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Chapter 11 Blitz review So our absol friend skimrished with cleo and co and then bailed? I bet that made a sleeplessness night for the three. And of the three i vote mischief has the more accurate idea. And i kinda worry that cleos "leading them back" might be optimistic and their "stalkers"...

Chapter 10 Blitz review And we are back to the dastardly duo amd i called it enigma is the seasickest thing in a ninty mile radious. Except its a river. And beimg undead how does that work? Does he regirgitate the nightmared of days past? Harl: i got easy as pie trolling, blackmail, a...

Chapter 9 Blitz review Spark: so, just checking, but we're not doing what we were told? Cleo: is water wet? (Before mischief can ask anything) we're just... Merging objectives... Thats all. I can see.this going so bad. (Goes off to make popcorn). To sparks complaint i would say cleos being...

Chapter 8 Review blitz So we got a bunch of dead and tied up sirviper bodies. The waters gotta be tainted for sure... Now torch as over the head illumination on a stick? Or the britishism of a torch... Like a us version of a flashlight? Because imagining spark held fisted in tinkers arm...

Chapter 7 Review blitz And we are back to the baddie squad. Hydreigon: "so like i know you think you're hiding but i can see your body sticking out of the wall... You only phased your head through... Its like a cat sticking its head in the shoe and thinking he's invisible... But he isn't"...

Review blitz Chaoter 2 (finale?) Love the poe quote it fits the tone very well. General grary thompson is definitly feeling the poe-ism down to his bones. He's lost all sense of time. All ties to his family and probably only holding onto the ghost of patrioism at this point since america has...

Natu?

So we get gio's back story. I called it in that he was from mundane land. And for simplicitys sake we are sticking with gio as his real life names too much of a mouthful to bother with and old habbits die hard. So emmet not only got shunted along to arceus timeline world but modern l.a. as...

Yes shank, ask the million dollar question. Why a leaf stone? Why a leafon? (I mean really a grass type, not that i have prejudices but i guess i do.) Laughs. I see i triggered some lantant despicable me vibes her. Fish gun anyone? Love how salts just rolling with it and i hope erick...

Review blitz full story comentary Honestly, I've dipped in and out of this story and series since i joined the site. I like the premiss of evil red. And a protag dealing with the aftermath of a deeply psychological scarring experience by latching onto a malovent god figure to cope and a...

Chapter 2 blitz review Hi so this isnt a one-shot now? Whoops... Alright lets hit this up for chapter two i guess. So we have initial contact. I wonder what feels off to make the ai move so gingerly as after last chapters revelation that Turo is as oblivious as Sada would like. Yeah sada...

Welcome aboard. Don't know if anyones flagged you yet but we're in the center of a review event. Feel free to join in, meet other writers, and maybe win prizes. Blitz info Or heck if you have some chapters feel free to toss them on the forum and get some feedback. Its basicslly a feeding...

a shame i noticed this first... Its such a nice wish i need to corrupt now... (I'd like my plush back) Granted. You get the whole shebang. Mysterious voice. Colorful void. Orange scarf. Personality test that routes you to a fitting mon youre happy to inhabbit... The light brightens...

Chapter 6 Review blitz Ohh we got a report hitting the bad guys desk. By strutting i am guessing yurliks a bird type. Possibly a serving dark type murkrow? A honchkrow actually considering it had to haul the dead bits and bodies. That must of been an adventure. So ghost types are serving...

Chapter 5 Blitz review Tinker this might be foreshadowing... Maybe time to pack a getaway bag and... Oh wait tinker nailed you to mischief... Nevermind. Cleo: you really can't stop eating, and must only eat your favorites... Because of this new confuz status. Sparks: yep! Yeah cleos...

I vote host one last harrah at the waterfal, prioritize fire type guests because why not. (I mean if we are getting exiled lets hoop it up one more time)

chapter 4 Blitz review Just one worrying development? Why such a low amount? i'm sure spark and cleo can think of like nine at this point. The first one that leaps into my mind... The area around them being on fire. I suppose its an odd tangent but in irish mythology's cait sith was a...

Heh so gios a refugee from the real world. I wonder how long hes been stuck since hes practically coming unglued by this hitch in the plan. I mean opening fire on a fire type? Beter hope oh-ho doesnt counter with a flamethrower considering the gasoline that keeps a chopter afloat... He stole...

Chapter 3 reaction Review blitz I doubt cleos peace and quiet hikes gunna hold up anymore.... yep. No sleep and no peace though for now mischief still seems benign tjier paranoia is costing them. And i wager her chatters all day long to further drive them up the wall. mischiefs word choice...

Blitz review Chapter 2 And we are back with cleo. I wondered how much spark knows what went doen between cleo and the guide head... From his chill reaction this morning i suspect nothing. Granted "quite a spread" from something the size of a yarn ball is like theee berries on a plate...