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"What, harassing me after you said you didn't want to see me again is that important to you? Aren't you supposed to be off being a good boy or whatever champions do?" she sneered. She turned away, glaring into the distance. Why was Steven here after things went so bad last time they spoke...

That was impossible. Steven couldn't be here, the last time she'd seen him was... Whatever thought she'd had slipped away into a fog. There was no doubt it was Steven, given the hulking beast of an Aggron by his side. A scowl worked its way across her face. She felt Roserade's touch on her arm...

At first, Reena only seemed to cry harder, and it was hard to tell if she even realized Mightyena and Nate were there. Finally she spoke, but she seemed lost, not quite aware of who was there. "I just wanted to try and make some friends but..." she sniffled. "I'll never be able to. I messed it...

Hoopa nodded. "Okay" Their voice wavered with fear. "I'll use the power of this realm to try and project you into the mind of a trainer you have a connection with. Once you're seeing into their mind, you can reach out if you need me. I can try and project something into their minds to help...

Moments before Necrozma finished charging, ghostly shadows surrounded it, dark energy burying it in spectral energy. It howled, then the nosie was abruptly cut short as a surge of dark energy from a giant Weavile erupted under it, finishing it off. Another furious cry from Orzo, even as the...

As the group approached, the sight before them finally grew clear, both slowly and all at once. Trainers and their pokemon, scattered and spread out like toys left behind by a child. Glowing chains encircled their limp bodies as they seemed to stand, suspended by an unseen force. A girl and a...

I wonder if you used the words 'narrow' victory and 'shameful' losses on purpose. It's interesting, since you could have said 'victories and losses' or even 'hard fought' victories, but you instead use narrow and shameful, which to me says that Kari is very hard on losses and minimizes her own...

As the others distracted Orzo and the legendaries, the small group charged through Hoopa’s ring. They emerged on the other side, with Hoopa shutting the ring behind them. Infinite void stretched before them, a smattering of sickly stars hanging above, casting a pale light. Beneath them appeared...

"Use the ring to rescue the trainers!" Darkrai called. "Those who might have spoken to or knew some of the kidnapped trainers should try and go. The rest of us will stay behind to fight." Hoopa nodded, fear in their eyes, mixed with determination. Brandishing the ring, they flicked it outward...

Chaos consumed the battlefield as pokemon turned massive and changed forms, rising against the strain of gravity and distorted space to fight back. Portals opened, mercilessly dropping the legendary pokemon, and fire and electricity and ice rained upon the legends as they were assaulted by a...

A shining light descended from the sky and the glow faded, revealing Diancie - except even different looking than before, gilded in shining gems. She gazed scornfully upon Orzo. "You are a poor excuse for royalty. You call yourself a king yet there are none who would serve you willingly. If...

Just before Nine's feathered body turned completely to stone, a surge of electricity from Hazel charged him, and Merian used the last of his strength to lend his own energy to the electric type. CRACK! The thunderclap was deafening, consuming the birds in white hot electricity. The scent of...

What a stunning opening line! It perfectly sets up the character, time and circumstance. It also frames everything very well through Cyru's viewpoints and is basically perfection. Love it. Love the detail here that he refers to emotion as disgraceful. Love all the little moments of Cyrus...

Powerful wind surged from behind the team, giving unexpected speed to their movements and attacks. And as a unit, they struck as hard as they could. A shining cannonball, launched by a precise sound blast, hurtled through the air and crashed right through the shield enveloping Yveltal. Aggron...

A shining sphere of light formed in front of Wallace and a shimmering form of Manaphy appeared. Time seemed to slow. She lowered her head and pressed it lightly against Wallace's for a moment. "I hear your prayers, Wallace. And I shall answer them." She floated up and turned to face Orzo. Her...

"B̸̫͐e̴̯̼͑͊h̸͇͊͒ŏ̸̫l̴̝̈̃d̶̢̬̿ ̸̹̎̀ȳ̷̡̰̀ơ̴͇͋ư̶̮̲̓r̴̹͒̚ ̸͇̐K̶̼͎̓͠ȋ̶̊͜n̵̩̐͆g̶͙̿" Burning, golden light faded to reveal a massive figure that towered over all. Five rings, blazing with power, and two beings emerging from them, thrashing madly under Orzo's control. "Prepare yourselves!"...

Orzo's horrible, grating laugh filled the air. "V̴e̸r̷y̸ ̶w̴e̵l̸l̶.̷ ̸I̴f̸ ̵y̷o̴u̷ ̸w̶i̴l̷l̴ ̴n̴o̷t̴ ̵k̷n̸e̴e̴l̶,̶ ̷t̵h̵e̶n̷ ̵y̴o̶u̵ ̶w̴i̷l̸l̷ ̷p̶e̸r̴i̴s̵h̶.̸" A shadow slid from Xavian's body and he fell limp before vanishing, as if teleported. The darkness oozed up the wall and coalesced...

Hello! Here for roulette, and I'll be covering chapters 1 & 2. As you know, I mentioned that I find your revised version of chapter 1 to be much more palatable. The change in language makes gym battles feel less like lethal death matches (or at least, matches where death was a distinct...

Inch by inch, all pressed forward. Each step seemed to grow heavier, the air denser and an overwhelming pressure on all sides. And finally, despite the sense that the land itself was trying all it could to hold them back, they stood before the shadowy throne. And it was... unimpressive. Broken...

They arrived both slowly and all once. A dark, broken castle looming over them, casting an endless shadow. Crumbling parapets, shattered windows and decayed semblances of what might have been trees clawing their way from the earth. A semblance of courtyard lay around them, though it was only...