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This'll be a bit of a stream of consciousness review, but overall thoughts will be near the bottom. The first big paragraph has a lot of word repetition and I don't think the effectiveness of it quite shapes up to anything worthwhile in terms of thematic use. Floor, tile, wood, in particular...

Thanks for the feedback, Zion! And yes, you certainly analyzed some of my tendencies when casting certain characters and plotlines for what I like to write when it comes to smaller stories. I hadn't even considered the care-justice dynamic. I oughta look into that because it definitely sounds...

This is an interesting sort of semi sci-fi existential horror sort of fic being written here. I don't really know how else to properly describe it, but it does have that typical Espy feel with messing with the interface while crafting the story. These are one of those kinds of works where...

I'm upset that I knew what this was going to be about within the first few paragraphs and the title. I suppose it also helps that I'm familiar with the authors sort of humor when it comes to this sort of story. All things considered I'd very easily recommend your work of this genre to people...

This was a fun one! The presentation, especially the opening paragraph, was very strong in establishing what kind of story we would be reading. I get the feeling it was inspired by, or is at least coincidentally similar to, SCP logs and things of that nature. "Found footage" documentary style...

Catnip for you too! This was a cute story! It was very predictable in terms of the beats that would happen if only for the meta reason of the story's length. Once there was a cry in the forest, I knew exactly what was going to happen by the beat. That doesn't mean the story was bad, though. In...

Catnip time! I really liked the transition from being so ignorant of what his situation was to eventually showing the relation of our perspective to humans and just following orders. But showing little hints now and then of exactly what happened by the time we got to the midway point...

Heya! This is gonna be a review of the prologue through chapter 4! Small note, you used the wrong "than" in your opening statement/legal disclosure. The opening prologue was a very far zoom out of the state of affairs for the world, very much like a cinematic prologue without dialogue. I...

Hey there! This will be a review for the prologue and first two chapters. This is a strong opening line. It's basic and doesn't describe too much, but it does start right in the action. Something I can appreciate in particular about this story is how it doesn't really idle around for much...

Alright, time to give this one a look. This'll be for the first two chapters! We're opening with a somewhat standard quiz with the twist of something clearly going wrong in the process. Very clearly this is going to be important down the line, so I'm curious on where that will go. One thing I...

Hey there, Luker! It's finally time for me to take a peek at this one! This is going to be a review of chapter 1 and the prologue. I'll give some stream of consciousness thoughts as well as end thoughts. Interesting prologue. It seems slightly too detailed to be just a throwaway setting, right...

A story about a Pikachu and an Eevee is definitely drawing upon the classics! The way the prose is going for the opening is interesting. Third person present, but the italics seems to be for when things are happening in the scenery, but no italics if it pertains to dialogue? However, there are...

Oh, interesting! This time we're looking at something of a look at Gladion escaping from Aether, are we? I thought it was very clever how you skipped right to the actual escape plot and how it all happened instead of trudging through the actual plotting of it. You could have started at some...

Chapter 145 – Unexpected Life The doctors had insisted Zena stay in bed and recover from those wounds, which were still bleeding mildly despite her Mystic healing. Being struck by the Judgement of Arceus, as it turned out, was more difficult to heal. But Zena insisted a little harder that she...

Personal goal is to get enough for a sprite companion as is tradition. I think 6 is the cap, so this may be it until I do either replacements or find some other milestone goal!

Review made! Have a HoC.

This is a review of chapter 1! The first three scenes between perspectives of Ash, Pikachu, and Jenny set up an interesting field for what was to come. It seems, based on the narrative, that Ash was going to be the one to fight against the Team Rocket uprising that was happening ever since the...

Yep, I plan on going over some of these earlier chapters a bit more thoroughly one day, maybe some time soon come 2023, but otherwise, it's been nice to see you enjoy these chapters! Hopefully you'll enjoy what's to come soon. -- Chapter 144 – Triple Luck There was no way Star had given...

Chapter 143 – Fly to the City Cipher Castle was strangely lonely. There were very few guards actually patrolling the area inside, and all the halls were far too large to be considered anything but excessive. Owen walked down a now-familiar passageway that was at least ten feet in width and...

Heya Vray! This is a review for chapter 1, crossposted from FFN. Interesting opening, starting with some intrigue and context less exchanges, but I was able to follow just enough to get into the scene. This is a decent opener despite the lack of context, so good job there. Also, bonus points...