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I bet it does, with everyone there so hyped about getting stronger when that's still a sore spot for Kieran :copyka2: :quag: Do the scary thing even though it's scary! So proud of the boy being brave He's not seeing her expression, but sure having gremlins about how she feels about him anyway...

Wow, I really did just completely confuse you with someone else! For whatever reason I could have sworn I remembered your name from that specific contest, but I’m guessing my brain somehow mixed up being familiar with your username from Serebii generally with someone in the contest and then...

@K_S Do you still have two points to donate? If so: Level of Prize: Forum Companion Type of Prize: Slugma Preferred Method of Contact: Discord

Weekly Fic Rec: Searching for a Resolution by JFought I went into this story pretty much entirely blind other than the fact it involved Keldeo, but I found it really interesting and engaging. This contest one-shot focuses on a Keldeo who long ago left behind the other Swords of Justice to...

Hey! I wanted to check out some of your work for the "New faces" week but didn't get to it then, so here I am. I actually have reviewed you once offsite before - because I judged your entry in the Perspective contest on Serebii in, I think, 2012? But I hadn't read any of your work since then...

Really lovely to see Kieran come full circle here! It really is something special to have a Pokémon character have an entire character arc portrayed through their three different battle themes, and you make the most of that. Truly an encapsulation of his change in mindset, which makes for an...

Amusingly, before this sentence I was actually assuming this was Ho-Oh's POV we were in; there was no clear indication which of them was the POV character and which was the sister. Unsure if the ambiguity is intended or not. they're good humans, Brent That moment when you ask the legendary for...

It's one-shot week so not on theme but shush, I want my fill of elyvorg Kieran content As you pointed out, the opening version of this verse in his original theme is quite bright and just sort of a light intro to Him Battling You... but then, just after he brushes past the bit about how he...

Part III There was no way in fucking hell that the others would okay this. So Dave just told them he was going to see how Lucy was doing. She looked up at him as he entered the girls’ room, all bright innocent eyes, smiling serenely. Like everything wasn’t fucked-up and upside-down. “Hey...

Going to throw in my own weekly fic rec for Negrek's Salvage, too. It's just a fic that's both an intriguing mystery and incredibly consistently entertaining, and if you're one for binging, it's 57 chapters of great stuff (unfortunately not all in the TR thread, because Negrek needs to get on...

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[Will save review responses for later, but thank you! ❤️] Part II “Hey, Jean. Is Mia there? I need to talk to her. It’s really important.” Jean seemed taken aback. She was probably expecting him to ask where they were, what they were doing. No point in any of that. “Um, okay. Hang on.”...

All right, I spent an inadvisable amount of time yesterday digging way too far into the musical structure of these themes and what you did with them, so I guess I really will review you for never reviewed before week, despite the sense of irony there. I think you did a lovely job in these of...

Poliwag's attack was... well, it was a little underwhelming, after all the anxiety over jumping into the fray. She'd imagined the attacks she'd seen on TV, a huge jet of water blasting Fezandipiti away. But it didn't blast him anywhere. Instead, it brought him bearing down on them, the huge...

Jean fiddled with her mane for another anxious moment but then swallowed, nodding. Everyone was fighting, doing their best. Surely she could too? And she'd be really, really careful. Stay back. She straightened her back, trying to smile at Poliwag. "Okay, use... use Water Gun!"

All right, going to bring my self-promo from last year here with the new addition! In general, I appreciate all feedback, but specific preferences per-story are noted below. I'm generally especially interested in thoughts on the characters in a story, whether their actions feel like they make...

Welcome to the one-shot three-shot I have been working on since I happened to see someone else writing a fic with this silly pun name while hyperfixating on Groundhog Day the musical in 2017. It's been a long time coming. This story is based on my 2007-2010 Pokémorph fanfic Morphic. More...

Jean stared anxiously towards where the battle was going on. So others were fighting... and they seemed okay? Was it okay? "I'm... I want to help, but I can't fight," she said, ears flattening. "I don't have any Pokémon. And I'm supposed to breathe fire but... it just hurts." She shook her...

Jean looked between Kieran and the ogre, ears flattening, a growing knot in her stomach. What was she supposed to do? It was smarter to just go with the ogre, wasn't it? But then... what if something happened to Kieran and his Pokémon? "I'm sorry," she said, giving the ogre an anxious glance...