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Hey there, here for Catnip! Read chapters 2-4 since 2 and 3 were quite short. immediate solution to the money problem: make bank betting when you know the outcomes back to the future arc when? Both of these parts had the dialogue belong to a different person than the narration in between the...

Fic Title: Stronger Link to Review: Here Number of Chapters: 1 (oneshot) Weekly Theme: Yes

This was beautiful! I don’t think I’d be exaggerating in calling it poetic, even, with how vivid and colorful the prose is and how rhetorical repetition is utilized. Something that was interesting to me was how the story has multiple different angles of tragedy, others easier to see, others...

Fic Title: Swamping Ground Link to Review: Here Number of Chapters: 1 (oneshot) Weekly Theme: Yes

Hey, I found this in the story index spreadsheet and gave it a read. I like the way Marshtomp just chills in the mud like this. Feels like something a Marshtomp would do. This feels like it contradicts a bit with Marshtomp describing how he'd try to challenge other humans with the assumption...

Hey! Since I'd read Over the Winds and Waves before, I decided to check out the other oneshot, Speckled Silver. I was left wondering how he carried these - just as a mouthful of seeds or in some kind of pouch? Oh, this is cool. The word helping is repeated a few too many times here, imo...

week 2 begins! Fic Title: Beyond Rescue Link to Review: Here Number of Chapters: 1 (oneshot) Weekly Theme: Yes

My eyes glazed over the part that said ”M-rated” in the content warning before I read this so I was sure in for a surprise, lol. Luckily, though, I can handle my gore so no harm was done. Just one quote comment from me this time: I didn't actually realize they'd entered into a cavern here...

I'm a bit worried that this would make people erroneously assume that HE is Kohath, though, when Kohath was just one of HIS servants and a form HE likes to take when talking to Red. Well, at least it isn't the end of chapter 10. You'll find out why in due time. Some years ago. Feel too much...

Fic Title: Go!Go! Pokécure Warriors! Link to Fic: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/go-go-pok%C3%A9cure-warriors.431/post-51213 Number of Chapters: 1 (chapter 1) Weekly Theme: Yes

Hey there! I was browsing the forum for fics, noticed this and remembered I'd been meaning to check it out. So I read chapter one, and here are my thoughts! Quote Comments There were a few spots with this "...!" end and I wasn't sure how I was meant to imagine them sounding? you cant slide...

Fic Title: Stray Link to Fic: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/stray.962/post-51164 Number of Chapters: 2 (chapters 1&2) (holy freakin crap canis covers more than one chapter in a review?) Weekly Theme: Yes

Hey! Read the first and second chapters. Here are my thoughts. Quote Comments "holy shit a chaos emerald" I like that he's on mute for the duration of this vision - it makes him powerless without making him totally passive or unable to express himself the way being totally frozen in place...

Fic Title: Home is Where the Hoenn is Link to Fic: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/home-is-where-the-hoenn-is.556/post-51039 Number of Chapters: 1 (chapter 1) Weekly Theme: Yes

Hey! Checked out the first chapter of this for the Blitz. less go somehow I consistently parsed this as "six feet taller" and though there was just this one fucking massive zangoose same motion "but sir, spinda is a shitmon" moral of the story: love your haters and never stop grinding ---...

Fic Title: Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: The Phantasmagoria Link to Fic: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/pok%C3%A9mon-mystery-dungeon-the-phantasmagoria.615/post-50959 Number of Chapters: 1 (chapter 1) Weekly Theme: Yes

Looking for new fics to review for the Blitz, I decided to check out this one. I read the first chapter, and here are my thoughts. Quote Comments When using "as" to link together simultaneous events, do not use a comma. Using a comma changes the meaning to instead express that the former event...

alright, here we go! Fic Title: Weaversong Link to Fic: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/weaversong.937/post-50813 Number of Chapters: 1 Weekly Theme: Yes

Hey! Been meaning to check this out, and Blitz was the perfect excuse. Quote Comments I read "spread out and huddling together" as a contradictory statement for a few times before I realize you may have meant that the branches in the same tree were spread out while huddling together with the...

I'll do some self promo too if that's fine! (No reading lists from me, I'm afraid, since promises make everything a lot more stressful for me.) Here's a rundown of my works.