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Wrapping up week 3! I almost got all I wanted to read, but I ran out of time... and this happened to be a weekend where I have to work. A lot. Oof. Title: Luceat Lux Vestra Link: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/luceat-lux-vestra.977/post-52113 Chapters: 3 Weekly: Yes Title...

That's probably the fastest prologue I've read in a while that got right to the chase! Don't bother to explain the science or how it got to that point, just get right to the premise to see how it goes. I suspect it will be pretty catastrophic! Guess now it's time to see what happens. The way...

I don't know a whole lot about this series, but I'm going to treat it kind of like original fiction. Since this is written to be an adaptation of things, it should be pretty close if I don't know the context at all, right? Anyway, this is going to be a stream-of-consciousness review with...

Wow, what an opening! That's definitely a way to get the premise started right away without really having to cut through to any of the usual buildup that you'd expect. Anyway, hello! I'm doing a review of everything published so far as of my reading of it last night. I'm here with a fresher...

Thanks for the feedback, Windskull! Glad to hear your thoughts as always, and yeah, this was the slower part of Act III before I finally learned how to kick things into gear without scope creep messing things up more than it should. Some more specific responses... The Voidlands has some...

Title: A Brother's Merit Link: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/a-brothers-merit.912/post-51980 Chapters: 3 Weekly: Yes Title: I'm A Marionette Link: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/im-a-marionette.939/post-51982 Chapters: 11 (only enough words for 6)...

Hey there! I wound up taking a look at everything that was published so far here, so that'd be the prologue through chapter 2. Overall, I'd say this is a good start, especially for a young writer still getting familiar with the wonderful, terrible world of writing. Keep it up! For the most part...

Glad to hear, Free! As for two specific comments... Ha, yeah, this was a bit of an accident but probably an unintended slip of the tongue. As implied in the prologue, Amia has quite a bit of Fire power in her, but the way it's presented (what with being a Gardevoir) means that she isn't...

Hey Free, thanks for reviewing! I'm glad it was an interesting hook! Yeah, the early prose is a little rough. I should really get around to polishing it up once my buffer is replenished some, particularly with the information withholding when I probably don't need to. Lots of mystery right off...

Weekly fic rec This week I want to give special mention to Negrek's In Ghostly Fashion. It's a slice of life story that, because it's Pokemon, has a lot of supernatural elements to it that are sort of weaved into the way everyone regards the world as mundane. A giant bug handing you some...

Bulk haul here, had a bunch of notes strewn about and finally put them together for the week! Title: Starfrost Link: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/starfrost-osas-one-shot.970/post-51618 Chapters: oneshot Weekly: Yes Title: Demons have wings, but so do angels Link...

Mewtwo was made to be the god of victory? Nobody tell it about Victini, that's trouble waiting to happen. Hey Phoenix! Here to top off the oneshot week by looking at as many as I could, and this one caught my eye for starring Mewtwo, though I knew little more. Having finished it, I thought it...

Stress induced nudity is indeed a common phenomena among people. This was a pleasant surprise! It's not often that I get to sit back and enjoy a quick read of a simple, supernatural slice of life fic. The slice of life feel was really cute alongside having a supernatural Ghost pet. I think...

Would you believe me if, when looking through the fics on the forums, I thought this one was meant to be paired with your Groudon story? I suppose while in a similar tone, this one was much more thoroughly composed. Liked it a lot more, even if it amounted to another shitpost. A good shitpost...

I don't know what to think about this one. Your humor can always surprise me at times, and it's a little surprising to me that I can be surprised anyway. This time by an anti-joke... I think?? I don't even know anymore! I did get a little laugh out of it, though, though I definitely preferred...

"Hey you, you're finally awake." Nearly had it. You nearly had the perfect opening and you squandered it. Anyway, hi Yellow! Considering I'd only recently read OSAS proper at the beginning, I realized that this seems to be a oneshot related to it, so why not! Interesting to open with just...

A trio of oneshots! This one is... kind of difficult to judge. They're standalone, you don't really have to read all of them, and you can read them in any order (even the recommended order isn't in chronological order) but they are regardless in an "intended order." Didn't really realize this...

This is the final part of my three-part review series for your trio of oneshots. And oh, hi, Team Plasma! Wasn't quite expecting to see you in this final oneshot, but it was quite an interesting twist. It really helped root things in terms of time and place, knowing little context for the other...

And now, part 2 of my review of these stories. While these are all standalone oneshots, I certainly see the context between them. Interesting that this one takes place before the other one, since a lot of my wants for the missing context in the first one seem to be found in this one. I do...

Part 1 of my three-part review! I read in the order you requested, and am giving you some stream of consciousness thoughts. In the third short story (Liberation) I'll give some overall thoughts on how, while standalone, the three loosely related stories come together. Now, considering where...