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Thank you both for your reviews! It's seriously amazing to have active readers when this fic used to be something I practically had to coerce people into reading for so long, lol. Hmm... so what I wanted to do with this was to make Red's train of thought feel as realistic as it would in this...

Wow. This was honestly such a beautiful, breathtaking read that it's been tough for me to find the words for commentary. But I'll try! I really thought the narrative here was wonderfully crafted. The first scene sets up a situation completely untrue, but as it's our first exposure to Alu, we...

it's been over a month since the last chapter, it seems. whoops! either way, chapter 3 is finally revised and ready to be read. an entire scene was removed and yet this is still only about 100 words shorter than the previous version. double whoops! either way, rating is teen for this one for the...

late response to ho-oh & dad

is this image real? 99% cant get this right

Okay! I've read chapters 3-6, but I think I'll go over 3-4 in this one and write my thoughts on 5-6 as well as the story as a whole so far in another post later. Chapter 3 I was confused on where this whole scene took place. I would imagine that Chris would be brought to the hospital after...

ua wanted me to post my brisa gift for them here so here it is

"it'll just be a sketch" - canis 'clown emoji' aries

nuclear pikachu go bzzzzzzz please draw buoqatro he is the secret 4th legendary bird, he will apear if you go 2 celadon gym at 3 am and walk in a cicle 12 times tank u

better late than never!

Good question - I don't think it's ever really pointed out, but the cleanup circle is rather big, and it can damage the ground it's made on due to it just basically deleting most things up to some way above its surface. As for travel, the woods are pretty close by in the end. I can get the...

Hey! Here from Catnip. Let's take a look. Standing over "them" would make more sense to me, since the "some" is implied to be many people. "had fallen on their face" would read better here, since the narration is already in simple past. I think this sentence should be broken into two (His...

Hello, here from Catnip! And it's about time for me to read and review something of yours after you've read and reviewed so much of mine, anyway. Going into this, I had basically no knowledge of either Lance or Clair outside "powerful dragon trainers", so I read a bit of the Bulbapedia articles...

oops may have forgotten about this completely??? well here are parts 3 and 4 rated teen as usual - light language, light violence, questionable ethics. enjoy. --- Part Three --- What’s a lati alert? Keith hopped off the bed. He stared at the door, which had been left ajar in Bella’s wake...

Hello there, and welcome to the forum! I've read the first chapter, and here are my thoughts. I think my first realization was that this was the only fic I'd read so far that had sapient pokémon live in a modern(ish) setting without humans - at best I'd seen cyberpunk from DeliriousAbsol. PMD...

Google Docs unfortunately doesn't seem to, on neither desktop nor mobile. If I really need an em (or en) dash, I find myself googling it and just copy-pasting the character from the results as it's still easier than alt codes in my opinion. Maybe it's not filtering in the traditional sense of...

I'm not sure how it couldn't be a thing? It takes time for eyes to focus to a certain distance, and that also requires eye musculature to happen. Or I'm not sure how it works in cephalopods, but I need to draw the line at mollusk anatomy research somewhere. I'm aware, but I absolutely refuse...

Huh, I get that basically every time I leave a shower, but I'm starting to think I'm actually more trembly than most people after all. I think past me's idea was that He's watching Fonz do all this stuff from his arms, but the phrasing does sound kind of weird now. Oh, that's good! I think I...

Hello! Here for Review Roulette. I read up to "To Find People Like That Out Here". Here are my thoughts. I think a word is missing in two places: "as she carefully stroked" and "she was about to select". It would be a lot better for clarity if thoughts were italicized, as otherwise they look...

I'm so glad that I've gotten new readers here! Makes the revision worth it. Now, here's the second chapter and the introduction of a character you may have seen me talk about a bunch of times on the Discord. Nothing gruesome happens this time around, so this chapter's rating is teen for just...