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Cabot stared with his mouth agape as the two ships took each other out, before snapping back to reality as Pleo surfaced on his back. He looked down at the now much calmer sea and hesitated a moment, before shaking his head and looking back at Pleo. "Pleo! Hold on!" The Rampardos jumped into...

"I'm both a soldier and your friend," Cabot said. "The Empire means a lot to me, and I'm proud to serve in the Royal Navy, but that doesn't mean I'll hurt you just because they order me to. I first started getting doubts about it all when I saw how miserable you were in the palace. It just felt...

Cabot bit his tongue, too focused on Pleo to notice the approaching ships. It was true, his Shade had inherited all his memories from him, not the real Pleo. But what should he say in response? Just because those memories were from his perspective, didn't mean they were all wrong, were they...

Cabot surfaced and latched onto another piece of driftwood, coughing up some seawater. After a brief moment to catch his breath, he looked at Pleo wide-eyed. "B-But it's not just about your powers! I always cared about how you were feeling too!" the Rampardos insisted. "That's why I delivered...

Cabot blanched and stared at Pleo in complete shock, stumbling over his own words as he tried to say something in response. Just before leaving Destiny Tower, Pleo had been nothing but kind and affectionate to him, so this was the last thing he would have expected his Shade to ever say to him...

Beta read chapter 6 of Context Switch

Cabot groaned, clutching his head as he slowly tried to get up. As soon as he did he felt his began head spin, prompting him to sit down instead. What... happened? He remembered riding on Maple's back, with Pleo flying close by. They were gonna... fight someone... Eien. Right. They were on...

Published a new chapter of Fledglings, which is a little over 8100 words long. Also selling the following items: - 2 Silver Spikes - Restore Seed - Reviver Seed - Protect Orb And buying the following: - 2 Chip's Holy Lance - Maple's Renewal Seed - Zinc's Blessed Elixir - Pop's Grand Reviver...

Beta read chapter 5 of Context Switch

Logging a review for chapter 3 and 4 of Context Switch and one for chapter 18 of Path of Valor.

Well, I’m a bit later than normal, but better late than never, right? Chapter 18 Excuse me, what? So what’s next? The party eating at a restaurant called WcDonald’s? :p Actually, if multiple planets got swallowed up into the Qliphoth, then why is Rayquaza’s Needle here? Shouldn’t it be...

Chapter 3 I like how Paren and Bracket got a rivalry now XD Aw, too bad it gets cut off and we don’t find out what the problem is. I kinda wish this was written out as dialogue so we could see the man’s explanation instead of merely being told that he explained it. Show, don’t tell and all...

Logging 12 hours of writing. Also distributing his bonus points: - +31 Stamina - +5 Attack Upgrading Strike V to Ultima Replacing Fortified with Quick Healer As for Cabot's Unleashed: - Blacklight Synergy Once per turn, the user can store a single one-shot boost effect such as Sure...

Turn 2: Use Strike V at Maple’s Head.

Reviewed chapter 1 and 2 of Context Switch (redux)

Oh, hi there. I’ve been meaning to read this one for… quite some time, so glad I’m finally getting around to doing so. Without further ado, let’s jump right into it: Chapter 1 Gonna start off with a nitpick, but the “This” should be uncapitalized here. Heh, it will be fun to read the OG...

Cabot looked at Pleo and smiled. "Yeah. I'm glad I met him and made such a great friend." Pleo nuzzled his side, making Cabot chuckle in response. As he pet the Lugia's head in return, the Rampardos paused upon hearing his stomach growl. He looked down at his belly in surprise, before turning...

Cabot and Pleo looked at each other again, before turning back to Shiron. Cabot rubbed at the back of his neck as he thought of the best way to explain things. "Well, it's a bit of a long story," Cabot began. "You know how I said that most gods in my world were killed centuries ago? Well, in...

Wrote up a review of chapter 1 and 2 of Kuki's Tale.

Hey there, Adam! Here to review the first two chapters just like I promised you. Wanna start off by saying I really like the cover art. It’s cute and seeing those two Mew would certainly brighten up anyone’s day. ^^ Gonna start off with a nitpick here. When you introduce a new character into...