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Aw, I loved this oneshot, it's a nice exploration of something that pretty much everyone who's played Pokémon had to deal with so it speaks to everyone, and it's handled in a beautifully realistic way. It also reminded me of my Firered playthrough where I did stubbornly keep my Butterfree...

Ehi! I read this collection of short stories and found them quite adorable. It's nice seeing various legendaries in a casual setting and I'm curious what you could write about for a lot of them! Chapter 1: This one was really wholesome and nice. It's nice to think that Arceus sometimes...

Chapter 25: Knowledge, part I Turo walked out of the classroom feeling pretty lightheaded, and definitely not because of his current physical state. That painting of "Professor Olim" had shaken him; it couldn't be a coincidence. It had to be proof that he and Sada would manage to find a way to...

Chapter 24: Settling in, part IV Paleolithic Era, in the area that will be known as Kalos The snow reached up past her knees as Chalo made her way through the forest. Every time that Turo visited, when he would leave in the evening, Sada would leave with him on the back of her red dragon. His...

I read this because the title mentioning Turing caught my eye(great title btw), and this was a really interesting read. Gen V is probably my least played so I never really put much thought into Genesect, but it's actually a really interesting Pokemon, because it's essentially a cyborg, an...

Chapter 23: Settling in, part III « ... I think that, umm.. "u-ni-form" looked good on you.» Sada had been trying to cheer him up since they had stepped out of that clothing shop to get their measurements done. Turo simply grumbled in response; he wasn't looking forward to having to wear any...

Chapter 22: Settling in, part II Clavell's steps echoed through the hallway as Sada and Turo followed, hand in hand. The woman didn't really know what to expect out of this place: she knew it was a place of learning, but she couldn't really picture how it worked. Did people just... read books...

This was a really interesting piece, short and poignant! At the very start, my first thought for some reason was that the Vaporeon had just evolved, and that they were so lost in their new body that they would dissolve into the water but it turns out that they lost themselves in a much less...

Chapter 21: Settling in, part I In Area Zero, and really most of his life lately, Turo had solved the problem of not being able to fall asleep by simply exhausting himself until he collapsed. Now, with nothing to do, he tossed and turned on the couch-improvised-bed Clavell had given them. He...

I really really liked this and how it was written. Not being that much familiar with Orre at first I thought the concept a bit random, "Ho-oH and Lugia in Orre?" but after a moment I realized the connection "wait of course, Shadow Lugia and I think you actually met Ho-Oh winning the equivalent...

Here for week 3 of review blitz! I've been looking at OSAS for a while now but since this is one shot week I looked at the list you posted and this caught my eye! I really like the way Mew is described here. It seems to be a thing to depict her as extremely mischievous, and here she manages...

Chapter 20: Stranded, part III Paleolithic Era, in the area that will be known as Kalos. Sada had been missing for a couple of days now. Personally, Chalo wasn't particularly worried. Sada had always been a bit more of a free spirit, and now that she could just fly away with Winged King, she...

Chapter 19: Stranded, part II While Sada was out looking for food and generally making herself much more useful for their immediate survival, Turo had slowly started to examine the building they had sought refuge in. The lights didn't work; he had tried the switch -after figuring out where it...

Chapter 2 Turo's arms embraced her slowly, carefully, like he wasn't exactly sure how to move his arms yet. The movement was not stiff like she expected: she had quietly wondered, while working on the model, if muscle memory would be part of the information that had been encoded in the brain...

Chapter 18: Stranded, part 1 Sada knew that something was wrong as soon as Turo had led her out of his place wearing only his normal clothes and not the ones he usually showed up with. But she had tried to rationalize it away. Maybe he simply didn't want to go to the village today. Maybe he...

Chapter 17: After Hours, part II "One day, not one hour more" Ortega's words had come to put a definitive end to his time with Sada. In the hours while he waited for her to wake up and her wound to heal completely, he had nervously expected Moreau to come marching in at every moment, asking...

I remember already reading this chapter so now it's my occasion to review it. It's extremely interesting, we get a sudden POV change to an already existing Latios, and this already tells me that there can be more than one legendary of any kind. From his mannerism something tells me he's not...

Chapter 16: After Hours, part I Sada immediately noticed that something was up as soon as she landed in the usual meeting spot with Winged King to wait for Turo's arrival together. The snow was high and had been falling without pause for a couple of days now. Every time they landed, the dragon...

All right, let's review chapter 2! There is a POV shift, and I am admittedly a bit lost to who we are following now or even where we are. It took me a moment to connect the name Rui and the mention of Orre with the Coliseum character, so I guess she's become a trainer in this setting, nice...

All right, I'm here for our review exchange! I admit to coming into this completely blind and have no idea what to expect, except that there will be a lot of art references which could be quite fun. Right from the start, I like how you describe the setting of the scene with quite some vivid...