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HAHAHAHAHAHAH, I HAVE RETURNED TO REVIEW THIS AMAZING ONCE AGAIN! YOU CANNOT ESCAPE THE GOOD VIBES, FUZE! ...Jokes aside, I have come to bring you even more of my reviewing power, I hope you enjoy this one. I'm gonna go for chapters 16 and 17 now, time for me to dive into your universe...

Okay, Spinal. Like I said, time to give your story a proper review. This is coming from someone that has knowledge of Digimon(or at least I like to think so, lol), so this might have a few more criticisms than I usually do. Or maybe not, because I’m still a lousy critique. Regardless, I’m gonna...

Here I am for the blitz again, I kinda wanted to review ES again, but since I pretty much did a review on all eight chapters, I couldn’t. With that being said, I remembered you had a drabble, so here I am, reading and reviewing it. I know you’re a good writer and my expectations will be...

Editing chapters has left me tired, so I didn't review that many things, at least for now. Anyway, I reviewed chapters 3 and 4 of Flyg0n's "Legendary Adventures", as you can see here. 570 words, so 2 points. I also reviewed her other story, "Home is where the Hoenn is", one chapter, 258 words...

Decided to read your other story, the fact it has Hoenn in its name makes me go “Hmmm”, considering Hoenn is my favorite region, so reading stuff about it is always exciting for me. Anyway, I’m gonna do this now. I think I got invested right when I read the premise. So here we have a trainer...

I’m back here again, Tetra. Decide to read more of your story, you know the drill by now, so I’ll just cut to the important part, aka, the actual review. Well, let’s see how this next batch of chapters will please me, shall we? Chapter 3 Aaah, this chapter was pretty good! I’m a little sad that...

My fingers are dead. Someone please send help aaaaaaaaaaaa. Uh, so, yeah, I made my largest review yet. Reviewed the entirety of BlackHairedPsycho's "Legends Legacy". It's right here. 13 chapters, 3271 words, so 13 points for this, bringing me from 61 to 74 points. I think I got it right.

Heya Psycho, Navar here. Decided to finally stop being a lazy person and review your first seven chapters in a row. Crazy, I know, but I’m a crazy person, so it all evens out. Now, the most important thing I need to say is that I’m a lousy critic. I cannot critique stuff to save my life, so my...

I have a few notes about this chapter. The first one is that it isn't canon to the story, and more of a "what-if" chapter. The second one is a content warning for this chapter. With that out of the way, enjoy this chapter! Special Episode 2 - The taste of metal Atlas was tired. Sure, that...

cracks knuckles I'm back to do this thing! Final week has arrived, and with it, my juice has returned, now, those are my reviews for today! Refracted Differences - Reviewed all four chapters, total of 1003 words, 4 points for me! Continental Divides - Reviewed chapters 2 and 3, 658 words in...

Oh, hi Tetra, Navar here. Finally decided to check your story out! I’m reviewing the first two chapters, and yeah, memey garbage is just what I do, screaming at the cool stuff. Beyond that, I take my time to write my thoughts immediately after I read a certain scene, so this review is live...

Hi OSJ, Navar here! Like I said, I’m gonna read more of your story, this time I’m reading two chapters, hopefully you’ll enjoy this review. I’m craving for some Hoenn stuff today, so this fic will hopefully satiate that! This is mostly live, I’ll write my thoughts just as I read the scenes, so...

Hi Spark, Navar here. I’m going to review all four of your chapters here, and maybe in the process I’ll make you feel a bit better about your writing. I read your fic before, but I didn’t review it, so take this as my opportunity to do so. My reviewing style was already explained when I reviewed...

Dungeon 23 - This is a test Walking through the streets alongside the Marowak, Lance began to ponder what Scar meant by "test". Was it another mission? Was it a battle? An investigation? That made him curious, especially because the Marowak refused to answer when Lance asked before. "Hm. I...

Phew. I actually managed to review even more stuff today! Here are my new reviews! 1 - Reviewed two chapters of Namo's "Death is Lonely". Here's the link. 608 words, two points! 2 - Reviewed Sparkfire's oneshot, "The Meaning of Gifts". Here's the link. 290 words, one point! 3 - Reviewed...

Oh hi there, decided to review your first chapter for the blitz here! So, a retelling of Explorers? As someone that played those games multiple times, this should prove to be a fun experience. As a quick side note, I loved the cover! It's so well drawn! First things first, uh, I noticed some...

Hi Kint, decided to review your story once again, haha. Let’s do this, shall we? You know the drill by now, so I’ll cut to the actual review. Now this chapter has a different point of view, I think. Unless Harmonia is like, N. If they are, then well, nice job! If not, then it’s just a big...

Hi Spark, since the blitz is happening I decided to read your oneshot here, and review it. Now I always say this to whoever is getting my reviews, but please don't expect anything critical. I am a terrible critic, so this is just me going all "This is cool!" at the fun stuff the fic, or oneshot...

Hi Namo, decided to review your other story this time for the bliz. Anyway, I’ll go do this now. I decided to try my hand in a different type of review, since your scenes are longer than the other fics, and that new type is me making my review of a chapter by giving the thoughts on each scene...

Reviewed Amby's "Path of Valor". My newest review is here. 2104 words counted by me, so 8 points, and I also reviewed 8 chapters, so yeah, 8 points! Although I reviewed the prologue earlier on, as you can check right here, so by the theme I should have one extra point, so 9 points, bringing my...