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Man, I really wished I could answer that question in a cool way, but truth is, there is no real inspiration behind my characters. I know my entire story feels like I've pulled it out of a hat, but my characters are, in fact, an assortment of random traits that I've partially pulled out of a hat...

@Dragonfree Thank you so much for your review. That has to be the single most useful review I've ever gotten for chapter 1. I kinda know it's a mess and sounds off, but the things you've brought up about the missing context and the relationship are more than useful. Makes me want to tackle...

So, I haven't reported in for quite a while. Turns out, listening to an audiobook for 2h straight every day is more taxing than I thought and I'm making less progress because of it. But! I'm now in the middle of "Evolution Origins". Let's see what I can recall so far. - First of all, sorry for...

@Flyg0n OMG thank you again!!! I've never had someone read this far without using excessive force on them!!! Thank you so much! It makes me sooo happy!!! So, as to your points: It's a title used by her congregation. Like the "Sisters of Poor Child Jesus". She has a last name, but I'll dance...

Hello! Here for the catnip! For over 8k, this was a very breezy read. I didn‘t even notice the time flying by. But strangely, I have very little notes this time. So sorry in advance if this review isn‘t as good as the others. So, this story is about Jung, a Hypno-Therapist, who visits a...

Chapter 17: Long Days of Leon October 9th 1993, 4pm. Hoppip’s screams broke through the underbrush, followed by an angry bleating. I prayed I’d at least get the camping cooker running before whatever she had antagonised this time would come crashing in. But, alas, she hit my back only a few...

I'd like to try out the Genre Switch I'm free whenever I think I can start...

So, at the beginning of "City of Rust" now. - The city they are currently in is soo cool. I can't wait till they explore it a bit more - Wes' two nightmares were heartwrenching. I felt so bad for him. Him snuggling with Nogo is really sweet. - Again, when Wes and Rui are talking, it feels so...

Hello! I‘ll just leave a quick review for chapters 1 to 3. I‘ll take a look at 4 soon, but for today, that will have to suffice. All in all a very charming experience. I‘m looking forward to exploring Overcast Village a bit more. From what I‘ve read on the forum, it sounds super...

So, now I'm at the beginning of Lockdown - I can't even begin to tell you how much I loved "Questions". I like slow and talky chapters, both to write and to read. You did a really good job showcasing the stances of everyone involved. But especially the great Nio. What a lovely prick. - I am now...

Ok, so due to headache only nibbled a bit today, but: - Why do I get the impression that the mayor looks like every mayor from the Harvest Moon games ever? Also, having them go to the mayor's house and walz straight in is something that again reminds me a lot of jrpgs. Like, this is my first...

Okokok, so I'm halfway through Change of Plans now, and I have to say: Wes is the embodiment of the 2000s action hero. Oh god. That opening scene. I could almost feel the blocky, jrpg-like glory coming off the pages. (Ok, so I've watched the Colloseum opening scene now, and I have to say, your...

Hello! Here for the catnip. Oh my, this is gorgeous! And terrifying, for sure. Gen5 is my favourite game story-wise and has N, who is still some sort of enigma to me. Right from the beginning I can tell that your version of N is way more mature than the clueless idiot of my memory, but I will...

Ok, so major spoiler warning for 26 years ago, but I really really desperately need your feedback on this chapter. If you came here for the catnip but actually want to read my fic without the third biggest spoiler I can come up with, feel free to leave a review on the published story. Rated: G...

Chapter 16: The Grandfather Paradox, Reversed October 6th 1993, 9:30am. Already exhausted, Morty placed his head on my shoulder. Today he didn’t smell of smokey sweet wooden incense like he usually did, but rather of people and the faintest traces of sake. I considered asking him how late it...

Chapter 15: Windows Are Just Smaller Doors After All October 1993, probably. “No, that’s not like it.” The wonderful scent of clean cotton, old wood and a rain shower that had just passed mixed to create the memories of a new, yet familiar home. But despite that, grime seemed to be all...

Review for Chapter 3: Who Am I? Hello! A bit late, but here goes chapter 3. This is a very introspective chapter where Isobel starts to come to terms with herself and sets some new goals. And gets an adorable room-mate along the way. All in all, this was a very touching chapter...

@Negrek Hey!!! Thank you so much for checking my stuff out! I love it when people do that! It makes my day every single time. And thanks so much for your input! TR is amazing with feedback. You guys bring up some stuff I‘d never seen myself and that I'm now implementing happily. Thanks also...

Hello! I’ve just read through chapter 1 and wanted to share my thoughts with you. This chapter introduces us to Silver, his team and his backstory as well as presenting the hook. So, in this chapter, Silver trains a bit in Viridian Forest, preparing himself to challenge Blue. But when he finds...

@kintsugi Holy Moly, thank you so much for that review! I did NOT expect such a deep and really really helpful thing at all, even less without bugging people for it. You can't imagine how happy that makes me!!! And you have such an interesting point of viewing this story, especially Hana. I'm...