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Thank you for the read and reply! I'll try to add those line edits in when I'm not horribly busy. Anyway, here's the second part. Forgot it yesterday because, well, busy. Enjoy. --- Part Two --- “Are we there yet?” Yes, we are, thinks Pletora, but I’ll be damned if I give you the...

Thank you for the read and review! The edit suggestions have been noted, but don't know when I'll get around to implementing those with everything being so hectic right now ;p Work and school, respectively. These mon are indeed sapient and so can function close to how humans do, though the...

The mon in my stories are a bit of a cheat since my human-universe has mon able to gain sapience like humans provided they're raised with the right stimuli during a crucial development period in their youth. If they don't receive enough of the right stimuli in this stage, they're basically at...

Hello again, all! I have another story to post. So back in 2018, I had gotten inspired by several PMD (more or less, we know the deal with that term) works, either through reading them or just hearing about them and the creative stories they tell, and I wanted to try my own hand at one. The...

Oh, I've certainly noticed some themes in my works, with two being specifically strong: 1. An oddball protagonist. Almost every work I've written has had this: a lead character who doesn't fit in and is poorly socially adjusted due to something being strange or otherwise different about them...

Tough call between these, honestly, they're all good prompts. I'd really like to write myself, so I guess that's me out of the judging pool, but I hope to read others' entries anyway!

i'll claim the review by the walrein!

huge thanks for all these reviews! the review event really did good for this story, and i'm super glad. i hope all you new readers are enjoying this story, too. now for the long awaited penultimate chapter. at least until further notice. while this chapter is a longer one, the last scene has...

oh my turn came fast. i'd like to claim the review by kintsugi!

NOT SO FAST NEB. A Mew Me: Kuki's Tale - Chapter One Base: +3 900+ words: +3 Total: 96 + 6 = 102

Read Chapter 1! Boy, that ending sure took a turn. I was going to describe this story as very comfy before, but that nightmare injected a lot more depth and stakes in, as it surely can't be just a mere dream with that strange symbolism. The contrast took me by surprise, but I don't think it was...

time to ZOOM past neb Song of Two Worlds - Chapter 1 Base: +3 1500+ words: +4 Total: 89 + 7 = 96 (eciN)

Finally got around to checking this out. Here are my thoughts on Chapter 1. You'll either want to replace the comma with a period or uncapitalize "Sure", depending on if you want the lines to be from the same sentence. I think this could really use some breaking up into more paragraphs...

The Curious and The Shiny - Chapter 14 & 15 Base: +3 Weekly: +4 ~300 words: +2 Total: 80 + 9 = 89

Chapters 14 & 15 Colon seems weird here, but I think the whole structure is a bit iffy. Replacing the colon with a comma would make it sound like Curio was glistening, but removing it entirely doesn't read quite right either. Just a simple break up to "[...], looking deep into Mom's eyes. They...

Ah, yeah, I think I keep overestimating how reconstructable some elements of TPP are from the references... it's not a spoiler what it is, so I can just explain it now for clarity: In TPP, the biggest danger to progress was the PCs. Because the game doesn't let you recapture a mon after...

Splice of Life Base: +3 ~900 words: +3 Total: 74 + 6 = 80

God tier name, 10/10, review over, goodbye. No, let's talk a little more about this. So I will admit I know pretty little about Mewtwo lore, both the anime and the games. I did go and read some summaries on wikis, though, so I think I know the gist of them, and that this really is modified...

Oh, this is actually the first letter Shirlee sent Red, though. Before the surprise visit in Chapter 3, the communication had been entirely one-sided. Well, it's actually tied to where the time has been read. In the case of the 24-hour instances, Red reads the time from a digital clock - first...

Reviewed Chapter 3 of Places We Call Home. Base: +3 Weekly: +4 ~1400 words (frick): +3 Total: 64 + 10 = 74