Recent content by Namohysip

(Reposting now that we're in the proper phase) Special thanks to @Ambyssin for donating 3.75 points for me to get a L1 Prize. (Have to React to confirm) Level of Prize: 1 Type of Prize: Review (Hands of Creation, preference for later chapters but I recognize the difficulty of doing so)...

Special thanks to Ambyssin for donating 3.75 points for me to get a L1 Prize. Level of Prize: 1 Type of Prize: Review (Hands of Creation, preference for later chapters but I recognize the difficulty of doing so) Preferred Method of Contact: Discord DM

Level of Prize: Forum Companion ~ canon Haxorus sprite Type of Prize: Forum Companion Preferred Method of Contact: N/A / Discord DM / it's just a forum companion Additionally, if anyone is feeling charitable, I'm 3.75 points short of claiming a level 1 prize as well (31.25 points, out of 35 for...

Whoa! It's been SO LONG since I got to see another Charmander-line PMD main! That's something to look forward to. Anyway, hi! I'm here as part of Review Blitz, and I'll be taking a look at everything published here so far! The first two chapters are small, but the third seems to be pretty big...

Here for the blitz! I like myself a good lore story, especially around the Creation Trio, so I'm curious to see what your take will be on how it all came to be. A story that circles around Giratina, Arceus, and the context of Legends as the shunned Pokémon. Two billion years of isolation is...

Weekly fic rec 3: Storms' Wake An incredibly short but sweet, atmospheric and descriptive story of watching the embodiment of a force of nature do their work. There's no dialogue, but the narration and prose does the work of getting familiar with, and even relating to, an interaction and the...

Small correction on the way "the circle" is described, but I think for a circle to be truly helpful to the forest, the wind has to NOT blow away the ash yes? That's where a lot of the necessary nutrients for regrowth is going. Anyway, hi! reading this for oneshots week, and I liked this one a...

This was a really cute read, and I liked the little twist at the very end on who we were over the shoulder of. Steven Stone wandering around in search of rocks and finding a quiet place among some friendly Pokemon... A stroke of luck, but he seemed to do well enough to avoid being looked after...

Weekly Fic Rec Week 2 My chosen catchup longfic this week is for Salvage by the admin of this very forum, since I promised to eventually catch up I was meaning to get back to it this blitz. In any case, if you're someone who enjoys carefully constructed prose, while still having a more gritty...

Hello Negrek. Today, my goal is to read a ton of Salvage for this blitz! I'm usually good about blitzing through swaths and giving some commentary broadly, but I tried to read a bunch first, and then in the final days give more specific thoughts per chapter, and then an overall at the end. Hope...

Weekly fic rec: Flames & Roses by @Arbee This one is definitely on the grittier side of things, with Pokemon easily getting injured with some very graphic injuries, and also succumbing to them even within the first few chapters. However, the writing is very descriptive, especially in the...

Hey there Val! I'm here to review up to the interlude after looking through the chapter lengths. These tiny chapters will make it quite easy to review on a per chapter basis, so that's what I'm gonna go for here. They're also really dense with stuff happening thanks to the hybrid script format...

I REFUSE to fall behind on review replies again, so I'll be replying to these straightaway so I don't let them pile up. Hopefully. I like to think that I'm having every character's behavior be measured and relatable in some way, so that when the MC is slighted, it makes perfect sense and...

Hey Wind! Glad to see a catchup for the blitz year! Always a pleasure to have a returning reader despite how long the whole story is. Don't be afraid to prioritize reading and just casually enjoying and giving a review on overall stuff later, whatever suits your fancy, but this has been nice...

Welcome to TR, and here's some reviews for everything you've written so far. Onto the prologue... Starting right in the action! Very nice, and I liked a lot of the language going on. Some of the idioms and similes were a little awkward, though. One odd example that stood out to me as awkward...