Recent content by Flyg0n

What a great opening paragraph. Captures the fics tone, communicates Derek's character, and sets up a taste of his Issues so effectively, I love it. Mentally noting this. Love this, such a human and natural reaction. Poor Derek Of course not!! Three children with the equivalent of toddler...

Excited to dig into a new fic, this concept sounds particularly fun! Don't mind me, I will be making some playful jabs at characters and sarcasm as well as commentary. I have to say, one chapter in an I am hooked. I think a first chapters job is to have enough of some intrigue to capture the...

Personal rec: @Tango 's TCG Doduo Adventures What do you get when you take the idea of a Let's Play, a novelization, and a diary fic then blend that all up with a base of the Gameboy TCG game, then as a dash of Doduo and a lot of Sycther? You get a fantastic game-fic that takes the "world"...

Memories Drake’s strongest memory as a child isn’t running away. It isn’t coming home to find his family gone. Those are strong, yes, but not the clearest. No, the clearest is a stomach knotting with hunger, a dusty street corner and yet another empty trashcan. What he remembers most is kind...

Their Loss They couldn’t leave if they couldn’t find him. He’d done it before. Ran away. Spent two nights holed up between two dumpsters in an alley until he ran out of granola bars and water bottles he snatched from the nearby convenience store, and the owner chased him out. His parents had...

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Man this chapter was spiicccyyyyyy. This is the kind of drama I live for. The tension, the rapidly escalating jerk behaviour, the set ups. Isaac is absolutely heinous and despicable in my eyes now. Using his child as a shield and manipulation device, lying, trying to set up Gentleman. It's...

Sorry for taking so long! Here's two chapters and if work permits I hope to get a third out 9 makes for a pretty amusing comedic interlude. I feel like there's some interesting tidbits of world stuff here about gambling and probability and the psychic club. I am very intrigued to see how...

I have to say, I really enjoyed the battle this chapter. Cheating/rigging aside, I liked reading it and seeing how their back and forth evolved and how he played his hand. Also we're getting seeds of more worldbuilding, like learning that UBI is a thing here and they have a benevolent (?) AI...

Man this chapter was a rough read (not like, writing wise, just story-wise). Gentleman gets his first taste of repeated losses at the Fire Club, but on top of that we get the reveal that coinflips are controlled by Bill Inc., a company that can affect the odds... and apparently you can pay to...

Swooping in with a nice chunky reviewing to make up for being slower than I'd like. Overally I really enjoyed this detour. Drunks rambling is always good for comedy, and it brings in some nice character moments too, with gentleman reminiscing about his lost love and lost opportunity, and...

Gotan is the best bird, thats all I have to say. I liked the burgeoning little friendship they have forming and Gotan's antics. He's such a weirdo and so memorable. I'm really curious where this diversion to study feathers will take them. At least Gentleman will get some free lawn care either...

Time for "part 2" of this little adventure! Koa made a temporary travel companion in the form of a odd Combee who he dubs Contessa, to whom Flurry took a liking. But what is this Combee's true goal? Koa's Team: Echo [Male Crobat] Hazard [Male Joltik] Rascal [Female Tyrantrum] Anubis [Male...

Thank you all for your patience! Koa continues onward to the Silver Wind bug festival at Floaroma, doing his best not to dwell on his failed attempt to contact Mesprit at Lake Verity. As his team settles their own differences, he continues to train and prepare for the challenges to come. Koa's...

2 years late for some of you... 😬terribly sorry! I both kept forgetting procrastinating, getting distracted... I know I talked to some of you in DMs or at very points but I figured I should address it here too. If I missed anyone, missed any pertinent questions or thoughts, please let me know...