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Hiiiiiiii it's time for me to finish this fic. Chapter seven first. Poor Nella. Her fear and doubt and self-recrimination are more intense than ever, I think. In particular, I feel like realising that she's entrusted herself to the care of a cult, and then having the boldness to take Freddy and...

More review catch-up! Chapter 48 has that one girl who has an enormous roster. Funnily enough, I think I felt more mad at this bullshit hax back before I'd played Z-A with a giant rotating roster. Now I guess Mark and May just have a skill issue. Too bad. Still, I do enjoy that characters pull...

So. I liked this one a lot. I'm not really a Keldeo-enjoyer, but this story really sold me your take on the character, what a good lad doing his best. Painfully concerned with moral compromises and the approval of both thoroughly-estranged mentors and present-day peers. I'm proud of him for...

This was a real cute fic! I missed this when you posted it, but I was fortunate to be reminded of it today. Ralsei's a pretty tragic character, even if we don't know the full extent of the prophecy and what he's so afraid of. Whatever it is, and however it's goingto play out in reality, he's...

Okay, so, this was fantastic. There's a lot to enjoy, here. For one, there's your consistently incisive humour, stuff like the notion that Selene must be dead if she isn't the champion (truuuuuue :'D ) or the checking for phone signal. Then, there's the incredible economy of storytelling and...

This was a neat, vibes-heavy look into a Raikou's psyche, and the impression it gave me was one of a force of nature that happens to be a mammalian beast, which is pretty sick. Nice.

Hello again, dearest friend. Yet another round of your favourite cat's backtrack reviewing! Chapter 45 has a fun little reminder that Mark is 'dead' even if the consequences for this are mostly just him feeling weird and bad about his parents, and them not worrying about him. It segues nicely...

Right, finally reviewing the second batch of three chapters. Kumiko and Antonio are a good addition, even if we haven't seen much of them (particularly Antonio) compared to the main gals. However, I'm thrilled at just how fucking insecure Cass is about Kumiko. To the point where it even sours...

my honest reaction to Chapter 6

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Review for Ch1-3 I've had this recommended to me by the lovely @Flyg0n, who deserves some kudos for bringing it to my attention. With no exaggeration, it's extremely much my jam. For starters, I deeply enjoy the specificity of the premise. Like, sure, I do have a soft spot for Porygon myself...

heck

Matthias' / Jackie's Spreadsheet Player Character Votes ☠️ Flipped? My Read Notes Flyg0n (aka Tetra) Anubis (M Houndoom) D1, 7th: Abstain ☠️ Town Soft Town Insistent on no D1 kill. Seren Kimiko (F Human) D2, 6th: Peridot Soft Town Has offered some reads. Not happy at all...

[[I mean it would make me fill Sind's sinuses with concrete. But like. Anyone could be secret miller if we start thinking that way, so. Fuck it, we ball, I guess!]]