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Oh, where do I begin? I never should have joined Team Aqua--I never should have turned Betty or my parents away, I never should have tried to take on all the responsibility Team Aqua gave me, I never should have tried to have my Pokemon fight against others when they had no chance... I never...

No after reading all 37 chapters of Salvage I am 67% positive that I have it figured out: Nate is actually Mew, the child's mother. You might think Nate acts a bit harsh to the child, but he's teaching him discipline under the old concept of "misery builds character." Harsh, you say? Well...

Interesting. My recent interactions with Pen has made me realize that she is not all that she seems. The Truth Behind "Starfall" So a few weeks ago I took a gander at Pen's "Starfall" at her request. This seemed like an innocent story until I read closely into the Honchkrow named 'Kabiyo.' As...

Hi everyone! This is just a silly one-shot that I thought of one day and decided to write it. It's a simple man-and-his dog story, meant to be mostly comedic. It's a spin-off of my main fic, Drowning, but you can read this without having read Drowning. As long as you know that Team Magma...

Hey hey! Here for another Blacklight review. I'll do chapters 6-10 for this round. Chapter 6 There were a few typos I noticed in the chapter, though I also see that you said you won't be giving chapters from here on out as many edits, so I didn't include them in my review (I feel like pointing...

Here for catnip! I see kintsugi has already reviewed the whole thing, and I'm not going to be able to do quite that much in 48 hours ^_^; But I can give feedback on a few chapters! It's nice to see a trainer fic with an Original Character--though they used to be all the rage, I feel like they...

I'll add another: Carraig na Coinnle: My boss sent my Grumpig and I out in the middle of a snowstorm to get some medicine and I somehow wound up in this huge creepy weird ice castle! It's filled with pretty lights--wait, what's that thing?! Under a Bed of Clover: I had a bad run-in with Team...

I (23F) got caught by a bunch of weirdo Magma creeps and realized Team Aqua is a bunch of creeps so I decided I'd leave but then kept changing my mind and my Golduck (20M) keeps getting mad at me for staying with TA. AITA for hanging around??

Back at it with the next chapter! I'm wondering if the three totally different scenes makes this chapter feel disjointed. If you have any thoughts, let me know! Enjoy! Content warning: someone's legs are cut into Chapter 18 The waves slapped the rockfaces, spraying them with white foam...

Hey hey hey! Here for the latest chapter! Aww yeah, an Enigma opening! This certainly doesn't bode well for Rio. Super nitpick here--whenever I see any quotation marks, punctuation (like that period) is put inside them, not outside. I think it should just be "forward." Heh, this is a funny...

Name: Tabitha Species: Mightyena (though normally a human) Appearance: He's a rather large Mightyena with matted, tangled fur; his scruffy appearance befitting his rough personality. Personality: A human who doesn't know how he became a Mightyena and has no idea why he's at a holiday party...

Hey hey! Here for Chapter 18: Oooh once Spark said that her whiskers shorted out, I reralized that Harlequin was right about the food being tainted. Ooooh dang Rio is cold. He comes across as genuinely scary/frightening and capable in this scene, what with successfully tainting the Pokemon and...

Hey hey! I am back on schedule with this next chapter--I know it's soon after the previous one, but at this rate, I'll hopefully be back on track. Chapter 17 The walls, floor and ceiling were all made of the same drab metal. Tabitha sighed inwardly—working in places like this all the time...

Day 6: So sweet it hurts! Share your favorite fluff fic or a fic that made you feel some feels. Fic: Featuring Wally by Dramatic Melody Summary: Hoenn reporter Russel travels to the Alolan Battle Tree to interview Hoenn native, Wally! Status: Complete This is a fic that is short and oh so...

Well, this is about 10 days late. My apologies, and I'll do what I can to get back on schedule with these chapters! I decided to try a new style of writing with this chapter: instead of just summing up things that happen over a period of days, I put in snippets of the dialogue and things that...

Hey there! Thanks so much for stopping by--it's nice to see the Review Tag move along. And yes, haha. I originally just wrote this to have a piece explore grief of someone losing someone else they love, and when I chose a Ratticate, it kinda turned into the rival from the games. Oh, for surer...

Hi! Quick reply before the chapter review: Oh cute! And yep, 'Cloe' is pronounced as 'Chloe'--her family is from Ecuador, so I think it's a Spanish spelling of the name. Here to take a look at chapter 17 =D 3 things about this paragraph: 1. I normally associate the term "sleazy" with a...

October Day 7: Share a fic that made you like a pokemon you hadn’t previously. The Inalienable Dreamless by NebulaDreams Word count: 11,000 Status: Complete Summary: A confused Banette wakes up in a fiery room with no escape, seeing visions of a girl with black hair, an enigmatic Hypno, and...

Hey! So glad to see you posted this! Ever since you mentioned a therapeutic Hypno, I've been itching to see where you'd go with this :) I point out a few things I noticed with the meat of my thoughts at the end. I think you might want to either get rid of "regardless" or put a comma after...

Hey hey! Here to review Chapter 10! (And by review, I just mean leave compliments that make you feel good because I don't know how to give constructive crit XD) I didn't expect Brendan and May to be in this fic! They always strike me as a more "kiddy" aspect of RSE and seeing them in this adult...