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Alarm Lvl 111100: Entity Capable Of Destroying High-Caliber Psychic Organisms Objective: Surveil UnitDesignate_Cuicatl_Ichtaca Sub-Objective: Survive Object_BingoCard holds potential tool for survival [X] Ram Location_Bar

I usually adore RNG, but I wouldn’t mind if first fic was the most reviewed one in the four weeks of Ficmas. Means that lots of people can discuss.

"No... I think I'm good." Cuicatl just grunted. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/postcards.229/page-4#post-17394 Reviewed four chapters with 760 words, netting 3 points. I think this brings my total up to nine.

Slateport: Oh boy we're back to Hoenn, which apparently means that we're back to describing scenery and incorporating locations. Lovely. Although a quick correction at the start: Lawyers and Poets are not proper trainer classes, which means they don't exist in the game world. This can quickly...

https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/postcards.229/page-4#post-17362 8 chapters, 1065 words for 4 points, bringing me up to six. Do I claim prize wheel spins here or...?

Route 119: 7.8/10 too much rain. Does the sceptile eating inner bark hurt the tree? Is this allowed? Also, does protagonist only have two pokemon? That's not a lot for this late in the game when both are at final evos and the traditional sixth gym is nearby. There's a lot of descriptions of...

PseudoClass_Squirtle possess weak points not made of shell. Class001 possesses no weak points. Terminator of UnitDesignate_Squirt assigned provisional Threat Level 0. Units receive error reports upon attempted termination. Error reports lead to error-correcting actions. Error-correcting...

I did a review. I think this only counts for one point because one total chapter, but because it has to be split into two posts due to length, maybe it counts for two? Unsure. Update: Sugi says this counts as two. So, claiming 2 points. 760 words. (Unfair!)

Huh? First...? That's weird. I liked this. And not just cause it has one of my favorite characters. Although Coco is very sweet! Does the noms. No real objection to the characterization, either. She's a fair bit more powerful here than in canon, but crossover power creep/seep is a useful trope...

CN: Casual transphobia and homophobia. After this chapter (or at this chapter) readers who really don't want to read queer pain stuff given, you know, everything, might want to check out of Gen chapters for a bit. Fighting 3.9: The Talk Genesis You’re bone tired but the sleep won’t come...

[Affirmation.]

So Starr didn’t want to talk about it. That was okay. “Watch a match? Well, not watch... observe? If you could narrate that would be nice. Cuicatl liked competitive matches back home.” Why did she say Cuicatl there? Instinct? It seemed... true. You could probably strategize if you had to, but...

[Negation. Unit 001_101110110 has yet to become a 010 Class Unit.] Was it supposed to respond to that? It slowly lowered the present so that no one would know to expect that trick in the future.

Fascinating. A chance to observe the others. But after careful analysis of Object_BingoCard, Nocitlālin concluded that it was not, in fact, an Object_BingoCard. It picked up the present and began to search the ceiling of the room, a place where most Terran life would not look. It made sure to...

Sub-objective: Locate Object_BingoCard [X] Mobile Evasive Maneuvers Unit001_101110110 telekinetically lifted the present it was hiding behind and kept beside it while moving. This allowed it to maintain cover while scouting the area for Object_BingoCard. She eventually found a small rectangle...

“Hmph. Yeah. Fine. This isn’t new.” Her voice was as monotone as a zwelious’s could get. For a moment Val thought Cuicatl was going to leave it at that. “Heard your dead sucked. Welcome to the club.” She paused. “No, that’s... I’m sorry. I shouldn’t be...” Some emotion was gradually creeping...

I did get the full 2k words in.

Wrote 1k words. I think I might reach 2k by 7 or 8 or whatever the cutoff is now with daylight savings time in the mix. If I do, I'll edit or post again.

Something shifted in Cuicatl's mind. Strength. She liked being praised for that, but it seemed to do less for Val. Hmm. Maybe not as clear-cut a divide as she'd first thought. "Thank you," she said for both of them. "I'll keep the therapy in mind." She'll ask Cuicatl about it. Cuicatl will say...