and was considering running away from Ibuki. He also wasn't dressed in festival clothes, which I thought was because he was considering leaving. It's the latter.

Looks like I got assigned to you a second time for Catnip Circle, so I’m here to check out another one of your stories! The premise sounds potentially interesting and I’m always in the mood to read fics about dragons, so let’s get right into it ~ … Huh, I wasn’t expecting Lance’s Japanese name...

I posted a review for The Days of Miracle and Wonder earlier!

Ohai, here to review chapter 1 as part of Catnip Circle. Yikes. Seems like our protagonist has a rough daily life. 10 Signs You’re Heading For A Burnout Just be glad they didn’t name you after the Teletubby. Heh, I like the way Picella speaks. She seems like a fun character...

I checked out Postcards and wrote up a review for the first two chapters earlier this week!

I reviewed the first two chapters of Postcards! Requesting a review for a chapter of Casting Off.

Hey there, I’m here because of review tag! Since I noticed your chapters aren’t super long, I decided to review two of them instead of just one. First off, props for writing 2nd person! I know there are a few others fics that do it, but it’s still something you don’t see very often and I...

I'm fine with splitting RP and Mafia. I think the purpose of RP Mafia kinda gets defeated if some people play it as "Mafia, but with a tiny bit of RPing on the side", so if there's enough people who don't care about RPing it might just be better to give them their own game in the form of regular...

Chapter 10 Huh, I actually never realized that Pidgeotto are larger than Houndour until I looked it up. Seems like you learn something new day every day. Hey, looks like someone else is learning stuff as well! Jade ordering this reminds me of that episode in the anime where Totodile and...

Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Tales Of Arrival Base: 3 points Weekly theme adherence: 4 points Word count: 3 points Subtotal: 10 points Total: 20 points Given that I reviewed chapter 1 on Serebii a while back, this should mean this review counts for the weekly theme if I'm understanding it correctly.

Crossposting from Serebii: Well, I am glad you are considering changing it, though chapter 2 still had the same issue I’m afraid. Missing a space between these two sentences. I think this part could have used a bit more description, since I had to read this twice to understand that you...

Not sure how much I'll be able to do for this event, but might as well log any reviews I post this month: The Legendarian Chronicles Base: 3 points Weekly theme adherence: 4 points Word count: 3 points Total: 10 points

Chapter 8 I don’t know why I find something as simple as Firestorm helping Jade up sweet, but I do. Well you definitely did a good job at making this situation with the bombs seem terrifying. Also Jade mentioning having no water Pokémon while the ship is sinking is giving me anime flashbacks...

I’d like to sign up with Cabot! Like Sike did with Karo, I’ll refer to his mafia sign up for a description of his personality.

Ah didn't realize Chibi was currently "it", but I reviewed chapter 7 of LC about two weeks ago. Requesting a review for Casting Off!

I'd like to sign up as well. Will pick the Victini bag.

Chapter 7 It’s sweet to see Jade caring for her team like this, even if Chibi makes a pretty good point. You can’t keep your Pokémon out of harm’s way if they get blown up by a bomb. I can tell you did a good amount of research into ships for this arc, so props to that. I know you said in...

Hey, happy to see you back! Your review was a treat to read, just like your first one was. :D I made some edits based on your feedback, though I’ll respond to a few things more in detail: That’s definitely not meant to happen, so thanks for pointing it out. I did my best to avoid it after you...