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"I'll go with you for now," you say. You do not know anything about this place. If Millie is going to be friendly and helpful, you are best off to take the offer. "Great. If that's the case, I'll just take a short walk back!" With a smile and gently patting you into her bag, Millie walks out...

Oh, Negrek, that's a typo on my part. Not sure why I put Town there; City is actually correct. I'll edit that.

1. There appears to be no visible damage, but you feel 'damaged' in the aura sense. The rock itself is not hurt yet. 2. Yes those are called Considerations

Millie listens first to the great ramblings of you, a seemingly maddened rock. She starts off with a smile, and picks the rock up to inspect it, turning it over and looking for signs of a speaker. Odd, you can get the impression of some of her intents just by proximity. Once you're done...

This'll be a review of the prologue and first chapter! Most of it is thoughts I've had as I read, with a retrospective at the end. Interesting opening prologue. It doesn't really feel like a prologue, though. It seems more like something that could be labeled as a Chapter 1 initial scene since...

You are lost and without any memories of what happened or why you were there. At this point, even a potentially hostile presence might be better than nothing. That is your conclusion. So, with the energy you have, you roll forward and follow the canine as quickly as you can. Unfortunately, that...

I've gotten a decent rhythm going. I think once 24 hours pass after I make my post, I'll start drafting out the next post, and then once I'm available, I'll post it. I'll make some changes based on new posts made between then and publication, of course. But that seems to be a good system.

Thanks for the reviews, Makuro, Wind! Glad that you can get back into things, Wind, and it wasn't too disorienting after so long. And glad you got to the Grassmander part of the story, Makuro. Lots of awkwardness in those early chapters, but it's nice that they're still passable. Anyway, onto...

There was no telling when you would wake up again, if it would be the next day or year, or how many years had already passed. Yes! You had to take action, past your doubts and your caution. But what were you supposed to do? Take action, what did that mean when you lacked any kind of sense? You...

And so it begins! Check the neighboring thread. I hope you suffer pun hell, Stel. I'll be here to answer any objective questions, but otherwise, I am going to do my best to be an impartial observer in this thread.

[Note: Discussion and rules/mechanics are posted here.] -- You are... here. No sight. No sound. No touch. Not even a smell or a taste. Yet, you know what these things are. You have no memory of why, or what you had done before. It was knowledge imparted to you. You have a sense of urgency...

Hello! I am unable to stop working, and have decided, now that Dodra is complete, to finally get to a CYOA idea I've had in mind for a while. This is the rules/discussion thread for this Choose Your Own Adventure story that's just game-like enough to be put in this thread as opposed to the fic...

Hey there, Yellow! This is for your three-chapter review prize. I'm starting right where I left off, chapter 6 and into 8! Chapter 6 was a very strong chapter that included combat, specifically because it blitzed past something from the games in an interesting way. The biggest part was that it...

Chapter 172 – Memory and Light Something about Orre’s arid desert appealed to Owen a lot more than it did to Zena. The two of them flew over the skies after they’d made their landing from before. By now, he and Zena had become accustomed to using phones and computers to contact others, and...

Hey there, here for United's review tag as well as Diner's review event! As you wished, since the chapters are so short, I ended up reading through everything you have so far to give overall feedback. Most of this will be a stream of consciousness, but I will have final overall thoughts at the...

Chapter 171 – Lord of Nightmares North Null Village was in pandemonium. From the distant horizon, dark meteors arced through the red skies and demolished entire buildings, shattering light crystals and leaving corrosive craters in their place. Civilians fled into a Dungeon portal meant for...

I wasn't able to do much this Blitz, but at least I have enough for the yearly companion... Level of Prize: Forum companion Type of Prize: Jirachi Preferred Method of Contact: Discord

Thanks for reviewing, Canis! Yes, I'm very glad the programmer life was relatable lol, this was probably one of my favorite oneshots to write in terms of drawing from personal experience. My stories are usually so fantastical that it's not often I can make such direct comparisons, so this was a...

Thanks, you three, for reviewing this one! Admittedly, this was something I've had in my head for a while and wasn't sure who would fit the characters for. But then I found it and the rest was thrown together in a matter of a week on-and-off. I'm glad I could make your lives worse with it...

Yeah so full disclosure, if I had a character for every Legend I'd somehow have even more. Too many, even for me. My Lugia bias got the better of me; Ho-Oh does not exist in Kilo at the moment. Nobody ever "ascended" into the position. (It was going to die anyway, why have Ho-Oh for it?) And it...