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Review for Chapter 1 Hello! I‘ve sadly only managed to get through chapter 1 in the 48 hours. I‘m going to give you feedback on this chapter for the catnip and continue to give feedback once I get through more content. Ok, so chapter 1 is from Rocket Boss Giovanni‘s perspective, sets up the...

Review for Chapter 2: For Fight's Sake Hello, back for chapter 2. Here we see a minor league legal battle in full display as well as two (maybe three) different styles of trainer and their pokemon clash. All in all another very nice chapter. I don’t think I’ll ever have to mention style...

Chapter 14: The Last Birds of Violet October 3rd 1993, 2am. A rattling sound and the bursting of wood shook me awake. Before I could even open my eyes, splinters of the roof’s timber and terracotta rained on my face and my body. Instinctively, I rolled off the mattress and sought shelter under...

Chapter 13: The Note October 2nd 1993, 2pm. I counted to ten and knocked on the door’s wooden frame. It rattled in its rails while my hands clutched ever so tight around the note and the sunglasses. From the other side of the rice-papers came an unarticulated humming sound. When I slid the...

Chapter 12: The Exorcist September 30th 1993, 3pm. “Okay, guys, isn’t this really dangerous what you’re doing right now?” I turned around. There was a car coming up behind us and it was my turn to thumb anyway. “What do you mean?” Morty asked. “You shouldn’t know about any of this!” I eyed...

Chapter 11: Catharsis September 26th 1993, 8pm. The sun had already long vanished behind the forests to the west when we once again set up camp at the border of the national park. We had pushed through longer than planned, but that way we at least had a roof over our heads for the night...

Chapter 10: Applied Soccer Practise September 26th 1993, 11am. It was around noon the next day when we were hiking along the Gallard hillside slope. Leon was pretty lively, given the fact that he barely slept last night. We stayed the night in an old lodge at the borders of the national...

Chapter 8: A Timetraveller's Woe September 24th 1993, 2pm. “When were you supposed to meet him again?” I asked Leon while I slid our registration papers into a plastic pocket. “Tomorrow morning,” he replied. “What do you think are the chances he’s home right now?” Ten minutes later, we left...

Chapter 7: Goodbyes and First Steps It took us two very stressful, but also very harmonious weeks to get going. They were filled with house- and paperwork. To my surprise, Leon proved to be rather efficient at the latter one. Turned out that the league’s international matches also required...

Chapter 6: Ocean Waves September 10th 1993, 2pm. “Hey Hanako! This town has a beach.” Leon leaned in through the open terrace door. “Wanna go for a walk?” I looked up to see what I could only describe as Galar’s Champ, in full tourist mode. He had his hair in a ponytail, wore a bleached...

Chapter 5: Unix User Network September 7th 1993, 7pm. When I sneaked back into the Pokemon Center, the gust of wind that blew in with me interrupted a lively discussion in front of the computer. Owen and Leon soon continued their studies, only Lucy seemed to give me a longer look while I...

Chapter 4: Cracks In The Porcelain The rest of the evening went by in a daze. Nurse Joy, who later introduced herself as Lucy, checked in on me and assured me that everything would be okay. While Owen somehow managed to talk down Leon, Lucy took care of the scrapes on my arm and leg. She gave...

Chapter 2: Intermission Challenger No. 634 – Hanako Originally from Kanto, her family moved to Postwick just a few years ago. Nonetheless, she considers herself a true Galarian. With her fairy-type team based around her Whimsicott, she took the Gym Challenge in stride. Victorious in the finals...

Chapter 1: Lost Everything went by so fast. Eternatus’s unending body raced upwards, squirming as it was devoured by this abyss of light. As did I. A hand was holding me tight. But even this hand couldn’t protect me from the gravity, magnified tenfold here in this space between dimensions...

Right before the Championship Match, the advent of the Darkest Day pulls Leon and challenger Hanako back in time and halfway across the world. As they struggle to get back home, they'll have to learn to open up and live with each other and their own history. After all, no man is an island...

Review for Chapter 1: One Last Ditch Hello! I’ll be going through your fic chapter by chapter and give you my thoughts as I go along. So you will have my real-time reactions to it First off, I got to say: Very solid handiwork. I have not found any spelling errors, the paragraphs were at a nice...