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Thank you both for the reviews! Sorry for the late replies, life's been hectic. Right, I should probably add that in the author's notes here as well instead of just in Hunter, Haunted: there is a story that bridges these two together called Metanoia, and it precisely answers why Red views Helix...

Hey there! I've read the first chapter of this story as per our review exchange agreement, and I am going to read and review the second as well, but I wanted to already post a review after the first due to all the thoughts I had about it. As a disclaimer, I am not someone who keeps up with the...

Hey there! I’ve read the draft of chapter 21 for Catnip and here is my review. Unfortunately, I couldn’t look at the bonus scenes due to some external personal reasons, but I hope this’ll be helpful enough with just the main chapter in focus. Not that many specific thoughts or critiques came to...

Hey there. I semi-randomly decided to check a bit of this out after hearing so much about it. I've read chapters 1 and 2, and here are my thoughts. First off, I gotta say I was surprised by the content warnings. The way this fic was spoken about made it seem rather dark, but those warnings look...

This is the second time now that someone's gotten the idea of them being the only ones that can use fire, so I should definitely work to better clear that up if I ever get to revising this story. To this day I haven't really figured out what the hierarchy of the houndoom pack is and how much...

Alright! It's been a while, but the hands of fate have finally slapped me into continuing this story via Catnip. I did have to do a bit of rereading to find the place where I'd last left off and to generally remind myself of everything that's happened recently in the story (and it definitely...

June 21st Game! (Happy Midsummer!) Organizer: Canis Sign-ups open until Thursday, June 24th 10:00 EST [countdown here] You have until the end of the countdown to submit your fic of choice. You may change it anytime up until the rolling takes place. Submit to me via TR or Discord DM. Review...

So I heard some people talking about this fic on the discord and I decided to check it out. I've read Chapter 1 and I want to give my thoughts on it, but unfortunately I have to say they're not very positive. Before I get deeper into the issues I personally had with this chapter, I have some...

Hey there! Catnip finally kicked my ass into catching up with Chapter 2, and I'm glad it did. Here are my thoughts. I'm gonna go over my quotes first to get the grammar and other prose stuff out of the way: Missing capitalization in "the". It might also read more clearly if the clerk's...

EDIT (2022-01-02): The story has now received light edits and is no longer the same as it was when it was originally submitted into the competition. If need comes to look at the original version, it is still up on Google Docs here. Results out means it's time to break the stories out of judging...

Hey there! It's been a while, but I've come back for Chapter 3. Here are my thoughts. damn, hollywood got there before they did This was interesting to me. I don't remember if it was specifically said in the game(s) that Orre doesn't have wild Pokémon, but if not, that's a cool way of...

@GrayGriffin Thanks for the review! The prologue I can definitely confirm is not meant to be comedic, so no surprises there - it's meant to establish the strong attachment Red has with Helix, which is really the driving force of the plot. The first chapter, though, is written with the same tone...

Hey there, here for Catnip. I read all three drabbles, but felt that I could only really say anything about the first one. It is somewhat unfortunate that chance assigned me in particular to this drabble collection as I personally happen to really dislike Lusamine, but I'm gonna try my best not...

Hey all! This is a drabble I wrote for a prompt in the Second Anniversary Mini Prompt Bingo. Obviously I didn't finish it in time, but I liked the idea and wanted to finish what I started. The prompt in question was (sort of spoilers) . Surprisingly for me, there are no content warnings to...

Reviewed chapters 1-5. I'd like a review for Hunter, Haunted. Be wary of the content warnings if you go for it. If you don't want to read something rated mature, I'm also fine with a review for Seiren.

Hey there. I've read chapters 1-5 for the review tag, and here are my thoughts. My first point actually has to do with the chapters themselves. They're certainly the shortest I've come across, and while I'm open-minded when it comes to challenging convention, I don't think it really works in...

May 18th Game - Special Bingo Drabble Round! tiny stories, tiny cat! That's right, this round is special! It is specifically for drabbles created for the second anniversary bingo event. If you've written and posted a drabble for the bingo event, come on and join! Organizer: Canis Sign-ups...

Hey there! I read Chapter 2 for Catnip and here are my thoughts. Gengar's mouth takes up so much of its belly that I'm actually not sure if this is his regular mouth described metaphorically or an additional stomach-mouth. It's been a while since I read the first chapter so I don't recall if...

May 10th Game! Organizer: Canis Sign-ups open until Thursday, May 13th 10:00 EST [countdown here] You have until the end of the countdown to submit your fic of choice. You may change it anytime up until the rolling takes place. Submit to me via TR or Discord DM. Review window opens: once...

First bingo prompt, A Perfect Apple!, completed! (Don't expect the other ones to be this nice... I spent about 4 hours too many on this.)