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Sorry for the late post, but I was exhausted, mind you, and so was Ting-Lu, Berserk, Plasma, Freeze, Logi, Metallon, and everybody else.
A hidden feature is hidden in that chapter though, see if you can find it.
Chapter 5 : The Paradox Hunt
[narrator's view]
Ting-Lu wasn't so happy about the Sandy Shocks mocking him.
The morning began with just normal stuff, like eating breakfast, shopping, exploring the cliffs...but later, Logi(the other boy) had noticed that everyone had exactly seven paradox...
Chapter 4 : Spreading darkness
A gengar laughed eerily, startling Ting-Lu.
Suddenly, the graveyard shift of the DJs started. Clearly, their pay was really, really high, because they weren't gonna quit even with this mass attack.
A skeledirge roared, fire shooting out of its mouth as it...
Oh! Oops, both the "annilhape"s and "Pandlea" were typos. I corrected it. Thank you!
As for the "no-fear" thing, Ting-Lu went insane, the part where he thinks that the ritual complete(strange, due to his insanity) is actually him trying to reassure himself.
As for the pokedex, I found it...
Chapter 3 : Friends and fellows
"Hello, Ting-Lu. I'm sorry I had to capture you, but you are one of the Treasures. You were the hardest to get to, so I figured you would be fine."
What's he talking about? He didn't know and didn't care. When was it?
"...you are in modern Pandlea. I hope you...
Chapter Two(counting prologue, now and forever.): Rituals Ruin You
Ting-Lu felt something scratching at the back of his rational mind.
Did he have any rational mind? What...at this point, his mind shut off and he hit the ground to reawaken it. Hold up. What was...ngh! What in the ancien-was...
Content Warnings: No blood, but to be semi-realistic, there will be extra features, like any number of pokemon in battle, no limit to moves, no limit to turns, and bathrooms. Yes, bathrooms. There will be semi-violence for battles, and pokemon death(or rather, just the fear).
Um, oky, this is...
I'm still reading through Act 1, and I have to say, I really like it(more than that even...)!
I'm honestly wondering about the mutants, are they the work of the Hunters? I hope I can see it explained...
If Rim is the Psychic Guardian, how did she get the orb without being cursed with eternal...