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Chapter 50: Invites and Warnings

Chibi Pika

Stay positive
Staff
Location
somewhere in spacetime
Pronouns
they/them
Partners
  1. pikachu-chibi
  2. lugia
  3. palkia
  4. lucario-shiny
  5. incineroar-starr
All caught up now, hoping to have 51 and 52 done soon!



~Chapter 50: Invites and Warnings~

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After several days of training with legends and discussing plans for spying on the Rockets, it was kind of nice just taking a day off to watch the finalists practicing for the unofficial league. The stands were mostly empty—it was just practice matches, after all. Firestorm and Aros watched with the most rapt attention, occasionally arguing over whether or not a certain move was a good idea. Golduck and Weavile were sitting with us, the latter jumping out of her seat every few seconds anytime a cool move landed. Darren was only half-paying attention, busy reading something on his phone.

“You still never explained why you volunteered to sit out of the finals,” I said offhandedly.

Darren shrugged. “I just figured we got to have our fun, me and the team. Rather than having a big tiebreaker for the 8th slot, might as well leave it to the people who’ve been dreaming about being a champion their whole life, you know?”

I rubbed the back of my head. “I guess that makes sense.” Honestly, I could kind of relate to it in a way. I was just so used to being around people like Rudy or Ajia.

“Everyone was cool with it,” Darren said. “Skarmory was the only one really set on the finals, and he left, so…”

He’d left in spite of the fact that he’d had a chance to be in the finals. That put things in perspective.

“To be honest, I just got a little sick of training every day,” Darren went on sheepishly. “All that hypercompetitive stuff is more Rudy’s deal. I was looking forward to something a little more chill.”

I raised an eyebrow. “And yet you’re hanging around with those of us who’ve got the least chill job possible.”

Darren shrugged. “Never said I was smart.” He stretched widely, putting his feet up on the seats in front of us. “Anyway, I technically qualified for the finals. So when I volunteered to sit out, one of the organizers invited me to a minor league she runs in Johto—I might think about entering that one. Fewer people watching, seems like a better fit for us.”

“Huh, I wonder if it’s one of the minor leagues that Starr did when we were in Johto.” Decent winnings without too much publicity. Still, we’d had a few close calls—times we’d had to skip town to avoid trouble. Darren probably would be fine though. He wasn’t a notorious enemy of the Rockets like we were.

It looked like Rudy and his opponent were clearing out of the battlefield so we opted to leave the stands and go meet up with him. The moment we made it into the lobby, Weavile’s ears pricked up and she dashed forward to meet Ebony. Rudy had just finished signing something at the front counter. His eyes lit up when he saw us, and he bolted over, looking absolutely ecstatic.

“You guys, I gotta tell you the news! You’re never gonna believe it, it worked! It worked!” he yelled, bouncing up and down with so much energy it was almost contagious.

I waved my hand in front of me. “Okay, slow down, what worked?”

Rudy slowed to a stop, but his grin hadn’t lessened. “Some people were petitioning the Elite Four to show up at the unofficial finals and they’re totally gonna.”

I stared at him. “Holy crap.” This whole unofficial League thing had grown way bigger than I’d ever imagined. At this point why was it even unofficial? It might as well have been the real deal.

“Did the League ever say why they didn’t just hold the finals themselves?” I asked.

Rudy shrugged indifferently. “No clue. I just know the Indigo tournament site is still a mess.”

“Yeah, but they could have held it somewhere else, like you guys did,” I pointed out, shuffling a foot on the floor. “And there’s still no word from them on, like, the whole Legendary attack situation.” Just a whole bunch of media speculation. The idea that Moltres may have been acting on behalf of humans kept getting treated like a dumb conspiracy theory even though it was obviously the simplest explanation here. Were people seriously that blind?

“Y’know, there’s still a ton of people theorizing about that on social media,” Darren said casually.

Rudy turned toward him. “Huh?”

“Yeah. Most people think that the Legendaries are trying to punish humans for some crime against nature or something. No one can really agree on what it is, though.”

Rudy balked. “Wait, really? You can’t be serious.”

“You might consider reading things for once,” Darren said dryly, taking a swig of his drink, then nearly spitting it out when Rudy punched him in the shoulder.

“Oh, screw you, I’ve been busy.”

Yet again, I found myself wishing we could just tell the League everything. What did we have to gain from it being a secret? Sure, the Legendaries didn’t trust humans, but all this secrecy only benefitted Team Rocket and made the legends look like the bad guys.

Rudy shook his head. “Anyway, you guys distracted me before I could even get to the main point.”

Darren looked impressed. “Learning that the Elite Four are gonna show up to the finals wasn’t the main point?”

“No,” Rudy said, giving Darren a look. But then just as quickly, his face split into a wide grin. “I got invited to League headquarters later today!”

My jaw fell open. “Whoa, seriously? Are all the organizers getting invited?”

“Probably! I need to ask them. Might be a sign that the League's finally recognizing all our effort, y’know?”

Darren leaned back against the wall. “Well, yeah. They had to let you guys do all the hard work. Might just mean the League is gonna try to take credit for everything you guys did.”

Rudy jerked his head toward him incredulously. “What? Why do you think that?”

“I didn’t say I think it’ll happen, just that it could,” he said cryptically.

“Yeah, well, I don’t think that’s gonna happen,” Rudy replied with a huff. “That’d be a total dick move.” His expression had grown a bit conflicted, though. “At least… I sure hope they’re not gonna try to take over. It was a pain to set all this up and they weren’t helping us then, so it’s not like we’re just gonna hand it over from there.”

I shrugged. “I mean, the League was probably dealing with a lot at Indigo. Important… government stuff, or whatever.” I couldn’t pretend like I had any idea what they’d have to deal with in the aftermath of a disaster like that.

Rudy seemed at least a little satisfied. “Yeah…” he said, nodding distantly. He glanced around the lobby and added, “C’mon, let’s head outside or something.”

We all left the stadium, Weavile riding on Ebony’s back, lightly pummeling the back of her neck in what was probably some sort of congratulations. Our teams burned some energy goofing off at the training park, and then we all went out to eat before finally wandering back to the stadium around half an hour before the time Rudy was supposed to leave for his meeting. We chatted about the finalists, made bets on their chances, and argued about different tactics. Finally, a voice behind us said, “Rudy Fierro?” and we turned to see a woman in an official-looking suit approaching us from the sidewalk.

“Hell yeah, that’s me,” Rudy replied, raising a hand.

The woman nodded. “Thank you for agreeing to meet with the League on such short notice. A teleporter will be arriving shortly,” she said, gesturing for him to follow her to the designated jump spot.

“Sweet,” Rudy said. He turned to me and Darren. “I’ll see you guys later, then.”

“Be sure to remember us when you’re a League big shot,” Darren said, earning a shoulder punch.

“Seeya,” I said, giving a small wave and turning to leave, but then—

“Just one moment,” the League rep said. “Are you Jade Arens?”

“Yeah,” I replied, a bit bemused. How’d she know my name?

“Oh, that’s perfect. Are you available?” she asked. “We’d like for you to accompany him.”

I tilted my head. “Me? I’m not really involved in this whole unofficial League thing.”

“Oh, it has nothing to do with that,” she said, waving a hand dismissively.

“…What does it have to do with, then?” I asked cautiously.

“That will be made clear when you arrive.”

I wasn’t sure why, but I had the distinct feeling that I’d done something wrong.

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An official teleporter arrived to take us to the outskirts of the tournament site, at the Indigo Pokécenter, where a car was waiting for us. During the drive, almost everything looked ordinary, but then sometimes we’d pass by a city block that was completely demolished out of nowhere, and it was hard not to think of what had happened here a few weeks ago.

At least that mission had gone well for us. Even if it was just a trap that had caused us to fail miserably in Hoenn, we’d still gotten out alive, and managed to free Moltres in the process. And Rudy had been able to partner with Moltres. It was worth it. I kept telling myself that, at least.

“You’re sure you don’t know why we’re being summoned?” I asked, leaning over so I could see the driver.

“The Elite Four didn’t specify. We apologize for the inconvenience.”

I settled back into my seat, unsure of how to feel. My brain had already started generating bad explanations. Maybe they didn’t approve of the unofficial League after all. (But then why would I be here with Rudy?) Maybe they found out that we snuck into the tournament site while it was a restricted zone. Maybe—

“Man, I can’t get over how nice this car is,” Rudy said, stretching out so he was taking up two seats. “They must think we’re really important.”

Well, at least Rudy was enjoying himself. As the ride progressed, he asked questions nonstop: “How come there wasn’t any news from the League? How come they didn’t end up continuing the tournament themselves? What do they think of what we’ve been doing? They’re glad, right?” The rep answered a few of the obvious ones, but otherwise we didn’t get much. So he resorted to talking my ear off instead.

Finally, we reached the League headquarters itself, an impressive stone building towering over the northern edge of the plateau like a fortress. Rhydon statues flanked the entrance and heavy banners hung from the windows. It was all very traditional—even though the inside was probably just as modern as the stadiums, the outside hadn’t changed much since it was built. And it was huge—big enough to hold an arena for private battles.

No one had led us inside yet. I was about to ask if we were supposed to just go in when another car pulled up from a different direction, parking in front of us. And out from it emerged—

“Ajia? Starr? What are you two doing here?”

“Gooood freaking question,” Starr muttered, shutting the car door and shooting a visible glare at the driver. “Just showed up out of friggin’ nowhere and made us come here. Real great sign.”

Why us? We didn’t have anything to do with the unofficial League at all. Ajia didn’t say anything, but she looked deep in thought. I half-expected her to have already figured out why we’d been brought here. Maybe she had and just wasn’t saying it yet.

The front doors opened, and a staff member ushered us inside, leading us to a meeting room on the first floor. We didn’t have to wait long. After a few minutes, the door opened, and a voice said, “Good afternoon—I hope you’re all doing well.”

“What do you want?” Starr asked shortly.

The woman sighed. “At least let me introduce myself.”

Rudy’s jaw dropped. I swiveled around in my chair, and—oh. Dark red hair in a loose ponytail, thin glasses, a crisp dress suit…

“My name is Lorelei, of the Elite Four.”

As if she even needed to say that—we all recognized her. If I’d known that we’d been called to meet with a member of the Elite Four, I would’ve… well, I wasn’t sure what I would have done, but something to feel more prepared than I was currently feeling.

Lorelei took a seat at the head of the table, setting a tablet down in front of her. “I hope you’ve all been well ever since the tournament was cut short?” she asked.

“Been busy with the unofficial League. Which you’ve heard about?” Rudy said, letting his tone rise toward the end.

Lorelei nodded. “We’re all very impressed with the way the community has come together like this. I’m hoping it will pave the way for future collaborations with community-run events.”

Rudy’s face brightened a little. “Yeah. That’d be awesome.” But then his eyes wandered around the room, and he fidgeted a bit. “…How come I’m the only one on the organizer team who’s here? I figured there’d be others.”

“And why did you want to talk to the rest of us?” Ajia asked, giving Lorelei a perplexed look. “We’re not involved.”

Lorelei nodded. “I’m sorry for the confusion. We didn’t bring you here to talk about the tournament—it’s actually about that disaster. We were wondering if you might be able to help us learn more about it.”

“The… disaster,” I repeated. The attack on Indigo?

“Legendary incidents have been on the rise in recent decades,” Lorelei went on. “And we’re worried there could be more yet to come.” Her tone was careful. Measured. Like there was a lot of thought behind each word, without trying to seem like it.

I tilted my head. “Um… why exactly do you think we’d have any info that you don’t? I mean… you’re part of the League, and we’re just… us.”

Her reply was unflinching: “Steven Stone informed us that your group was acquainted with multiple Legendaries.”

And there it was. The reason we were all here. The thing they wanted out of us.

“Yeah, I don’t know where the hell he got the idea from, but that’s obviously bullshit,” Starr replied indifferently.

“The Ranger Union was tipped off by an anonymous source, and then you all arrived, along with the Legendaries,” Lorelei explained. Her tone was patient, like she already knew she was right and was just waiting for us to admit it.

“Yeah, they just showed up at the same time as us, that’s real compelling evidence,” Starr said sarcastically.

Ajia took a deep breath. “You’re right that we tipped the rangers off. And then we went there ourselves, even though we shouldn’t have. I know that was probably a bad move, but… I’m not sure what that has to do with the Legendaries.”

Lorelei glanced back and forth at all of us and sighed. Then she flipped open the tablet that had been sitting on the table. She scrolled through some files for a moment, then propped the tablet up with its case and rotated it to face us.

It was aerial footage, taken from a flying Pokémon, most likely. The frame jerked around the sky as whoever was filming fought to steady the camera. And then my stomach dropped through the floor. The camera had settled on what was unmistakably Rudy riding Moltres. It lingered there for a few seconds while Rudy called out inaudible orders to his nearby Pokémon. Then the footage swung over to Ajia riding on a Charizard and calling out to Rayquaza. Rayquaza responded to her—brushing her off, yeah, but the fact that she was in a position to even talk with it at all… And then, as if my stomach couldn’t sink any lower, there was me riding Lugia. Struggling to hold on as the dragon-bird swerved around attacks from the Rockets. Clear as day. Why had it never occurred to me that people would have seen us? I guess it wasn’t a priority since we had way bigger concerns at the time, but…

They must not have pieced together that Darren was involved yet, otherwise they probably would have brought him here with us. Probably because he’d been on the ground for most of the Sootopolis fight, until the very end. At least one of us didn’t have to deal with this.

“I can understand why you wouldn’t want anyone to know about this,” Lorelei said evenly. “Nevertheless, we’re aware. I’d like it if we could discuss things openly now.”

“Discuss… what, exactly,” I replied, still feeling like I was sinking into a bog.

She gave me a look like it was obvious, but then adjusted her glasses and went on, “Discuss the current state of affairs. All the disasters happening recently. Sootopolis. Indigo. Viridian.” My throat clenched up at the mention of Viridian, and I did my best to ignore it.

“You had advance warning for Sootopolis. Was it the same as the others?”

“Well, if by advance warning, you mean ‘a couple of hours,’ then I guess,” I mumbled.

“That’s a couple of hours earlier than the rest of us, and that can make the difference when people’s lives are on the line,” Lorelei said firmly.

The only reason we’d had any advance warning at all was because of people like Stalker or Lexx trying to use us. It was bad enough the League knew about our connection with the legends—the last thing we needed was them finding out about our connection with high-ranking Rockets.

“I don’t think there’s much way we can help out. We just got tipped off early, that’s all,” I said quietly, avoiding her eye. It wasn’t even a lie but somehow felt just as awkward as one.

Lorelei regarded me carefully. “Did the legends warn you about the disasters?”

“No. They didn’t know either.”

She gave me a curious look. “Then who did?”

Ugh, I probably shouldn’t have said that we’d been tipped off. Now there was no way to backpedal and say that we’d like, stolen the intel from Team Rocket or something.

I glanced helplessly at the others. Starr was still watching the footage, looking unimpressed. Rudy looked bewildered. I had no idea what to say, so I didn’t say anything, and I felt like an idiot.

Ajia clasped her hands together. I couldn’t help noticing the tiniest flicker in her eyes as she silently conversed with Mew. “It’s complicated. There are people who know more than us.”

Lorelei raised an eyebrow. “Perhaps they ought to be here with us, then.”

“I don’t think that’s possible.”

Lorelei was silent for some time. Finally, she put her elbows on the table, tenting her fingers. “Then, if you’re unable to help us, we have to ask you to stop associating with the legends,” she said simply.

It took several seconds for me to process what she’d just said. Then my jaw hung open. “What? Why?”

“We don’t trust the Legendaries. Not after all the attacks that have been happening recently.”

Okay, that was too much. I couldn’t not say it. “Those attacks are all Team Rocket’s fault!”

“Are they? All of them?”

I was about to open my mouth… and then I paused. The attack on Viridian. I’d been avoiding thinking about it. Someday, I’d have to talk to Lugia about it. But what was there for me to say? Point out the way innocent lives had been lost from their attempt to strike back at Team Rocket? Would it care? Was it okay for me to be helping if it didn’t?

“Regardless of whose fault it was, Legendary Pokémon are dangerous,” she went on. “Do not underestimate their power.”

Starr wasn’t backing down. “Full offense, but if we’ve been hanging around them, I think we understand their power better than you.”

“And what if your little war game causes major loss of property and life?” Lorelei asked, peering at all of us over her glasses. “This isn’t the sort of thing the Elite Four can just ignore.”

“Then why don’t you guys stop Team Rocket?” Rudy blurted out suddenly.

Starr laughed. “They can’t do that.”

Lorelei stood up, pacing one end of the room, arms folded behind her back. “Team Rocket is too deeply intertwined in the politics of this region, and has been for too long. We have to consider the big picture.”

“Wait—you’re just letting them get away with all this?” Rudy asked incredulously.

She turned to face him. “And how would you have us stop them without causing even more problems?”

Rudy looked dumbfounded. “I—well, you… you could do something!” he exclaimed, tripping over his words.

The videos were still playing on repeat. The movement made it hard not to look at them, but I hated to think how many people had seen them.

Almost as if she’d sensed what I was thinking, Lorelei said, “This footage hasn’t been released to the public. To be honest, we would really prefer not to do that. And I’d imagine you wouldn’t want that either.”

Starr stood bolt upright. “Wait, wait wait, excuse me? Are you friggin’ blackmailing us?” Starr demanded.

Lorelei’s gaze was unflinching. “That’s not my intention.”

“Yeah, well it sure sounds like you are,” Starr snapped. “Also, what the hell am I doing here anyway? Don’t suppose you’ve got any footage of me riding Legendaries?” she said mockingly. “Like I’d be caught dead doing that.”

“You’re closely associated with these two, that’s reason enough,” Lorelei said dismissively. “There’s also the question of… your history.”

Starr bristled. “The hell is that supposed to mean?”

“We really don’t have any particular need to pursue legal action against your criminal record. But if you’re helping them with these Legendary conflicts, then you’re a part of this whether you like it or not.”

Starr’s fists were clenched so tight I half-worried she might jump over the table and deck Lorelei in the face. I closed my eyes and willed her not to, whatever good that would do.

Lorelei relaxed slightly. “I know this all sounds harsh. Please try to understand. We can’t keep having disasters like this happen. Not if there’s some way that we can prevent them.”

Sharing everything we knew with the League sure didn’t seem like a good way to prevent anything anymore.

Lorelei gave us an imploring look. “We’re really just asking for your cooperation.”

“Or what? Gonna arrest us?” Starr asked with a snide grin. “Pretty sure there aren’t any laws for this kind of thing.”

Starr, please. If I could just will her to stop responding to everything with sarcasm…

Lorelei considered her carefully for some time. “We didn’t bring you here with the intent to keep you here. This is merely a warning. It’s in your best interest to stay away from the guardians.”

“Look… we really can’t do that,” I said, awkwardly avoiding her eye.

Lorelei’s gaze softened. “Are they forcing you to serve them? Are you trapped in any way?”

“Of course not!” I exclaimed, probably too quickly.

“What Jade means is…” Ajia said, giving me a significant look, “that we’re not at liberty to discuss that.”

Lorelei surveyed her closely. “If you’re in any way trapped, I want to assure you that anything you say here will not leave this room.”

I had half a mind just to say something to Lugia right then and there to prove her wrong, if only in my head.

“Not that we don’t appreciate the generous offer, but it’s really none of your business,” Starr said loudly, standing up from her chair and moving toward the door. “So are we free to go, or what?”

Lorelei paused, considering us carefully. Finally she stood up and opened the door. “Of course. I just ask that you please think carefully about what I said.”

It was going to be hard not to.

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The car ride back was silent. I couldn’t even really bring myself to read anything on my phone to distract myself, unlike Starr. We were dropped off at the edge of the tournament site. The driver gave us some canned parting words and then the car drove off. Ajia didn’t feel safe calling for Mew, and I could hardly blame her. Rudy ended up calling Darren. A minute later, Darren and Alakazam appeared, the former looking baffled and the latter looking displeased.

“Hey, so… what exactly happened?” Darren asked after we’d teleported back to the Pokécenter in Pewter.

Rudy threw his arms up. “I literally told you on the phone that the Elite Four gave us some BS about Legendaries being bad.”

“Yeah, but that doesn’t actually explain anything,” Darren replied in that practiced tone like he’d told Rudy that same thing a thousand times.

Ajia proceeded to explain the meeting to him in a slightly more informative way. Rudy interjected every so often, making sure to convey how dumb everything was.

“You guys are too honest,” Darren pointed out. “Why not just agree to whatever the League says and then keep fighting the Rockets anyway?”

I wasn’t sure. Somehow the idea of lying to the League felt… intimidating. And to think—all those times I’d wondered if it was a good idea to get the League in on this fight. So much for that idea.

Starr hadn’t said much ever since we left. She mostly just kept her arms folded, occasionally muttering things under her breath

“Hey, so… thanks for not saying anything,” I said quietly.

Starr raised an eyebrow. “Why the hell would I?”

I tapped my fingers together. “I mean, you didn’t swear a pact with the Legendaries.”

She let out a long, drawn-out sigh. “Yeah, I still say that the chosen thing is bullshit, but it’s bullshit that’s important to you two, so I’m not gonna screw it up for you, obviously,” she said impatiently, like she couldn’t believe we were even talking about this.

I nodded vaguely. “Still… thanks.”

It was nightfall already. The days were getting shorter. Soon, it’d be fall. I wasn’t really sure why summer’s end felt like the days of doing whatever we wanted were over. It wasn’t like I was going back to school or anything. Maybe it reminded me of being on the Rebellion.

Ugh, I still hadn’t told Lugia anything. Half of me wanted to just not. But the other half wanted to get it over with as soon as possible.

<Right, so… the League knows about us,> I said.

<What? What are you talking about?> Lugia replied, utterly baffled. Probably because I’d just sprung this on it out of nowhere.

<They know that we’re working together with you guys,> I said. <The Hoenn Champion told them.>

Lugia took a few seconds to process that. Then it cursed. <I knew it. It’s impossible to keep news from spreading when dealing with humans. This is why we were committed to secrecy. We should not have compromised on that.>

<We didn’t have a choice,> I said defensively. <We had to help with the evacuation.>

<Never mind that. Have you escaped yet?> Lugia asked.

<We weren’t trapped,> I replied tiredly. <They just wanted to talk.>

<What were their demands?>

Geez, I hadn’t even said what happened yet and Lugia was already assuming the worst.

<They just wanted information. How we always know to show up when there’s a Legendary incident, things like that.>

I felt Lugia tense up. <What did you tell them?>

<We just told them that we couldn’t tell them anything,> I said, a little exasperated.

Lugia noticeably relaxed at my words. Part of me was a bit annoyed—what, did it think we were just gonna spill patron/chosen secrets to the first person who asked? But, no… it had already eased up. There was no point in making a fuss over nothing.

My mind couldn’t help drifting back to Viridian. Half of me wanted to finally ask Lugia about it. The other half wanted to do literally anything else. And Lugia was feeling anxious as well. Guess we’d leave it for later, then.

“So, we’re obviously not going to listen to them,” Ajia said, taking a break from her pacing. “But I don’t want to get on the League’s bad side either.”

“Sounds like you already are,” Starr pointed out flatly. She shook her head. “Told you guys that being chosen was nothing but trouble.”

“I don’t think you ever worded it exactly like that, no,” Ajia said, with an attempt at a playful grin. It was forced, though.

Starr just rolled her eyes. “Yeah, well, enjoy the League breathing down your neck if you try anything in public from now on. That’ll be fun.”

I rubbed the back of my head. “I mean… I’m okay with staying out of public.”

Starr looked unconvinced. “You’re not going to have a choice if the Rockets pull more public shit, and let’s face it—we know they’re gonna.”

“I guess we could always just avoid going anywhere the League could see us,” I said. We’d already been having to stay on the move to avoid the Rockets anyway.

“I can’t just stay out of public. I’m in the tournament,” Rudy pointed out indignantly. “If they don’t want me to help Moltres, they can suck it.”

In just one day, his starry-eyed admiration of the Elite Four had been totally shattered. It was honestly kind of wild.

Rudy turned away, shaking his head. “I’m sick of talking about all this, and I need to let my team out anyway. Gonna go for a run with them. I’ll see you all later,” he said before walking off in a huff.

Letting out some steam sounded nice. Unfortunately, I already suspected that I’d be thinking about all this for the rest of the night.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

We ended up heading back to the cabin for the night. That way, it would be easy to discuss things with the legends when the time came. Secretly, I hoped that wouldn’t be until tomorrow. I really didn’t want to talk about this stuff anymore until then.

Alakazam teleported us there and then promptly bid everyone a very grumpy good night. As we approached the cabin, the first thing I noticed was that the front door was open. That was… odd. Maybe someone had forgotten to close it last time we were here? I’d just reached the front steps when movement inside caught my eye.

“Is someone in there?” I asked hesitantly. I could already feel the hair on my arms standing on end.

A figure stood up from one of the armchairs. A tall figure. A tall, nonhuman figure. It stepped forward as lightly as if it was walking on air. And then the light from the window framed its outline for a moment.

My breath froze. I knew that silhouette. Pointed ears. Long, thick tail. No way…

<Hello.>

The group reaction was instant: “Mewtwo?!”

It was him. I hadn’t seen him in nearly a year. What was he doing here? Why now? Was he… waiting for us?

<I wish to speak with the guardians that have associated with this human group,> he announced. No introduction. He knew we all knew who he was. He knew we all were affiliated with the Legendaries. <You have a means of contacting them, don’t you?>

“I… do,” Ajia replied slowly, regarding him curiously.

“Excuse me, what the hell?” Starr blurted, glancing back and forth between me and Ajia. I gave her a helpless look that hopefully conveyed that I didn’t have a clue either.

<I’ll wait,> Mewtwo said, sitting back down in the armchair.

Still looking rather perplexed, Ajia nodded. She conversed silently with Mew for a minute before Mew appeared at her side, her eyes wide with intrigue.

<Mewtwo?> she asked, drifting gently through the doorway.

Mewtwo looked up at her, gazing long and hard, his expression hard to place. Something between intrigue and uncertainty.

<I wish to speak with the others as well,> he said finally.

Mew blinked, looking a bit taken aback. But then she nodded, and vanished.

I couldn’t get over how weird it was to have Mewtwo just sitting in the living room. I couldn’t help staring at him. Did he remember me? Did he… have any particular opinion about me?

“Good to see that you’re… doing okay?” I said, feeling like an idiot.

He looked up, vivid purple irises practically staring through me. He nodded.

“Have you… been busy with things?” What would he have been spending his time on, anyway?

<Traveling. Seeing. Experiencing.> His expression shifted slightly. <Living.>

“Oh,” I said blankly, unsure of what else to say. “That’s… good.”

At least it sounded peaceful. He’d been imprisoned from the moment of his birth until the day we freed him, so… getting to live his own life was a good thing. And it also meant that he wasn’t getting involved in any more incidents like Viridian.

There was a familiar teleport flash behind us. Mew had appeared outside with Lugia, Ho-oh and Moltres, all looking various degrees of perturbed.

<Where is he?> Lugia asked.

Right on cue, Mewtwo drifted lightly through the open doorway, regarding the new arrivals with a contemplative look. Lugia stared at him, and I could feel the recognition in its mind. I couldn’t get a read on how it felt about seeing him, though.

“I trust you have been well?” Ho-oh asked. There was a slight edge to its voice, like it was holding its tongue.

“Staying far away from the humans?” Moltres asked with a smirk.

<Why exactly have you been nonexistent for the past year?> Lugia asked tersely.

<I didn’t wish to interact with any guardians,> Mewtwo replied. <I needed to see the world for myself.>

“And what if you were targeted?” Ho-oh asked.

<They would not have found me,> Mewtwo said simply. <I traveled to a distant land across the sea.>

<Why bother to return, then?> Lugia asked.

Mewtwo fixed the seabird with a pointed look. <Don’t misunderstand. I felt confident that they would not find me this past year. I do not expect that to be the case forever.>

Lugia glowered. Irritation already saturated its thoughts.

<The events happening in this region will most certainly have consequences. If all of you fall here, do you think that will be the end of it? Do you think that the humans of other lands won’t learn what happened here? Won’t seek to obtain that power for themselves?>

I swallowed hard. The idea that things happening here had the ability to affect the rest of the world… it wasn’t something I’d ever had to consider until now. I didn’t like thinking about it.

Mewtwo gestured with both palms up. <I have returned to stop the humans, because if I do not, then no one will.>

<Excuse me?> Lugia asked indignantly. <No one? What do you think we’ve been doing?>

Mewtwo tilted his head. <Then why do they continue to do as they wish?>

<They’re not—>

<I heard news of the incident at the place the humans call Sootopolis,> Mewtwo went on, making Lugia freeze. <They were unable to reclaim me, so they set their sights on another in my place. And just look at the destruction that caused.>

“You’re right,” Ajia said carefully. “The Rockets went after Rayquaza specifically because they wanted a weapon that could match your power.”

<And now they have one.>

<Where were you during that time, then?> Lugia snapped.

Mewtwo fixed Lugia with a hard stare. <Learning to understand my power. Learning about the state of the world. I could not risk my freedom until I was ready.>

“I thought you were confident that you cannot be captured,” Ho-oh pointed out.

Mewtwo was silent for a bit. <I took measures. I don’t expect those measures to be foolproof. I could not afford to risk my freedom until I learned the true scope of the threat.>

So he hadn’t spent all his time across the sea. He must’ve returned occasionally to see what was happening back here. Then again, how much of this stuff had made the news in other countries? The destruction of Sootopolis was a pretty huge deal…

<I was created to overthrow all of you. To be the weapon for humanity to surpass the only beings they have to fear. If they overthrow all of you, do you think they will allow me to quietly live my life as they please? No. I will be their prize, their trophy.>

Man, it was chilling to hear him talk so matter-of-factly about the scenario where we all lose.

<And what of the innocents?> he went on. <Do you think their lives will be unchanged? Do you think this is something we can allow to happen? And do you think I will be the last? What if they create another weapon to surpass me? The threat must be stopped, and it must be stopped decisively.>

Ho-oh gave him a knowing look. “If I recall correctly, this is much like what you said last year, before attacking Viridian. Did that attack accomplish anything?”

Mewtwo eyed the phoenix closely. <It forced the enemy into hiding for nearly a year.>

“Mm,” Ho-oh replied noncommittally.

“What are you planning?” Moltres asked with a suspicious look.

<I believe the enemy will be making their move soon. I intend to stop them.>

Ajia stared at him. “Are they targeting a new Legendary already?”

<No. Targeting your leadership.>

I gaped. “What?”

<It’s simple. If the enemy gains control of the human leadership, what reason will they have to operate in secret? They will be able to freely target us.>

The League already thought they couldn’t beat Team Rocket. They didn’t even want to try; they were too worried about collateral damage. Another attack could be the end. And we wouldn’t hear about it from Stalker or Lexx this time now that they’d betrayed the Kanto Force. Or maybe they’d be part of the attack. Maybe the two halves of Team Rocket would be fighting to see who could take over the League first. Lexx seemed to think the Kanto force would win that one.

<They would be free to target you as they please,> Mewtwo said, fixing the Legendaries with a hard stare. <Would you live the rest of your life in solitude, isolated from the world? A prisoner by another name?>

Lugia bristled. I could feel it struggling to come up with a response. It finally settled on, <What exactly do you want from us?> In its voice, it was annoyed. But in its mind, I could feel something else. It was conflicted. Unsure.

<I want to unify our strength. It is all we have,> Mewtwo said simply, tail flicking.

<That’s what I’ve been trying to do,> Mew said, drifting forward. <I believe that rallying everyone around the chosen will give us a much better chance of standing up to the enemy.>

<The chosen?> Mewtwo asked, tilting his head ever so slightly.

<We aren’t just working together with these humans,> Mew said, gesturing to Ajia, and to me. <We have bound ourselves to each other.>

He surveyed her closely. <How does that work?>

<Our souls are bound. We feel each other’s presence.>

<For what purpose?>

<To combine the strengths of both human and legend.>

For just a moment, there was a flicker of surprise across Mewtwo’s features. It vanished just as quickly, and he pondered her words for some time. <I would prefer not to inform more humans of my plan.>

Ajia blinked. “More?”

<I have trusted one. That is all.> I didn’t have any idea what to make of that.

Mew glanced back at Ajia, and then at Mewtwo. <I will not keep secrets from my chosen. That is all,> she said firmly, with a tone of finality.

Ho-oh gave a firm nod, like it had been waiting for that. “I haven’t got one, but I still disapprove of your recklessness in Viridian.”

Moltres tilted its head. “Hm? Wasn’t there for that one. Well, not all there, anyway. In any case, my human has proved useful, so I believe I’ll be sticking with our methods.”

Lugia tensed. It was the only one who hadn’t replied, and everyone’s eyes were on it, waiting. Lugia had been the one to help Mewtwo attack Viridian. But… it couldn’t possibly be thinking of joining him again, could it?

Lugia hesitated for a long time. Finally, it replied, <My loyalties will remain with Mew.>

Mewtwo nodded softly. <Very well.> It was hard to tell what he was thinking, but his tone gave a sense of disappointment. He turned to face away from the other legends, and Mew hovered closer to him.

<You could join us…?> she asked hesitantly.

The clone bristled. He considered her for some time.

<I will not be your shadow. I will follow my own path.>

Mew nodded, her face somber.

Mewtwo turned to face us, the humans of the group. <I may need to contact you again,> he said. <Or you may wish to contact me.> He opened a pocket inside his cloak. A small scrap of paper floated out, over to Ajia. She took it, and I leaned in to get a closer look. It was… a Pokégear number?

“You have a Pokégear?” I asked blankly.

<It’s not mine,> he replied, as if that answered anything.

I didn’t know what to make of that. He didn’t want to work with humans, but he was willing to use a phone of all things? I didn’t understand him at all.

<I expect I’ll see you again,> Mewtwo said. And then he vanished.






~End Chapter 50~
 

Seren

Lurking
Staff
Pronouns
He/Him
Partners
  1. sableye
<I’ll wait,> Mewtwo said, sitting back down in the armchair.

Someone please draw this, omg

Anyways, I'm bad at gathering my thoughts, but I love how complex this all is. Kanto/Johto Force Rockets, the Rebellion squad and legends, Stalker/Lexx, and now both the League and Mewtwo potentially complicating things further!

Starr sure was mouthy at Lorelei for a former Rocket, although given the League's standpoint on Rocket in general, I guess even if Starr was recognized, they wouldn't do anything to her. Ajia, on the other hand, was remarkably quiet in that meeting. I'd have figured she'd be the one to try to keep the situation under control (and thus, likely the reason it wasn't written that way, hah).

Anyways, love this, and I hope to eventually put proper thoughts to specific chapters, but this will do for now.
 

Sinderella

Angy Tumbleweed
Staff
Location
In Guzma's Closet
Pronouns
She/Her
Partners
  1. sylveon-shiny
  2. gothitelle
  3. froslass
  4. chandelure
  5. mimikyu
(Reposted for slight edits woops)

Jade ‘nd her hybrid ‘mon just being DRAMATIQUE. Happy Smeargle Swap <3
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Equitial

Ace Trainer
Pronouns
he/him
Partners
  1. espurr
  2. inkay
  3. woobat
  4. ralts
Hello, so a bit ago you shared some LC art with Mew and Mewtwo. I really liked the art, and I gushed about it and I said it made me want to read LC. I've been meaning to read LC for forever but now I appear to be actually doing that, so YAYYYYYYYY. I have no real critical review, but I figured I should share at least some thoughts.

Btw, I actually read LC Book 1 a looong time ago, like before I joined TR. For this reading, I read some Bk 1 chapters and skimmed some other parts. I feel like sharing what chapters I chose to read this time will tell what stuck out to me. I read Chapter 15: Mewtwo, because Mewtwo. Then I read chapters 20-22 because AHHHHHHHH. Then I read 25 because both MEWTWO and THE DRAMA and ENEMIES TO FRIENDSHIP. Then finally I read 28 because oh SHIT and MEWTWO and THE DRAMA and JADE MAKING QUESTIONABLE DECISIONS and AHHHHHH

And then I continued on to book 2! I have read through Chapter 35 SO FAR. At first, I was kind of surprised that Jade wasn't drawn straight back into the action somehow, but as I read I actually kind of enjoyed the lull. It was fun to just see Jade and friends being friends. And there was still action, just with less stakes. I also liked seeing the strategy Rudy and Darren were using, and seeing how Jade reacted to it. I feel like it sorta gives me a taste/promise of what's coming next. Jade may be stronger than before, but she's going to need to learn *fast* when things get even more complicated. If I have to critique something, I feel like maybe some of those battles could be shortened, but all in all I enjoyed them.

Then when Moltres appeared it was great to see the return to large-scale chaos and multi-person fights YAY. Again, I like how--even though Jade already went through a whole bunch of stuff last book--here she's still struggling bigtime. I also like how she thinks about Team Rocket and how her actions actually interact with that--in the Moltres attack, and in the chapter afterward. I'm excited to see how that plays out especially because WE'RE FINALLY GETTING THE LEGEND GOOSE IT WAS HARD FOR ME TO PAUSE TO WRITE THESE THOUGHT--I AM HYPE

anyway gud story having fun thank you for writing :quag:
 

SparklingEspeon

Back on Her Bullshit
Staff
Location
a Terrace of Indeterminate Location in Snowbelle
Pronouns
She/Her
Partners
  1. espurr
  2. fennekin
  3. zoroark
Hello! As per our review exchange, I’m here to review one (1) chapter, Meeting With The Commander! Looks like this is beginning of a much-needed quiet lull after the back-to-back Godzilla battles this book has consisted of.

My recent feelings, re: Sebastian/Stalker have been “definitely a turncoat, but working towards something bigger than just Power™”, and that’s given the full spotlight here. I spoiled myself a bit back when I first read so I know what comes after is his lore dump, but I think this scene is a pretty good look into his character by itself. We learn about him both through what he tells us, and what he doesn’t—He’s someone who might not be as ruthless and unfeeling as he’s trying to seem, but clearly thinks the ends of The Prophecy justify the means of what he's doing. And considering he has Latios and probably Latias on his side, I’m guessing there’s truth to it outside of his own ramblings… even if I think he’s got it backwards and the prophecy is using him.

I should also praise how well the chapter was written—I looked at the counter and was absolutely floored to see that it was 11K, it did not read like 11K, it read like 5K. Which basically only happens when I get really into something. I think it helped that a lot of the chapter was back-and-forth banter, which I appreciate too. It doesn’t feel clunky or complicated, so it flies off the page and lets your eyes glide over it. It also helps bring out a lot of the characterization—I feel like these characters shine the most not through what they do, but what they say to each other. Especially Jade, who is a character I feel gets about 90% of her characterization through her interactions with others even with the first person narration. In particular I felt like her side of the conversation when talking with Sebastian was pretty telling—she’s trying to act impartial, but sitting on a lot of baggage, which he realizes is “compromising” her and then exploits.

The whole thing does raise some questions overall, like who made the prophecy and what it’s actually… prophesizing. (or maybe I'm just smooth brain and don't remember what I read two years ago) Book two cover’s got a Dialga and Palkia up at the top, so I’ll bet it’s got something to do with that, and given you’ve cited Animorphs as your Big Inspiration for this I wouldn’t be surprised if there’s some Ellimist VS Crayak stuff going on. Which would play really well into the whole legendary thing tbh. The stuff at the end was a really good indicator that something beyond mortal perception is going on. (though I did note that the words at the very end of the chapter have become replaced by “unknown” symbols—I could have sworn they read “INFINITY IS FOREVER” or something back when I read it on Serebii, but here they’re just boxes with zalgo text. Whoops!)

I really liked the lampshading of the relationships between the Chosen and the Legendaries as a one-sided partnership. I’m not sure how I feel about it at this point. Lugia is, according to my memory, kind of a douche, but Ajia and Mew seem to have a good relationship… where the break seems to be is that they’re being asked to do something terrible when they’re just not on the level of invulnerability that the Legends are. And the Legends clearly aren’t infallible. I assume this is going to be probed a lot more going over Book II—I feel like we’ve had a lot of Crash Bash Bang Godzilla battles, but the quiet moments and thematic work haven’t really gotten a chance to shine yet. Seems like we’re entering a lull now, though (plus some lore drops), so perhaps that’s about to change.

Overall, good chapter! Looking forward to giving the Sebastian Chapter another read in the future…… probably when there’s more of a bingeable backlog for me to read :v

~SparklingEspeon
 
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Equitial

Ace Trainer
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he/him
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  1. espurr
  2. inkay
  3. woobat
  4. ralts
Chapter 46: Does is Sebastian Shepard actually a good? It may be more likely than you think.

Brrrr I had basically the same thoughts as Jade toward Stalker after all of the events of the last chapters, which made this reveal a whole lot better. I always had the impression that Stalker had intentions he truly believed were right, so I wasn't surprised about a whole 'wanting to prevent a Rebellion thing' (which tbh I still have no idea about. Sebastian "told Jade more than he’d initially planned to"??? Bruh you said shit imo). But the thing that really floored me--he and Latios are working together!?!?!? That's the big thing. When he just caught Latias, even after the whole Rayquaza plan thing, THAT felt like the ultimate, no going past this betrayal. But Latios being a completely willing partner--a friend even!!--that just throws everything back in my face, doesn't it? After all, Latias trusts Latios, so... if Latios vouches for Sebastation... uhhhh chain of trusts suggests Seb is onto something. I just don't know. After this, I'm actually leaning Sebastian is actually heroic. And next time it appears his backstory chapter, so picture me reading with the world's biggest of eyes.
 
Chapter 51: Overwhelmed

Chibi Pika

Stay positive
Staff
Location
somewhere in spacetime
Pronouns
they/them
Partners
  1. pikachu-chibi
  2. lugia
  3. palkia
  4. lucario-shiny
  5. incineroar-starr
At long last, Chapter 51! I got stuck in a hole trying to juggle a million scenes and rewrote half of them, but it's finally here. 52 is almost done and will NOT take as long.

Many, many thanks to everyone who read and reviewed, both during the Blitz as well as after! I'm terrible about replying to reviews, but I treasure all of them. And of course, many thanks to Jackie and Dragonfree for beta reading.



~Chapter 51: Overwhelmed~

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“So there was another one today,” Darren announced, setting his phone down in the middle of the coffee table. I leaned forward to see a photo of Mewtwo. Blurry, unfocused, but definitely him.

“Where was he spotted?” I asked.

“Same as yesterday—Indigo,” Darren replied, flopping into the chair across from me with a bag of chips. “Makes me wonder if the sighting yesterday wasn’t just a fluke.”

I tilted my head. “You think he’s letting himself be seen?”

Darren shrugged. “He went all that time without any sightings and now there’s two in two days. But, y’know… could just be coincidence,” he said in that way that implied it was anything but.

My eyes slid back to the image of Mewtwo in the middle of the table. “What time was the photo taken yesterday?”

Darren tapped something on the phone. “Well, no way to know when it was taken, but it was posted around this time.”

Two appearances in two days, right around the same time. Maybe the pattern would keep up.

“I’ll let Mew know,” Ajia piped up from the kitchen. “She’ll definitely want to keep an eye on him, if he does show up again.”

I tilted my head. “Hasn’t she already been busy with watching the Rocket bases all the time?” Part of me wanted to add a ‘both of you’ to the end of that.

“Well, there hasn’t been a whooole lot of activity on that front recently,” Ajia replied with a shrug. “I figure it can’t hurt to keep tabs on Mewtwo as well, y’know?”

Well, maybe if the two of them had infinite time and energy, it couldn’t hurt. But there was no denying that Mew was the stealthiest legend, so she always ended up volunteering for everything. Maybe it was stupid to worry that a legend could get burnout like a regular person, but…

Chibi leaped onto the table, padding over to the cell phone and staring intently at the picture of Mewtwo. “*If Mewtwo is going to keep showing himself, I want to speak with him.*”

“He’s been teleporting away just as fast—I don’t think he’d stop to hold a conversation with anyone,” Darren said.

Chibi glowered slightly. “*I didn’t get to talk with him when he was here. I’m not going to miss another chance.*” He glanced up at me. “*He gave you a method of contacting him, didn’t he?*”

“Ajia already tried it—no response,” I said.

“*He might respond if a fellow experiment talks to him.*”

“Maybe?” I said, shrugging. “It’s worth a shot, anyway.” Still, I didn’t like the idea of rushing to find him. The Rockets would no doubt be very interested in his appearances as well. They could try to set a trap for him—and us. But we couldn’t just ignore his appearances either.

I grabbed the old flip phone that Ajia had obtained for texting the number Mewtwo gave us. After some deliberation with Chibi, we composed a text reading “Experiment 009 wants to speak with you. Would you be willing to meet with him? There wouldn’t need to be any humans there. Let us know.”

I sent the message and Chibi nodded, which was probably all the satisfaction he was willing to show. Time would tell if anything came out of it.

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Another day, another Mewtwo sighting, same as the last two. We couldn’t ignore it—we had to find out more. Mew and Ajia volunteered to check out the part of town that he kept appearing in. And Chibi was adamant about seeing Mewtwo, which meant that I found myself going with them. Not that I wasn’t also curious about Mewtwo.

“So you think he’ll appear around here?” I asked, glancing back and forth down the street.

“It’s roughly around where he appeared the past few days,” Ajia said simply, reading something on her phone.

“What about the Rockets?” They had to be just as interested in these sightings, right?

“*I scouted the area and found no sight of them,*” Mew said, flicking a few of her tails. She’d taken Ninetales’s form today. Maybe she got bored of copying Espeon all the time.

Chibi looked antsy. There’d been no reply to the text I’d sent.

Indigo was no longer an emergency zone. Still, most of the tournament site was closed to the public for repairs. I half-expected someone to materialize from nowhere and tell us to get lost. Or worse.

My foot idly tapped the edge of the sidewalk. I crossed my arms, then uncrossed them, fighting the urge to look inconspicuous. I kept having to remind myself that there was no need.

“So anyone looking this way would just see an empty street corner, right?” I asked.

“*Yep,*” Zoroark replied. The bushy-maned fox was reclining against a bus stop, arms crossed behind his head.

“Pretty impressive.”

“*I know I am.*”

Ajia rolled her eyes. “What he’s not saying is that it’s a lot easier for an illusion to show a lack of something rather than to just invent something from scratch.” I suppose that made sense. Like erasing something was easier than painting it. It still didn’t feel like we were hidden, standing out in the open like this. But eventually it’d have to sink in.

A few blocks away, some construction crews were going about their business, both humans and Pokémon. A lot of Machoke and Graveler. Some Primeape and Marowak. It sure didn’t look like there were any Rockets around. But then, how could we know for sure? I found my eyes automatically drifting to the rooftops, wondering if I’d catch a glimpse of an Altaria or Flygon. Any time a shadow flickered, I half-expected it to be Gengar, sneaking up on us. My brain generated the image of Kabutops darting from nowhere and—

I shook my head, suddenly aware of how much tension was in my shoulders. Okay, I obviously hadn’t gotten over what happened the last time we snuck into the tournament site. I clenched my hands a few times to ground myself, then glanced around for something to fill the silence. My eyes fell on Zoroark.

“How’d you two meet anyway?” I asked.

“Ah, you know—same way I met Espeon and Umbreon,” Ajia replied casually. She’d always kind of danced around how that went down, so it didn’t really answer the question.

Zoroark put a paw to his chest. “*We were stolen, of course.*”

“You don’t have to say it like that,” Ajia said, elbowing him.

“*But it sounds worse,*” he replied, grinning broadly like that was the point.

Ajia gave an exaggerated sigh. “Anyway, he’s right; I stole all three of them from Team Rocket. Back when I was still doing infiltration.”

Back when she was doing infiltration… There was still a lot I didn’t know about that time.

“Any fun stories from back then?” I asked.

Ajia grinned. “Oh sure, loads. There was this one time we got a tip that a truckful of stolen Pokémon was gonna be arriving in the Goldenrod underground. So we had to—”

Ajia went on telling her story about how Espeon and Pichu had snuck into a warehouse on their own, and she and Umbreon had to find a way in after them. It sounded a lot like the Rebellion’s first mission. All clueless energy and the sense of dangerous excitement. Looking back, it felt so… childish. Like we’d known it was dangerous but hadn’t really felt it yet.

Chibi’s ears twitched suddenly. I glanced down the street to see some kind of commotion by the construction site and couldn’t help tensing up. It could be nothing. Or it could be something.

“Let’s move,” Ajia said.

We made our way down the block quickly but quietly until we were right across the street from everyone. The whole crew was staring upward, some of them muttering to each other in hushed tones. I followed their gazes upward, and there he was. Standing in broad daylight at the edge of a rooftop. Mewtwo. In the stark sunlight, his skin was practically white, and his tail a brilliant violet. A far cry from all the times I’d seen him at night.

“He’s… just standing there,” I muttered. He had to have come here for a reason.

And then, right before our eyes, he hovered down to the construction site and started… calmly clearing away rubble.

“He’s… helping?” I said incredulously.

It was so mundane. There had to be some ulterior motive, right?

<He obviously wishes to ensure that everyone knows of his return,> Mew said thoughtfully. <Though, for what reason, I can’t say.>

“*Are you going to talk to him?*” Chibi asked Mew.

She considered it. <No, I will observe for now.>

He deflated slightly. As if he was hoping she would go, and bring him with her.

A few flying Pokémon fluttered up to get a closer look at Mewtwo, but still kept their distance. I glanced around anxiously, as if Rockets were just going to materialize out of thin air now that he was here.

“For the Rockets to attack him, they’d have to do it in broad daylight with witnesses,” Ajia said. “I don’t think they’d be willing to do that yet.”

Right, yeah. That made sense. But even if Mewtwo didn’t expect to be attacked, what was the point of this? Unless…

“Maybe he wants the Rockets to show themselves?” I asked.

I’d said it without much thought, but now that I was thinking about it, it actually made sense. If he got targeted right under the League’s nose, he’d make it so they couldn’t ignore the Rockets. Maybe that would actually clear the legends. The League seemed to think they were dangerous, but if we could prove that Team Rocket was the real problem, and get the League to do something about it, then…

<Mewtwo and the Rockets, both setting a trap for the other,> Mew mused, flicking her tails.

Which one would win? And how could we help if he wouldn’t tell us his plan?

Mewtwo paused after setting down a large concrete tube, looking around in a manner that almost felt… expectant. His eyes turned in all directions, scanning the city blocks meticulously.

And then he turned in our direction, and I could have sworn that his eyes lingered on us. He couldn’t see us, not with Zoroark here. But could he sense our presence another way? Could he sense Mew?

For a few seconds, no one moved. I hardly dared to breathe. Then Mewtwo’s head suddenly jerked to the left, and he teleported out of sight.

“He left just like that?” I muttered under my breath.

Maybe he’d noticed something unusual. I glanced around at the buildings surrounding us, uneasy. Were there Rockets nearby? But even if there were, it wasn’t like they had any way to trap him unless they suddenly unveiled a dozen ALRs.

Did they have ALRs hidden around here?

No. No, that was silly. Where would they be keeping them? How would they transport them with no one noticing? And besides, they’d have no reason to turn them on now that Mewtwo was gone. We couldn’t be trapped if they didn’t know we were here.

“We’re fine,” Ajia said firmly, bumping my shoulder.

Right, yeah. No one could see us, and no one was looking for us. I had nothing to worry about. But did I really look that obviously tense?

Mew’s eyes glowed, and the five of us reappeared back at the cabin in a flash. I let out a huge sigh of relief, even though I wasn’t sure why. It wasn’t like we’d been in any real danger, but… just being in Indigo just felt tense and stifling.

Ajia was already pacing in the dirt. Mew was back in her own form now and drifted in circles overhead, looking remarkably like her chosen.

“Different locations each day but always in Indigo. Always by people. Is he looking for something? Trying to get someone to approach him? Something else entirely?”

I wasn’t sure if she wanted me to comment. Both Ajia and Mew looked lost in conversation with each other, probably talking at a million miles an hour through their link. They’d let me know if they figured anything out later.

But then, just as I turned to walk up the stairs leading inside, Ajia tapped a fist to her palm. “Maybe it was a test.”

I blinked. “A test?”

“Yeah, think about it,” Ajia said. “The way he keeps waiting around in each spot. It’s almost like he’s experimenting to see what the reaction will be. I bet he was there for longer, and only showed himself after a certain point in time. He wanted to see how soon they noticed him.”

How soon they noticed him? Before showing himself? But…

A cold unease swept over me. “That makes it sound like he thinks they can detect him.”

Ajia hummed. “It’s possible.”

I gaped at her. “Excuse me, what?”

Mew tilted herself in midair. <I’ve believed for some time that the Rockets may have some way of detecting certain Legendary energy signatures, at least within a close range.>

Ajia nodded. “It would make sense.”

What? They were both talking about this like it was a pretty mundane thing and easy to guess when it had never remotely occurred to me

But then… why hadn’t I ever questioned how the Rockets had managed to track down and corner legends like Raikou and Entei, with their incredible speed and huge territories? Having some way of tracking them would have been necessary, right?

“I doubt they’d be able to detect any legend,” Ajia mused. “Probably only ones they’ve gotten a good read on before, you know?”

<Well, they certainly have my energy signature,> Mew said. <After all, they nearly captured me once before, when they obtained my DNA to create Mewtwo.>

I rubbed my arm awkwardly. “I’ve always wondered how that happened.”

<It was years ago,> Mew said airily. <I was careless, and nearly became ensnared in a trap. I had no way of knowing what would come of it, of course. That’s why I never spend too much time in one place,> she added with a wink.

Well, it was good that she could find some humor in it, I guess.

“*What about Zapdos?*” Chibi asked all of a sudden.

Mew rested against her tail, looking up. <The only time I know of Zapdos getting into a conflict with humans—besides last year—was many years ago.>

“*What happened?*”

<A lone human found their way to one of Zapdos’s roosts, and Zapdos obliged their challenge. They did not think anything of it at the time, but they found themselves facing many Pokémon—far more than a single trainer would lead. Unsettled, they fled the scene. We assumed that would be the end of it.>

Chibi stared downward in silence.

Mew hovered closer, regarding him carefully. <You were born from Zapdos’s essence, yes?>

He looked up. “*That’s right. I knew they’d obtained one of Zapdos’s feathers from somewhere and used it to make me. I never knew how they’d gotten it.*”

A feather, preserved somewhere for years, later used by Team Rocket in their experiments. Finally giving rise to the first half-legend. It seemed weird that they’d been able to just walk right up to Zapdos and challenge it. Did that used to be a normal thing?

“Hey, so… regarding Mewtwo,” I began, “if the Rockets could track his energy, wouldn’t they have found him by now?”

Ajia put a hand to her chin. “Not if he kept his distance. He told us he spent most of the past year across the sea.”

Part of me suddenly wanted to suggest that all the legends just flee the country. As if that would solve anything long-term. I knew better than anyone that living on the run indefinitely was no way to live. And there was no guarantee that they’d be safe outside Tohjo forever.

Mew gave me a curious look. <Are you wondering why we do not simply seclude ourselves indefinitely?>

“I wasn’t actually going to suggest it…” I muttered sheepishly.

<It’s fair to wonder,> Mew replied lightly. <Most legends feel deeply uncomfortable if they spend too long away from their domain.>

“What about you?” I asked.

Mew hummed. <I exist to be a guardian to all life. So long as I live to that end, I am serving my purpose.>

Chibi’s gaze was fixed on Mew. “*Purpose…*” he muttered distantly.

It still didn’t feel like we were any closer to knowing what to do about the Mewtwo situation. Part of me missed the old days, when all we had to do was stop the Rockets from catching more legends. Not… whatever things had turned into.

Ajia waved to us from the door. “Come on, let’s go tell the others.”

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Later that night, I found myself wandering outside, too distracted to sleep. I couldn’t stop thinking about Mewtwo. Too many questions, with not enough answers. Too many times my brain wanted to drift back to what happened last year.

I found myself reading up on the Viridian incident, much as I never wanted to think about it again. I found news articles from around the time it happened. 23 dead, 64 injured. Several city blocks flattened. Most of the damage had probably come from the initial blast that hit the Viridian gym. The Rockets had deployed their own legends for defense pretty quickly. After that, it would have been stray fire causing collateral damage.

It wasn’t Lugia’s fault, I tried to tell myself. It was Mewtwo. But then, that just meant that we shouldn’t have freed him. And I couldn’t believe that. I wouldn’t. You couldn’t just say that someone deserved to be a slave because they might hurt someone. No.

But maybe I was wrong. And that thought scared me.

Lugia had taken to sleeping at the bottom of a lake near the cabin. When I’d asked why, it had said that it was tired of Mew constantly needing to barge into its sanctum, and that it might as well stay here if we were going to be summoning it constantly. I couldn’t really argue with that.

There was no moon out as I trudged through the woods toward the lake, using the light of my phone to guide me. I probably should have asked Chibi or Firestorm to come along, but whatever. I gave Lugia a mental nudge as I approached the shore, then sat down on a large rock amidst the gravel. About a minute later, Lugia’s head emerged from the water, glancing around until it laid eyes on me.

<Do you need something?> Lugia asked.

I shrugged. “Just wanted to talk about some things.”

Lugia raised a brow but did not object. The dragon-bird made its way toward the shore, more and more of its body surfacing as the water grew shallow. Finally, it ruffled its feathers and settled into a seated position at the edge of the water.

<So. What is on your mind?>

I bit my lip, unsure where to begin. There were so many things bouncing around my head that it was hard to narrow them down. Eventually, I settled on: “How are you feeling about this whole Mewtwo situation?”

Lugia hummed. “I want to know more about what Mewtwo is planning. The lack of information is frustrating.”

I crossed my arms over my knees. “How did you meet Mewtwo anyway?”

Lugia turned its head toward the pitch-dark sky. <He just showed up one day. He seemed… confused, almost. Like he did not know where to go or what to do.>

“He’d only just been freed,” I said, shuffling a foot against the gravel. “It was his first time having free will, so I’m not surprised.”

Lugia nodded distantly. <Mew gave him a most kind greeting. He was polite to them. There was some tension, though—I could feel it. He was not very practiced at concealing emotion.>

Lugia paused, heavily considering its words. I couldn’t tell what it was feeling.

<He told me that he wished to strike a blow against the humans, while they were vulnerable. He asked for my help. As you know, I agreed.> Lugia turned away. <There was not much more to it than that.>

I furrowed my brow. So that was all it took for a dozen blocks of Viridian to get leveled. Had they ever considered how much collateral damage they’d be causing? Even if the answer was that they had thought about it and decided it was worth it. Anything was better than not caring at all.

But I couldn’t do it. I couldn’t ask. Why couldn’t I just ask this one simple thing?

<These appearances of his. He’s setting a trap for them, isn’t he?> Lugia asked.

I rubbed my arms. “Possibly. I’m worried about them setting a trap for him too.”

Lugia seemed to be having trouble putting its thoughts into words. <I still believe that Mewtwo is correct in wanting to strike the Rockets before they make their next move.>

A chill came over me. “I mean, wouldn’t that be basically the same thing as Viridian?”

<Perhaps...> Lugia said. Its tail swished idly in the water, sending ripples throughout the lake. <Mew was displeased. With our actions that night.>

“I’d imagine so,” I said carefully. I really didn’t know how to say how I felt about it.

<I dislike the idea of waiting. And your human leadership is content to carry on as though nothing is happening. There is no one else we can depend on.>

“...That’s true.”

<Our counterattack that night was hasty,> Lugia went on, <but with the right planning, the only humans who would come to harm would be those so-called Rockets.>

“I guess,” I mumbled. I wasn’t sure how to feel about that. It was slightly better than the alternative, but…

Lugia gave me a puzzled look. <The Rockets cause great harm to Pokémon, and to their fellow humans. They enter that life knowing this, do they not?>

That was definitely unexpected. It was times like this that I wished I had a better read on Lugia’s emotions. I couldn’t tell what it was trying to get at.

Lugia’s annoyance prickled at me. <Why are you scrutinizing my words?>

Crap. It had felt my skepticism. Our link was two-way, but the psychic-type always seemed to have a better read on me.

I took a deep breath. “They’re not all irredeemable,” I pointed out. “I mean, look at Starr.”

<And would you put forth the time and effort to connect with each one of them?>

“I… of course not.”

<Then… is it so wrong to mitigate their potential harm by removing them from the equation?>

I jolted. “What? You don’t seriously think we should just murder them left and right?”

Lugia glanced away, a bit flustered. <That’s a rather extreme way to put it. It’s just worth considering the fact that striking back saves lives overall.>

Oh my god, were we seriously having this debate? Why couldn’t Ajia have been here for this?

“That’s not how we humans do things,” I said in a low voice, my grip tightening on my knees.

<How do they do things, then?>

My mouth went dry. “Look, I don’t want to talk about this.”

Lugia’s smug air faded into wisps of awkwardness. <My apologies. I am simply… on edge. I do not like waiting for the enemy to make a move.>

I sighed. “I don’t like that either.” But I didn’t think it was a choice between ‘wait for the Rockets to do whatever’ or ‘cause a whole bunch of collateral damage.’

“I kind of just… wish we’d gotten to talk things out with Mewtwo longer,” I said. “Without everyone else there. Things felt… I don’t know, kind of hostile the other day.” Even I’d wanted to shut down the things he’d been saying. But what if we could hear him out, and actually persuade him to join us?

Lugia swished its tail. <There were things I wished to discuss with him alone, yes.> It paused for a bit, thinking. <He gave you a means of contact, correct?>

“We tried it. No response.”

<Hm.>

I still wasn’t even sure what the deal was with the number he gave us. Mewtwo had straight-up said the phone didn’t belong to him, which made even less sense.

“I could try it again,” I offered. “Maybe he’d respond if I told him you wanted to talk.”

Lugia was silent. <I would like that,> it said finally.

So I said good night and went back to the cabin and grabbed the burner phone. Mewtwo hadn’t replied from when I’d relayed Chibi’s message. I wasn’t sure what good this would do. Still, I wanted to be able to do something to ease Lugia’s concerns. And maybe I was hoping that it would help make things feel less tense between us.

So I sent a simple ‘Lugia wants to talk with you’ message before shoving the phone in my pocket and crashing on the couch.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

The following night, still no word from Mewtwo, but Mew on the other hand did have news. Starr and I were hanging out in the living room when Ajia and Mew suddenly appeared in the middle of the room with a teleport flash.

Starr practically fell off the couch. “Would it kill you two to use the door like a normal person?”

“Ahh, sorry,” Ajia replied sheepishly. She just as quickly regained her enthusiasm and said, “Looks like it’s happening tonight!”

I didn’t know what that was referring to, so I wasn’t sure how excited I should be.

Starr gave Ajia an unimpressed look, “Yeah, uh, you forgot to say what.”

“The shipment,” Ajia replied with a mischievous grin. “I knew there was a reason why the Rockets kept sending trucks out to their warehouses in Celadon. I think they’re gearing up to ship a bunch of supplies to a new base.”

Right, she had mentioned that Mew had been keeping close watch on all the Rocket bases for the past week. I just hadn’t expected anything to actually come out of it.

“So I was thinking,” Ajia went on, hands moving animatedly as she talked, “Mew and I are gonna follow them to see where their destination is and scope out the route from the air.”

<With any luck, we will discover their new base, as well as find the ideal location to intercept them in the future,> Mew added, hovering lightly back and forth.

Ajia nodded. “Yup, then the next time they make a move, we can make our move. Steal some supplies, weaken them before they can strike back, that sort of thing.”

“Do you… need any help with it?” I asked tentatively.

“We’re just doing recon tonight, so we don’t need a whole group or anything,” Ajia replied casually. “Probably better if we’re not too noticeable.”

It made sense. Mew was stealthiest, after all. That’s why she and Ajia kept working themselves so hard. They were just the best candidates for it.

“Yeah, I wasn’t paying attention, but you said you guys were gonna be watching them from the air?” Starr piped up from the couch.

“Yep,” Ajia replied.

“I’m out. The only thing worse than flying is night flying.”

Ajia chuckled. “That’s fine, we’re not planning to get into any fights.”

Starr gave her a deadpan stare. “Now that you’ve said that, I’m expecting it.”

I followed Ajia and Mew outside, where the latter transformed into Aerodactyl. I waved the two off and watched them disappear into the night sky, and once they were gone, I was left alone with a restless energy that I didn’t know what to do with.

At least the time for waiting would soon be over. Maybe we’d even have the chance to wreck a base before it was fully operational, before any Rockets were staffed there. We could hurt their efforts without actually hurting any people. Maybe that would be a good compromise for Lugia.

I stood outside in the cool evening air for longer than I planned to. And just as I was about to head back inside, a phone buzzed in my pocket. But I wasn’t carrying my phone, so how…?

It was the burner phone. I’d forgotten that I’d left it in my jacket pocket when I texted Mewtwo last night. I checked the inbox, and:

I will speak with Lugia tonight.

I froze. My eyes scanned the message repeatedly, hardly daring to believe it. But it was right there, clear as day.

<I got a reply from Mewtwo,> I told Lugia.

The reply was immediate: <What?>

<He wants to meet with you now,> I said, still rereading the message to be sure of it.

<Then I will do so,> Lugia said, and it was hard to believe how fast it had perked up. <Inform him that I accept.>

<Right.> I hit the reply button and was just about halfway through responding when my fingers slowed on the keypad.

Lugia sensed my hesitation. <What is it?>

<Mew and Ajia just left on a scouting mission, but… I should tell them, shouldn’t I?>

Lugia didn’t reply. I was just about to go back inside and grab my Pokégear so I could text Ajia, but then—

<I would prefer not to inform Mew,> Lugia said finally.

My foot froze on the stairs. <You’re sure? What if…> What if something went wrong?

<If Mew knows of it, they will surely want to come along,> Lugia replied, feeling awkward. <I cannot even blame them. But I wish to speak to Mewtwo alone.>

I didn’t know how to respond. My brain kept drifting back to what happened the last time Lugia and Mewtwo spoke privately. Part of me wished that I hadn’t said anything at all.

But I really wanted to trust Lugia. It felt like we’d been making at least a little progress lately. If I could just stop thinking about Viridian…

Lugia exhaled slowly. <I’m aware that this is an unnecessary risk.>

I took a deep breath, fingers tightening on the wooden stair railing. <Well, you let me go talk to Stalker alone, so… it’s only fair.>

Lugia paused for a bit, mulling something over. <You will accompany me, won’t you?>

I blinked. <I thought you wanted to go at it alone.>

<You are my chosen.>

<I guess…?> I mumbled. It still didn’t make total sense, but some part of me was glad.

I wanted to be involved. Ajia and Mew were working themselves so hard. If I could help with something that would get Mewtwo over to our side… I had to go for it.

So I texted back to Mewtwo, or whoever was on the other end of the phone. They replied with a set of GPS coordinates. Plugging them into the map revealed that it wasn’t that far. Just south of Indigo. Something about that nagged at me. Why were all of his sightings in Indigo?

Well, he knew we were staying in a cabin not far from there. Maybe he just picked something convenient for us. But then why not even closer?

Maybe I was overthinking this.

Most of my team was asleep, but I grabbed Firestorm for backup, just in case. And then Chibi obviously demanded to come with us.

“Remember, Mewtwo just thinks that Lugia is coming to talk with him,” I said. “We’re not even supposed to be there, so we’ll have to keep out of sight.”

Chibi let out a small huff. “*I know. I just want to see him.*”

Part of me suspected that he intended to approach Mewtwo anyway, but I had no way of stopping him.

I met Lugia at the lake and we set off, heading into the airspace above Indigo Plateau. And even though the cloud cover was thoroughly hiding us, I still couldn’t help thinking back to that video footage of me riding on Lugia over Sootopolis. If the League ever spotted me again…

Well… we’d be careful.

The wind whipped through my hair as we veered south, putting the city lights behind us. I checked the GPS coordinates again, saw that we were getting nearer, and Lugia began descending.

Why couldn’t Mewtwo have picked a more remote meetup spot? Sure, we were out on Route 23, the rocky highlands of Victory Road. Not exactly within city limits. But still…

Something about this didn’t feel right. He’d been testing to see if the Rockets could detect his presence at close range. Testing to see if the Rockets were willing to make a move. Making his movements predictable. Making himself a target. What did it mean?

If he’d been making himself bait, was he hoping to provoke a reaction from the Rockets? Hoping Lugia would join him? Hoping…

The phone buzzed, and I jolted from my thoughts. I fished it out of my pocket, lit the screen, and saw a new text:

The meeting has been compromised. Leave now.

“Compromised?” I muttered. “What…?”

Paws clenched my shoulder. “*Something’s above us,*” Chibi warned.

I glanced upward and happened to catch a glimpse of the stars obscured for just a moment…

“Look out!”

Lugia pitched to the left just as a bright blue beam pierced the darkness. The brief flash of light revealed a figure with long, narrow wings looming over us.

<What? Why are they here?!> Lugia cried.

What the hell was Articuno doing hanging around Indigo? The Rockets weren’t already planning another attack, were they? Or were they tracking Mewtwo, like Mew had thought?

We should have told Mew. Now we couldn’t teleport. But we hadn’t been expecting a fight!

“Gotta tell someone,” I muttered to myself, scrambling for my Pokégear, snatching it from my pocket, and—it was the burner phone? Whatever, it would do.

I threw open the phone, punched in Ajia’s number, and furiously began typing, “need help near indigo.” But my fingers fumbled on the buttons, and half the letters were wrong, and I wasn’t even sure if I’d hit ‘send’ before an impact struck Lugia in the back, sending my face smacking into the legend’s neck.

Frigid cold washed over me, turning every inch of exposed skin numb in an instant. I clutched at Lugia’s feathers for dear life, struggling to regain my balance, felt Chibi’s paws scrambling for purchase on my shoulder—good, he was still there.

I went to pocket the phone and it was gone.

The phone was gone! I’d lost my grip when that attack hit. I didn’t have my Pokégear, and that phone was my only means of contact, and I’d lost it. Stupid!

<That was too close. You’re in danger on my back,> Lugia said.

I wanted to scream about the phone, but Lugia had worse things to worry about, and it was right—I’d be a less obvious target riding one of my Pokémon.

<Go, now!> Lugia yelled.

I grabbed Firestorm’s Pokéball and let him out. He realized what was up within seconds and tilted his wings so that I could jump onto his back.

“*I thought you were just going to see Mewtwo,*” he said once I’d secured myself.

“We ran into company,” I said grimly as he peeled away from Lugia. Just seconds later, a brilliant Ice Beam tore the air, crashing against a psychic barrier that Lugia raised around itself.

I tapped Firestorm’s side as he tore away from the fighting. “Not too far.”

The Charizard glanced back at me in confusion. “*Shouldn’t we get out of here?*”

“I don’t want to leave Lugia alone,” I said quickly.

My mind was racing. Lugia needed backup, but we didn’t have a shot in hell at defeating a Legendary. The best we could do was distract, draw their fire and try not to get hit.

“*I can try to paralyze,*” Chibi said, gripping my shirt tightly.

Worth a shot. We didn’t have a lot of options. I didn’t have my full team with me, this was just supposed to be a meeting, none of this was supposed to happen.

My mind was screaming, but my voice said, “Take us back around.”

Lugia was going to be mad. But I couldn’t just do nothing and let it get captured.

Firestorm swerved in a tight arc and flew back toward Lugia as fast as his wings could take us. We quickly closed in on the aerial battle, giving Articuno a wide berth as we waited for an opening. The ice bird was circling Lugia at high speed, stirring up a vortex of frigid winds. Lugia retaliated with tearing blasts of air that cut through the icy haze, but its body was already covered with frost.

Firestorm beat his wings powerfully to gain altitude, taking us high above them and hopefully out of their range. I kept my eyes laser-focused below us, watching the two, waiting for the right moment, when Articuno had to correct its flight for just a second…

“Fire Blast!” I hissed.

A massive column of flame, shooting straight down. Articuno swerved aside, but part of the five-pointed stream clipped the bird’s wing. A moment’s falter, just enough to ensure the next blow wouldn’t miss.

I didn’t need to give the order. Firestorm braked hard to kill our momentum and Chibi leapt ahead of us, already sparking. A wicked bolt of lightning, his entire power supply, right at Articuno, striking it in the chest. The ice bird seized up and fell back. Lugia took that opportunity to surge forward, its body covered in vicious blue dragonfire.

Firestorm dove and I caught Chibi as he fell, the static making my hair stand on end. I threw a glance back upward, but I almost didn’t need to because the next thing I saw was Articuno spiraling past us limply.

I could already feel Lugia’s disapproval at us coming back for it, but there was a bit of gratitude mixed in.

That good feeling couldn’t last.

A high-pitched whine, quiet at first, steadily growing louder…

Wait. I knew that noise.

I jerked my head upward to see a stream of red and blue meteors raining down. And in their midst, the faint outline of a serpentine form.

“Oh god,” I muttered, recalling Chibi. “Okay, now we need to get out of here.”

Firestorm plummeted; I clutched his neck tightly, feeling my stomach somersault and forcing myself to retreat into the mindset from our freefall practice. This was what we’d trained for. We pulled out of the dive at the last second and shot forward just above the ground, aiming for the city lights in the distance. Needed to get to a public space. We were in danger out here in the wilds. Had to get somewhere safe.

If we’d just told Mew…

A sudden, blinding brightness at the edge of my vision. I screwed my eyes shut and gripped Firestorm as he swerved out the of the way, but then—

“Aaaaagh!” I screamed.

Searing, burning pain tore across my back. I clutched Firestorm even tighter, gritting my teeth so hard I thought they’d crack, tears blinding my vision. I kept expecting the sensation to fade, but it didn’t. It kept going, I couldn’t feel anything else, everything burned.

<What was that?!> Lugia demanded. <You’re in pain.>

What was it? That brightness, the burning… fire. Entei? Oh god, we’d been hit by Entei.

<E-Entei got us.> My thoughts felt blurry, and I wasn’t entirely sure I’d managed to send the words. I wanted to try again, but the thoughts hurt, everything hurt, I just wanted to be anywhere else and feel anything else.

Lugia was saying more things, but my brain couldn’t parse them. Couldn’t think about anything other than my arms around Firestorm’s neck and that unending heat.

<What’s going on? Your presence is fading.>

I couldn’t figure out how to respond. Couldn’t piece together the words. The pain was too much. It was all that existed. I was sinking into a black hole, and no matter what I tried, I couldn’t claw out of it.

A smothering tidal wave of fear hit me like a truck, drowning out my own emotions with its sheer volume.

<No. No, stop. I can lose Rayquaza. I can get to where you are. Tell your Charizard to find me!>

Needed to… say something, but… thinking was… too hard. I tried reaching out mentally, but… Couldn’t find…

<Don’t you dare die on me, damn it!!>






~End Chapter 51~
 

Seren

Lurking
Staff
Pronouns
He/Him
Partners
  1. sableye
Ooooh, I wonder what Mewtwo's up to! Was hoping to get an answer to the cell phone thing, but I guess that's going to be a while longer... especially now that Jade's lost it. Also, I loved Jade being all super paranoid about literally everything while watching Mewtwo. Very good lasting scars from the rebellion days.

So it seems like Jade got caught in Team Rocket's Mewtwo trap! Or at least, that's what I'm guessing is their reason for suddenly being here. With articuno, entei, and was that a draco meteor from rayquaza? Maybe Jade wasn't wrong about Rocket having teleport blockers in the area, and they just hadn't activated them yet?

Short review, but I'm looking forward to more!
 
Chapter 52: The Heart of a Guardian

Chibi Pika

Stay positive
Staff
Location
somewhere in spacetime
Pronouns
they/them
Partners
  1. pikachu-chibi
  2. lugia
  3. palkia
  4. lucario-shiny
  5. incineroar-starr
Thanks to everyone who read Chapter 51! Told ya chapter 52 wouldn't take as long~

As usual, thanks to Jackie and Dragonfree for beta reading.



~Chapter 52: The Heart of a Guardian~

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I stood alone in a field outside Viridian, and I couldn’t remember how I’d gotten there. The grass was bathed in moonlight. I turned in every direction, unsure where I was supposed to go, or what I should be doing. In the distance, city lights… and smoke.

Wingbeats stirred the air. My chest constricted. I jerked my head upward and found myself staring into an avian face twisted into a cruel smirk. Glowing blue eyes gazed into my soul.

I tried to turn and run, but my legs moved in slow motion. Distant echoes of psychic pain tore my body apart. I was sinking, slipping into a smothering dark void. My arms blindly reached out for something to grab hold of, but the movement was sluggish, muscles unresponsive.

Couldn’t breathe. Drowning. Deeper and deeper, until the only thing I could see were those piercing eyes staring down at me like I was nothing.

And then a jolt of sparks.

My eyes snapped open. I squinted, forcing them to focus. Something yellow, right in front of me, slowly coming into view. It was Chibi, fixing me with his intense gaze, a shade of concern in his eyes.

“*You’re awake,*” he said.

I let out a long, slow breath. “Yeah.”

I was lying on my stomach in the dirt. Our surroundings were dark, and I couldn’t see much beyond a circle of flickering firelight. Firestorm? No, just a tiny campfire smoldering within a circle of rocks.

“Is Firestorm okay?” I asked.

“*He wasn’t hurt too bad. He’s resting in his ball.*”

I relaxed slightly. Good, that was good. The attack that got me must have hit Firestorm too, but it was fire, so he’d been able to endure.

I shifted an arm to try to lift myself, but then a blinding, stinging pain flared up and I sank back against the ground, breathing heavily.

<You shouldn’t move.>

The psychic voice caught me off guard. I slowly struggled to lift my head enough to see Lugia gazing down at me, its eyes troubled.

“My back hurts,” I muttered, voice strained. Or at least, not my back, more like… the skin all around it? Which meant…

Entei’s fire. Ohhh god, everything I couldn’t feel had been burned away. All across my entire back. That was really, really bad, wasn’t it? Oh god.

I was trembling. I felt weak, dizzy just thinking about it.

“How bad is it? Am… am I going to…?” I couldn’t finish the sentence.

<I managed to force the wound to close,> Lugia said. <But I cannot do much more than that. You will still require medical attention.>

“*This was the best you could do?*” Chibi asked incredulously.

Lugia drew itself back, ruffling its feathers. <It’s hard, all right? Healing oneself is one thing, but healing others is something not many beings can do. And on a human, no less! The only reason I got as far as I did was because I just have that much power.>

Chibi made a sort of disapproving huff, but didn’t say anything else.

I exhaled slowly, feeling my pulse slowly settle back down. Okay, that was… okay for now. It still hurt. Each breath made me very aware of the raw, blistered skin surrounding the wound. I’d just… try not to think about it. However hard that was.

One breath at a time. In, out. I kept my eyes shut and tried to think of anything else.

<To be honest, I’m not sure how I got as far as I did,> Lugia said privately. <I’ve never been able to heal others before. And it really shouldn’t be possible on a human, anyway. I just… I was desperate.>

<Maybe it’s because I’m your chosen.>

<That doesn’t make any sense. Our psychic link isn’t exactly going to let me rewrite how biology works.>

I sighed. <It was just an idea.>

Another thing that Lugia didn’t understand. I needed to get used to it.

“Okay, so…”—I took a deep breath—“even if the situation isn’t as bad as I thought, we still need to get out of here, don’t we?”

<If I fly back now, we may run into the enemy again,> Lugia said flatly. <I do not presently have the stamina to fight them off again. Not after attempting to heal you. I need to roost.>

A sinking feeling crept over me. “And Mew doesn’t know we’re here, so she can’t come get us.”

Lugia considered something for a bit. <Do you have means of contacting your allies?>

“I tried to text them when we first got attacked, but I wasn’t able to give specifics.” At least they knew we were in trouble? But who knew how long it would take for them to find us?

<Can you contact them again?>

Shame. Burning shame. “I… lost the phone. During the attack.”

Lugia’s tail swished agitatedly. <We must wait, then. I will recover my strength. Get some rest.>

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The minutes crawled by. Chibi was alert, staring up at the sky, watching for any sign of movement. Every so often, his tail twitched. I tried to sleep, but it was impossible to get comfortable. I was stuck lying on my stomach, unable to turn on my side, and each time I dared to try, I had to suck in a breath as the pain flared up again.

The creepiest part was the fact that I couldn’t feel a thing on my back. Nothing. Not even the air, just a total void of any sensation. The surrounding skin, however… that was on fire.

<Mew will find us.> Lugia said firmly, trying to convince itself. <I have never been able to evade them for long, even when I have hoped for solitude.>

Lugia had settled into a resting position, with its neck curled back and its tail wrapped around its feet. Eyes closed most of the time, but every so often the seabird glanced at me. Its mind was a swirl of conflicting emotions, and I couldn’t get a read on most of them. Frustration, anxiety… guilt, maybe?

<I’m sorry.>

I blinked. “For…?”

<You wouldn’t have been injured if you hadn’t come along with me.>

Something about the awkward embarrassment in its voice left me chuckling without really knowing why. It immediately turned into a fit of coughing as a jolt of pain surged through me.

“I guess it’s just part of what I signed up for when I agreed to be chosen,” I said, forcing a smile.

Lugia hummed. <As you are meant to aid me, I am meant to aid you. That is the agreement.>

“I guess so.”

It struck me that Lugia, for all its talk, did take the chosen pact pretty seriously. Even when it was frustrated by the vagueness, or scorning the idea of fate… it had never treated the pact itself as anything less than important.

It was weird how normal it felt to me now. Me, a lowly human, joined with a legend. I’d gotten so used to feeling that presence in the back of my mind. Not having it there would have been weirder at this point.

“Why did you choose me?” I asked.

Lugia tilted its head. <You know why.>

“I know why I was a candidate. But why, specifically, did you pick me?”

Lugia turned away. <It’s nothing, really. But we… we’ve toyed with the idea… That is to say, that each legend is drawn to a virtue of sorts. I’m not saying it’s true, just a silly superstition really, but—>

I groaned. “Oh, just say it.”

<Determination.>

I blinked.

Lugia closed its eyes, embarrassed. <I was drawn to your determination.>

I wasn’t really sure what to make of that. ‘Determination’?

“I never would have described myself as a particularly determined person,” I said, smiling weakly.

<What would you call your insistence in remaining in this fight, despite the great personal toll it has taken?> Lugia asked, fixing its eyes on me.

I furrowed my brow. “Okay, but… I ran away.”

<Mew has described it as you exerted a great force of will, and needed to recover. Is that not accurate?>

I almost chuckled, but managed to hold it back. Mew, always putting a positive spin on everything. Almost like…

“What drew Mew to Ajia?” I asked.

Lugia glanced at me. <I’m sure you have already guessed. They share the same optimism.>

Yeah, that wasn’t hard to see. And then Moltres… Moltres had fought Rudy because it wanted to see his passion.

Four more legends needed to find their chosen. I wasn’t sure how much time they had. Some of them—Suicune and Zapdos—I hadn’t seen since last year. What were they doing? Were they safe?

…There probably wasn’t much point worrying about that right now.

I closed my eyes, hoping I could ignore the pain long enough to at least get a little rest.

What felt like minutes later, I heard Chibi shouting, “*Up there!*” and the heavy weight of Lugia pivoting next to me. My eyes snapped open, and I squinted into the night sky.

“What is it?”

“*Something’s there,*” Chibi said, staring at the sky with his tail bolt upright. I struggled to twist myself so that I could look up as well, gritting my teeth through the pain. The sky was pitch-dark and moonless; the only light in the sky was the stars.

Lugia stamped a foot on the campfire, putting it out instantly. My eyes slowly adjusted to the darkness as we waited in tense silence.

I could see a dark shape passing in front of the stars, blotting them out. It could just be some random nocturnal Pokémon. I told myself that over and over, but the thing looked too big.

Lugia crouched low over us, spreading its wings. <Don’t move. I’ll make sure they can’t hit either of you.>

A bright blue beam pierced the darkness, striking the earth so close I could feel the waves of cold radiating out from the impact. Articuno. It had found us.

I expected Lugia to take off, to confront Articuno. But it stayed grounded, drawing itself inward, focusing its energy. I felt an aura of calm filling its mind, latent power drifting to the surface.

Another beam struck, and my heart jumped into my throat as strings of icy blue light rained down around Lugia’s frame.

I strained my neck to get a better look at the air. Lugia drew itself back and fired a waterspout upward, but Articuno saw it coming and dodged it easily. The ice bird retaliated with another blinding beam, frigid air washing over the ground. Lugia tensed, keeping itself firm, wings spread low overhead. It was an endless torrent of ice, one after another, striking Lugia repeatedly as it held the defensive position.

<Is that the best you can do?! It’ll take more than that to bring me down!> Lugia snarled.

But the legend was obviously worn out. I could feel the waves of exhaustion radiating from its mind. And I couldn’t do anything but lie there and hope that Lugia could handle it. Maybe Lugia could beat Articuno one-on-one, but when it had to stand in one spot and couldn’t move or dodge or anything…?

<You could try to draw it off,> I said. Maybe they’d follow Lugia and wouldn’t notice me. Anything other than just sitting here.

<You would be unguarded,> Lugia snapped with a tone like I was speaking nonsense.

I wanted to say that I’d have my team, but I knew that was stupid. I couldn’t expect them to be able to drive off a legend, especially not while in a weakened state.

Chibi was tense, sparks leaping from his fur, ready to let his power loose if Lugia fell. But even if he did, that would only buy us a moment before we’d be frozen solid.

Snow piled up around us. A horrible chill hung in the air. Lugia was breathing heavily and each blow made it sink lower. Any moment now its defense would falter, and then…

<This is insane, we have to make a break for it,> I said.

<That is foolish,> Lugia snapped. <How are you supposed to hold on in your condition?>

<Anything’s better than staying here!> I shot back. Still, in the back of my mind, I knew Lugia was right. I wouldn’t be able to hold on. Maybe Lugia could distract them while Firestorm carried me off. But what if they spotted his tail flame?

My mind was racing. We couldn’t stay here, we couldn’t flee, what were we supposed to do?

An orange glow, in the corner of my vision. Lugia jerked in surprise, and then a pillar of flames erupted from the sky. Oh god. I screwed my eyes shut, my mind replaying that horrible, searing heat, over and over—

But then Articuno let out a horrible screech, and I realized that the fire wasn’t aimed at us.

The wind shifted; Articuno must have circled around to find another opening, but another blast of flames cut it off, lighting the whole clearing with a scarily bright glow. One last Ice Beam crashed against Lugia’s back, followed by another stream of fire pouring down from above. Another screech, then wingbeats leading away from us, growing fainter.

And somehow, miraculously, that was the end of it. No more ice. No more attacks of any kind. We were safe?

Talons hit the dirt not far from us. I craned my neck to get a better look and saw a golden tail shimmering in the residual firelight… Ho-oh!

“We don’t have much time,” the phoenix said, folding its wings. “I’m sure they’ll be back with reinforcements soon enough.”

Lugia relaxed. <Right. We kind of have a situation here, and—> Lugia’s words cut off suddenly, and a dull confusion washed over it. <You have a human on your neck.>

“Thank you for informing me,” Ho-oh replied dryly.

The confusion melted into intense skepticism. <And you’re alright with that?>

“Presumably, considering I came all this way without seeing fit to remove her.”

What? Someone was riding Ho-oh? Who?

“Jade!” a voice rang out. Footsteps rushed toward me.

I jolted. Starr? Here? What?

“What the hell happened to you?!” she demanded, kneeling in front of me. I struggled to brace myself so that I could look up at her face and see her eyes wide with shock and worry.

“We weren’t looking for trouble, honest. We sort of just… ran into it,” I said lamely.

Starr glanced over her shoulder. “Why did you let this happen?!”

I was about to stammer out some kind of reply, but then I realized that it wasn’t directed at me at all.

<Me?> Lugia asked indignantly.

“Who else?”

<We were ambushed,> Lugia snapped. <I did all that I could.>

“Some good you are,” she muttered under her breath, turning back toward me and grimacing.

“How bad is it?” I asked.

Starr clicked her tongue. “It’s… .pretty bad.” She sat down on the ground next to me so I didn’t have to crane my neck as far to look at her.

“You’re… gonna be okay, right?” she said, quieter this time.

I swallowed. “I think so. Lugia was able to fix some of it at least.”

Starr gave Lugia a sideways glance and I felt the legend glower at her.

“Good. Cause if anything happened to you, I’d never forgive you.” She opted to punch the ground to accentuate that remark rather than punching my shoulder.

“How did you find us?” I asked.

“Ajia got your text. We had to split up to cover more ground. Which reminds me—I’ve got to let Ajia know where we are. Mew can get you out of here.” She pulled out her phone and began typing up a message.

A wave of relief was slowly spreading through my body, and I probably would have collapsed if I weren’t already lying on the ground. We were going to make it out of here alive. Even if I was still flooded with pain and the humiliation of feeling helpless… things just felt better with Starr here.

Starr gave me a brief sideways glance in the middle of her typing. She didn’t say anything, but a few seconds later she grabbed my hand and held it tight. I attempted to squeeze back, with what little strength I had.

“It’s kind of surprising that you rode Ho-oh here,” I said quietly.

“I don’t have any flying Pokémon; how else was I supposed to go looking for you?” Starr replied flatly without looking up from her phone.

Well, yeah, but… Starr didn’t have any flying Pokémon because she hated flying. Jumping straight to making a Legendary fly her into danger was a bit unexpected.

“She insisted,” Ho-oh said simply. “Or perhaps a better word would be ‘demanded’?”

Lugia gave Ho-oh a skeptical look. <And you would give in to the demands of a human?>

“It’s not as though I was not already invested in searching for you two,” Ho-oh said dismissively. “And besides—haven’t you done the same?” the phoenix added with a twinkle of amusement.

<That’s completely different,> Lugia replied defensively. <I swore an oath to aid my chosen. Not following the whims of whatever human comes along.>

Ho-oh hummed. “Perhaps she ought to be my chosen, then.”

Everyone froze. The sheer weight of what Ho-oh had just said hung in the air for several seconds.

Starr whirled around to face the phoenix. “Hang on… what?!”

“You feel drawn to this conflict, I know. I’ve seen it,” Ho-oh said, gazing at her. “You have refused to abandon your companions, despite your every insistence that you want no part of this. You have the heart of a guardian, and your threads of fate are crossed with these events more than anyone I’ve seen. I believe you would make me a fine chosen.”

“I… what the hell. Is that a request? Are you asking me to—”

“Merely an observation,” Ho-oh said cryptically.

Starr stared up at the Legendary, her expression somewhere between disbelief and anger. “I’m an ex-Rocket. I helped them catch you Legendaries. Why the hell would you want to choose me?”

Ho-oh tilted its head, though its giant amber eyes remained firmly on her. “Do you believe that one’s life should be forever defined by a past mistake?”

Starr eyes were livid. “It wasn’t just some one-off mistake! That was my life! For years! I was loyal to them above all else!”

“All the more reason to admire the conviction it took to walk away.”

Starr grabbed her forehead. “Oh my god, stop putting a positive spin on everything.”

Ho-oh tilted its head at her. “You know, there is no need to convince me that you are unfit for this role. I cannot force you to be chosen. It is up to you.”

She turned away from the phoenix and sank back down next to me. I stared at her, unsure of what I should be feeling. Starr, a candidate for being chosen. It made sense, from what Lugia had told me in the past. Still…

“Did you actually get a choice?” Starr asked me, her voice low.

I paused. “It wouldn’t have worked if I hadn’t said yes.”

Starr’s brow furrowed. She didn’t say anything for a long while. Then: “Why did you?”

“Huh?”

“Why did you say yes?”

Why had I? It felt like an eternity ago—like I’d forgotten what life used to be like before being chosen. Probably because I’d felt inextricably tied up in this fight since long before that.

“I just figured… if this fight’s going to happen with or without me, and I’m one of the ones who can actually make a difference, then… I’ve got to.”

‘I’ve got to.’ Not because anyone was making me. But because this was what my life was like now. There was no changing that.

“This is bullshit,” Starr said bitterly. “The chosen thing, the Rocket stuff, all of it. I shouldn’t be involved. But then suddenly you and Ajia are off on this quest to save all the Legendaries, when I’m part of the reason they’re in trouble in the first place, and—” She stopped, shaking her head. “I never wanted to go off and play hero like you two. I don’t deserve to—” Again, her words cut off. She grabbed her hair and said, “Is this supposed to make up for what I did? Is it really that easy?”

“I wouldn’t call this easy,” I said quietly.

“You know what I mean,” she said. But to be honest, I really didn’t. Things were hard enough for her already without making them even harder.

We sat there for a while. I wasn’t sure whether she’d want me to talk her out of it… or whether I’d want to talk her out of it. This had all happened so fast. Even if the more I thought about it, the more inevitable this was.

“Hell with it,” Starr muttered. “I always knew there was no getting out of it.” She made eye contact with me. “If you’re stuck in this godawful mess, then I am too, and I might as well let a Legendary have my back through it all.”

Starr stood up sharply and pivoted around to face Ho-oh. She jabbed a thumb toward her chest and said, “Alright fine, you’ve got your wish. Make me your goddamn chosen.”

Ho-oh bowed its head deeply. “Very well. Approach me.”

Starr took forceful steps toward the phoenix, glaring up at it defiantly. Ho-oh gazed back, calm and steadfast.

“It must be your choice, and your choice alone. Are you ready?”

My chest tightened. The choosing. All the negative emotions connected to the fight, all at once. Starr… had a lot of those. Probably more than I even knew. Ho-oh wouldn’t have her go through with this if it didn’t trust that she’d be able to endure, right?

“Just fucking do it before I change my mind.”

Ho-oh bowed again. And then its wings shot straight up, and multicolored flames erupted from the ground. My breath hitched, every muscle tensing at once. Brilliant hues streaked the darkness, swirling in a vortex with Starr at the center. Every so often the flames parted, and I caught a glimpse of her doubled over and clutching her head.

It was going to be okay. Ajia, Rudy, and I had all already gone through the same thing, and we’d endured. Starr was strong. It was going to be okay.

And then, after an endless moment, the vortex shattered, scattering rainbow embers through the air. Starr sank to her knees, breathing heavily. I wanted to run over to her, but I couldn’t move.

She slowly turned toward me with a distant, almost haunted look. “Dammit, what the hell was that…” she said, her voice weak like she’d just run a mile.

I hesitated. “It’s sort of like a test,” I said. In my mind, I saw those blue eyes piercing the night sky yet again.

“No one said anything about a friggin’ test,” Starr muttered, bracing herself with her arms as she slowly staggered to her feet. She clutched her forehead and gave Ho-oh a sideways glance. “I feel you in my mind. Is that how it’s gonna be from now on?”

Ho-oh nodded. “We have a psychic link now, yes.”

“Great, I get to be scolded all the time.” She turned toward me. “Is that how it is for you and Lugia?”

I gave a small snort. “Pretty much.”

Lugia rolled its eyes. <You tend to do all the scolding.>

Starr stumbled over to me, dragging her feet as she did, then flopping to the ground next to me.

“It’s weird as hell thinking of us being in the same situation,” she said in a low voice. “But I guess we already were, in a way.”

I looked away. “I’m sorry.”

Starr pinched the bridge of her nose. “It’s not your fault, Jade,” she said tiredly. “I’m just… It’s complicated.”

Complicated. Things had been complicated for a long time, and probably wouldn’t stop being complicated. But at least we weren’t alone.

A flash of light. I couldn’t see them, but I was pretty sure Mew and Ajia had just appeared.

“Holy crap, Jade, what happened?” Yep, Ajia.

I traded glances with Starr. “It’s… it’s a long story.”

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There was a lot to explain. We teleported back to the Indigo Ranger HQ, instead of the outpost we’d been staying at. Our streak of causing a fuss at ungodly hours of the night continued, but this time there was a bit more forgiveness, given the situation.

I was given tons and tons of creams and gauze and painkillers and fluids and an IV. As well as dozens of bewildered questions as to how on earth there was any kind of healing already present. It was bizarre having a bunch of people in a fuss over my condition being somehow ‘really bad’ and also ‘better than it had any right to be’ at the same time.

Mew wasn’t upset that we’d left without telling her. She was mostly just sad, which I think bothered Lugia more. At some point Ajia ended up asking the obvious question regarding Ho-oh, and Starr begrudgingly told her that she’d been chosen, with the sort of tone you’d use for homework. Ajia was obviously overjoyed and gave Starr a big hug and Starr made a show of trying to push her away, and that was the last thing I remembered before passing out.

I drifted in and out of a painkiller-induced haze for the rest of the morning, and when I woke up, I was lying in bed in the medical ward, and there was sunlight coming through the window. Chibi was curled up on the blanket next to me, asleep. I hoped the rest of my team wasn’t worried about me. Well, most of them weren’t the type to worry, but maybe Swift and Firestorm would.

I didn’t have time to worry about them, though, because the next thing I knew, the door had opened and a whole bunch of people had filed in, and before I could even identify who was here, I had Rudy all up in my face.

“Got any badass scars?” he asked eagerly.

Darren raised a finger. “Better question: would you want someone to ask you that when you first woke up?”

Rudy gave him an indignant look. “Hell yeah, I would.”

Well, there was probably going to be a lot of scarring after what I’d been through, so I couldn’t even say that he was wrong.

Once we were safe from being overheard by any staff I told everyone the full story of what had happened. Naturally, the reactions varied between shock and confusion. Part of me was glad that Lugia wasn’t around to hear all the snide comments being thrown its way. But there was plenty of outrage toward Mewtwo as well.

“Why the hell did Mewtwo want to meet up if he was just going to change his mind at the last second?” Starr demanded.

“*He must have had good reason,*” Mew said thoughtfully.

Starr folded her arms. “Yeah, well, maybe he didn’t, and he’s just screwing with us.”

It was hard to think about Mewtwo right now. My brain felt like sludge. Some more discussion followed, but I wasn’t paying attention to most of it until Starr got in my face.

“I mentioned that it was stupid to go out like that, right?” Starr said.

I nodded vaguely. “You did.”

“We’re all just glad you’re okay,” Ajia said reassuringly.

I forced a smile. I guess it could have been a lot worse.

Starr was giving me an odd look. “You look like you’re about to pass out,” she said flatly.

“I just got a bunch of sleep,” I mumbled, sinking into the covers a bit.

Starr exhaled sharply. “Yeah, well, you probably need a shit ton more after what you went through. Alright, everyone out.”

Starr stood up and shooed everyone out of the room. I then proceeded to pass out for the rest of the night.

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When I next woke up, it was night again. The fresh, raw skin under the bandages itched and stung, and I had to fight the urge to scratch it so badly.

The first thing I noticed about my surroundings was that Chibi had wandered off at some point. The second thing I noticed was that I wasn’t alone—Starr was sitting in one of the chairs next to my bed. She’d been reading something on her phone but looked up once she noticed that I’d moved.

“Hey. Feeling any better?” she asked.

I shifted. “A little.” It took a few seconds to form the question in my head: “Were you just… waiting there?”

She shrugged. “Not like I had anything better to do tonight.”

My tired brain was a haze of emotion—guilt, regret, frustration—and I didn’t have the energy to sort through it. Half of me desperately wanted to get out of bed and move around. The other half just wanted more sleep.

“So Lugia was able to heal the rest of the burns, right?” Starr asked.

I grimaced. “Sort of… It’s all scab right now. I’m not sure how long it will take to heal for real.” I reached a hand around and grimaced as I ran my fingers along the bandages. Even the lightest touch felt like a flurry of needles across the fresh skin.

“There’s probably gonna be a ton of scarring,” I mumbled. I still hadn’t figured out how to feel about that. A bit self-conscious, I guess. It was a permanent reminder of my stupidity.

Starr leaned her face against her knuckles, looking pensive. “Well, you’re not alone there.”

I blinked at her. “…Huh?”

She was quiet for a few seconds. Then, with a look of resignation, she said, “See for yourself.” And she turned around and lifted the back of her shirt.

My eyes widened. Her entire back was covered in elaborate tattoos. Stylized, intricate designs of all her Pokémon, surrounded by their elements. Crashing waves, swirling flames, bolts of lightning—it only got more detailed the longer I looked at it.

And there, in the very center, a prominent scar carved in the shape of an ‘R.’

“Holy crap,” I breathed. I never knew. I had no idea that she was carrying something like that with her.

“It symbolizes undying loyalty,” Starr said with a bitter laugh. “The ultimate sign of my commitment to serving Team Rocket.”

My eyes couldn’t help drifting back to the scar. I almost didn’t want to know, but…

“What’s with the scar?”

“It’s punishment for my biggest failure—the time I failed my assignment to hunt down and kill Ajia before the revolt. I had to order Feraligatr to do it.”

I winced. Her own Pokémon had scarred her like that?

Starr covered the tattoo—and the scar—once more. She let out a sigh as she sat down on the side of the bed. “You don’t understand how it is—following orders is everything on Team Rocket. Feraligatr didn’t so much as hesitate. I’d have been furious with her if she had.”

I guess she was right… I really didn’t understand.

There was a pause as it looked like she was mulling what to say next. “I’ve been thinking about having one of my Pokémon burn it off.”

It took several seconds for her words to sink in, but when they did, a sickly feeling came over me. “…What?”

Starr gripped the sheet with clenched fingers. “I hate knowing that it’s there. I hate knowing I can never move on from that.”

“That’s not true. You have moved on,” I insisted.

She gave a hollow laugh and shook her head. “You know, I still see it sometimes.”

I tilted my head. What was she talking about?

“Like, we’ll be talking about whatever, and then I’ll just… see you lying there in that detention cell. And for a moment, it’s like I’m there.” She screwed her eyes shut, balling her hands into fists. “It’ll pass a second later, but then I can’t look you in the eye for the rest of the day without thinking about it.”

My breath caught in my chest. It had been nearly a year since it happened. There were still times when I’d see it too. Sometimes it was just a sideways glance at her from the wrong angle that would send my heart rate skyrocketing. Other times it was the wrong tone of voice or the wrong expression, and I’d suddenly feel on-edge, like I had to be ready for a fight any second. It happened less and less often as time went on, but… the memory still lingered. I wasn’t sure if it would ever go away entirely.

“And like, I know I tried to pretend I wasn’t thinking about it when we first started traveling together, but… that was a lie. Seems like lying is the only damn thing I know how to do,” she said with another hollow laugh.

My brain was too tired to refute any of it. The sharp-edged words were aimed at herself, but I could feel them too.

Starr’s brow furrowed, her eyes distant. “Having this permanent reminder of who I was—the things I did… I want it gone, and I want it to hurt.”

“You don’t… you don’t have to…” My words trailed off and died.

“It’s stupid,” she said bitterly. “I know erasing it won’t erase the things I did, but it’s something I need to do.” A tired half-smile crossed her face. “Besides… then we’ll match.”

I grimaced. “I’m not sure how I’m supposed to feel about that.”

Starr exhaled. “That’s fine. I’m doing it for myself anyway.”

I shivered, uncomfortable with the topic. “We don’t have to think about that stuff,” I said quietly. It was in the past. It didn’t matter. Even if…

Starr leaned back, staring at the ceiling. “You know how, when we first started traveling together, you asked me why I did what I did in that cell?”

My mouth went dry. “Yeah. I remember.”

“I told you that I had to put on a show for the others. And that was true, but… it’s more that… I was just so angry. Angry that you wouldn’t give in and make it easier for me to justify keeping you alive. Angry that you didn’t realize that cooperating would make everything easier on both of us. I can try to say that I hated every second of it, but there was some part of me that thought you deserved that,” she said disgustedly.

I stared at her, feeling cold. Twice, I tried to say something, but the words died in my mouth.

Starr turned to face me. “What if I wanted that? What if I wanted to hurt you? What does that say about me?” She buried her face in her hands. “I couldn’t even admit it to you because that would make it true.”

My throat clenched. What if she’d wanted that? What if…

“I just… I didn’t want you to be afraid of me anymore,” Starr went on, voice breaking. “You had every right to be. I just wanted to pretend that it never happened. But… you can’t. So why should I be able to?”

The air was dead still. Nothing existed but the two of us.

“You don’t… think that anymore?” I asked quietly.

Starr wiped her face roughly, avoiding my eye. “Of course not.”

I took a deep breath. “Then… I’d rather think about the you that I know right now than the you from back then. Maybe there was a moment where you… wanted that. But that was a long time ago.”

“Don’t try to spare my feelings,” Starr snapped, now staring straight at me. “I did that to you, and you’re the one paying for it, and anything I’m feeling is meaningless, you hear?”

“I don’t…”—I shifted, unable to move very well, unable to reach out, much as I wanted to—“I don’t think it’s meaningless.”

Starr didn’t respond. Her gaze dropped to the floor as she fidgeted with her wristbands.

“I chose to start things over with you,” I said firmly. “And maybe there were some bad things I didn’t know about, but that really doesn’t change everything from the past year. You threw away your life to save mine, and you didn’t even know why, and that’s why I knew it was real.”

I stopped to catch my breath—too many words, too forceful for the state I was in. “And—and I don’t regret that choice, not in the slightest.”

Starr was quiet for a long while, staring downward with a pensive look. Finally, she exhaled long and slow and said, “Ugh, look at me making this all about me. How are you feeling?”

I blinked, a bit taken aback. “It… hurts less now. Lugia made another heal attempt.”

Starr rubbed her temples. “That oversized Wingull, I swear to god…”

“Don’t—don’t be too hard on Lugia,” I said, wincing. “It… felt really bad. And it really did try its hardest to heal me.”

“I guess,” Starr said with a dismissive shrug. She sat up straighter on the edge of the bed, folding her arms behind her head. “Anyway, now I’m stuck with an oversized bird of my own, so I have to make the best of it. Not exactly looking forward to more flights, though,” she added with a smirk.

I couldn’t help cracking a smile at that one, and Starr looked satisfied with my reaction.

Then she leaned her head against her palm and asked, “Hey, do you think what Ho-oh said is true?”

“About what?”

“About me being a ‘guardian,’” she said, adding finger quotes for good measure. “I mean, it sounds stupid, but…”

I rubbed my arm. “You are kinda protective.”

Starr rolled her eyes. “Look, someone’s got to keep you guys from getting yourselves killed. Buuuut I guess I’ll have an easier time of that now that I’m chosen,” she said with mock disgust on the last word.

I gave a low snort, and it hurt, but it also felt good to laugh. “You say that like it’s the worst thing ever.”

“Uh huh. Have you taken a look at all this?” she said, gesturing to all of me.

I laughed again, and this time it turned into a wave of coughing halfway through.

“I think,”—I inhaled deeply, struggling to get my breath under control—“I think that I’d have been a lot worse off if I didn’t have a Legendary.”

Starr gave a long, exaggerated sigh. “Yeah, yeah. I suppose I might as well get used to it. And I guess it helps to think of yourself as a badass every once in a while.”

I smiled. “That almost sounds like something Ajia would say.”

“Yeah? Well, maybe she’s rubbing off on me.”

Starr grabbed my hand, and I didn’t flinch.






~End Chapter 52~
 

Equitial

Ace Trainer
Pronouns
he/him
Partners
  1. espurr
  2. inkay
  3. woobat
  4. ralts
Okay I'll try to keep this very very simple (for my own sake). But it might get jumbled or messy. Speculative spoilers ahead.

My theory is simple. In the beginning of Sebastian Shephard, aka boohoo-cry-me-river-man's chapter, it mentions the world coming apart, and prior to that, infinifty and blah blah. And it speaks of pain. But a deep, wrenching pain, a hole.

What could cause such pain? Well, my mind immediately leapt to Pacific Rim, and having some die while in drift. The agony of feeling someone you were basically bonded with torn away.

My guess? The agony of your patron legendary dying as you were connected to them. My guess? Sebastian, (play the tiniest violin), has been tinkering with time, naughty boy, after the loss of his patron.

His legendary died, and he basically came back with a single minded purpose to create the future where this doesn't happen. This is why he seems to be fighting to ensure something but refuses to work with people, because he probably equates that with failed attempt(s?) at stopping the future. Something causes literally everything to unravel, and Sebastian was caught up in it, lost his patron legendary, and then went back in time to change things.

Even if thats not the case I firmly theorize for now that the pain/emptiness he feels is definitely from losing the legendary.

Either that or... he is the pokemon, who lost his human and went back in time or heart swapped or some kind of shenanigans.

Anyways idk if this is contradicted by future chapters released on FFN but it was fun to dump anyways. having a ball with this and can't wait for more.

I know this theory was posted months ago but I have seen it now and feel compelled to ask, I'm pretty sure @Chibi Pika has watched Madoka?
 

Equitial

Ace Trainer
Pronouns
he/him
Partners
  1. espurr
  2. inkay
  3. woobat
  4. ralts
The form my thoughts are taking today are short phrases. To start you off with: conflicting PTSD emotions, Burn Body Horror Whump , Lugia is Tsundere, Cue the Undertale. Frrrrrriendshup to the Rescue

“Thank you for informing me,” Ho-oh replied dryly.

The confusion melted into intense skepticism. <And you’re alright with that?>

“Presumably, considering I came all this way without seeing fit to remove her.”

Starr/Ho-oh's virtue is sarcasm

“Got any badass scars?” he asked eagerly.

honestly that was one of my first thoughts too

The second thing I noticed was that I wasn’t alone—Starr was sitting in one of the chairs next to my bed.

I CAN FEEL THE FRIENDSHIP COMING

My eyes widened. Her entire back was covered in elaborate tattoos. Stylized, intricate designs of all her Pokémon, surrounded by their elements. Crashing waves, swirling flames, bolts of lightning—it only got more detailed the longer I looked at it.

OH NO OH NO STARR AGHHHHHHH

Starr turned to face me. “What if I wanted that? What if I wanted to hurt you? What does that say about me?” She buried her face in her hands. “I couldn’t even admit it to you because that would make it true.”

MY CHILD NO

And then I screamed until the end of the chapter

Starr grabbed my hand, and I didn’t flinch.

And then I died. 10/10 masterpiece I love this AHHHHHHHHHHHHH
 

IFBench

Rescue Team Member
Location
Pokemon Paradise
Partners
  1. chikorita-saltriv
  2. bench-gen
  3. charmander
  4. snivy
  5. treecko
  6. tropius
  7. arctozolt
  8. wartortle
Alright, I'm finally here for our review exchange! I'm so sorry I took so long!

I absolutely adored the gym battle. It has the tension, dynamic battlefield, cool tactics, and creative move use that I love both battles both in this fic and the manga so much for. It was amazing, and each attack had my eyes glued to the page. I love your battles so much.

And Jet is adorable! I love the line about her hugging Jade after she wins the battle. I missed this otter and this fic so much.

I'm a bit sad about the timeskip, but I understand it. It would be boring to show everything that happened in the eight months since the rebellion, but I wanted to see more of Jet bonding with Jade!

Love the tidbits about Jet. Such a goofy otter.

The beach scene was adorable. Loved everyone just having fun together, it's always nice to see some fluff.

I loved this chapter overall! It's so nice just seeing everyone having a good time after everything that's happened, and it's a great reintroduction to the fic.

Thank you for writing this!
 
Ch 52 Extra: Burn Away

Chibi Pika

Stay positive
Staff
Location
somewhere in spacetime
Pronouns
they/them
Partners
  1. pikachu-chibi
  2. lugia
  3. palkia
  4. lucario-shiny
  5. incineroar-starr
I'm glad folks liked the events of Chapter 52! It was a long time coming. ;P And now, another extra, because I just couldn't leave Starr alone for long, especially after Blacklight~



~Chapter 52 Extra: Burn Away~

The sun had barely set, leaving the surrounding wilds lit with the reddish glow of twilight. Starr wandered through the forest with no real goal or destination in mind. Not like there was anywhere to go out here. The woods surrounding Indigo were pretty much as “middle of nowhere” as it got.

She probably should have found something to take the edge off, some kind of distraction. But all the frustrations she was feeling now were the sort that made it hard to focus on anything. And she didn’t want to be around anyone else right now. So, alone with her thoughts it was, then.

The League, the Rockets, Jade injured, and now…

Chosen.

Starr normally liked saying it with all the scorn and mocking that it deserved. But now she was a part of that bullshit, and that made her all too aware of the hypocrisy.

It wasn’t like much had changed. She’d already been dragged into that mess a long time ago. But making it official, putting a word to it… it meant that she could no longer pretend otherwise. That comfort was gone.

This was life now. No avoiding it.

Starr didn’t bother hiding her presence as she walked. Her boots kicked at the rocks that dared to lie in her path, sending them flying across the leaves. It shouldn’t have been surprising that someone would hear.

She just wished it was anyone other than that someone.

“Well met.”

The voice was deep, yet soft. It held an obvious presence, like the speaker could have easily made the words echo for all to hear, yet chose not to.

Starr glanced over her shoulder at the oversized bird roosting on the ledge above her. Her first instinct was to tell it to get lost, but she bit back the words and instead went with, “You know, we’re never gonna hear the end of it if the League spots you hanging around here.”

Ho-oh glanced around the area, no doubt making a show of how isolated they were. “I believe we are safe enough here.”

Starr rolled her eyes with a scoff before turning around and walking away. She’d come out here to get some space. Last thing she needed was for some legend to condescend to her.

“You seem troubled.”

Starr paused mid-step. She really, really didn’t want to dignify that with a response. But against her better judgment, she spun around and said, “Gee, what was your first clue?”

Her eyes stayed firmly on the rocks so she wouldn’t have to look up at the phoenix. She could still feel its eyes on her, though. She didn’t know how Jade or Ajia had ever gotten used to that. It was bad enough feeling her own emotions without knowing someone else could feel them too. God, how the hell was that supposed to be okay.

“Do you regret your choice?”

Starr’s fists clenched, and she jerked her eyes upward to glare at the bird. “Look, I’m not happy with any of this, that doesn’t mean I’ve changed my mind. I’m allowed to say that shit sucks.”

Ho-oh nodded. “Of course.”

Why did the damn bird have to sound so damn calm in response to everything? It was really pissing her off.

Starr kicked more rocks down the hill, just to have something to do, something to look at. In another half hour or so, it would be too dark to see them.

“It’s stupid,” Starr said, breaking the near-silence. “I still don’t get why you’d choose me. The Legendaries must be in a sad spot if you’re that desperate,” she added, giving the legend a snide grin.

Ho-oh stared at her, unyielding. “I have already given my reasons.”

Starr scoffed, turning away. Just the latest in a long line of second chances she didn’t deserve. What the hell would it even take for the people around her to say she wasn’t worth it? No, everyone kept tripping over themselves to make excuses for her. As if any of the things she’d done were forgivable.

“Would you feel better if I had chosen you out of desperation?” Ho-oh asked, tilting its head. “The simple inability to find a better candidate?”

Starr ran a hand down her face, exhaling through her nose. “No.”

Ho-oh paused, taking too long to say something. “Then, I don’t believe that you wish that to be the case.”

Starr bristled. “It’s not even like I’d be involved in any of this if my friends weren’t idiots,” she said heatedly. “I wanted to turn my back on everything and let them deal with this shit on their own, if they’re so determined to get themselves killed.”

“Yet you did not.”

God dammit. How was she supposed to argue with that. What was wrong with everyone that they could brush things off so easily? Acting like the past didn’t matter, like she could ever truly be free of it. Her past wasn’t going anywhere. It was there, on her very skin, marked in such a way that it would be with her forever.

Well… not necessarily forever. Hard not to think back on that conversation last night, with Jade. She’d dropped the subject at the time, for Jade’s sake, but the idea lingered in her head, and it wasn’t going anywhere.

Starr took a few steps toward Ho-oh. “Hey. You’re sworn to help me or whatever.”

A nod. “That’s correct.”

“I need your help with something,” she said, gesturing toward herself.

The phoenix spread its wings, leaving its perch and gliding down to land in front of her with a rush of air that sent leaves blowing across the forest floor. It gazed down at her calmly, expectantly. For a moment she wanted to know just what the hell it would take to phase the damn bird. There had to be something that’d make it react with disgust.

Well, maybe this would do it.

Starr turned and lifted the back of her shirt and let Ho-oh get a good look at that brand, the one marking her as belonging to him.

“This. I want it gone. I was going to have one of my team do it.” They’d do it, if she just gave the order. But she didn’t want something like that to be on them. Even if it wouldn’t have bothered them. It didn’t feel right.

Ho-oh stared at her for a long while, and she felt the powerful urge to make some sharp comment, daring the bird to judge her.

But in the end, Ho-oh just asked, “Do you feel you haven’t suffered enough?”

Starr froze, the words like knives she wasn’t prepared for.

As if you could suffer enough for what you did.

She grabbed her forehead. “Look, it’s not about that. I just… I want it gone. I’m sick of this… thing hanging over me.”

It was stupid. She knew that. It also felt like the easy way out. Pain that would be over and done with. Not like the scars she’d put on others, the kind that’d never really heal. But if there was any way to feel like she’d moved on, it was this. And she was tired of caring if she deserved that. She just wanted to be done.

Ho-oh considered her for some time, and she braced herself for more bullshit platitudes. But finally, the phoenix just bowed deeply and said, “We are linked. I will bear the burden with you, then.”

She could feel the legend there, in her head, through that damn link that they shared. She expected it to be like a buzzing, an itching, crowding her thoughts, making it hard to think. But right now, it just felt warm.

Ho-oh opened its eyes, flames licking its beak. “Let us begin.”




I still don’t know what you see in me.

<Perhaps you will in time.>
 

Spiteful Murkrow

Busy Writing Stories I Want to Read
Pronouns
He/Him/His
Partners
  1. nidoran-f
  2. druddigon
  3. swellow
  4. quilava-fobbie
  5. sneasel-kate
  6. heliolisk-fobbie
Heya, told you that I’d be back for more reviews of this story. It only took me -checks notes- … 11 months to make good on it. ^^;

Though hey, with the new Review Blitz right around the corner, I suppose that’s as good an opportunity to dip back into this story a bit and do some groundwork for diving into more more of it in RB4 and beyond. Especially since the next few chapters have apparently changed a bit from how I remembered them when I initially read them.

So without further ado, let’s get straight into:

Chapter 3

The Scyther shot toward us, blades outstretched. Time slowed to a crawl. I was frozen, my mind already generating the image of its scythes tearing us apart, and—

A burst of lightning! Razors leapt back to avoid the Pikachu that had dropped suddenly into its path, sparking wildly. For just a moment, the Scyther stared, its eyes perfectly emotionless. Then it lunged, blades flashing. Too late—the electric-type was already out of reach. Another lightning bolt flew, but Razors dodged it effortlessly and darted after the Pikachu, so fast it was practically a blur.

Oh right, the Scyther was explicitly named last chapter. Had to look back and remind myself of that. I kinda wonder if it might have made sense to repeat Tyson’s last line from the last chapter kinda like that one TV trope where the last few seconds of the last episode form the start of the first and provide re-contextualization, but eh. It works well enough.

I sat frozen, unable to believe it. The Pikachu was… helping us? Or maybe it just shared the same enemy? Either way, we weren’t dead yet. If the Pikachu managed to beat Razors, we actually had a chance at getting out of here alive.

Not if you just sit around gaping with your mouth open like that, Jade.

“Pssst! Over here if you want to keep your head!”

I spun around to see Spencer motioning to me from behind a stack of crates, and I immediately scrambled over to him.

“What should we do?” I asked, trying to keep my voice steady.

Firestorm: “*Oh I dunno, how about getting the hell out of here and away from the two freaky experiment things trying to tear each other apart?*” >_>;
Jade: “(Wait, are you even out of your Pokeball right now?) Yes, you see. We all want that, but we’re on an airborne plane right now, Firestorm!” >.<

“Er… I was actually hoping you’d have a plan…” he said sheepishly.

Great, so both of us were relying on the other, who was equally clueless.

Firestorm: “*... We’re doomed.*”
:ohnowen:

Jade: “Well, we’ve got a little under 50 extra chapters to make it through right about now, so let’s start trying to find ways to not be doomed, huh?” >_>;

“Oh, come on!” Rudy exclaimed. “We’re not gonna get anywhere by just hiding!”

Spencer: “Technically, the plane’s moving at hundreds of miles per hour in the air right now, so…”
:wellyousee:

Rudy: “Let me rephrase that. We’re not gonna get anywhere that we want to be by just hiding here!” >.<

Before I could protest, he pulled out a pair of Pokéballs and opened them both to release Ebony and… a Squirtle? Yeah, a Squirtle. Ebony glanced around the cargo hold with wide-eyed curiosity while the Squirtle took one look at the battle and promptly retreated into its shell.

Ebony: “*Oh, you’re a real help right now, Shellhead.*”
:gardexhausted:


“You should probably take this,” Rudy said, handing me a Pokéball. “I had to put Swift in a ball before sneaking on board. Otherwise, he couldn’t come with.”

I blinked at it. “This is Swift’s Pokéball?”

Jade: “... How did you get this again?” .-.
Rudy: “I mean, unless something changed in the last few chapters (which I guess it might’ve since our author kinda did a big overhaul and all), Swift did still come to me, so…” ^^;
Jade: “Yes but I still had his- Ugh, whatever. I’m just gonna assume the rewrite handled this. Anyhow, moving along!”

“Sure is. Now, come on! We’ve got to battle our way out of this!”

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I mean, this is exactly the reason why Air Marshals are given firearms with specially designed bullets on the flights they board. It does not take a lot to decompress a plane cabin or worse when stuff is violently flying around.

I gaped at him. “Are you serious? We’d just end up getting our Pokémon killed! We’ve got to leave this to Spencer, okay?”

Rudy: “And trusting a big Typhlosion that just blowtorched through metal chains to free you five minutes ago to not cause some sort of critical component failure vomiting fire everywhere in this plane is a better idea than getting involved in this fight with our less evolved Pokemon how, exactly?” -_-;
Jade: “(Dammit, now would’ve been a really good time to have a ‘mon that knew Sleep Powder or something like that!) Look, Spencer clearly knows what he’s doing better than we do! Just let him do his thing!” >_>;
Typhlosion: “*Oh boy, no pressure here.*” ._.;

Rudy paused, looking half offended and half confused. Like the thought of losing honestly hadn’t occurred to him. Ebony mumbled something in a disappointed tone and then put her nose against his leg reassuringly. Squirtle, on the other hand, just looked relieved.

:fearfullaugh~1:


That is a terrible omen for the sorts of situations that Rudy is going to get himself into in the future, really.

“Leave what to me?” Spencer asked, like he’d just noticed I mentioned his name. “Oh, right… Typhlosion should be able to get some ranged attacks off, right bud?” he asked. The fire beast nodded, then dropped to all fours and crept forward to get into a position where he could attack from behind cover.

Spencer: “Just… try not to melt the fuselage too much, buddy.” ^^;
Squirtle: “*Oh my gods, what is wrong with you people?!*”
:grohno~1:

Typhlosion: “*Look, I don’t see you volunteering to take point right now! So keep your mouth shut, squirt!*” >_>;

And then, with a sinking feeling, I spotted Firestorm creeping after him, eyes full of conviction. He wasn’t about to join the fight, was he? The Charmander’s tail swished as he prepared to leap. Crap, he was definitely about to. I reached out and grabbed his arm, and he jolted in surprise.

“I really don’t think that’s a good idea,” I said.

Firestorm: “*... Isn’t this literally a better idea since I’m less likely to wind up burning a hole through the fuselage right now than that Typhlosion there?*” :|
Jade: “Okay, one: Spencer’s Typhlosion can’t do that. (... I hope.) Two, do you not see the big, pissed-off Scyther of doom out there? Just how long do you think you’re going to last fighting against that?!” O_O;

Firestorm’s brow furrowed. “*Why not?*” Why not? Couldn’t he see how dangerous it was?

Jade: “Firestorm. Just look at the battle going on right now!” O_O;
- Cue looking out at Chibi and Razors casually laying waste to half the cargo hold in a game of cat and mouse -
Firestorm: “*Meh, I can take ‘em.*”
:gardeshrug~1:


“Look, it’s great that you want to help and all, but…” But he wasn’t strong enough. I couldn’t just say that, though. “…They’re too strong. The rest of us wouldn’t stand a chance if we got in their way.”

Firestorm: “*... Seriously? Not even gonna let me assist with a Smokescreen right now?*” -_-;
Jade: “Firestorm, do you even know Smokescreen right now?” >_>;
Firestorm: “Of course I do! It’s a- … Wait, is Smokescreen a Level 8 or Level 10 move in this continuity?” ^^;
Jade: “I’m just going to take that as a ‘no’ there. And that’s why you’re not assisting us right now!” >.<

Firestorm stared up at me for several seconds and then turned away, nodding distantly. Part of me wished I had his conviction. Or Rudy’s. I wasn’t the only useless one here, but I was the only one who had given up on being able to help. The realization burned.

Firestorm: “*At least let me do something like chuck Slumber Orbs at the Rocket and his-*”
Jade: “Firestorm, we live in a mainline setting.” >_>;
Firestorm: “*... Okay, fine. Scatter Bangs, then-*”
Jade: “A modern mainline setting!” >.<

Another blast of lightning. Tyson kept barking orders constantly to Razors. The Scyther slashed away mercilessly, responding instantly to Tyson’s every command with a precision that was almost scary. Still, none of its strikes managed to hit the Pikachu—it was just too fast. At this rate, the fight would come down to who tired out first.

Ebony: “*... Wait, what is our strategy here, again?*” ^^;
Jade: “I’m assuming we’re sitting tight and waiting for those two to tire each other out before Spencer steps in and-”

And then a burst of flames shot toward Razors, striking the mantis dead-on. Yes! A direct hit from Typhlosion! No way the Scyther could withstand that.

Jade: “Well, never mind then. At least the battle’s over now.”
Squirtle: “*U-Um… I’d just like to point out that that sort of confidence in stories tends to come right before-*” o_o;

…But even as I watched, Razors stood up and turned sharply in Typhlosion’s direction, preparing to leap at him.

Squirtle: “*Yeah, something like that.*”
:eltyscared:

Jade: “Holy cats, is that thing part-Rock or something?!” o_o;
Firestorm: “*Pshh, a Rock-type Scyther? Who on earth ever heard of something ridiculous like-*”
- Beat moment -
Firestorm: “*... Oh right, that exists in this franchise now, huh? I mean, I guess it’s possible, though I wouldn’t have guessed from the swiftness, the lack of axe-arms, and the non-vestigial wings.*” ^^;
Squirtle: “*We are so dead right now.*” O.O;

“Ignore them!” Tyson barked. The Scyther instantly obeyed, darting after the Pikachu once more.

Squirtle: “*Oh thank gods, I think that’s our cue to bail from-*”
Jade: “Squirtle, we are on a plane right now!” >.<
Squirtle: “*... Right. That’s a thing.” ._.

Spencer and Typhlosion exchanged bewildered looks. “Well, crap. I thought that would be, well… super effective.”

“I don’t get it…” I murmured. “How did it shrug off a Flamethrower like that? I thought Scyther were weak to fire.”

Someone needs to read up on their Sinnohan history a bit more. I’m not sure if that was touched on in this retcon, but I find it a bit funny that there’s technically a sort-of Scyther that canonically has some of Razors’ attributes now.

“We’re up against freaking hybrids, what did you expect?” Rudy exclaimed, like it was the most obvious thing in the world.

Spencer: “Them not to buff out one of its major weaknesses?” ._.
Jade: “(At least we’re not doing this in Paldea where everyone and their grandmother can apparently do the same thing as long as they have one of those Tera Orb thingies… if they exist in our world, anyways.)” >_>;

Typhlosion let out an indignant huff and peeked around the corner again, looking for another opportunity to strike.

Jade: “... You do realize that trying the same thing over and expecting different results is a mark of insanity, right?” -_-;
Typhlosion: “*Look, I can at least get a burn on him, alright? And just what are you doing other than sitting and waiting right now?!*”
:typhNOsion:


“Afraid to come out of your hidey hole?” Tyson called out to us. “That’s fine by me, Razors isn’t my only experiment!” His words were followed by the sound of two more Pokéballs opening. He was letting out more Pokémon? There was barely enough room for a battle between two Pokémon!

Typhlosion: “*U-Um, are we sure that burning a hole in the fuselage would really be such a bad thi-?*” O.O
Everyone Else: “YES!
Typhlosion: “*Just saying, it’d make this fight a lot easier right now!*”
:quilaeep:


Lightning flew wild. The Pikachu snarled something at Tyson before unleashing a blast of electricity at the other experiments. Seizing the chance, Razors shot forward, blades flashing. Then a burst of flames—Typhlosion launched another Flamethrower! Razors stopped short, forced to swerve, but that left it wide open. The Pikachu turned sharply and fired another bolt of lightning just as Typhlosion followed up with a burst of flames. Fire and lightning collided in a blinding burst with Razors caught right in the middle.

Jade: “Okay, that had to have put it down for the count-”
Squirtle: “*Can you not?! Seriously! Tempt fate like that sometime when we’re not dealing with four dangerous experimental Pokemon right now!*” >.<

“Scyy!” it cried out pitifully, dropping to the floor.

“We got it!” Spencer cried out, high-fiving Typhlosion. “I was really starting to worry there, y’know?”

Ebony: “*... Wait, but weren’t there two other Pokemon sent out like five seconds ago?*”
:joltyshrug~1:

All:
:uhhh:


Tyson pulled out Razors’s Pokéball and recalled it. He muttered a string of curses, then ordered his other experiments to focus their attention on the Pikachu. His Rhydon didn’t exactly have any space to move, but it was able to act as a shield, spreading its arms wide to protect its trainer. Pikachu hammered away at the rock-type with its tail, which gave a metallic clang with each strike. Rhydon didn’t react at all. Its eyes were creepily blank and soulless, just like the Scyther’s had been. What was the deal with these Pokémon?

Simple, they’re Deltas*.

Oh, and Chibi just flatly has Zapdos DNA spliced into him, but close enough.

“Strong enough to take down my best experiment?” Tyson called out. “You’re more of a nuisance that I gave you credit for.”

“Razors was your best guy? Awesome, that means we’re in charge now,” Spencer said, standing up. “Tell the pilot to land this thing and let us off. And also get us pizza,” he added as an afterthought.

Jade: “Um, Spencer? I’m pretty sure that guy has a gun.” O_O
Spencer: “Yeah? So? It’s not like he’d be dumb enough to actually fire it in a plane at cruising altitude, right?”
:gardeshrug~1:


Tyson stared at him, unimpressed. “You think you’re hot stuff just ‘cause you managed to beat one of my experiments with help from a crazy overpowered rat?”

“Nah, Typhlosion is the one made of hot stuff.”

Spencer: “Also, he’s a stoat, thank you very much.”
:typhNOsion:

Typhlosion: “*Technically, I’m more of a badger in this evolutionary stage.*” ^^
Tyson: “Kid. Read. A. Room.” >:|

“What the hell are you even doing here?!” Tyson roared. “I don’t have to take this crap from some random-ass kid!”

Spencer’s eyes widened with panic. Then he practically shoved me aside as he dove behind cover right before an earsplitting bang tore the air. Had—had Tyson just—?

Spencer: “Okay, never mind! He is dumb enough to fire a gun in a plane at cruising altitude!” O.O
Rudy: “You’re just realizing this now when we’re dealing with Rockets?!” >.<
Spencer: “Th-They seemed more competent than this on the tarmac!”
:grohno~1:


“He shot at me?” Spencer blurted out, picking himself up from the floor, completely stunned. “I—I know I shouldn’t be surprised, but… yeah, I wasn’t ready for that.” His eyes flickered to Typhlosion. “Er, make sure you stay out of view, bud,” he added distractedly.

Typhlosion: “*He’s… gonna decompress the cargo hold in about five seconds, isn’t he? Since I doubt those were blanks he was packing.*” ^^;

Fine, keep hiding, it doesn’t matter!” Tyson spat, motioning to one of his Pokémon. “Back there, kill them!”

Jade: “Oh joy. Just what our day needed right now.” >.<

He couldn’t possibly be expecting Rhydon to get at us with all these supplies in the way, could he? No, Rhydon was staying behind, guarding him. The other experiment, a spiky-furred Raticate, bared its teeth at us and darted forward, too fast to see. Before I could even blink, it had cleared the length of the room before being tackled by Typhlosion, whose fur blazed with flames.

Firestorm: “*Um. Jade. Just saying, now would probably be a good time for me to get involved with fighting-*” .-.
Jade: “Firestorm, you couldn’t give me a straight answer as to if you knew Smokescreen earlier!” >.<
Firestorm: “Look, I probably know it, alright!” >_>;

“Backup, backup, definitely time for backup,” Spencer muttered quickly, fumbling with his Pokéball belt and opening the first ball he could get his hands on. An Electabuzz appeared in a flash, flexing its arms and letting sparks dance between the prongs on its head.

“I thought you had six Pokémon,” Rudy said, a bit disappointed.

With a weak smile, Spencer replied, “We’d be starting one crazy party if I let out all six of my guys in here. I don’t think the plane could handle it—this battle’s probably dangerous enough as it is.”

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Really, it’s a small miracle that Chibi and Razors didn’t punch a hole in the fuselage already from their back and forth unless it was intentionally reinforced in case a moment like this happened.

He motioned forward, and his two Pokémon got into a defensive position on either side of us, ready to lash out at the experiment if it dared to come close. The Raticate darted in for another attack, but then recoiled backward when faced with Typhlosion’s fireball.

Rudy: “I sure hope that thing isn’t good at climbing.” ._.
Squirtle: “*Oh sweet Kyogre’s Fins, not you too with this ‘tempting fate’ nonsense!*” >.<

Movement behind us caught my eye. I spun around, heart racing… but it was just Rudy. He’d apparently ducked out from behind cover for just a moment—long enough to grab an open box by the corner and drag it back to our hiding spot.

“What are you doing?” I hissed.

Doing something stupidly risky since if I recall correctly from commentary elsewhere on the net, Rudy is a deconstruction of YA fiction protagonists. Granted, given that you’re cornered by a hybrid Pokemon that’s trying to bite your face off, doing something stupidly risky is probably justified right about now.

“Well, it was just sitting over there—I’ve been wanting to grab it for the past five minutes or so,” he said, proceeding to dig through its contents while Ebony stuck her nose in the box, sniffing.

Really, couldn’t he ever explain anything? But before I could reply, I noticed the “Technical Machine” stamp on the side of the box. TM discs—each of them designed to teach a different Pokémon move.

Rudy: “Jackpot.
Jade: “Rudy, can we even use these in our present circumstances?! There’s a gene-spliced Raticate trying to eat our faces right now!” >.<
Rudy: “Plot wouldn’t have me find ‘em if they weren’t going to become important, so…” :V

“I’m tired of sitting on the sidelines,” Rudy continued, occasionally pulling out a disc and looking it over before throwing it back in the box. “I know my Pokémon wouldn’t stand a chance if they got hit,”—the words sounded painful for him to admit—“but if I use these to give them sweet moves and have them attack from behind cover, they might have a shot.”

It… did seem like a good idea. We were completely surrounded by the Rockets’ supplies—why not use that to our advantage?

Rudy: “Hey, I played Capsule Monsters, these things work immediately after using ‘em, right?” ^^;
Jade: “If they don’t, we’re going to be really, really dead in short order.” .-.

A wide grin crossed Rudy’s face as he pulled out a blue TM. “Dude, Surf—I gotta teach this to Squirtle,” he said, fumbling with the disc’s case.

Jade: “Rudy. We’re in a plane’s cargo hold!” >.<
Rudy: “Yeah, and?”
Jade: “Okay, aside from the fact that it’s instantly going to wash away our cover, what do you think is going to happen when a boatload of water is just sitting around in a plane’s cargo hold undergoing slosh dynamics?!” >_>;
Rudy: “... (Wait, how do you know this stuff anyways when we’re in middle school?) Uh… it wouldn’t be that much water? Probably? Maybe?” ^^;

“Surf?” I asked incredulously. “What, do you want to flood the plane with us inside it?

Jade: “Also, that.” X(
Squirtle: “*I mean, that actually sounds like one of your better ideas for once-*”
Rudy: “Alright! Alright! I get it!” >_>;

“Fiine, I’ll pick a different one,” Rudy grumbled, tossing it back into the box before digging through the TMs again. “Hey Jade, bet you’ll be excited to see this,” he said, holding up a TM with a glossy red case and the words “Series 5: No.38” written on the front. I blinked, unsure of how I was supposed to respond.

Ah yes, Gen 5-spec Fire Blast TM. I still find your way of working in multiple generations of TMs under a shared setting umbrella to be really clever. It’s even got the same numbering system as the e-Reader cards for RS to boot.

“It’s Fire Blast,” he said, pointing at the label. “Now hurry up and use it on Charmander before I take it and use it on Ebony.”

Jade: “... Wait, you can do that?” .-.
Rudy: “Jade, the number corresponds to the Generation of TM it’s from. Everything in Series 5 is indefinitely reusable, so-” -_-;
Jade: “Okay! Okay! I get it already!” >_>;

I took the disc, unable to come up with a reply. It hadn’t occurred to me that this plan was something I could get in on.

Firestorm was staring at me intently. I glanced warily between him and the disc, then shoved it in my pocket. “No way, I still think it’s a bad idea for us to get involved.”

Rudy: “And you’re not giving it to me so that way I can use it on Ebony, why?
:eltyunamused:

Ebony: “*Yeah! I wanna be able to vomit out big fire Kanji! It’s every Fire-type’s dream!*”
:typhNOsion:


But wasn’t it his choice? If he wanted to throw himself into danger, then who was I to stop him? This was our chance to make a difference. But was I too much of a coward to take it?

Rudy: “Come on, Jade. What’s the worst that could happen?”
Jade: “The experiments outspeed Ebony and Firestorm and murder them out of existence while they try to use Fire Blast for the first time with zero practice or training.” :|
- Beat moment -
Rudy: “Okay, what’s the second worst thing that could happen?” >_>;
Jade: “Ebony and Firestorm use Fire Blast for the first time with zero practice or training and set an uncontrolled fire in the cargo hold or else melt a hole through the fuselage.” >:|
Rudy: “Gee, aren’t you just little Miss Optimism right about now?” >.<

In the midst of the ongoing battle, the Pikachu had given up on trying to get at Tyson and was now letting loose strings of lightning at anyone that came too close. Its movements had grown shaky from exhaustion. Sparks shot out of its fur at random. The fire was now all but gone from its eyes, and it almost looked… desperate. The experiment made one last attempt to jump over the Pokémon and blast them all, but came up with nothing but sparks. Then its eyes rolled back, and it collapsed limply off to the side of the cargo bay.

Rudy: “... Jade?! Having that Fire Blast TM would be nice right about now! Since the rest of those experiments aren’t distracted anymore!” O.O

I stared at the fallen Pikachu for a long while. At first, the experiment had seemed like our only hope. Then, more like a violent wild card. And now, I couldn’t help feeling sorry for it, and what it must have gone through to have ended up like this. Raised as a lab experiment and then branded a failure…

Time seemed to stop as I cautiously edged toward the experiment. I couldn’t explain why I was doing it… I just was. Five feet away, an ear twitched, and I flinched. Suddenly, its face snapped toward me, fur standing on end. I stumbled backward, throwing my arms in front of my face. But the hybrid was out of power—nothing came out but sparks. There wasn’t much it could do to me now.

“What’re you doing?” Rudy hissed. “Didn’t you see how crazy that thing is?”

Rudy: “Jade, you are never allowed to give me crap for wanting to teach Ebony Fire Blast after this.” >_>;

“It’s out of power,” I said defensively. “And it’s not like it’s on Tyson’s side or anything. It’s been fighting against him all this time, so we might be able to—”

“Pikaa’pi,” the Pikachu growled, slowly lifting its upper body from the floor and glowering at me. “Pikapi ‘chuu pi‘piika—”

Rudy: “I’m… just gonna back away right now.” O_O;

“Wait, wait, talk slower,” I stammered, unable to translate the Pokéspeech quickly enough.

I honestly didn’t expect it to listen, but it stopped. It actually stopped, and it gave me a skeptical glare before saying, slowly and deliberately, “*I don’t need your pity, human. This is my problem, not yours; stay out of it.*”

Jade: “No, no. This is kinda our problem too since your enemies are going to kill us when you’re no longer a problem for them.”
:grohno~1:


“It’s not like we asked to be involved in this,” I replied heatedly. I was just trying to help him… and admittedly hoping that he would help us in return.

Pikachu didn’t reply. In fact, he was now ignoring me in favor of staring at the battle with a pained look on his face. He muttered something under his breath. And then he leaped to his feet and dashed away.

“Wait, come back!” I yelled. But he didn’t stop.

Rudy: “Um. Jade? Is Spencer’s Typhlosion still keeping that Raticate busy? Since if he is, you should really pass that Fire Blast TM over-” o_o;
Jade: “Not now, Rudy!” >.<

“So… think it’s gonna help us?” Rudy spoke up all of a sudden.

I shrugged. It was the only response I could give. I had no idea what he was planning. The fight was still raging and he was out of electricity, so I wasn’t sure what else he could do.

Crack!

Jade: “... Oh, that ain’t good.”
:uhhh:

Rudy: “I wanted to use this time to make our Pokemon stronger, but noooo...” >_>;

The noise had come from the front of the cargo hold. I couldn’t help it—I peeked over the boxes. Pikachu was standing atop a wall of crates, panting hard, his tail glowing. He leaped at the wall and smashed his tail into the window. Cracks spread across the surface.

… Oh, so Chibi is going to decompress the cargo hold. I definitely didn’t remember that from the original version of events. That’s at once brilliant and:

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Tyson spun around. “Number nine, what the hell are you—?” His face went pale. “Stop that thing, now!” he yelled, and his Rhydon lunged forward, smashing through a wall of boxes and slamming a heavy fist into Pikachu. I flinched as the mouse’s body flew through the air, landing in a crumpled heap.

Tyson: “Seriously, who the hell taught those things about air pressure differences?” o_o;

Goddamn it, number nine, either you’ve got a death wish or you really are stupid enough to think you can escape by jumping out the window,” Tyson spat, still pale.

… Or maybe they weren’t taught that, since… yeah. Things would’ve gone really sideways had Chibi successfully broken that window.

Spencer: “... Says the guy who shot at me in a moving airplane.” >_>;
Tyson: “Hey kid, do you want me to shoot again? No? Then shut the hell up!” >:|

Pikachu slowly picked himself up from the floor, face screwed up with pain. He stared downward for a few moments before nodding to himself, like he’d just decided something. Then he took off running.

I didn’t get it. Had he… wanted to put a hole in the plane? But that would let all the air out, and…

:ohnowen:


I can see those gears in your head turning, Jade, and it’s starting to scare me.

Tyson spun around to stare at us in horror, like he’d just made the same realization. “Stop that thing now or we’re all dead!!”

Rudy: “I’m sorry, why do we want to help you again?”
Tyson: “Because if that window goes, the plane decompresses, you stupid brat!” >.<
Spencer: “Oh yeah, and like firing live ammunition didn’t already carry a massive risk of-” >_>;
Tyson: “Look, I know this plane and the rounds in my gun better than you! Shut up and stop that thing already!”

Pikachu shot past me towards the back of the jet. Without thinking, I bolted after him, not even sure what was driving my legs forward.

“No, please don’t!” I yelled, unsure of what else to do.

Oh yeah, that’ll stop him.

He paused suddenly. No way—he had actually listened to me? It was only for a second. Then he shot toward Spencer’s Electabuzz.

Wow, that actually worked-

“What is he—?” I gasped.

“Electabuzz, stop him!” Spencer called out in confusion.

… Whelp, I guess that would explain a few things about Chibi’s pissy attitude a few chapters after this.

The electric-type threw up its arms and unleashed a blast of lightning. Pikachu didn’t even attempt to dodge—the attack struck, and he cried out in pain, tail raised high. But he just stood there, taking the attack. Almost like it was what he’d wanted. Electabuzz glanced back at Spencer in confusion before ending the blast. The rest of the electricity flowed into the hybrid’s body, and his eyes snapped open with a newfound fire.

Tyson: “You dense mother-
:hisssssss:

Spencer: “Hey, you could’ve warned me that your experimental Pikachu had Motor Drive! Or Volt Absorb! Or whatever the hell that was!” >.<

“Did… did he just absorb the lightning?” I muttered, stunned. No one answered. None of us knew what to do now. Tyson’s Raticate shot past us in a blur, but even with its speed, it wouldn’t catch up in time. Pikachu glanced back at me with… almost an apologetic look. Then he turned away and fired all his power at the wall before collapsing.

Rudy: “... Wait, why’s this a bad thing again?” ^^;

Everything happened too fast to process. First lightning, then an explosion ripping through the back of the plane. Air rushed out, pulling me toward the hole. My arms flailed in a panic, grasping at the ropes around the boxes closest to me. Then the sound of a Pokéball opening, followed by a high-pitched beam, and the airflow suddenly stopped.

Rudy: “Right. That would be why it’s a bad thing. J-Jade! Hang in there!” O.O

It was all over within a few seconds. I lay there in a daze, breathing hard and taking a few seconds to realize that I could still breathe. Then I whirled around to see that the hole was completely sealed with glittering ice crystals. How…?

A Dewgong sat next to Spencer, exhaling frosty air. Spencer collapsed against the Pokémon’s side, letting out a huge sigh of relief.

I stared openmouthed. “That… that was quick thinking.”

Jade: “Wait, that worked?
Spencer: “Hey, it works in that one Saturday morning cartoon with the Pokemon on boats.” ^^;
Jade: “... But this is a plane.” .-.
Rudy: “Jade, are you seriously going to question not getting sucked out of a plane and falling to your death right now?” >_>;

“Yeah? It happens sometimes,” Spencer said, rubbing the back of his head before patting the ice-type. “Nice one,” he said.

Spencer: “… That Rocket’s still there and holding his gun right at me, isn’t he?” ^^;

Except… the hole may have been sealed, but that wasn’t the only damage that had been done. Through the window, I could see black smoke billowing from a ruined tail engine. Were we losing altitude? Were we going to crash?

Narrator:
:blobyes:

Jade: “I… really could’ve gone without knowing that, really.” ._.

Tyson was having a furious back-and-forth over his communicator with someone. “It’s not my goddamn fault, it was number nine!” He listened to the response with a look of building rage before roaring back, “I’ve been trying to!” and shutting the device off.

Spencer: “Oh, so the Rocket is still there and didn’t get sucked out of the cargo hold. A-At least he doesn’t have us at gunpoint yet?” ^^;

Then his eyes fell on us. “This is all your fault,” he snarled, reaching for his belt.

Spencer: “Are you trying to decompress the cargo hold again?! Seriously, what have I told you about live ammunition and planes-!” >.<
Tyson: “Shut up already!
:hisssssss:


The horrible truth hit me—after all the commotion, we weren’t behind cover anymore. Tyson had just grabbed his gun, he had a clear shot, but Spencer didn’t look concerned? Why not?!

And then all I could do was stare dumbfounded as Typhlosion leapt from nowhere and grabbed Tyson in a bear hug, knocking the gun aside.

“What,” I said stupidly.

Typhlosion: “*I mean, I could’ve set him on fire as he crumpled to the floor and screamed bloody murder. But I’m pretty sure our contract says that all the real heavy stuff’s supposed to wait about 20 chapters.*” ^^;
Jade: “Oh yay me.” ._.

“Hey, that worked even better than I expected,” Spencer said, giving a massive sigh of relief. “It’s always great when that happens, y’know?”

Tyson: “The plane is losing altitude, you dumb brat!
:hisssssss:

Typhlosion: “*You sure didn’t seem concerned about that 10 seconds ago, you’ll live a bit.*”
:typhNOsion:


I stared. “How… how did you…?”

“Well, I knew we’d never get anywhere with him having a gun and all, so with all the Pikachu chaos, I told Typhlosion to hide and take him down the first chance he got,”

Spencer: “Honestly, considering how he was shooting it in here, it’s really for everyone’s benefit that Typhlosion focused on taking him down. Since… uh… yeah. One cabin decompression’s too many for me, really.” ^^;

I couldn’t think of anything to say. I was too shocked by how much the tables had turned in our favor with just that one move.

Tyson: “The. Plane. Is. Losing. Altitude!” >.<
Jade: “... Right, we still need to deal with that at some point.” ^^;

“What the hell do you think you’re doing?! Do you have any idea who you’re dealing with?!” Tyson raged, struggling against Typhlosion’s hold.

“I think we’re dealing with someone I just beat,” Spencer said. “You should probably recall your Pokémon now; it’ll make things easier.”

Rudy: “For the record, you were sure a hell of a lot more concerned about shooting us than doing anything about the plane.”
:eltyunamused:

Tyson: “Shooting you would get you out of the way so that way I could deal with the plane!” >.<
Jade: “I’m… starting to see how Rudy and Spencer were able to sneak onboard in the first place.”
:UnimpressedCabot:


Typhlosion flexed his claws threateningly to emphasize the point, letting waves of heat shimmer around them. Tyson’s Pokémon were standing still, blankly awaiting orders. Almost like they couldn’t think for themselves. Clenching his teeth, Tyson managed to unclip two Pokéballs from his belt and recall his Pokémon

“So, how about you tell us if there’s any chance we can land this thing,” Spencer said simply.

Typhlosion: “*... Um, Spencer? Why are we expecting this guy to be cooperative again?*”
Spencer: “Because we’re all going to die if he isn’t?” ^^;
Typhlosion: “*That… uh… isn’t making me feel more confident right now.*” ._.

Tyson glared. At first it seemed like he wasn’t going to say anything. But after several seconds, he finally replied, his words extremely slow like it was painful just talking to us. “With a missing engine, we probably won’t reach the base we were supposed to land at.”

“Eh, well, the Rocket base didn’t sound fun. Anyways, you should probably figure out if we can land it anywhere else.”

I know I would have flinched if I’d been at the receiving end of the venomous glare that followed. But still… Tyson must have realized that his only chance at survival meant saving us as well. Taking a deep breath, he said, “I need to check with the pilots, but… if we use the GPS to see if there’s a big enough clearing ahead of us, we might have a chance of making a rough landing.”

Jade: “I’m sorry, why are we trusting you again?”
:CabotUhhh:

Tyson: “Because like your brat friend said, if somebody doesn’t land this thing, we’re all going to die?”
- Beat moment -
Jade: “Right, sounds like a good reason to trust you in that case.” ._.;

“Alright, sounds like you’ve got it under control. Typhlosion, you be his copilot, m’kay?” Despite Spencer’s bright tone, Typhlosion understood the serious intent behind the request, and released his hold, still keeping a menacing eye on Tyson.

Typhlosion: “*... Wait, didn’t this guy have a gun? Not that I expect him to be hard to handle, but wouldn’t it be safer for you to just hold him at gunpoint in the cabin?*” ^^;
Spencer: “Typhlosion, does it look like I’ve ever handled a gun before? Much less a handgun?
Typhlosion: “*... Right, good point, really.*”

Tyson glowered at the fire beast, but there was nothing he could do. He pulled out his communicator and growled something at whoever was on the other end, most likely the pilots.

“And that’s that,” Spencer said rather matter-of-factly, walking back to me and Rudy.

Jade: “... Wait, shouldn’t we be keeping an eye on him to make sure that he’s not giving away our position to his buddies?” .-.
Spencer: “Nah, Typhlosion will let us know if he’s up to any funny business.”
Jade: “... Does Typhlosion even understand stuff like human terms for coordinates or potential secret code that Rockets have with one another?” .-.
- Beat moment -
Rudy: “Um… yeah, maybe we should stay a bit closer to the cockpit right about now.”

At first, all I could do was stare openmouthed. A wave of laughter suddenly overtook me from sheer relief. “That’s it, then. We’ll be miles away from any other Rockets when we land—there’ll be nothing stopping us from getting out of here.” The shock was wearing off and my body felt lighter with each passing moment. I couldn’t believe it, but we’d won. Well, Spencer had, anyway.

Eleven words thought seconds from disaster.

“See, Jade?” Rudy said, elbowing me lightly in the ribs. “Told you we’d be able to get out of this.”

I couldn’t help laughing again. “You never had to see what the Rockets could really do… but I’m glad.”

Jade: “... Weren’t we right on our way to the cockpit right now?” ^^;
Rudy: “Meh, it’s not going anywhere fast.”

Still a bit lightheaded, I sank back against a wall of boxes, infinitely glad for a chance to breathe. The adrenaline slowly died down as that crushing feeling of certain death finally vanished. We were going to make it. Now the only problem was figuring out what to do once we landed.

Eh, I’d worry about it when the time came.

Jade: “I should probably feel a bit less relieved when the tail engine’s spewing black smoke right about now and there’s a massive gash in the fuselage papered over by an ice plug. But meh. I earned this.” ^^;

I felt warmth by my side; Firestorm had plopped down next to me, looking a bit tired.

“You holding out okay?” I asked.

Firestorm: “*I guess, but you could’ve let me fight back there.*” >_>;
Jade: “(Oh goodness, not this again.)” -_-;

He nodded. Though I couldn’t figure out why he’d been glued to me throughout the whole ordeal, in an odd way it felt… reassuring. And then it hit me—Swift was here too. I grabbed his Pokéball from my pocket, and with a flash of light, the Pidgey appeared, ruffling his feathers.

“It’s so good to see you,” I said, holding out my arm. He immediately fluttered up to my shoulder and sat there with his feathers fluffed out. It was a familiar, comforting warmth, having him there.

Swift: “*I’d just like to remind you that none of this would’ve happened if we left to get that Charmander medical attention.*” >v>;
Jade: “Look, I’m pretty sure that that sequence of events has changed since the last this reviewer wrote something up for this story, so… maybe let’s call it a wash?”
:joltyshrug~1:

Swift: “*... Fine.*”

It struck me that I should probably say something. “Uh… Swift, this is Firestorm. Firestorm, Swift.” Lame, but I was never very good at introductions.

Swift: “*Wait, you seriously named him Firestorm, Jade? Isn’t that just a little morbid of you-?*”
:what:

Firestorm: “*I already had the name before the whole ‘getting caught in a burning forest’ thing.*”
Swift: “*Oh, so the universe just has it out for you, then. That’s… ever so slightly concerning there.*” -v-;

Despite my failure at figuring out how to start a normal conversation, Firestorm took it upon himself to start one. “*How did you get involved in this?*”

I laughed slightly. “Wrong place at the wrong time. Just like you, I guess.”

He nodded. “*I’ve had lots of that.*”

Swift: “*Some parts of which was a bit more self-inflicted than others.*” >v>;
Jade: “Swift, hush.

I wanted to ask him what he’d gone through before I found him, but I couldn’t think of a delicate way to ask. After a while, I settled on, “Did… did you even see what caused the fire?”

He hesitated a bit before answering slowly. “*The others all ran away. Some of them were shouting about the Great Fire Beast. I never saw it, though.*”

Jade: “The what now?”
Swift: “*Entei? You know, the ‘Great Fire Beast’ you saw those Rockets carting off?*”
Jade: “... Right, should’ve figured.”

I stared downward, images from the incident burned into my memory. It still felt bizarre and unreal. “That fire was caused by humans trying to catch Entei. I actually saw it happen, but I couldn’t do anything about it.”

Firestorm looked a bit puzzled at first. “*Catch? Humans can… catch Legendaries? Just like Pokémon?*”

Jade: “I mean, they technically are Pokemon themselves, so… uh… in theory it should be possible?” .-.

To be honest, it was not something that had really crossed my mind before, either. The Legendaries had always felt just… on a level above Pokémon or humans. Sure, every school-age kid in the world dreamed of partnering with one, but legends didn’t need partners. They were already strong enough to beat any foe. And yet… Entei had been taken by force. And it would probably happen again, unless…

I’m now morbidly curious as to if it’s possible for something like Silver (the overgrown seabird) to exist in this continuity, and if so, how well he’d hold up to that perception there.

“You know… I met someone who was trying to stop it. He couldn’t do it on his own, but he was trying to get people to help him,” I said, more thinking aloud than actually hoping for a response.

Firestorm: “*Wait, so what did that person do to try and stop things again?*”
Jade: “Gave me a business card and an ominous speech before leaving?” ^^;
- Beat moment -
Firestorm: “*I think you need to find people who are doing more to try and stop things like these.*” >_>;
Jade: “Look, it was an initial encounter, alright?!” >.<

A voice chirped, catching me off guard. I had been so focused on the Charmander that hearing a different form of Pokéspeech was a bit disorienting. I turned toward Swift and was met with a very intent look. Then my brain finished processing that he’d asked if I was going to help.

I’m actually curious now as to if there’s also regional variations of Pokespeech in this setting or not. Since if it already varies perceptibly for humans between species.

“I… hadn’t really considered his offer until now,” I said weakly. “I mean… what could someone like me do to help?”

“*Legendaries shouldn’t be captured,*” the Pidgey replied. I couldn’t help feeling surprised by how firmly he’d said it. Swift rarely talked at all, and I never would have described him as forceful.

Swift: “*I mean, they’re only living gods to us and the premise of them being bullied around to do anything is a moral abomination, so…*” >v>;
Jade: “... Right, when you put it that way, I guess it’s a bit less surprising.”

I couldn’t think of anything to say in response, so I just found myself looking away sheepishly. The lull in the conversation suddenly made me aware that I could feel the plane descending more rapidly now. Rudy didn’t seem to have noticed it—he’d gone back to digging through the TM box with Ebony. Spencer was chatting away at his Electabuzz and Dewgong.

Swift: “*Um. Guys?*” OvO;

Swift perked up slightly, like something was about to happen. I was about to ask what was wrong when it happened. First a rumbling impact that shook the whole plane, followed by a sharp slowdown that sent me flying headlong into the side of a crate. I clutched onto it instinctively and screwed my eyes shut as loose items smacked into my back. The air was filled with rumbling, shouting, and the frantic cries of more Pokémon than I could count. Claws gripped my shoulder and I cracked an eye to see Firestorm grabbing hold and refusing to let go.

Swift: “*Whelp, too late.*” @v@
Rudy: “Spencer, I thought that your stoat was on top of things in the cockpit!” @.@
Spencer: “Look, this is news to me here as well!” @.@

Finally, after what felt like ages, the plane grinded to a halt. I would have sunk to the floor in relief if I hadn’t already been on the floor.

“What the heck was that?!” Rudy yelled, shoving a crate aside and standing to his feet.

Jade: “We landed. Obviously.”
Rudy: “Yeah, but how did we not get a warning during all of that?!” >.<

“He wanted us to land the plane. It’s landed,” Tyson replied coldly, a smug edge to his voice. He was now leaning against the doorway to the cargo hold. Typhlosion stood firmly next to him, fixing him with a suspicious glare, but Tyson didn’t seem to care anymore.

Spencer: “Typhlosion, how did you see the ground coming and just not ever tell me about that?!” >_<;
Typhlosion: “*... Wait, so you mean, that whole ‘hit the ground and feel like you’re stuck in a rock tumbler’ thing wasn’t supposed to happen?*” ^^;

“Well, I don’t know about you guys, but I don’t think I’ll be flying Rocket Airlines again anytime soon. I say we get out of here now, and worry about spamming them with bad reviews later,” Spencer said, walking over.

“Where is here, exactly?” I said, glancing around for a window. I spotted one on the far end of the hangar and started walking toward it, but Rudy beat me there. It looked like we had crash-landed on the edge of a forest, right alongside a rocky outcropping.

Jade: “Um, guys, shouldn’t we be more worried about how the Rocket that was trying to kill us 15 minutes ago sounds smug and self-satisfied right now?” ._.;
Rudy: “Nah, he’s probably just putting up a front and bluffing.”

“Alright, so… for starters, how do we get out of the plane?” I asked.

I mean, you could try melting the ice plug over the giant hole in the side? :V

“We could try melting through the ice,” Spencer said, jerking a thumb toward the hole in the back of the plane. “I’ve got two fire-types, so—”

“You have another fire-type?” Rudy said, looking shocked. “Why didn’t you use it earlier?”

Spencer: “Look, buddy. Do you have any idea how much of a pain it is to manage two Pokemon out on the field at once already?” >_>;
Rudy: “We were facing down a guy with a gun!” >.<

“I didn’t need to?” Spencer said, shrugging as he recalled Electabuzz and opened a different Pokéball. The flash of light took the form of a huge striped firedog—taller than any of us. The Arcanine tossed its head with a proud look upon noticing the attention, ruffling its thick, fluffy mane.

I can already hear the “who’s a good boy, yes you are”s through the screen right now.
:bleplithe:


“No way…” Rudy breathed, staring at the firedog in awe. “Maybe I should’ve tried to convince Chloe to come with…”

“Come on, let’s get outta here,” Spencer said cheerfully, motioning to his Arcanine.

“What are you doing?!” Tyson demanded all of a sudden.

Jade: “I told you two that we should’ve been worried about how smug and self-satisfied he sounded.” >_>;

“Getting out of here. Why, do you like having us around?” Spencer asked tauntingly.

- Tyson gets a dangerous glint in his eyes -
Tyson: “Tell me, kiddos. Have you ever heard of a ‘Automatic Dependent Surveillance–Broadcast Transponder’ before?”
:plotcat:

Rudy: “No, why? Is that some piece of fancy tech your plane has? Since I don’t think it’s going to help you much here.”
:eltyunamused:


Tyson clenched his teeth. “You idiots don’t even know where we are. What are you supposed to do, wander around the forest?”

I raised an eyebrow. What was he trying to accomplish… getting us to stay here? How on earth would that help him, given his situation?

Tyson: “Figured you wouldn’t have. Anyhow, just about every bird in the sky has ‘em these days. It periodically sends out messages from an onboard transmitter about a plane’s identification, current position, altitude and velocity. Handy for air traffic control to keep ‘em from running into each other in midair.”
:nyehehe:

Rudy: “And that helps you when the plane is stuck on the ground in the middle of nowhere how? I don’t exactly see a whole lot in the way of air traffic control anywhere around here!”
:eltywtf:


Even weirder was the fact that until we had tried to leave, Tyson had seemed weirdly okay with everything that was going on. Earlier he’d been trying his hardest not to explode with rage. Now he just seemed… impatient.

“You guys?” I said, lowering my voice to a whisper. “Anyone else think it’s weird that Tyson’s not pissed at us anymore?”

“Maybe he found his anger meds?” Spencer said with a weak grin. Rudy and I glanced at each other, then back at Spencer, unimpressed.

Tyson: “Okay, I’ll spell it out for you since you’re obviously a few fries short of a kiddie meal. But right now, that transponder is giving out a signal broadcasting this plane’s exact location, its altitude here on the ground, and the fact that it’s going nowhere fast.”
Rudy: “Look, just spit it out already!”
:REElithe:


“Yeah, okay, that was stupid,” he said, putting a hand to his forehead. “Anyways, think he’s planning something?”

- Tyson folds his arms with a smug grin -
Tyson: “... Do you really think Team Rocket wouldn’t keep track of where its own aircraft are?”
:smugcat:

All: “...”
:eltyscared:


I couldn’t really tell. He wasn’t really doing anything, although every so often he’d glance down at the small red and black handheld that he’d been using as a GPS.

Wait… his GPS.

“Oh crap, that’s not a phone, is it?” I said, my mouth dropping.

Spencer and Rudy looked up at him immediately. Tyson must have noticed that we were staring at him because he said, “It’s a GPS, idiots,” before going back to fiddling with the buttons.

I mean, Tyson technically didn’t need this device in order to give away his position considering standard features of modern aircraft and how flying unmarked aircraft is a serious hazard for outing that you’re up to something to the outside world. But eh, I’m guessing his GPS is a bit more accurate than the one chilling in what’s left of his plane.

Tyson: “Also, always handy to have a fallback in case those transmitters crapped out. Helps the recovery crew find stuff faster!”
:trollzel:

Jade: “Oh dammit. I knew there was something up with how smug he was being!”
:ScaredCabot:


“Hey Typhlosion, I really need to have what he’s holding. Like, right now,” Spencer called out.

“Oh, come on!” Tyson roared before being promptly tackled by the fire beast. After a few seconds of struggle, Typhlosion tossed the black device to Spencer, who caught it.

“Give that the hell back, what do you need it for?!” Tyson raged at us from under Typhlosion’s hold.

Tyson: “Seriously, you’re already screwed and wasting time you could be spending trying to run off with your tails between your legs!” >.<

“I just really love GPSs,” Spencer replied as he pressed a button on the device, which had the letters “R-com” inscribed on the front. Both Rudy and I leaned in to get a look at the screen. A half-finished text message read, “Landed on schedule. Requesting your current location and—”

“What,” I said flatly, staring at the message. “Don’t tell me…”

Spencer flipped through the previous messages in the conversation. “Team dispatched. ETA 1815.” “Coordinates sent. Crash time approx. 1810.”

Well I suppose that’ll definitely help find a plane faster than Flightradar24. Though that makes me wonder if the in-setting analogue to that also picked up this crash on its tracker or not.

Maaaaaybe not if Rockets are ballsy enough to just fly aircraft without normal tracking equipment and just pay off the appropriate air control authorities every time a black helicopter with no ID to speak of pops up on the radar. Though then again, considering what happens in the chapter right after this one... this plane still showing up on flight trackers would explain a few things that go down in it.

All three of us looked up at each other incredulously. I glanced over at Tyson to see an incredibly smug grin. “I was able to call for backup as soon as I figured out where we’d land,” he said. “Since we were both converging on the same spot, I bet they’ll be here any second.”

Tyson: “So congrats, kids. You played yourselves.”
:blepcat:


It felt as though the air had been sucked from the room. For several seconds, no one said anything. There wasn’t anything to say. I could already feel a hole in my stomach from dread. We had been in the clear. We were going to make it. And then this.

“Actually!” Spencer exclaimed suddenly. “I just remembered I have somewhere very important to be, so y’know, I’m just gonna have to take a rain check on the whole battling Rockets to the death thing, so sorry I can’t make it, very urgent, hope you’ll understand, hey guys you’re invited too, let’s go now, Arcanine!

Tyson:
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Jade: “I should probably feel more insulted by that right now, but… yeah, getting on that Arcanine sounds good right about now.” O_O;

On that last word, Arcanine barked out a blazing Flamethrower, instantly bursting clean through the ice at the back of the plane and filling the cargo hold with steam.

“Alright, get on board everyone, or we’ll be late for our date with getting-the-frick-out-of-here!” Spencer exclaimed. Rudy nodded sharply, recalling his Pokémon and jumping up onto the firedog’s back. I motioned for Swift to follow us in the air before glancing around my feet and seeing Firestorm standing there, looking wary. And then, out of the corner of my eye, I spotted the experimental Pikachu’s limp form, still unconscious from destroying the plane’s engines earlier.

Rudy: “Jade, are you serious right now?!” >.<
Jade: “Yes? It’s not like we’re just going to let the Rockets walk off with him, are we?” ^^;

It was more of an impulse than anything. I dashed over, snatched the Pikachu with my right arm before scooping up Firestorm under my left and throwing a leg over the Arcanine’s back. I glanced back at Spencer, who motioned to Typhlosion, who threw Tyson into a pile of boxes and hurriedly dashed forward on all fours, pausing just long enough for Spencer to leap onto its back. That was all I saw before Arcanine sprung through the hole in the ice, landing nimbly on the plane’s tail fin before bounding down to the ground.

Jade: “So, uh… how fast can your dog run again?” ._.;

And then the screeching of tires and what sounded like gunfire tore the air. Spencer shouted something as he and Typhlosion jumped through the ice hole, and then I was nearly thrown off as the firedog bolted forward with an insane rush of speed, apparently trying to avoid something. More yelling, more gunshots. Trees flew by as Arcanine dashed up the side of the rocky ledges alongside the crash site, finally ducking down behind a large boulder, followed by Typhlosion.

Spencer: “Fast enough, I hope!” O_O;

I slid down from Arcanine’s back, feeling slightly dizzy as I set Firestorm and Pikachu on the ground. “What… what is going on,” I gasped, still disoriented.

“The Rockets were on the other side of the jet,” Spencer managed. “They tried firing at us; couldn’t really get a clear shot, though.”

Jade: “... Of course.” >.<
Rudy: “Okay, in retrospect, it probably wasn’t a good idea to just leave Spencer’s stoat all alone with that Rocket in the cockpit given that he’s not literate in human scripts.” ._.;

“What do we do now?!” I panicked.

“I don’t know, I didn’t think they’d be here already!” Spencer exclaimed. “We could just try making a break for it?”

Jade: “Spencer. They. Have. Guns!” >_>;

“Can your Pokémon outrun jeeps?” Rudy asked, sounding honestly optimistic about it.

“I don’t know—maybe over a short distance?”

Jade: “You can just say ‘no’, you know!” >.<

At that moment, the jeeps pulled up and skidded to a stop on our side of the jet, throwing dust into the air. I peeked around the ledge to see one of the Rockets jump out in one smooth motion and proceed to look over the damage done to the plane.

“You know, Tyson, when you said the transport jet was going to crash, I never would’ve guessed it was because of some random stowaway kids and a prisoner you were supposed to bring to me,” she said icily. Was she the executive I was supposed to be interrogated by?

… Wait, just how close were they to their target airfield such that Jade’s intended interrogator could make it out in person to their crash-landing? Since this gives off some major “just barely missed the runway” vibes. .-.

“I—but—don’t go blaming this on me,” Tyson called out. I glanced up to see him now standing on the tail fin, looking bruised and battered. “And why didn’t you bring more backup?! Just a bunch of grunts?” He sounded on the verge of losing it.

Rudy: “You know, now would be a good time to try and sneak off and-”
Jade: “Rudy. They. Have. Guns.” >.<
Rudy: “... Right. Almost forgot about that.” ._.

“Cleaning up after the mess you made of the jet sounds like grunt work to me,” she replied lazily. “That leaves me stuck taking care of the idiot kids.”

“They’re not just kids,” Tyson said defensively. “One of them has Pokémon that are a match for my experi—”

“Tyson, your experiments were never all that amazing anyway,” she cut in, waving a hand dismissively. “I don’t even know why you still bother training them after all the progress that your division’s made on number thirty-six.”

… Huh, somehow I forgot that Tyson was personally involved in making Chibi and the rest of the gang. Guess he’s pretty hands-on as an operative given that he was able to pilot his own plane solo.

“Better than using regular Pokémon,” Tyson shot back. “And I think you’re forgetting that it’s what I was assigned to do. Of course, you wouldn’t know what that’s like because the second you joined, you were—”

“Still going on with that crap about how I was always an executive, is that it?” she replied icily. “I think you should watch what you say there Tyson, unless you feel secure enough in your position to pick fights with me.” Tyson flinched and didn’t say anything more.

Rudy: “Not that the Rocket office politics isn’t fascinating, but we should really try and figure out a way to get Spencer’s dog out of their firing range right about now.” o_o;

I really had no idea what they were talking about. Especially confusing was the fact that the executive didn’t sound much older than eighteen. Could someone so young be ranked that highly on Team Rocket?

I mean, 10-year olds apparently can sweep the Indigo League, are you really shocked that 18-year olds can get up there in the ranks of organized crime in this world? :V

“Anyway, if you’re done whining, time for me to fix this mess,” the executive said, turning and walking toward us, her heavy combat boots kicking up dirt.

That was when we got our first real look at her. She had a tough build with a hardened and mature look about her, which almost made me forget that she was probably younger than most of the other Rockets there. The way she carried herself just oozed confidence. Somehow, I couldn’t help getting the feeling that fighting her would be a very, very bad idea.

Rudy: “... I think I can take her-”
Jade: “Rudy. Shut. Up.” >.<

“Spencer, uh… we need a plan. Like now,” I muttered, my voice shaking.

“Gimme a sec. At least they can’t shoot us while we’re back here, right?”

Um. Yes they can assuming they’re rocking heavy enough firearms. Or else just have Pokemon punch holes into the plane and shoot through those.

This is also the same reason why you don’t want to take shelter behind car doors in a gunfight. A lot of bullets will just punch through the relatively thin metal of the door panels and carry on to hit you.

I heard the sound of several Pokéballs opening and looked back at the Rocket to see—“Oh crap, here they come!”

Spencer’s eyes went wide with panic as he motioned for his two fire-types to get on our other side so they could attack from behind the rocks. A fierce howl filled the air—it sounded like an Arcanine, but it wasn’t Spencer’s.

Jade: “So things are certainly going well™ right now.” O.O

I edged around the corner just enough to see another striped firedog, this one flashing a horrifyingly vicious snarl at us. Typhlosion and Arcanine recoiled slightly, losing some of the tension in their stances.

“Crap, gonna hit us with Intimidate, is that it?” Spencer mumbled through gritted teeth. “Time for ranged moves, then. Both of you, Flamethrower!”

Oh right, Intimidate is not a passive ability in this setting. Though it’s a decent translation for how Intimidate as an ability doesn’t carry over to Pokemon being absolute qts in stuff like Amie/Refresh.

Twin streams of fire flew down the hill, striking the other Arcanine head-on. It snarled as it weathered the assault, wincing despite its fire resistance. But then a tan horse jumped in front of the blaze, scattering the flames as its whole body glowed with a fiery sheen. It didn’t even seem to notice that it was being hit. In fact, its fiery mane and tail only intensified.

Spencer: “Oh come on!
:WHY:

Spencer’s Arcanine: “*Gee, how do you think I feel right now?!*”
:eltyscared:


“Did that just make it stronger? Oh crap, it must have Flash Fire. Typhlosion, stop the Flamethrower and use Dig! Arcanine—” Spencer’s face suddenly lit up like he’d just made the best realization of his life. “Dude, I’ve got it! Typhlosion, quick—use Flamethrower on Arcanine!!”

Rudy: “Dude, how do you not know your own Pokemon’s ability?!” >.<
Spencer: “Yeah, yeah, shut up. Let’s see you do better under stress, huh?” >_>;

Typhlosion paused its digging just long enough to spit out a fireball before disappearing underground. Arcanine’s coat glowed red as the flames seeped into its fur, empowering it.

Typhlosion: “*... Boy do I hope that none of those Rocket Pokemon know Earthquake, otherwise… uh… this is gonna suck.*”
:quilaeep:


“Her Arcanine might have Intimidate, but mine’s got Flash Fire!” Spencer exclaimed, looking thoroughly pleased with himself. “Now for reinforcements,” he said, opening the rest of his Pokéballs. “Electabuzz, hold them back with nonstop Thunderbolts! Dewgong, Brine; Pidgeot, Air Slash; Mightyena, Dark Pulse!”

Rudy: “I thought you said that managing two Pokemon at once was already a giant pain!” >_>;
Spencer: “Look, it is, but that wasn’t canon anyways!” >.<

All of his Pokémon got into position upon hearing the commands, Arcanine already throwing a scarily bright Fire Blast into the fray. But then my eyes lit up when I registered that he had just let out a Pidgeot.

“Wait! You have a Pidgeot! Can’t we just fly out of here?!” I exclaimed, jabbing a finger toward the huge eagle taking wing.

Rudy + Spencer: “They. Have. Guns.
Jade: “... Right, I’m feeling kinda dumb for not remembering that when I brought that up like twice already.” >.<

Spencer paused, smiling weakly. “It’s cool that you think he’s that hardcore, but… yeah, no way can he pull off carrying all three of us.”

Spencer: “Also, that would be another problem with your brilliant idea.”

“Crap…” I muttered. “Okay, how about one person rides off on Pidgeot while the others stay here protected by the rest of your team, and then Pidgeot comes back to get the others?”

“I… guess that could work?” Spencer said, rubbing the back of his head.

Translation: “It’s extremely dangerous and has non-zero odds of getting at least one of us killed, but we’re kinda short on options right now.”

But then a sudden flash of light blinded me as an earsplitting crack tore the air. I ducked my head and screwed my eyes shut, but the last thing I’d seen was a giant lightning bolt flying overhead. A pitiful cry rang out, followed by the dull thud of something hitting the ground. I dared to open my eyes a crack, and then I saw it. Pidgeot, lying in a crumpled heap, feathers scorched black. Taken down with a single bolt. At the bottom of the hill, a Raichu stood, clearly smirking, with sparks still leaping from its cheeks. It swished its long, inky tail before dashing into the fray.

Jade: “... So much for that idea.”
:ohnowen:


Spencer was staring wide-eyed at his fallen Pokémon, mouth agape. Slowly, he reached a trembling hand to his Pokéball belt and recalled Pidgeot in a beam of red. In that one moment, the real weight of the situation crashed down on us. It had seemed like we had a fighting chance to get out of here, but… we really didn’t, did we?

“Yeah, that would have been us if we’d tried flying away,” Rudy pointed out. No one said anything as the implications of his words sunk in.

Jade: “Boy, and I thought the last chapter ended on a grim note. Uh… do you ever get the feeling that our author has it out for us?”
:ScaredCabot:

Rudy: “Have you tried being less dramatic and helping us out of this mess?”
- Rudy looks out at the encroaching Rockets -
Rudy: “Since, uh… we kinda have our work cut out for us right now.”
:uhhh:


Boy was that a ride. Though I guess the fact that I was still picking up on stuff I didn’t remember must mean there were some decent changes to Chapter 3 over the year since I read it… or I just forgot about what happened, but let’s think positive. ^^;

Anyhow, the star of the show for this story this chapter was and still is two things: its battle choreography and its worldbuilding, the former was obviously a bit more front and center, but there were a lot of little moments where subtle things that got brought up felt fairly organic for selling a living and breathing world. The TM sequence was one of them, even if I feel like it might have worked a little better with some sort of passing line from Rudy about “Series 5 TMs are reusable” to hammer home that that’s what you were up to. The characterization wasn’t a slouch either, since even if the characters aren’t always making optimal decisions, they make oversights in the way one would expect of middle schoolers, or in Tyson’s case, a middling Rocket with an ego. Like even if the cast is being carried to an extent by lucky breaks at the moment, it feels startlingly believable for how they would operate in such a situation, especially that “well crap” sense of panic that sets in over Jade, Rudy, and Spencer at the end when they realize that they’re very in over their heads.

As for criticisms, I don’t have that many since the prose was really well put-together and the chapter engaging enough that I honestly might have overlooked a few goofs by virtue of having a good time. There were a couple of stray paragraphs that I felt looked a little dense and like they might function better cut up. Also, a couple things like the Gen V TM sequence felt like they could’ve had a little extra detail or context to explain what was going on, but it didn’t take me that much out of it.

Most of the other gripes I had were basically nitpicks over a couple portrayals that honestly could be handwaved as “my setting, my rules” or else definitively put to bed one way or another with an extra sentence or two here or there. Like it feels a little weird for Tyson to be cognizant of the dangers of cabin decompression of his plane while firing a pistol in it. I suppose there technically is a workaround to that, though given how much of a ‘sloppy’ vibe Tyson gives off, he could’ve just been an idiot and let his hot-headedness get to him since… well, he is a Rocket. The GPS reveal sequence technically is one of those “yeah, you were screwed all along” things in reality, but eh. It’s not too hard to come up with an internal rationale for why Tyson would need a dedicated secondary GPS on him, since if nothing else, location accuracy matters for situations like his. Accuracy which his plane’s transponder, if it even has one, might not have.

But altogether, I had a fun time, and I’m hoping to cross paths with this story sometime again soon @Chibi Pika . Since hey, I do have to get past Chapter 15 at some point, and I’ve got my own reasons for wanting to steer a review or two your way in the not-too-distant future. ^^
 

Ambyssin

Gotta go back. Back to the past.
Location
Residency hell
Pronouns
he/him
Partners
  1. silvally-dragon
  2. necrozma-ultra
  3. milotic
  4. zoroark-soda
  5. dreepy
  6. mewtwo-ambyssin
Merry Blitzmas!
Disclaimer: My Blitz reviews tend to be stream of consciousness stuff. You're free to ignore or take it with grains of salt.

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And we're back.

46: SHEPARD, REPORT TO THE—
-HOLD IT! Wouldn't Steven have a PokéNav? His father's Devon president, why would he use a Johto-made phone? Consistency, dangummit! 7.8/10 too much Tohjo bias. >:V
-A week-long bubblebath, huh? Now I have a mental image of a pruned Starr, so thanks for that.
-Ajia: We agreed to it, it's our job. Starr: And what's your salary? You gettin' a competitive benefits package? Health care? Oh, wait, this isn't Unova.
-Wait, no I wasn't expecting an actual joke about moving to Unova. Don't do it, the healthcare sucks! But apparently they're speaking Japanese in-universe, so good to know, I guess.
-Sootopolis casually wiped off the map? Sure, okay. Just don't tell Torchic, I guess.
-If I had a nickel for every fic I read with a Kantonian mew "quite close" to a latias, I'd have two nickels. Which isn't much, but it's weird it happened twice.
-Yeah, that's right Jade! You go and complain to the manager! I don't think this version of the pokémon world has Karen as an Elite Four member, so you're covered.
-"Humans lie all the time." Aros would get along quite well with Dr. House.
-Jade: You're like the least chill one on the team. Aros: Of course I am! I'm quad weak to ice, bitch! (All that said it is cute they're trying, even if Aros is tsundere about it.)
-Shep's explanation is frustratingly vague, even with Jade as a biased narrator, but the overall back and forth between them where he sidesteps her questions and turns some of her words back on her works out nicely. There are some answers with this idea of humans shattering some sort of ceiling between them and legends though the exact details are muddled, as they tend to be with these sorts of prophecies.
-The ending seems to hint at Dialga. It seems like a timeline sort of thing. Almost like some screwed up version of Explorers' dimensional scream.

47: This new Mass Effect character creator be looking sus
-Ah, yes, it's the old "traumatic childhood event villain/anti-villain origin story." Although it's too short to really make out concrete details, but I'm unsure if Dialga's muddled up his memories or this is trauma-induced repression.
-Apparently a King's Rock survived the disaster, though, so there's that. Also, wow, he's already talking slick. Guess that ambition's bubbled to the surface already. You said it's a meatier chapter, but we're cutting right to the chase in the scenes themselves.
-I misread his charmander's name as Vespa for a second. Now I'm just imagining him riding around on a motor scooter painted to look like a charmeleon. Sebastian Shepard: Mall Cop. Though I see there's an aspect of "humans imprinting on their pokémon partners" going on here. Vesta's already sharing some of his weird ambitions.
-At this point, I can't remember if we've seen all his non-lati team members, but aside from the dragonite, I only see names without species. Maybe they were brought up before, but it's been so long I don't remember them? The brief fight from his perspective offers a considerable difference from what we're used to. Much colder and analytical, which I'm sure is intentional.
-Shep's sudden interest in understanding a lot of myths and legend reads hilariously given this was published here around the time of Legends release... which gave us Volo, whose ambitions bear some similarities, now that I think about it. also are kaida and vesta supposed to be a pair?
-Shep visiting the ruins be like: I always feel like, somebody's watching meeeee... and I got no privacy.
-If I'm reading this right, he's trying to make himself the arbiter of a fallback of sorts for this prophecy. One that places him firmly in the center of things, which on some level is what he feels he deserves and plays to this ambition for strength.
-Yes, hello, MD here [pushes up nerd glasses] at the level of insomnia Shep is describing, he would have significant cognitive impairments, specifically with executive functioning and complex decision making. Whatever plan he's thinking up shouldn't be able to function if it involves him, given the performance decline that comes with such limited sleep.
-Yeah, at some point between this planning and catching Latios, I think Dialga intervened or something. Might explain why he doesn't need sleep. But the repeated mentions of not changing the past and moving forward give me time god red flags.

47 EX: Aku Aku is in this fic?!
-I suppose I can't fault Ajia and Lexx for their loyalty to people they consider their respective friends. Even if it does kind of seem like, in doing so, they may indirectly be playing into Shep's hand. Maybe. Possibly. It's not a long conversation and it does reach some sort of tepid agreement, so it's more than fluff at least. :V

48: If any chapter title could summarize the entire fic up to this point, it's this one.
-Jade this isn't Sonic the Hedgehog what are you doing oh no she has air pods in she can't hear me—
-The line about showing off to Shep's charizard is hilarious if she is actually a lesbizard.
-Easy to avoid troubling thoughts with adrenaline, huh? When did Chibi minor in endocrinology. >:C
-Not much else to say about Jade talking with Chibi, then Stygian, because it feels like we've had these conversations to some extent already.
-Fs out for Skarmory. At least he didn't die. o7
-"The League's being shit, so we're doing this ourselves!" reads hilariously in light of all the drama with Smash, Nintendo, and Panda. I guess Rudy is part of the Ludwig in this situation, but good for him being able to actually go and do this and indirectly pull Jade out of a funk or something. I mean, knowing how this fic operates, she will be pulled back into it soon enough. It's only a matter of time. (In more ways than one if it involves Shep.)
-Given the chapter's title and the mention of Skarmory I'm actually a bit surprised this part ends up just... punting the Jet ball until a later point. It sure looked like it was setting up for a more significant problem.

49: Oh hey another title that could summarize the entire fic up to this point.
-Wait, hang on, if Jade's only now returning to the cabin... then where had she been during the last time skip? I thought she was still there. XD
-Starr's right. Mayo on hot dogs is criminal. Darren should be arrested.
- Good luck to the furry 'mons getting melted marshmallow and chocolate out of their fur. That one's going to be a nightmare.
-I can't remember seeing Ajia's zoroark before this point, but I'm adding another victim to the "don't write a cocky and/or edgy zoroark or draw 25" meme.
-Jade, "the other day" was a fortnight ago. C'mon. I could understand your big birb having a poor grasp on time.
-FINALLY Jade brings up the elephant in the room only for it to get immediately stomped on. I'm sure it's a matter of personal pride and, yeah, Mew's going to talk them, but wow is it frustrating when they were previously complaining about constantly having to hide and quarantine and the like. Stupid artificial plot barriers. [grumble]
-Lugia stealing a supply truck? [Cipher intensifies]
-By acquiring Ice Beam, Lugia can now drop a load of ice-related puns a la Arnie's take on Mr. Freeze. Sorry, but I don't make the rules.
-Ah, so the explanation for why they all seem unaware is that they're all phoenixes, in a manner of speaking. I... suppose that's one way to go about it and fit the narrative you've crafted. It may not apply to the super ancient pokémon, either, which would explain why they're a cut above everyone else.
-Wow, Lugia's life is the embodiment of Dorie's mantra. Just keep swimming... swimming... swimming. Low key depressing.
-Bwa ha ha YouTube exists in-universe. "What's up, trainers, today we're bringing you another hot TRAINER TIP—"
-Even with some of the techno-babble just being techno-babble, the attempt at learning Ice Beam properly is pretty cute.

50: When you think about it, a warning is just a harshly worded invite
-If Jade's such a notorious Rocket enemy, how's she out publicly at a site for a fan-made league conclusion. You'd think that'd have enough attention to make her want to avoid it. 🤔
-Ah, yes, the Elite Four showing up with no explanation of why nothing official is happening. Totally not suspicious or anything.
-Aww, I was really hoping Darren bringing up online stuff would include conspiracies that the Elite Four are in league with the Rockets in some capacity. Because it sure does look that way if I'm remembering the league attack correctly.
-DID SOMEONE SAY LEAGUE [Big Shot]?!
-They want to see Rudy and Jade. Uh-huh. Sure. And I totally didn't see them vent in med bay, >_>
-Of course Lorelei's the one who's talking with them. If it's not Lance, it's Lorelei who tends to do league-related stuff in these trainer fics. And, hey, I was right about Steven tipping things off, I think? It's been a year, cut me some slack. Steven Stone? More like... Steven Sus. Ha ha gottem.
-Wow, I wasn't just expecting Lorelei to straight up admit that Team Rocket has enough of a foothold. Maybe it's not quite the same as full cooperation, but it's close enough. I'll take it.
-So, after running into problems with the league they just... return to the official ranger cabin? Did they not think they might get watched or something for disregarding the league's request. I know you needed an easy way for Mewtwo to find them, but with all the moves they've had to plan out in the fic, seems like an oversight on their part.
-[reads Mewtwo's explanation] Land across the sea? Understanding his power? Something on par with Rayquaza? ... He went to Kalos, didn't he? [continues reading] And he found a "trainer," didn't he? Maybe a Kalosian one? No hints given, but I'm guessing this is where mega evolution factors more into the plot. Though it looks like he's just going to go faff off on his own again.

51: Sounds like what you were feeling trying to write this part, hue hue hue
-Mewtwo channeling his inner Area 51 UFO. If the gang Naruto runs fast enough, maybe they can catch him.
-Ajia continues to have the best taste in pokémon. Not open for debate. :3
-While I could be tempted to write off the constant worrying about Rocket appearances as PTSD, the way this fic's played out so far, these are more like alarm bells that something bad's going to happen soon. It's been a handful of quiet chapters, now, pretty sure there's a schedule to stick to.
-lmao Lugia really just wants to drop the tactical nuke on the Rockets. When you've got the Bahamut Seal of Approval, you know you did something wrong. Which is hilarious, considering he took down his world's Team Rocket by tossing Gio into Cinnabar Volcano and sinking the island.
-The mental image of Mewtwo sending cryptic texts to a burner phone is hilarious. He's like some sort of cryptid who knows the government has eyes everywhere.
-Oh, hey, look it's the Rockets. Right on schedule. 🤣 And they brought the full entourage, from the looks of it. Well, the fic was fun while it lasted, I get. GGs, have fun with the sequel or whatever.

52: We interrupt this trainer Animorphs fic to bring you [checks title] Hands of Creation?
-Lugia... forced the wound to close? That's... not how third (probably fourth) degree burns work. Jade needs immediate burn/trauma ICU for fluid resuscitation and appropriate protective measures to prevent severe infection and— [froths at mouth]
-Drawn to Jade's determination? Really? Not saying she isn't determined or anything but— okay, now that I think about it, she has had a real bad time up until now, hasn't she?
-Rainbow Turkey to the rescue! And with Starr, too. Does this mean— lol they're actually discussing it. Starr be like:
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-Not that this isn't a (somewhat) touching moment with the ladies and their birbs but, well, how is this happening right now? Yes, Articuno fell back, but there were other Rocket interceptors in 51. Talking is not a free action and all that jazz. Surely they would've tried something during this. But now I see Ajia showing up and them teleporting away, so I guess not? Kind of a weird way to end it...
-No, I'm still calling BS. No bonding scene with Starr full of feels. Jade should be septic from infected burn wounds and getting pressors in an ICU right now. >:C
-Is that... HANDHOLDING? IN MY TRAINER FIC? HARLOTS!
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52 EX: This new Uncle Kracker song kinda weird, ngl
-Nothing much to say other than I get the feeling Ho-Oh's constant calming presence and Starr's hotheadedness will make for an amusing dynamic. I'm sure they're both inspire some measure of change in one another but for now it'll be pretty amusing to see Starr constantly annoyed it by it.

Overall, we've got our one new chosen, but I feel as though the others need to fall into place somewhat quickly if we are past the halfway point. There were plenty of good character moments to be had here but after the Shep chapters it does feel like the main plot just kinda... spins its wheels for awhile. Which is an odd feeling for me to have this late into the game. Oh well. Iiiiiiiit's punishment time!/10.
 
Partners
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  3. skiddo-px3
  4. skiddo-iametrine
  5. skiddo-coolshades
  6. skiddo-rudolph
  7. skiddo-sleepytime
  8. snowskiddo
  9. skiddotina
  10. skiddengo
  11. skiddoyena
Hello again! Took me a bit to get caught up and then a bit longer to circle back around to reviewing, but it's good that everything's finally caught up over here! Much cosier, haha.

Kinda forgot Darren had been competing in the league at all, whoops. It is definitely more of a Rudy thing!

Appreciably weird to have a conversation about "normal" stuff like the league finals when we/Jade/etc. still know everything else that's going on in the background, haha. (So cue something not-normal to come trampling along and complicate things in 3... 2...)

Yet again, I found myself wishing we could just tell the League everything. What did we have to gain from it being a secret? Sure, the Legendaries didn’t trust humans, but all this secrecy only benefitted Team Rocket and made the legends look like the bad guys.

:copyka: Hm, I could swear there's some sort of old saying that might be applicable to this. Something about being careful... How does it go again...?

“Legendary incidents have been on the rise in recent decades,” Lorelei went on.

Hm, I can't recall whether that's been mentioned much before now. Presumably at least some of that includes canon-adjacent stuff like LCverse's equivalent of the end of Emerald Version, but I wonder what other specific things have been going on for "decades"? (If it was mentioned already then please ignore me, my head is demonstrably full of holes :V)

The camera had settled on what was unmistakably Rudy riding Moltres. It lingered there for a few seconds while Rudy called out inaudible orders to his nearby Pokémon. Then the footage swung over to Ajia riding on a Charizard and calling out to Rayquaza. Rayquaza responded to her—brushing her off, yeah, but the fact that she was in a position to even talk with it at all… And then, as if my stomach couldn’t sink any lower, there was me riding Lugia. Struggling to hold on as the dragon-bird swerved around attacks from the Rockets. Clear as day.

Honestly, my biggest question here is who recorded this/where the League got it from! Was it just some random bystander who shared it with the League before dropping it on social media? Was it Team Rocket, playing both ends against the middle? Stalker, for his miscellaneous Stalker Reasons? Some other kind of mole in the League?

Very much looking forward to see what the E4/League will be doing in the future. Lorelei can say "it's not her intention" to blackmail them all she wants, but even if she were being honest personally, like, honey, that is 100% the intention of whoever's above you. (Though tbh my money is split between that or else the League not managing to release the footage only for it to get out some other way, such that it probably also ends up inconveniencing them somehow. Who recorded this?)

Also I keep thinking there was some extra or something that explained a bit more about how Rocket was entwined with regional politics, but I don't see one on the threadmark list so I'm probably confusing that with Salvage, hm. Will just have to re-read the Rocket chapters and see what I can piece together from there...

Starr hadn’t said much ever since we left. She mostly just kept her arms folded, occasionally muttering things under her breath

Missing ending punctuation or possibly a few words there?

It is interesting to think about what Starr might've said or why she would've had any motivation to, though! On the one hand I suppose having the League assume responsibility for this would theoretically mean Jade and Ajia no longer have to deal with it (or at least deal with it "alone"), but on the other hand she doesn't exactly seem like the type to trust the League/any authority figures with too much in the first place. :V

Lugia took a few seconds to process that. Then it cursed.

what swears does a lugia use

I couldn’t get over how weird it was to have Mewtwo just sitting in the living room. I couldn’t help staring at him. Did he remember me? Did he… have any particular opinion about me?

d-did mewtwo-senpai notice me...?

For just a moment, there was a flicker of surprise across Mewtwo’s features. It vanished just as quickly, and he pondered her words for some time. <I would prefer not to inform more humans of my plan.>

So who is Mewtwo inevitably gonna bond with [/smug] The person whose phone that allegedly is? or maybe Darren lol

Lots of complications set up here so far. What's Mewtwo actually going to do next? Who's working with him? Is it someone canon, or maybe someone we've already met? What's the League's next move going to be—will they manage to show up in force anytime soon? And, perhaps most important, what will happen to the unofficial tourney?

Some idle spitballing about what (else) Mewtwo might be experimenting with, which I'd imagine is probably actually more than one thing, anyway don't mind me/feel free to laugh at me:

* Looking for a sign of who specifically is watching/noticing
* Trying to draw out someone specific rather than just Rocket/the legends/whoever in general
* Has anyone checked if the locations he's appeared in so far reveal some kind of pattern? Could be trying to lead Whoever He's Angling For to a certain final location in Indigo for some reason
* just looking to do some community service and finally earn his Picnicker Local Hero Merit Badge

Wonder what Chibi wants to talk about?

Zoroark put a paw to his chest. “*We were stolen, of course.*”

...

Ajia gave an exaggerated sigh. “Anyway, he’s right; I stole all three of them from Team Rocket. Back when I was still doing infiltration.”

Definitely eager for whenever we can finally get some full, serious stories about the infiltration Ajia was doing. So easy to focus on the stories that are funny in hindsight and not the scary stuff... for now :copyka:

Lugia hummed. “I want to know more about what Mewtwo is planning. The lack of information is frustrating.”

Wrong quotes, whoops.

Good that Jade and Lugia are finally at least starting to talk about the Viridian incident. Not that the discussion gets terribly far before Jade shuts it down at the first sign of morality debate—honey, you said that it'd make sense as long as they were aware there'd be collateral damage! Really, all this hesitation now just makes it more likely that something's going to force the discussion to happen later, at a much more uncomfortable point...

“We’re just doing recon tonight, so we don’t need a whole group or anything,” Ajia replied casually.

Hm, this whole move seems interesting! Hopefully they'll actually be able to report back on it at some point after all the... everything that follows. :P

Starr gave her a deadpan stare. “Now that you’ve said that, I’m expecting it.”

same smh even if she turned out to be wrong about just who'd be getting into that fight

An thought: why did Mewtwo/the "trusted human" or whoever send a text? Lugia wouldn't be the one with the phone, and in theory Lugia was supposed to be arriving alone; Lugia was under the impression that it would need to "bring Jade along anyway" rather than her actually being invited/welcome. Did they just guess Lugia would bring a human along anyway (or assume Jade could contact it telepathically quickly enough), or did they know she'd be tagging along after all? Where were they observing from, and what do they know? (And did anyone tip them off about Articuno's impending attack?) Really...

Something about this didn’t feel right. He’d been testing to see if the Rockets could detect his presence at close range. Testing to see if the Rockets were willing to make a move. Making his movements predictable. Making himself a target. What did it mean?

...part of me wonders whether this was in fact the specific bait Mewtwo was trying to pull off, and Lugia would certainly be more likely to draw attention than Mewtwo alone simply by virtue of being Big Bird. (And if it were just Lugia alone, then it would probably have a fairer chance of being able to escape/fight off an attacker since it wouldn't have its chosen to worry about/distract it... though again, that raises the question, did Mewtwo/this person expect Jade to be coming or not?) But this Mewtwo seems just considerate/vaguely respectful enough of the other legendaries that endangering Lugia without telling it first doesn't sit right, either. Was there something Mewtwo was hoping to show them/hoping they could actually move on tonight?

Anyway what I'm saying is this is a very twisty kitty cat and he's got some s'plainin' to do the next time they meet him. :P

We should have told Mew. Now we couldn’t teleport. But we hadn’t been expecting a fight!

tbh jade i think from now on you should just go through life always expecting a fight at every possible opportunity. it's great for your stress levels! i mean, you'll never be able to sleep or have a moment's peace ever again, but if you're always expecting it then you can never be surprised! surprises are stressful, don't want those! :copyka:

The phone was gone! I’d lost my grip when that attack hit. I didn’t *have* my Pokégear, and that phone was my only means of contact, and I’d lost it. Stupid!

Plus Mewtwo's and now Ajia's numbers are stored in it, and the locations of previous calls could be traced from it... gurl you better hope that fall from that height smashed Chekhov's phone to bits.

Been a hot minute (aha) since Jade got a chance to explore some pain and suffering, innit? Losing literally all of the skin on your back is... eep. No skin, no nerves, no nothing...

Interesting how the memory of being attacked by Lugia blends right into this new trauma. Really drives home that she's probably not ever going to be able to completely get over that incident, either.

The only reason I got as far as I did was because I just have that much power.

humblebrag

<To be honest, I’m not sure how I got as far as I did,> Lugia said privately. <I’ve never been able to heal others before. And it really shouldn’t be possible on a human, anyway. I just… I was desperate.>

<Maybe it’s because I’m your chosen.>

<That doesn’t make any sense. Our psychic link isn’t exactly going to let me rewrite how biology works.>

:eyes: Is Lugia just wrong here, or is there another factor at play?

“I know why I was a candidate. But why, specifically, did you pick me?”

Lugia turned away. <It’s nothing, really. But we… we’ve toyed with the idea… That is to say, that each legend is drawn to a virtue of sorts. I’m not saying it’s true, just a silly superstition really, but—>

I groaned. “Oh, just say it.”

<Determination.>

I blinked.

Lugia closed its eyes, embarrassed. <I was drawn to your determination.>

undertale intensifies That is a good virtue for Jade, though! And puts some of Lugia's impatience and willingness to do hasty things like the Viridian attack into a bit more perspective.

Four more legends needed to find their chosen. I wasn’t sure how much time they had. Some of them—Suicune and Zapdos—I hadn’t seen since last year. What were they doing? Were they safe?

This has been in the back of my mind for a while. The core friend group doesn't contain too many other options (especially not after what happens later in the chapter); there's really only Darren left there, if that's even in the cards for him. Have we just not met the other candidates yet, or are some of the other legends not even going to get a chance for one reason or another? Is Lexx going to end up as Raikou's chosen lol?

Lugia relaxed. <Right. We kind of have a situation here, and—> Lugia’s words cut off suddenly, and a dull confusion washed over it. <You have a human on your neck.>

o boi hear we go,

Ho-oh hummed. “Perhaps she ought to be my chosen, then.”

Everyone froze. The sheer weight of what Ho-oh had just said hung in the air for several seconds.

Starr whirled around to face the phoenix. “Hang on… what?!”

the death card, is become real,,,

At long last, the moment we've all been waiting for! Everyone except Starr, of course. XD Frankly I didn't expect it to be this soon! It's neat to get confirmation of how Starr and Ho-Oh might actually be well-suited to each other, even though their personalities and outlooks are outwardly so different. (Quite unlike Ajia and Mew or Rudy and Moltres, not so unlike Jade and Lugia.)

and aaah the conversation between Jade and Starr at the end was excellent. We all knew Jade was going to be wrestling with the trauma of her torture for a long time, but seeing how viscerally it still affects Starr as well is great.

(Also the "then we'll match" comment is... ahaha, wow, honey)

“I told you that I had to put on a show for the others. And that was true, but… it’s more that… I was just so *angry*. Angry that you wouldn’t give in and make it easier for me to justify keeping you alive. Angry that you didn’t realize that cooperating would make everything easier on both of us. I can try to say that I hated every second of it, but there was some part of me that thought you *deserved* that,” she said disgustedly.

:(

And then a fun (""""fun"""") extra to round things off for now!

I really enjoy characters like Ho-Oh here. Sometimes you just have to know when it's worth arguing with someone who's struggling to see another way around a situation, or when it's better to acquiesce and try to understand, even if you disagree, because fighting harder's only going to push them away. I imagine that actually going along with this will improve Starr's opinion of Ho-Oh at least a tiny bit, but I'm sure there's a lot they'll have to go through together yet before she fully respects it.

Wonder what it'll take for her to finally feel like she can move on and forgive herself? I suspect that just burning off the scar won't do the trick for too long (especially since she already acknowledges on her own). I know there's still a long ways to go yet with this story, so I'm eager to see exactly how this will shift over time...
 

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Heya, popping in for that review exchange that @Virgil134 helped set up between the three of us and to help make life a bit easier for potentially going for a repeat bonus on this story within the next week and a half. Since hey, I had a good time with LC up to the point where I got to in the past, so might as well keep things moving along on that front.

Chapter 4

I couldn’t do anything but stare at the raging battle, all hope dying rapidly. Really the only advantage we had was our defensive position, hidden from view with the Rockets out in the open. That was the only thing stopping them from crushing Spencer’s team and then killing the rest of us effortlessly.

Swift: “*I’d just like to remind that we’d never have gotten into this mess if you’d just turned back and-*”
Jade: “Swift, can you not right now?!” >.<

The battlefield was a raging inferno. A shimmering Light Screen shielded our side from the worst of it, but the heat was still overwhelming. Even from where I stood, sweat dripped down my face constantly. Electabuzz was doing its best to paralyze the enemy, but it constantly had to retreat behind the rocks to avoid the blazing flames. Mightyena’s soot-gray fur was charred black; its moves were sluggish, limbs shaking with burns. Arcanine darted around too fast to see, soaking up as many fire attacks as it could, but taking plenty of other hits in the process, and the firedog was already looking worn. Dewgong kept the fires at bay with constant bursts of water fired into the air and crashing down on the opposition. That was probably the only keeping the enemy Rapidash from getting close enough to attack us.

Rudy: “... Wait, how is Dewgong able to move effectively in this environment as a giant seal-?”
Dewgong: “*Are you seriously complaining about me keeping you from getting deep fried right now?!*” >_>;
Spencer: “I mean, at least the grunts aren’t opening fire from the sidelines during this battle-?”
:fearfullaugh:

Typhlosion: “*Spencer, don’t just say that out loud!*”
:quilaree:


The executive watched the battle with an almost detached look. Of course she didn’t have to focus. She knew she was going to win.

Executive:
View: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B1wOK9yGUYM

Jade: “Oh, so she’s just rubbing it in right now.” >.<

A small bit of movement near my feet caught my eye, and I looked down to see the experimental Pikachu twitching slightly. I had almost forgotten that I brought him with us—now I wasn’t quite sure if it had been a good idea or not. He pulled his limbs underneath his body and attempted to raise himself from the ground, but couldn’t stop trembling with exhaustion.

“You… you probably should save your strength,” I said hesitantly.

Chibi: “*For what exactly when you’re all pinned and just waiting to be gunned down?*”
:what:

Jade: “For when we figure out how on earth to get around that little problem bogging us down right now?” ^^;

Pikachu jerked his head toward me, looking disoriented. Like he instinctively wanted to lash out, but couldn’t figure out how or why. After a few seconds, the experiment turned sharply toward the battlefield. Strings of electricity coursed through his feathers, slowly intensifying until, without warning, the hybrid collapsed face-down, muttering incoherently to himself.

Chibi “*... Shut up, this doesn’t mean anything.*” >.<

I slowly let out a breath, a bit relieved. It was weird—I didn’t want to risk Pikachu snapping and attacking one of us, but at the same time… I couldn’t shake the feeling that he was our best chance at getting out of here.

No, that’d be Spencer having buddies watching Flightradar24 and noticing the Rocket jet crashed and deciding to swoop in for the rescue. Which IIRC is basically what winds up happening.

At some point Rudy had let out Squirtle and was now fervently relaying instructions. The water-type nodded warily and took a few careful, timid steps out from behind cover. Then, upon seeing that he hadn’t become an immediate target, he inhaled deeply and spat a lopsided ring of water across the battlefield. The attack splashed into the executive’s Rapidash, who shook it off, looking more annoyed than hurt.

And then cue the errant gunshots right above Squirtle’s head and him promptly “nope nope nope”-ing off the battlefield.

Rudy folded his arms. “Huh, that kinda sucked. Try it again—Water Pulse!”

Of course—he’d been teaching his Squirtle all kinds of moves while we were on the plane. I immediately reached into my pocket and grabbed the Fire Blast TM that Rudy had given me, running a finger over the glossy case that enclosed the red disc inside. Any little bit could help turn the tide of the battle in our favor… I had to use it.

Rudy: “Oh, so now you want to use the TM.” >_>;
Jade: “Shut up, Rudy. It’s a desperate situation and at least if something goes haywire, we’re not going to fall to our deaths from 30,000 feet.” >.<

“Firestorm, can I ask you something?”

The Charmander turned from where he’d been watching the battle with rapt attention. I held out the TM, pausing to find the right words.

Firestorm: “*So, you are going to let me fight, then?*”
:owengel:

Jade: “... Yes, but, there’s something I need you to do first so that way you don’t die horribly right off the bat.”

“It’s a Technical Machine,” I explained. “Spencer’s Pokémon can’t handle this alone—if we’re gonna get out of this, we need to help too.”

(We? What could I do to help? Nothing, that was just it. I wasn’t even his trainer.)

Firestorm: “*Wait, that’s that one that lets you barf up giant fire Kanji! Oh hell yeah, sign me right up-!*”
:eltystarry:

Jade: “Okay, now you’re making me worried this is a bad idea from how eager you are right now.”
:grohno~1:


I forced the thought from my head and went on, “This thing will teach you how to use one of the strongest fire attacks there is. Would you be willing to learn it to help us fight them?”

Firestorm nodded almost immediately. Did he realize what he was agreeing to? How dangerous it was? (But what choice did we have, really?)

Firestorm: “*You know, that Fire Blast TM isn’t going to teach itself to me, human…*”
:thonklithe:

- Cue a stray bullet zipping past and plinking on a chunk of damaged fuselage -
Jade: “Okay, screw it, let’s just hurry this up.” O_O;

Swift watched with curious interest as I held the disc a few inches above Firestorm’s forehead, flipped a small switch on its side to unlock it, and pressed the largest button. The disc glowed for a few seconds and began spinning—giving off some sort of wave, from what little I knew about TMs. Firestorm froze, looking like he’d been seized by some invisible force. Different parts of his body began to glow faintly. After nearly a minute, the disc slowed, and I pulled it away.

“How do you feel?” I asked, stepping back a bit so he could get into position.

Firestorm: “*Perfectly fine! I think!*”
:eltydizzy:


The Charmander didn’t move. He still looked a bit dazed, like he was stuck in a trance that he couldn’t pull himself out of.

Rudy: “Okay, in retrospect, maybe it was a good thing I didn’t teach Ebony that TM on the plane since I’m pretty sure that Raticate would’ve eaten our faces if she was just frozen in a daze like that.” ^^;

“…Firestorm?” I asked slowly, a bit puzzled. I’d never actually seen a Pokémon’s reaction to a TM, so I had no idea if this was normal. I took one hesitant step towards him.

And then his gaze sharpened instantly. Shimmering waves of heat began to leak from the Charmander’s mouth, like he couldn’t hold it back. That was the only warning before his mouth snapped open and a column of flames poured out, sending his small figure reeling backwards from the force. So much fire that it almost looked ridiculous coming from him.

Jade: “...”
:wtfuckle:

Firestorm: “*I’m okay!*”
:eltydizzy:

Swift: “*Boy was she prescient about teaching that move to him on a moving plane being a bad idea.*” .-.

“Good, good!” I called out, shielding my face from the heat. “Now aim it at the Rockets’ Pokémon!”

inb4 the Executive’s Rapidash just casually minces out to eat the Fire Blast.

Firestorm furrowed his brow, looking a bit strained. With effort, he tilted his head downward, but that just caused the flame to spiral out of control, splitting into five branches that twisted wildly in different directions. The lizard’s eyes went wide, and he tried to force his mouth shut, but the flames kept pouring out relentlessly. My face fell with dread. This wasn’t supposed to happen.

Jade, you just gave a base 110/120 move to a base morph Pokémon with no idea of how to wield it properly. Just count yourself fortunate that Firestorm hasn’t accidentally barbecued you at this rate. ^^;

“Did you teach the Charmander Fire Blast?!” Spencer exclaimed, running over to me.

“Err, yeah?” I replied, a sinking feeling growing inside me.

He clapped a hand to his forehead. “Aw crap, I should’ve warned you—pretty much everyone tries it at some point. Arcanine, block the flames!”

Spencer: “Jade, Pokémon have to actually practice the moves they learn via TM to wield them effectively!”
:grohno~1:

Jade: “Wait, they do?” ._.;
Rudy: “Come on, Jade. Even I knew that from my Saturday Morning Cartoons.”
:gardexhausted:


The firedog let out a bark and leaped right into the center of the blast, cutting off the torrent of flames and preventing it from streaming all over the place. Its fur glowed red with heat, but otherwise the Arcanine was unaffected. The whole attack probably only lasted a few seconds but it felt like ages. Finally, the stream of fire began to wane. Firestorm sank to the ground, coughing and sputtering, brightly glowing flares still dripping from his tiny fangs.

Firestorm: “*Let’s do that again!*”
:eltystarry:

Everyone Else: “No, let’s not!” O.O

“Using a TM just gives a Pokémon the ability to do the move. They’re not suddenly gonna be an expert at it without any practice. That goes double for the uber ones that’re hard to control,” Spencer explained while directing his Pokémon back into battle position.

Jade: “... I’m sorry, how do you know this again?” .-.
Spencer: “It’s one of the easier questions on the exam for getting trainer’s licenses? (Also, I might have done something similar with Typhlosion back when he was a bit younger and smaller…)” ^^;

I felt like shrinking into a corner somewhere. What had seemed like the only way I could help had backfired completely. I glanced down at the TM case, now noticing the label along the bottom corner that read “Rating: 120 (Highly Advanced).”

Wait, so does that mean that from Series 6 and on, Fire Blast carries a 110 Rating? If so, these Series 5 Fire Blast TMs must be worth a fortune on auction sites.

“I… I’m sorry—I didn’t know…” I mumbled.

“It’s okay,” he cut in, trying to sound optimistic. “Arcanine blocked it from hitting the rest of my team. We’re still behind, but I’m not counting us out just—”

Cue half of Spencer’s team getting wiped in about 10 seconds.

A sudden blinding flash forced us to shield our eyes. Squinting through my fingers, I barely managed to make out a raging ball of red energy right before it plowed into the unsuspecting form of Spencer’s Arcanine. Brilliant orange shock waves radiated out from the impact, digging deep into the firedog’s body. With a garbled cry, Arcanine’s powerful frame collapsed like a ragdoll.

Spencer’s!Arcanine: “... Ow.
:eltydizzy:

All: “...”
:uhhh:

Spencer: “... Okay, we can probably start counting ourselves out about now.”
:quilaeep:


“I… what? W-what the heck was that?” I stammered.

Spencer was frozen, unable to process what had just happened as he numbly reached for a Pokéball to recall his fallen Pokémon. Now visible in the middle of the battlefield was a stout crimson fox, panting hard as steam leaked from its body. Was… was it the one who had just done that?

Flareon:
:blobyes:

Jade: “Gee, thanks. Like I couldn’t put two and two together there.” >_>;

“No. No, no, no, whyyy? That’s not fair, I didn’t even see that she had a Flareon out,” Spencer said, his words strained. He pulled out his Pokédex and pointed it at the fire-type, smacking his forehead upon reading something. “Superpower. Really? It used Superpower? Can I just forfeit now or get a handicap or something??”

Jade: “Spencer, these are Rockets!” >.<
Spencer: “... Right, forfeiting would be a bad idea, then.” ._.

No one said anything. With Arcanine down, the executive’s Pokémon were now free to throw as much fire around as they wanted. Not even Dewgong’s water could make a dent in it now—the ice seal cried out in pain, constantly bombarded with flames.

Spencer: “A-At least Typhlosion’s still up and able to battle-?” ^^;
Typhlosion: “*Spencer, can you stop trying to tempt fate right now?!*” >.<

“I’m… I’m out of ideas,” Spencer said. “Any time you two want to reveal that you’ve secretly been ace trainers all along, I’d love to hear it.”

Well, they didn’t, buuuuuut…

I looked miserably down at Firestorm. The fire lizard was still panting badly with embers dripping from his mouth. Swift sat next to him with feathers fluffed out, probably trying to comfort him.

“I don’t know what to do.” Just saying it made my blood run cold.

Jade: “Weren’t you just raring to go back into battle with Fire Blast like 30 seconds ago-?”
:what:

Firestorm: “*Not canon, remember?*”
- Beat moment -
Jade: “... Right. Yay me.” ._.

“Stop talking like that, you guys—we can’t lose!” Rudy cried, but even his voice was starting to break. Squirtle was panting hard, tired out from attempting Water Pulse so many times.

Assorted Rockets:
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Rudy: “Look, there’s like 50 more of these chapters to go, so we’re not losing here! Probably. Maybe. I hope.”
:grohno~1:


We all stared at each other hopelessly as the flames raged on in the background. What else could we do? Already my brain was trying to grasp at ways that we could convince the executive to let us go, all of them equally stupid. There had to be some way out of this. There just had to.

Jade: “You know, now would be a good time to get that Aerodactyl from the chapter art barreling in to help us right now.”
:fearfullaugh:

Rudy: “Wouldn’t that be a Deus Ex Machina-?” :/
Jade: “Rudy, I don’t care what it is, I don’t want to get gunned down by Rockets right now!” >.<

And then without warning, a high-pitched screech tore the air. I glanced upward right as a piercing neon beam shot down from the sky, aimed straight at the Rockets’ Pokémon. It struck them with a blinding flash of light, sending shock waves running through the earth.

Jade: “Oh thank god, it’s finally here.”
:sweats:

Spencer: “Wait, are we sure that’s the Aerodactyl from the chapter art? And how do we even know if it’s friendly-?”

“H-hyper Beam?” I stammered, my knees shaking from the beam’s not-so-distant impact. I turned my gaze skyward, where I could barely make out something approaching us with terrifying speed. Leathery wings; long, spaded tail—it was an Aerodactyl. And as it neared, I could see that it had a rider.

Spencer: “Okay, never mind, it’s the Aerodactyl from the chapter art.”
Typhlosion: “*’bout time the calvary came, things were getting kinda dicey there.*” ^^;

“Hey, Jade!” the rider yelled.

I jolted in surprise. They weren’t clearly visible yet, but I could never, ever forget that voice.

Jade: “... Wait, Ajia?!

“It can’t be…” I muttered.

When the winged Pokémon got within view, I could finally make out a petite teenaged girl riding on its back—fair-skinned with a bright, confident face and short, black hair blowing in the wind.

It really was her.

Ajia: “Boy, have you picked up some different hobbies since we last met, Jade.” ^^;

“No way… Ajia?!” I yelled.

Ajia was here. How? Why? It didn’t make any sense. But I had no doubt that the approaching trainer was my old friend, even though I hadn’t seen her in so long. The only thing I could do was raise a hand and wave, still in shock. Grinning slightly, Ajia waved back from atop the pterosaur.

“Who invited you here?!” Tyson shouted.

Jade: “I have so many questions right now. Ajia, how on earth does that Tyson guy know you-?” .-.

“Shut up, I’m the one handling this,” the Rocket executive said, looking rather intrigued by the new arrival.

Raichu fired a bolt of lightning into the air, but Aerodactyl easily dodged it, swooping down to land behind the rocky ledge that we’d been using as cover. After unclipping herself from the Pokémon’s flight harness, she slid down from its back, now standing next to me at about shoulder height.

“What’s wrong, Jade? I thought you’d be happier to see me,” she said, laughing and elbowing me lightly in the ribs.

Jade: “... How are you here?! And since when did you have an Aerodactyl?!
:eltyshocked:

Ajia: “I’ll explain sometime when you’re not about to get shot to pieces by a bunch of pissed-off Rockets?” ^^;

That broke me out of my trance. Still, I felt more than a little overwhelmed as I struggled to find my words. “You… how—how are you here? I haven’t seen you in… over a year, at least. Not since you left to train in Johto.”

Jade: “And again, how do you have an Aerodactyl?!
:Bulbuhh:


“I wanted to visit Viridian sooner, but I got caught up with things. And from the looks of it, so did you…” Her voice trailed off as she looked over the bizarre setting, from the mangled jet plane to the crowd of jeeps, the executive still glowering at us, and the hybrid Pikachu lying a few feet from me. The look she gave me next made me suddenly aware of the fact that I was still covered in soot. “…How did you even get involved in this mess?” she asked, rubbing the back of her head.

I put a hand to my forehead. “I don’t even know anymore.”

Jade: “I might have gone off to go and spectate a weird forest fire started by an angry Gerbil and then gotten into a chat with some strange guy who goes by ‘Stalker’?” ^^;
Swift: “*Let’s not even get into all the times you had a chance to turn back before the Rockets noticed you, but that’s broadly accurate, yes.*” >v>;

“Hi, guys. I love reunions, and the best way to bond at a reunion is to beat the crap out of the people that want to kill us with awesome top-class Pokémon that you totally have, am-I-right?” Spencer cut in rapidly with an overly hopeful look on his face.

Spencer: “Also, to not get shot, but I was kinda hoping that would only be obvious.” ^^;

“That’s why I’m here,” she said simply, putting a hand on his shoulder. “Don’t worry, I’ve got this.” Spencer looked ready to collapse from relief.

Jade: “Ajia, how on earth did you even find us-?”
Ajia: “Flightradar24.”
Jade: “... That exists in our setting?” .-.
Ajia: “Under a different name, but probably? Oh, and it helps that I had dealing with these guys given to me as an assignment.” ^^;

Ajia turned sharply to face the battlefield with an expression that had shifted into intense focus. Spencer had just recalled his battered Dewgong into its ball, which left only Electabuzz and Typhlosion remaining in the fight—the former still desperately holding the opponents back with lightning, and the latter avoiding blows by popping in and out of the ground and striking unexpectedly. The bottom of the hill was scarred from the Hyper Beam, but none of the Rocket’s Pokémon had fallen.

Typhlosion: “Boy am I thankful that none of these Rockets apparently bothered to teach their Pokémon Earthquake, since boy that would’ve been a painful experience.” ^_^;

“She probably had Raichu put up a Light Screen at the last second—at least, I wouldn’t expect anything less from her,” Ajia muttered to herself. Her hands moved animatedly as she took stock of the Rocket’s lineup before coming to a decision. “Raichu has to go down first—Pichu, you’re up!”

She swung her bag down from her shoulder, and a small, pale-yellow mouse leaped out, instantly dashing into the fray. The very same Pichu she left Viridian with on that day nearly four years ago.

Spencer: “Pichu?! Okay, suddenly I’m feeling a lot less confident about our chances-”
:uhhh:

Ajia: “Oi, don’t knock her until you see her in action!”

“She still hasn’t evolved?” I asked, watching the nimble mouse skillfully ducking under her opponents and zapping them with small jolts of electricity.

“She didn’t want to,” Ajia replied with a shrug. “We’ve focused all our training on getting around it.” She was already opening two more Pokéballs and giving out rapid-fire orders to her Pokémon.

Pichu: “*Also, having an Eviolite helps.*” ^^;

An Espeon gave a flick of its forked tail before dashing into the fray. An Umbreon followed not far behind, squirting out a noxious liquid from its pores and hitting the Arcanine right on target. The dark fox didn’t even try to dodge the overwhelming flames that followed, but it didn’t even try to. It just stood its ground against the inferno, wincing slightly but looking like it could endure them all day. Overhead, Aerodactyl was tilting and rolling through the air, forcing the Raichu to waste all its energy just trying to land a hit, all while sending blades of air flying from its wingtips, keeping the Rapidash from breaking through the lineup.

Ah yes, Umbreon as a Toxic-stalling tank is a thing in this setting too, I see.

Ajia nodded to herself. “Alright, this shouldn’t be tooooo bad,” she said. “Not the worst situation in the world. And they were already weakened a bit before I got here, so I should be able to come out on top.”

Jade: “Wait, you mean you’ve been in situations like these before?! Ajia, just what have you been up to in the last year?!” O_O;

I stared at her, chills running down my spine. Everything that she’d said was starting to come together. “Ajia, you’ve… have you fought Rockets before?”

Ajia: “... Wasn’t it already obvious from my passing remarks?”
:joltyshrug~1:


The question made her pause, but then she nodded. And from the sound of things, she’d had much worse fights than this. Just what had she been doing since I lost contact with her?

Narrator: “Ask Stalker, really.”

My attention snapped back to the fight as Pichu darted past the executive’s Flareon, easily dodging the fire fox’s attempt to bite with fangs like hot iron. Raichu kept trying to charge up one of its huge lightning bolts but couldn’t keep its concentration with Pichu firing energy stars into its face. Meanwhile, any of the opposing Pokémon trying to land a hit found themselves held in place by a psychic aura from Espeon. And in the moment it took them to shake off the telekinesis, they’d be easy targets for Aerodactyl, whose tongue was hanging out as it looped through the air, almost lazily enjoying its role.

Aerodactyl: “*And you get a Hyper Beam, and you get a Hyper Beam, everybody gets a Hyper Beam!*”
Jade: “So, uh… how many fights with Rockets have you gotten into over the past year, Ajia?” .-.
Ajia: “Enough that this is pretty much a normal Tuesday for us.” ^^;

I couldn’t help staring in awe. Even though Ajia hadn’t given any commands more complex than just move names, her team seemed to already know what kind of strategy she wanted them to use. Like she’d already spent time training them for this sort of melee. By now, half of the Rocket’s Pokémon were covered in a toxic film, gradually dulling their movements the longer they had to struggle against Ajia’s disruptive tactics. Sure, the opponents had ridiculously strong attacks, but it didn’t matter if they couldn’t pull any of them off.

Jade: “How on earth did she-?!
:Bulbuhh:

Narrator: “Ask Stalker, really-”
Jade: “Alright, alright, I get it! Sheesh!” >_>;

A pitiful cry drew my attention to the executive’s Arcanine. It had just collapsed, finally succumbing to poison and exhaustion. Seconds later, a red beam drew it back into its Pokéball.

“All right! One down!” Rudy exclaimed.

Rudy: “Boy are we fortunate that none of these Rockets have been opening fire on-”
Typhlosion: “*Oi, not you too with this ‘tempting fate’ crap!*”
:quilaree:


I had to admit, it was a huge relief. Finally, a real sign that it was possible for us to win this.

Ajia grinned to herself before pressing the attack. Aerodactyl finally got an opening to soar low over the battlefield, striking the earth and sending a Rock Slide cascading down the hill. Raichu tried to send more bolts toward the rock-type, but Umbreon kept hounding it up close, unfazed by the lightning. Espeon had leaped onto Rapidash’s back, pelting the horse with psychic blasts no matter how hard it tried to buck the fox off. Ajia was winning. We were going to make it out of here.

While Jade is directionally correct since this would be a really short story otherwise, that seems like a really ill-advised tempting of fate there.

And then a vicious howl echoed through the air, making Ajia’s team all flinch. Wait, but that sounded like…? I edged over to get a better view of the Rockets and stared in disbelief. The executive’s Arcanine was back in the fight, barking out Flamethrowers and looking completely refreshed.

Executive: “Revival Herbs, gotta love ‘em.”
:smugcat:


Ajia slapped her forehead. “Of course they have a portable healer. They would have one of those, the cheats.” Her brow furrowed, and for the first time since she’d arrived, Ajia looked slightly worried. I glanced back at the Rockets and finally spotted it—a sleek, capsule-like device almost like a rounded briefcase, held by one the grunts in the closest jeep.

Right, I suppose that would be a bit more efficient than rocking Revival Herbs given that it would make Pokémon less crabby with you over using them. Probably not anywhere near as cost-effective, though.

“Could… could we try to destroy the healer?” I asked tentatively.

Ajia shook her head. “Those are combat jeeps—they’ll have shields. We need a way to retreat. Aerodactyl should be able to fly with two riders, at least.” She motioned to get Spencer’s attention. “Er, sorry, I don’t know your name.”

“Spencer Dailey, at your service,” he replied with a mock bow.

Ajia: “... Why does that sound like the name of a newspaper-?”
:what:

Spencer: “Look, can we just focus on getting out of here and not getting shot up right now?” >_>;

“Right—do you have any flying Pokémon big enough to carry anyone?”

Spencer’s face fell immediately. “I, er—well, I did. Pidgeot got hurt badly at the start of the battle.”

Ajia clicked her tongue. “How bad? I’ve got a revive for emergencies.”

Spencer: “... What, no Revival Herbs? They’re only ₽2800 a pop, so-”
Ajia: “Look, I like not getting an earful from my Pokémon after they come to, so take the Revive or have fun outrunning these Rockets on land, bub.” >:|

Spencer winced. “It was pretty bad. He’d need some serious healing just to carry me, let alone—” He paused, looking ready to smack himself. It took me a few seconds, but then then it hit me. We were idiots—there had been a massive box of healing supplies in the plane. If we’d only thought to grab some of them.

Ajia raised an eyebrow at the expressions of horror suddenly crossing our faces. “Let me guess—things just got worse? Really guys, this is enough surprises for one day.”

“It’s not that,” I said, putting a hand over my face. “We left behind a huge crate of potions and such in the plane. If we had thought to bring them with us, we could have done the same thing the Rockets are doing now.” Or better yet, we could have figured out a way to escape.

Ajia: “... I take it this is everyone’s first mission here?”
:gardexhausted:

Jade: “Look, in my defense, I didn’t plan on getting snatched from the woods by Rockets, okay?” >_>;

Ajia nodded, her expression tough to make out. She observed the plane was wreck and I could practically see the gears turning in her head. “So, we just need to figure out a way onto the plane. It’d be too difficult for us to make it over there while they’ve got any Pokémon out.”

“And guns. Guns are pretty bad too,” Spencer piped up.

Jade: “... Oh and pray that the Rockets don’t have any heavy ammunition to just shoot through the fuselage-”
:fearfullaugh:

Ajia: “You all would be dead right now if they did, so I think we’re all good on that front.” ^^;

“Don’t worry, I’ve got a plan for that,” Ajia said with a wink. “But as for the Pokémon, since they’ll just get healed anytime we take one out…” Her eyes lit up, and she tapped a fist to her palm. “We just have to take them all out at the same time. Then we can storm the plane while they’re being healed and get out of here, no problem.”

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Rudy: “Oi, can you not?! We’ve got another 50 chapters of this we need to get through!”
:seviAAAAAAAAAAA:


Her enthusiasm was rubbing off—I couldn’t help feeling a jolt of excitement, though it immediately gave way to doubt. “We have to knock them all out at once? How the heck are we supposed to do that?”

“Pii pika’chu pikaa.”

Chibi: “*Heard you needed a bunch of obnoxious goons knocked out right about now?*”

The sudden voice in Pokéspeech caught me off guard, and I whirled around to see the experimental Pikachu finally pulling himself to his feet. He swayed a bit unsteadily, but kept his sharp gaze fixed on us.

“…What?” It took me several seconds to piece together that he wanted to help. “How are you supposed to—you’re out of power, what could you possibly do?”

Chibi: “*You do realize that you can fix that by having your friend’s Electabuzz zap me again, right?*” :|
Pichu: “*Also, I’m here too!*” ^_^

I hadn’t meant to say it so bluntly. The hybrid’s tail twitched angrily, and I flinched. But then, to my surprise, he called out to Pichu.

Pichu glanced back at her trainer in confusion in between ducking and weaving around opponents. Ajia looked just as puzzled for a few seconds, but also curious. So she gave Pichu the go-ahead, and Pichu rushed over to us.

- Beat moment -
Jade: “... Right, starting to feel a little dumb for not thinking of trying this sooner.” ^^;

Then Pikachu explained something at length to the both of them. He spoke too quickly for me to make out what he was saying, though Ajia seemed to have no trouble with it. Every so often I caught a few words like ‘power’ or ‘knock out’ or ‘lightning rod.’

Actually, I’m a little surprised that Tyson doesn’t keep a buddy with Lightningrod around specifically to cockblock Chibi whenever he breaks out. Though I suppose that might have been his Rhydon’s job there.

Throughout all of this, Ajia kept half of her focus on the battle, still giving commands to the rest of her team. Pichu was staring at Pikachu, looking half-impressed, and half like she thought he was insane. She glanced up at her trainer incredulously.

“Sounds weird, but he’d know his power better than we do,” Ajia said, still facing the battle. “I say we go for it.”

Chibi: “*Also, mind your distance while I do my thing.*”
Ajia: “... Yeah, I’m not gonna question it and just do as bird-head says there.”
:fearfullaugh:


Pichu nodded and turned to Pikachu, who held a paw against the electric pouch on her cheek and closed his eyes in concentration. Strings of lightning began surging across his arm, flowing into him from the smaller mouse. He recoiled in pain, but kept his paw firmly in place. His breathing grew labored and his limbs trembled. Sparks leapt from his fur erratically. And yet he gave no sign that he wanted to stop.

“What exactly is going on here?” I asked, feeling horribly lost.

Chibi: “*I step out and deep fry Rockets, you run and grab healing supplies and fly away really quickly.*”
Jade: “... And if one of the Rockets has a ‘mon with Lightningrod?” ^^;
Chibi: “*You take care of said ‘mon first, and then I step out and deep fry Rockets. Then you run and grab healing supplies and fly away really quickly.*”

Ajia tilted her head, looking confused. “Didn’t you hear what he—ohhh, right, I forgot you had trouble with Pokéspeech.”

“Er, well… I’m a lot better than I used to be,” I mumbled, feeling my cheeks go red. “Maybe not fluent, but…”

Narrator: “She still has trouble with Pokéspeech.”

Ajia nodded, obviously realizing I didn’t want to talk about it. “Well, Pichu is channeling her power supply into him. He said he could absorb it, but from the way he described his ability, it’s… strange.” She trailed off, looking both intrigued and puzzled. At least I wasn’t the only one confused.

Chibi: “*How is this confusing when I just spelled out my plan to you-*” :|
Jade: “Because that’s not canon, so I wouldn’t logically know that in the story.”

It took a few minutes for Pichu to drain her remaining power supply into Pikachu, and she had to pause several times. When it was finally done, Pichu slumped to the ground, exhausted. Pikachu slowly rose to his feet, fur standing on end and eyes filled with a renewed vigor. Still, something about his plan didn’t make any sense.

I’m surprised that they had a ‘few minutes’ to work with with the raging battle in the background. Thematically, it might’ve made sense to shorten this time interval in order to better sell the idea of a frantic battle raging in the background right now.

“I don’t get it,” I said to him. “I understand that your power is—I don’t know—more intense from being part Zapdos and all, but if she’s just giving her power to you… what can you do with it that she can’t?”

Chibi: “*Did you not just see how I used your buddy Electabuzz’s power and turned around to use that to take out half the side of the plane you were on?*” >_>;
Jade: “... Yes, I was actually kinda hoping you forgot about that. But where are you going with this?”
:fearfullaugh:


He paused heavily. And then, for the first time that I’d seen, he managed to wrench his face into something other than pain or rage: an ironic smile. “*Most Pokémon can’t drain their whole power supply into one move. It’s not natural. Their bodies can’t handle it. But me? I have a hard time not doing that.*”

Oh, so that’s how Legendary cutscene powers work in this setting, huh? Basically the PP-consuming equivalent of a mag dump.

Ajia kneeled down and scooped up the small, sad form of her drained Pichu, gently placing the mouse in her bag. Then she turned to the rest of us and asked, “Is everyone ready?”

Pikachu was the first one to nod, saying, “*Raichu is the only problem. He’ll be able to deflect some of my lightning.*”

Pichu: “*And you’re sure that that’s the only ‘mon with Lightningrod out on the field-*” ^^;
Electabuzz: “*He’s the only ‘mon with Lightningrod out on the field. Trust me, I’d have noticed.*” >_>;

Ajia nodded. “Alright, so we pretty much have to ditch strategy and take out that Raichu however possible. Sounds fun. Got any sure-shot moves?”

Firestorm: “*Oh! Oh! I’ve got Fire Blast-!*” ^^
Jade: “One, that’s an 85% Accuracy move. Two, we’re not getting almost set on fire by you using that again, okay?” >_>;

It took Spencer a second to realize that she had addressed that last bit to him. “Oh? Oh, yeah! Typhlosion, Electabuzz—use Swift!” he yelled, pointing straight at Raichu.

“Umbreon, Faint Attack! Espeon, Swift! Aerodactyl, Aerial Ace!” Ajia ordered.

Raichu:
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Raichu recoiled in surprise and tried to make a break for it, but was there was no dodging the ridiculous barrage of attacks aimed at him. Energy discs, blades of wind, bursts of shadow—Raichu cried out in pain as he was smacked between one attack after another. The Rocket executive shot a murderous glare at us, but she had no choice but to recall him.

Executive: “Hrmph, so you’ve momentarily inconvenienced me. What do you think you’re going to-”
Chibi: “...”
:super_plotcat:

Executive: “...” O_O;
Rocket!Arcanine: “*Uh… yeah, I don’t like the look on that rat’s face, Boss.*”
:eltyscared:


“Alright, it’s now or never!” Ajia exclaimed motioning for her Pokémon to return to her side.

Typhlosion ducked underground again, and Electabuzz stumbled back to where we stood, bruised, burned, and exhausted. Rudy recalled Squirtle, which made me realize that I’d need to do the same for Swift and Firestorm. I flashed an apologetic look to the Charmander as I held out his Pokéball, but he didn’t protest, so I recalled him.

Firestorm: “*Oh come on!*”
:WHY:

Jade: “Firestorm, we’re not getting set on fire by you here, okay?” >.<

Only the experiment remained standing between us and the Rocket’s Pokémon. We didn’t have much time before Raichu would be fully healed again. Had to make it count.

“*This ends now,*” Pikachu said. A flash of hate flickered in his eyes.

Executive: “... Tyson, you did make a point of bringing your Rhydon over to the portable healer, earlier, right?”
:uhhh:

Tyson: “... Right, knew I was forgetting something.”
:FearfulMeowth:


He raced down the hill into the fray, an explosion of sparks leaping off his body. It wouldn’t have even been right to describe the ensuing lightning as bolts; more like a flood of electricity pouring from every inch of his body with no way to hold it back. The Rocket’s Pokémon countered with a rush of fire, but they were no match. The wave of lightning broke through the flames like they were nothing, completely enveloping the enemy lineup. One by one, all of the Rocket’s Pokémon collapsed to the ground.

Wait, just the Executive’s, or were there other Rockets chipping in? If the latter, that should be Rockets’ there.

But there was no stopping the flood of lightning. I wasn’t sure Pikachu could have controlled it even if he’d wanted to. Huge bolts shot from his body at random, most of them flying into the air, others hurtling toward the Rockets. They didn’t even get a chance to run—all of them standing outside the jeeps collapsed instantly. I couldn’t help wincing—it was strange to see our attackers suddenly rendered so… helpless.

Chibi:
oh-no-anyway.gif

Jade: “... Remind me to never get on your bad side.” O_O
Chibi: “*That would be wise of you, really.*”

And then, just as suddenly as it began, the flood of lightning abruptly ended, giving way to erratic bursts of sparks right before Pikachu collapsed. The whole thing couldn’t have lasted more than thirty seconds, but it had felt like ages. I couldn’t help tensing up—time to move.

- Chibi flops over and faceplants, while raising a paw -
Chibi: “*For the record, that’s what you all get for being stupid enough to have only one ‘mon with Lightningrod!*”

“That’s our cue!” Ajia called out. Her team immediately huddled around her in a defensive formation.

Spencer motioned to Typhlosion, who spewed a thick cloud of smoke down the hill, completely surrounding the Rockets. Then he gave Electabuzz an apologetic look and said, “Just a little more, buddy, we’re almost free.” The electric-type grunted with fatigue, but joined Ajia’s defensive lineup.

Electabuzz: “*Spencer, I’m pretty sure that I’m getting into the range where I’m about to start using Struggle at this rate.*”
:fearfullaugh:

Spencer: “Yes, and that was why I was apologizing. Just hang into there a bit longer until I can snag an Ether or four from that chest?” ^^;

Next, Ajia turned to me and Rudy and said, “You two hop on Aerodactyl, the rest of us will follow on foot.” We didn’t need telling twice—both of us jumped up and got positioned on the winged reptile’s back, tightly gripping the straps on its harness.

“Everyone ready? Let’s move out!”

Cue the theme music:

View: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RD4r8ufspg0


Aerodactyl vaulted into the air, and I clutched the straps for dear life as my stomach suddenly flipped upside down. Oh man, was I not ready for my first flight to be on something this fast. For the first few seconds I screwed my eyes shut, refusing to look down. But then… I had to know if Ajia and Spencer were alright on the ground. So I opened my eyes just a crack, and barely caught a glimpse of two figures sprinting down the hill as quickly as possible, surrounded on all sides by Pokémon. It was hard to see them clearly through the smoke, but the Rockets must have noticed them—my heart stopped as gunfire broke out.

Jade: “Ajia!
:eltyscared:


But Ajia’s plan worked—most of the shots completely missed. One or two bullets pinged uselessly off of Protect shields. I let out the breath I’d been holding, then immediately held it again as Aerodactyl tucked its wings and swooped forward and shot straight through the hole in the back of the jet. Then it flared its wings to kill our momentum, and I nearly toppled right over its head before we all came to a stop in the middle of the cargo bay.

Jade: “Wait, why did the music suddenly cut out?” .-.
Aerodactyl: “*Does that whenever you land. In retrospect, someone probably should’ve changed the timing to not kick in whenever you’re so much as five feet off the ground.*”
:gardeshrug~1:


My limbs shook as I slid down from the reptile’s back. Rudy looked a bit nauseous and muttered, “That would have been so cool if we weren’t running for our lives.

I get the feeling that that’s going to sum up a lot of moments later on in this story.

Not far behind us, Ajia and Spencer leaped through the hole almost weightlessly, glowing with the aura of Espeon’s telekinesis. Ajia paused just long enough to recall the psychic-type before racing forward to meet us, holding the experimental Pikachu under one arm.

“I grabbed him from the battlefield,” she said, thrusting the spiky furball into my arms.

Ajia: “Also, I’d rather not get accidentally shocked if he comes to, so… yeah. Have fun with him.” ^^;

I blinked confusedly, taking several seconds to process what had just happened. My brain attempted to form the words, “He’s not mine,” but Ajia cut me off by asking Spencer where the healing supplies were.

A point that Chibi would very vehemently agree with were he lucid from what I remember of his attitude up to where I originally read.

“O-oh, right, they were near the front of the plane last I saw them,” he replied.

Ajia nodded, and the two of them dashed off through the maze of boxes and crates. I stood there with Rudy, unable to do anything but wait, now uncomfortably aware of the clock ticking down until the Rockets’ Pokémon would be healed.

Rudy: “You really couldn’t have taken out those jeeps, huh?”
- Chibi briefly snaps to attention -
Chibi: “*I’m sorry, maybe you should electrocute twenty Rockets and their Pokémon by yourself next time!*”
:hisssssss:


“Found them!” Ajia exclaimed, and the two soon reappeared, carrying the box.

Spencer released his Pidgeot, and they immediately began spraying the massive bird with nearly every medicine they could get their hands on. Slowly, the blackened skin and feathers began to heal. Once most of the visible damage was gone, Spencer pressed a small yellow crystal against the bird’s head, and it finally snapped awake.

Oh, so Revives are topically applied in this setting and not swallowed. Wouldn’t have reflexively assumed that, but I suppose it makes sense if the average healing item is also topically applied.

“Hey bud, feeling better?” Spencer asked as Pidgeot stumbled to its feet—still a bit dazed and weak, but clearly in much better shape than before.

“Alright! Time to get out of here and never get captured by Rockets again! Sound good? I thought so, now get over here Rudy!” Spencer called out.

Narrator: “They will be captured by Rockets at some time in the future.”

Not wasting any time, Rudy sprinted over and jumped on behind Spencer while Ajia ran over to me and the two of us mounted her Aerodactyl. Both Pokémon outstretched their wings, and I barely had a few seconds to brace myself before we took off. Aerodactyl shot forward, straight through the opening at the back of the jet, nearly throwing me off with its speed. I clenched my teeth and struggled to keep my grip on the harness straps, all while holding the Pikachu tucked under my arm.

Aerodactyl: “*♫ Do-do-doo-do-do-do... Do-do~ Do-do-doo-do-do-do... Do-doo~ ♫*”
Chibi: “*Is that really necessary right now?*” >.<
Aerodactyl:
:blobyes:


Suddenly, Aerodactyl swerved to the left to avoid a streak of lightning that tore past us, rending the air with an earsplitting crack. I barely caught a glimpse of the Raichu sparking wildly beneath us, apparently fully healed. So they’d managed to heal it in time. But then the sickening realization hit me—Pidgeot hadn’t been fast enough to avoid the mouse’s Thunder last time.

Aerodactyl: “*Alright, nevermind! Soundtrack can wait until we’re not getting sniped at!*” O.O;

I threw a glance over my shoulder to see Spencer and Rudy trailing behind us. Time slowed, and my insides froze as the Raichu prepared for another attack. They weren’t going to make it.

And then without warning, Pidgeot accelerated out of nowhere, speeding forward to catch up with us and narrowly avoiding the lightning bolt that was aimed straight at them.

Pidgeot: “*Ha ha! Nothing like that Mach 3 flight, baby!*” ^v^
Swift: “*I’m pretty sure that’s just an urban legend-*”
Pidgeot: “*Oi, let me have my moment here, squirt!*” >v>;

“Ha! I knew it’d be good to give you a dose of that X Speed in there!” Spencer exclaimed wildly, patting his bird’s neck.

Swift: “*Oh, so that’s how you-*”
Pidgeot: “*Shut up, don’t you have a Pokéball to be in right now?*” >v>;

I couldn’t even see the Rockets anymore, that’s how fast we were speeding away from them. My eyes were wide and my breathing shallow and I could hardly believe what had just happened, but none of that mattered because we’d made it.

Jade: “Oh thank god. That’s all over and I can finally go home-”
:sweats:

Rudy: “Jade, there’s like 50 more chapters of this.”
- Jade looks up at the chapter listing -
Jade: “... Oh yay me there.”
:riOMEGAlu:


Well, that was a ride there. I don’t remember the original Chapter 4 being too different from this one, but perhaps that’s an artifact of how long it’s been since I read it. Either way, it was quite the capstone for what’s effectively the opening arc to this story.

The main draw of this chapter is obviously its battle choreography and atmosphere. Both were really well done, and displays a lot of creativity for a team battle while capturing that sense of a hectic and frantic battle. Ditto that feeling of dread as things are going sideways followed by relief / elation at a surprise second wind. I was also surprised at the amount of worldbuilding you were able to squeeze in, since you managed to get in some fascinating TM worldbuilding along with some meta balancing without going full infodump about it. It’s a bit of a dark art to master as a writer, but you pulled it off well here and even integrated it nicely into the events of the chapter proper.

As for weaknesses to bring up… there’s not much, really. Just a couple typos here and there, but it’s put together very well here. I suppose there’s a few moments where the Jade and the gang’s gambit could’ve gotten shut down in a hurry had the Rockets had a couple extra ‘mons out on the field. But eh. They’re Rockets, critical small oversights like these are just the Rocket way across canons. The one thing that maaaaaybe could’ve been done differently would be to hint a bit more as to how Ajia came across the group to be a bit less Deus Ex Machina-ey, but eh. From what I remember she more or less does just that in the very next chapter.

Good work on the chapter, @Chibi Pika ! I had a lot of fun while reviewing it, and I hope the feedback was similarly fun to read. That rounds out the review exchange on my end, and while it might be a bit of a tough lift to come back to this story before RB4’s over, I do hope to come back to it sometime soon.

… Ideally sometime sooner than in another 11 months this time. ^^;
 

Sinderella

Angy Tumbleweed
Staff
Location
In Guzma's Closet
Pronouns
She/Her
Partners
  1. sylveon-shiny
  2. gothitelle
  3. froslass
  4. chandelure
  5. mimikyu
ALRRIIIIGGGGHTHHHHHTTTTT after like two years of being a fucking rat I'm starting LC, WOO. I will be swooshing through our exchange with a mass review of the prologue through the chapter 5 extra cuz SHEEEEESH I blazed through this somehow. Your writing style is very easy for my brainrot-ADHD-low-attention-span brain to take in so for that, bless you.

Alright so prologue kicks off with Lugia doin' his thaaaaaaang, and I get the vibe that what's going on with Lugia's shit is somehow, yet not really, completely separate from the shit Jade just got herself involved in. Like, I'm sure it's gonna MERGE together at some point buuuuuuuuuut idk when, idk how, i don't even know why. I doubly don't even know what's going on on that end of the spectrum, however comma, SEVEN YEARS OF BULLSHIT IS IN STORE, APPARENTLY. I also recall that Jade does end up as Lugia's trainer at some point, soooooo I am holding my breath for however the hell that ends up happening cuz at the stage she's at in these chapters, I imagine that gives her a coronary in some sense.

Starr is giving mad tsundere vibes, and based on that one comic you posted in the art gallery channel, I feel like this is gonna be a platonic Romeo and Juliet scenario in where her ass is already in with Rocket, Jade's fighting Rocket, and now they're mortal frenemies. OOOORRRR Jade's already been recruited by dreamboat Stalker (🤤) and has done this song and dance already and they're just at odds the whole time. Really hype for her to come back in.

I feel INSANELY bad for Jade overall, my anxiety was BOILING on her behalf. As a horrible test taker myself, I was just clenching all over at the thought of being held back by failing a stupid test while all my besties got to go out and live their best lives. I like how she keeps trying to tell herself It's Fine(TM), It's Fine(TM), but like she's kinda dying inside knowing that even her younger friend Rudy is about to bounce, leaving her by her lonesome to suffer through this one subject she can't nail down. I'm frustrated FOR her.

That said, I really enjoy the whole nuance of her becoming a trainer illegally, because now going out into the real world, she doesn't have the crutch that licensed trainers have. She has to rough it a little more, and is not allowed the same liberties, so she has to find a way to finesse her way through until she has a chance to retake the test and get licensed (if she ever does, I wonder if she will tbh). I think this helps establish her character more--she's not gonna let some dumb grade hold her back, and she's GONNA figure it out one way or another. Good for her, we stan a determined queen.

I did have a question though, and this might be a result of my Speedreader Syndrome(TM), but I thought dreamboat Stalker (🤤) said to come find him AFTER she got her license. Or, after she became a trainer, I should say. Did that MEAN after she got her license, or just when she decided "fuck it, license or not, I'm a trainer"? That bit kinda got lost on me but I'm also good at glazing over shit or misreading context sometimes.

I wonder if we'll see our buddy Tyson again. Or that administrator chick. I have a feeling at least TYSON is in for an ass beating, so I wonder if he's gonna come back for some mad REVAAAAAANGE.

I really loved Spencer's lines but holy fuck that man is SUS. Like, just happened to be there, I guess???? I don't think I believe that his 'mon was actually stolen; I thiiiiiiiiink he's giving double agent vibes. Spy for dreamboat Stalker (🤤) while also being a spy for Team Rocket? I really don't KNOW for sure yet but I AM sure is that, for what a king he is in terms of one-liners, I don't trust him as far as I can throw him.

I also wonder if Rudy is going to become more relevant because at the moment he's giving...irrelevance.

AIJA is another one I'm sus of but not for the same reason as Spencer. I think she has FOR SURE been recruited by dreamboat Stalker (🤤) and is both thrilled and mortified that her friend is about to go through the same shit, which is why she was being intentionally sparse with her information. Or maybe I'm dead wrong and she's a filthy liar, and she's straight up a Rocket. Idk but while she IS sus, she's not setting off "hm might actually be a serial killer" bells like Spencer.

So far I'm digging the worldbuilding. I love the different mechanics about TMs, healing items, the concept of journeys in general, move functionality, and all that jazz. Seems like mixing together all the different canons with your own spin. Really cool stuff, am excited to see it all get expanded on.

I wasn't originally going to read the bonus chapter but I figured I might as well and I'm glad I did!! It was a very cute interaction, and you really captured the vibe of "stern but supportive mother." Like....she's not about this plan but she also sees her kid is really determined so she decides to relent, with conditions. It's a compromise, and I appreciated it. Go mom.

Anyway, there's a lot of setup happening here and I know it'll all just keep explaining itself as I read. Can't wait for Jade to join dreamboat Stalker's (🤤) army of adolescents and can't wait for Nine to decide he's staying. He's being oddly quiet rn soooooo really looking forward to what he's got to say, eventually.

I........don't know if I have any pressing critiques that aren't in my line-by-lines. It's clear this has been pretty well refined (no shit it being two decades old LMFAO), so everything I have is mostly just nitpicky opinionated shit.

Thank you for review exchanging with me and thank you for writing!!! I'm hype to keep going.

Line-by-lines
Ajia sighed. “She… told me she didn’t want to talk about it with you ‘cause she knew you’d take it the hardest.”
This is giving "Rachel not saying goodbye to Ross before she moved to Paris because it was going to be the hardest for her" awwwwww Starr you old softee.

I slowly uncovered my face. “You never really see your dad much anymore… do you?”

She shook her head.
Is her dad Giovanni

We sat there for some time. It was probably only a few minutes, but I wanted it to last forever. Eventually, Starr glanced up at a blue car that had just parked along the curb. She stared at it for a few seconds, then stood up and threw her backpack over her shoulder before walking towards the car, feet dragging a bit. She had only taken a few steps when she paused, turning back towards me one last time.
The repetition of "car" just read weird.

“Bye.”
Okay you fucking tsundere, be like that

“It’ll be fiiiine,” Rudy said dismissively, waving a hand. “There’s no grass nearby, look.”
Famous last words, Rudy

And there it was. The reminder that he’d be leaving soon. Just like everyone else. I’d been trying to ignore it, to pretend it wasn’t really happening. But there was no avoiding it forever.
:(((((((((( Jade just cheat at this point, I wouldn't even blame you

“I’m just saying if I failed the exam twice, that’s what I’d do—just take Ebony and leave. Though it would kinda suck not getting to challenge any gyms.”
Yeah that's the really defeating logic here tbh---fuck the test, I can go be a trainer anyway, BUT, I can't challenge gyms or yk....do the thing trainers do. Really frustrating.

“There are monotype trainers,” he said defensively.

“Well, I guess if you feel like losing to one Blastoise…”
LEAVE MONOTYPE TRAINERS ALONE THEY'RE DOING GREAT

I glanced up at the sky and called for Swift, but he wasn’t there.
If Swift gets rotisseried I'm gonna fucking riot

when I spotted a plume of smoke over the trees to the north. What was that?
IF SWIFT GETS ROTISSERIED I'M GONNA FUCKING RIOT

The odor saturating the air was burning flesh.
A perfect curveball to her day, I guess

It was breathing. The mound was alive. It was a Charmander.
Conveniently placed starter that she found WITHOUT it having to be given to her by a League person because Jade's just built like that

I jolted at the sudden voice and threw a glance over my shoulder to see a tall figure slowly approaching through the haze. A young man, judging by the voice. Once he was close enough, I could see him more clearly—roughly college-aged, with a sharp face framed by wavy brown hair. A long, gray trench coat covered most of his lanky frame. His thick boots left clear footprints in the ash.
YES.
YES.
YES.
FUCKING YES, MY MAN HAS ARRIVED ON THE SCENE YES

“I can show you if you follow me,” he said, tilting his head in the direction I’d been walking.
Jade do NOT follow the strange frat guy you just met in the woods, he does NOT have candy in his Tesla, ffs

“Desperate times,” he said simply. “The pact allows for life-or-death scenarios.”
The pact??? Interesting, is that like how humans get by "catching" Pokemon? There was some pact made a millennia ago with rules on when and when not to?

“You underestimate the team’s influence,” he replied with a slight laugh. “They have agents working all over. Turning him in wouldn’t do anything.”
Ah yes and conspiracy starts here, YUMMY

“That’s why they’re aiming to capture Legendary Pokémon. If the combat unit had legends at their disposal, there would be no stopping them.” His tone was perfectly casual, as though Team Rocket being on the verge of a regional conquest was normal, everyday conversation.
And here we have the plot start---capture the legendaries before rocket does, yay!!!!

He gave me a very serious look. “Are you interested in helping stop Team Rocket’s Legendary project? Would you be willing to fight them?”
HE'S TRYING TO SELL YOU A WATCH, SAY NO JADE

He considered me for a while before reaching into his coat pocket and pulling out a small card. “I’ve been handing these out to people just starting their journey,” he said, handing it to me. “This is your formal invitation to join a team against the Rockets. If you want to know more, meet me at the specified location after you become a trainer.”
Yeeaaaah this was the part that I mentioned in my paragraphs, I took this as "come find me when you get your license" but I could also parse this as "come find me when you DECIDE you're a trainer" but it still left me a little confused

If you have received this card, it is because you have been recognized as either a beginning trainer with high potential, or an ambitious young trainer willing to face danger for the sake of stopping Team Rocket. If you are serious about joining a rebellion against the Rockets, then meet at pier 3 in Vermilion harbor prior to June 16 for further instruction.
Rebellion = child army maybe????

I’d been spotted. And they were coming for me.
OH WELP, SHIT GUESS I GOTTA KEEP READING HUH

Even if he’d still been there, it would obviously be a bad idea for him to follow us inside, where he could get trapped. It was better that he’d left. And yet… I couldn’t help feeling more alone than ever.
The sentence after "And yet" was a little weird for me because I would take "I couldn't help feeling more alone than ever" as something she'd think in the event Swift were WITH her and yet she still felt like she were in this by herself, if that makes sense? You could probably cut that whole bit out, or reword it into something like "Yes, I wish I had him with me so I wouldn't feel so alone."

“That’s not all,” the driver cut in. “I saw him. The one we’ve heard rumors about from the new recruits. Of course, he was far off so I didn’t see what he looked like, but I know she did.”
They're gonna waterboard the SHIT out of her aren't they

My heart crumpled inward. “What do you want with Charmander—it’s badly hurt!”

“I’m sure they’ll heal it before it’s sold,” the Rocket drawled, pocketing it. I wanted to reach out, make him give it back, anything. But my arm wouldn’t move.
THATS NOT A PART OF THE PACT

“Hello there,” he said. “It looks like I’m rescuing you. My name’s Spencer—I think we’re gonna be good friends.”
Right off the bat I don't trust him, definitely a serial killer

Spencer stepped aside, revealing a rather disgruntled Rudy standing in the entrance to the cargo hold.
RUDY WTF ARE YOU IN ON THIS

“You got a starter?” I blurted out. “Already?”
Yeah my thoughts exactly, I didn't realize he was going to get it THAT DAY, I thought the man had chores to do

Now it was Rudy’s turn to gape at me. “You have a Charmander? What in the… how?”
COPE, SEETHE, MALD

“Well, uh, okay—so you’ve been around humans before. Do you have a human name?”

The fire lizard gave me a long, quiet stare, something shifting in its eyes. “*Firestorm,*” it eventually said.
That is the edgiest name for the smallest lizard, I love

“Experimental Pokémon?”
HEY NINE

The three of us whirled around in a panic, all eyes falling on the Pokémon that had appeared behind us. A jagged, lightning bolt-shaped tail twitched. Four paws slowly lifted a small, golden-furred mouse off the floor. It couldn’t be…

“It’s… it’s a Pikachu?” Spencer blurted out, stifling a laugh. “A Pikachu?
HEY NINE

The Pikachu turned sharply and shot a string of lightning at us, shattering the black Pokéball before we could do anything.
NINE WHY DID YOU DO THAT

“Uhh, hey,” Spencer said, waving awkwardly. “Could you leave for a bit? We kind of have a situation here.”
Okay as much as I think he probably boils newborns in his basement, this SENT me

“Er… I was actually hoping you’d have a plan…” he said sheepishly.
Bro you are USELESS /hj

“Oh, come on!” Rudy exclaimed. “We’re not gonna get anywhere by just hiding!”
THEN YOU COME UP WITH SOMETHING GENIUS

“This is Swift’s Pokéball?”
Aw Rudy's a homie for giving her one, that's like 200p dawg

And also get us pizza,” he added as an afterthought.
I like the way this guy thinks even though he probably boils newborns in his basement

Spence muttered quickly,
Dropped "r" at the end of Spencer.

“Well, it was just sitting over there—I’ve been wanting to grab it for the past five minutes or so,” he said, proceeding to dig through its contents while Ebony stuck her nose in the box, sniffing.
Fam you are literally having a torrent of electricity and fire flying at you, you can't keep your ADHD in check for FIVE MINUTES????

“Electabuzz, stop him!” Spencer called out in confusion.
Electric type on weird experiment electric type, that is NOT going to end well is it

Rudy didn’t seem to have noticed it—he’d gone back to digging through the TM box with Ebony. Spencer was chatting away at his Electabuzz and Dewgong.
GUYS THE PLANE IS GOING DOWN WTF ARE YOU--

Even weirder was the fact that until we had tried to leave, Tyson had seemed weirdly okay with everything that was going on. Earlier he’d been trying his hardest not to explode with rage. Now he just seemed… impatient.
This sentiment was a little odd, didn't really grab the importance of the change in his attitude, I feel like the impatience would still be in line with raging. Knowing what does end up happening I'd actually imagine he'd be like "Yeah have at it go run off into the woods"

Spencer and Rudy looked up at him immediately. Tyson must have noticed that we were staring at him because he said, “It’s a GPS, idiots,” before going back to fiddling with the buttons.
GPS MEANS GETTING BACK HOME THO, HUH

“Actually!” Spencer exclaimed suddenly. “I just remembered I have somewhere very important to be, so y’know, I’m just gonna have to take a rain check on the whole battling Rockets to the death thing, so sorry I can’t make it, very urgent, hope you’ll understand, hey guys you’re invited too, let’s go now, Arcanine!
Spencer you are a king even though you probably boil newborns in your basement

Strings of electricity coursed through his feathers, slowly intensifying until, without warning, the hybrid collapsed face-down, muttering incoherently to himself.
I feel bad for him but this was such a funny visual

Swift watched with curious interest as I held the disc a few inches above Firestorm’s forehead, flipped a small switch on its side to unlock it, and pressed the largest button. The disc glowed for a few seconds and began spinning—giving off some sort of wave, from what little I knew about TMs. Firestorm froze, looking like he’d been seized by some invisible force. Different parts of his body began to glow faintly. After nearly a minute, the disc slowed, and I pulled it away.
I feel like........teaching this baby Charizard Fire Blast is gonna have a pretty hefty consequence

And then his gaze sharpened instantly. Shimmering waves of heat began to leak from the Charmander’s mouth, like he couldn’t hold it back. That was the only warning before his mouth snapped open and a column of flames poured out, sending his small figure reeling backwards from the force. So much fire that it almost looked ridiculous coming from him.
I think I was right LMAO

“Using a TM just gives a Pokémon the ability to do the move. They’re not suddenly gonna be an expert at it without any practice. That goes double for the uber ones that’re hard to control,” Spencer explained while directing his Pokémon back into battle position.
YEAH I WAS HELLA RIGHT LMAO

“Superpower. Really? It used Superpower? Can I just forfeit now or get a handicap or something??”
Sir this isn't the games, you don't get that luxury unfortnite

When the winged Pokémon got within view, I could finally make out a petite teenaged girl riding on its back—fair-skinned with a bright, confident face and short, black hair blowing in the wind.

It really was her.

“No way… Ajia?!” I yelled.
AIJA, JUST SUSPICIOUSLY IN THE AREA HUH???? HOW CONVENIENTLY SUSPICIOUS

“What’s wrong, Jade? I thought you’d be happier to see me,” she said, laughing and elbowing me lightly in the ribs.
I MEAN SHE PROBABLY IS BUT YOU'RE SUS

“Hi, guys. I love reunions, and the best way to bond at a reunion is to beat the crap out of the people that want to kill us with awesome top-class Pokémon that you totally have, am-I-right?” Spencer cut in rapidly with an overly hopeful look on his face.
Yeah my thoughts exactly, get back to the battle yo you've got mutants on your ass

“She probably had Raichu put up a Light Screen at the last second—at least, I wouldn’t expect anything less from her,”
OH SO AIJA KNOWS HER???? YEAH SUS

“*Most Pokémon can’t drain their whole power supply into one move. It’s not natural. Their bodies can’t handle it. But me? I have a hard time not doing that.*”
Hmmmmmmmm interested to see more building on this!!

Ajia asked if he had the Lightningrod ability, and the answer is... kind of. He has to be hit by an electric move in order to absorb it—sort of like Volt Absorb. However, this is not passive—he has to exert a lot of effort to do so, and it does hurt him. But he uses the power to fill up his own power supply in addition to getting the power boost from Lightningrod, which makes the tradeoff in pain easily worth it. Remember that he has an unnaturally small power supply as a side effect of his mutations (his energy signature has the natural intensity of Zapdos, but his body isn't able to handle this.) So he has to be very careful to conserve his power supply in battle. Unfortunately, this is inherently difficult for him since letting out even a small amount of power opens the floodgates—his body naturally tries to expel all of it, and it takes a lot of effort to prevent this. What he did in this chapter was deliberately take advantage of this weakness.
Aaaaaand thank you for the explanation, very cool!!!

I decided to go with “pyen” as Kanto's monetary unit in LC.
I just thought this was cool, carry on :>

A few seconds passed. Starr rubbed her arm, glancing away. “But like… if you wanted to help, I’m not gonna stop you or anything.”
SHE. IS. SUCH. A. TSUNDERE.

“Okay, okay, I already knew you were in trouble. I heard about the situation from a friend. It’s kind of a long story, though.”
?????????????????????????????????? WE'VE GOT TIME, EXPLAIN YOURSELF SIS

“Jade, be glad that what happened today didn’t pull you in too deep,” she said, suddenly looking very serious. I blinked, a bit taken aback by the sudden tone shift. My brain still had a hard time accepting the fact that she was used to situations like this.
Oh yeah she was definitely in dreamboat Stalker's (🤤) army no cap

I hadn’t wanted to get involved because I didn’t think I could make a difference. Now I wanted to join because of that. Maybe I was just insane.
Honestly, valid

Something flickered in her eyes when I said that, though I couldn’t quite figure out what. “So you really want to fight the Rockets, huh? Even after what I said.”
BITCH JUST ADMIT YOU'RE ALREADY IN THE CHILD ARMY YOU'RE NOT SLICK

“Leaving now, huh?” Spencer asked. “Take care! Nice fighting with you, or… alongside you, I guess.”
The chill parting leads me to believe we're definitely going to be seeing him again and he is DEFINITELY going to be boiling newborns in his basement.

Also, where the hell did Rudy go? I was a little concerned that Jade just kinda flew off with Aija without him, and there wasn't any real explanation of where he was.

There, at the edge of the trees, stood a tall, cloaked figure wearing a dark mask that completely covered his face. My heart caught in my chest. Finally. It had to be him—the one I’d met in the forest that day.
Zero from Code Geass or my LC husband????????? You decide

He paused, mulling the question over. “I suppose I just preferred having a blank slate to work with. I want to train you all from scratch in the battling style that will be most useful for our missions, instead of forcing an experienced trainer to relearn everything.”
Jade you're joining a cult, just go cheat on the test

He paused to consider the question. “I suppose you guys will need something to call me…” He turned away, and the last thing he said before Charizard lifted off was, “Stalker.”
That is literally the WORST FUCKING NAME in the BEST POSSIBLE WAY, IS HE SINGLE

My mom paused, processing what I’d just said. “You took Swift, didn’t you?”
Ma'am did you not realize your bird wasn't in the house when you got home from work
 

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Chapter 39

“Just don’t touch any equipment or anything,” Ajia added with a wink.

Darren elbowed Rudy, who had just picked up some kind of colorful, remote-like device from a shelf. It looked a lot like the ones that rangers used to calm raging Pokémon on TV. (Granted, it probably didn’t work anything like it did on TV, but the device itself was real.) Rudy hastily set it down, then opted to go raid the kitchen cupboards for whatever nonperishable foods had been left here.
Moltres's chosen, ladies and gentlemen

I’d dropped my team off at the main Ranger HQ healing station. My memory of the encounter was a bit fuzzy. After the adrenaline from the mission had worn off, it’d been replaced by a wave of sheer panic as I’d rushed straight there and made them swear that they absolutely would not open Swift’s Pokéball until they were ready to stabilize him. And they’d reassured me, over and over, that yes, they’d be able to handle it, and yes, from my description of the injury and the speed he’d been recalled, he was almost certainly going to recover. And now, an hour later, their words were starting to stick, and I could feel myself relaxing slightly. But the mental image of what had happened still burned, leaving a sickly anxiety worming through my insides.
I like this description, particularly the anxiety worming through my insides.

When I’d first gotten it, there wasn’t anyone I could ask about it other than Stalker. And I’d never gotten the chance to ask him. But now? I was acquainted with multiple Legendary Pokémon, all of whom were familiar with the chosen pact. They’d definitely know something about the orb, right?

Something else prodded at the back of my mind. What had that pedestal said? That the alliance between human and legend… would fail? I hadn’t paid it much thought at the time. But now I’d seen the proof that the alliance itself was more than just a myth. Now the idea was a lot more unpleasant. Lugia and Mew didn’t seem to be under the impression that our efforts would fail. And we’d just had a major success too…
And then Jade goes on to not tell them about it. That's pretty interesting. Jade isn't scared of what will happen if she tells them or anything, just thinks about how this makes it even more concerning, and yet then she just stops thinking about it. I'm wondering if something about its influence is making her forget or not want to tell anyone, the way it influenced her to come get it in the first place.

Starr paused. “Is he gonna be alright?”

“The rangers said he would be, but…”

“But you’re worrying yourself about it ‘cause that’s what you do,” she finished.

I tilted my head back to look at her directly. “Kinda like what you’ve been doing.”

To my immense surprise, she let out a snort. “Got me there.” She sank against the back of the chair so that her chin was resting on the top of my head. “Just tell me we’re done for the day, alright? No more surprises.”
Aww. They are friends. I enjoy the casual physicality of this conversation, Starr leaning on Jade's shoulder and rubbing knuckles into her scalp and chin resting on the top of her head. Just these nice little gestures of comfort with each other.

Something else was bothering me. From what the others had said, Raven and Ender were the only executives at that mission. Only two. Two top-class, legendary-handing executives, sure. But only two? Where were the rest of them? Did the Rockets really care so little about that mission? They’d taken a huge gamble by putting Moltres in such a vulnerable position… there had to be a good reason.
Don't quite recall if we learned the answer to this... Was it a distraction while the others were off doing something else more important?

Starr stood bolt upright. “Yeah, hold up. That’s Ajia’s deal, alright? The rest of us aren’t insane.” I found myself sinking lower into my chair.
Jade has transformed into :chibiUm:

I sank back into the chair, still feeling a bit on-edge. The Legendary I had just made an alliance with… was one of the ones responsible for the attack on Viridian. And I didn’t feel remotely comfortable talking to it about that. Besides, Mew had been 100% against the attack. Mew had confronted Lugia about it, right?
Not Talking About Viridian count: 1

At the point I finally noticed Rudy standing at the entrance to the kitchen, staring at Ajia with his mouth hanging open. And from the looks of things, he’d been like that for the past minute or so.
Surprise Rudy Heard All That

(Should that be "At that point"?)

“Guess this explains why you guys were so sure we could pull off freeing Moltres, huh?” Darren asked me with a sideways grin. “Seemed like a crazy plan otherwise.”
Wait, when'd Darren get there? Is he with Rudy? It's a bit unclear at the moment; last time Darren came up was when he was admonishing Rudy about the Capture Styler.

“Yeah, give Jade time to make something up,” Darren added with a chuckle. I glared at him and he just gave me a wry grin.
Has Darren already figured out Jade is chosen too?

It also didn’t help that I was having a hard time thinking on account of Lugia complaining in my head the entire time.
I enjoy this line, and the implication that for the past few lines Jade has been trying to tune out Lugia.

Lugia paused, unwilling to agree with what I’d said, but also struggling to think of a shutdown. It finally settled on, <Well… those two interlopers are one thing, but what about the others? What about her?>

I raised an eyebrow. <You’re gonna need to be a little more specific.>

<I’m not good with human names,> Lugia mumbled. <The one that you and Mew’s chosen are close to.>

I tensed up, feeling uneasy. <Starr? What about her. She already knows about the chosen pact, remember?>

<I’m aware,> Lugia said sharply. <That doesn’t give her the right to be privy to our plans. Particularly considering her… colorful past.>

I bristled. So Lugia knew about that. <Look, I don’t want to have this conversation. Starr betrayed Team Rocket. I trust her with my life.>
I would have thought Kari was the bigger problem here - truly an outsider none of them know all that well, right?

Lugia was silent for some time. Scattered bubbles of frustration drifted through its thoughts, but it didn’t put any of them into words. <…Fine,> it said grudgingly, and then its presence retreated into the corner of my mind where I had a harder time feeling it.

I let out a deep sigh of relief, already feeling a lot better. Dealing with my own emotions was one thing, but getting a double dose of anxiety was too much to handle.
This feels very Mark and Chaletwo and I'm enjoying it. Definitely a sense that Lugia doesn't want to anger its chosen too much. Wonder if there's more behind that; Lugia certainly seems overall more assertive than Chaletwo.

Rudy was slowly inching closer to Moltres with a look of disturbed fascination. Meanwhile, Starr was glancing around the scene with a disapproving look on her face.

“So we’ve just got the Legendary bird of fire unconscious right here, huh?” she said. “No big deal, right?”

I gave her a look. “You’re acting like this is the first time you’ve seen Moltres.”

“Yeah, well, I am not letting myself get desensitized to this crap,” she said, rubbing her eyes. “This is not normal, okay?”
I love Starr.

Starr took a few steps back, raising both arms. “Allllright, I’m good. I’ve seen enough. Heading back to the cabin now. I do not need to be near that thing when it wakes up.”

She turned and walked off into the forest, making it abound thirty feet before pausing like she’d just realized something. Then she turned to look back at me expectantly, waiting. She was expecting me to follow her. But if the Legendaries were going to be explaining the situation to Moltres soon, wouldn’t it be best if the chosen were present for it? Not that I could say I was chosen, but…

I gave Starr a helpless shrug that hopefully conveyed the fact that I wanted to follow her but couldn’t. She scowled and turned away, walking further away until she was out of sight.
Starr tries so hard not to get involved. Jade would never have managed to hide it very long, would she.

“Ah. That would be why,” Moltres said dryly, and it took me a second to realize that it had switched from Pokéspeech to common. “Seems we have humans in our midst.” It turned back to face Ho-oh. “Why is this acceptable?”

“These humans freed you from your capture,” the larger phoenix replied simply.

Moltres glanced back at us once more, narrowing its eyes. “I see. I would like to leave now.”
I enjoy how blunt Moltres is about this.

Ho-oh turned to face the rest of us, the four humans standing at the edge of the trees. “I must thank you all for your assistance.” Its gaze fell on me, and I couldn’t help shrinking back a bit. “I don’t believe I’ve made your acquaintance,” the phoenix said, bowing its head. “You are aligned with my sibling, are you not?”

I blinked in surprise. It took me a second to realize it was talking about my chosen pact with Lugia. “Oh, uh, that’s right.” Unsure of what else to do, I bowed back and said, “It’s nice to meet you?”
Surprised Jade doesn't wonder about Rudy and Darren hearing this, given she knows they're right there.

Moltres was silent for several seconds. “I see…” it said, the emotion in its voice hard to place. It then glanced at each of the Legendaries in turn. “And what of Zapdos? Were they not a part of this effort?”

Ho-oh’s face fell. It glanced back at Mew imploringly.

<Zapdos has… not been speaking with me,> she said softly, curling her tail around herself.
Forgot about this. Excited to see more of Zapdos next chapter (that's next chapter, right?).

Off Moltres's expressions and body language cues, it sounds like it doesn't have a fantastic relationship with Articuno, and a somewhat less fraught one with Zapdos. I don't recall the fic getting into their character dynamics much since this point, so that's a fun thing to keep in mind on the reread.

She gestured for Ajia to step forward, who did so with all the confidence of someone who wasn’t surrounded by Legendaries.
Using "who" as a conjunction here feels strange to me when the noun being referred to wasn't the actual last word before it? Maybe it's just me?

“The Rockets still have four Legendaries in their possession,” Ajia explained. “We’re not going to stop until we’ve freed them all. If we can pull it off, that will definitely prevent the war, won’t it?”

<That’s optimistic,> Lugia said with a snort.

<We need the optimism,> Mew replied, giving the dragon-bird a hard look.
This is actually the anti-TQftL, where setting caught legendaries free will prevent a war :galaxeon:

(also I see what you did there with the optimism)

“Well, that’s one way of looking at it,” Ho-oh said, considering her carefully. “But we must also prepare for the worst—if we are unable to prevent the war, we must ensure that the pact is completed. It may become difficult to locate more suitable candidates. We will have to take that into consideration.”

Moltres glanced between the other legends, mulling something over in its mind. “Still aiming to fulfill the chosen pact, are you?”

<Of course,> Mew said, as though nothing were more obvious. <Why would we stray from that path now?>
Interesting, the way they're talking about fulfilling the chosen pact feels somewhat out of line with our current understanding of what it is. Like, the prophecy we saw talked about forging these bonds but not about a specific thing the pact decrees they must do together... right? But now they're talking about fulfilling it, in a way where Mew isn't acting like it already completed it. Maybe I'm reading too much into it, but it might be suggesting there's something we don't know yet.

The firebird narrowed its eyes. “So you say. I still am not convinced that humans possess the resolve necessary for something like this.”

[...]

But no one had said anything to the contrary, so Moltres gave a smug grin and went on, “Humans don’t have the resolve necessary for something like this. They lack passion.”
Moltres saying almost word for word the same thing within a few paragraphs of each other, without it being indicated as a repetition, feels odd to me, like it's not really intentional.

(there's the passion)

And I wasn’t exactly the strongest-willed person around.
But Jade, you're the chosen of Determination

And in the midst of them all, Fearow glanced back and forth at her teammates incredulously. She drew herself back, ruffling her feathers. “*I’m out. This is crazy.*”

Rudy closed his eyes. “That’s fine. I’m the crazy one here,” he said, taking her Pokéball in his hand. He gave her a soft look. “But I don’t want you to have any regrets.”

Fearow scoffed, turning away dismissively. But then she glanced back at him out of the corner of her eye with just the slightest bit of uncertainty. Rudy held out the ball, and she snapped her gaze to him.

“*Stop,*” Fearow said sharply. “*You’re right.*” She took a deep breath, throwing a sideways glance at Pupitar. “*No regrets this time.*”
Aww. I don't quite recall what they're calling back to but I enjoy this moment of one of Rudy's Pokémon actually being like "what, no". In a way I'm surprised more of them aren't (especially Tauros), but probably Rudy would gather a team of Pokémon that are a bit like him.

“What sort of conviction does it take to risk your companions in a pointless battle?” Moltres called out. “What does this say of you?”

Rudy clenched his teeth, glaring at the Legendary. “They’ve got the same conviction as me. We’ve all got each other’s back; we all make each other stronger.”

“Such statements are meaningless,” Moltres said with a scoff. “Any risk you would take is borne by them, not you!”

The hail of fireballs lessened. But before any of them could prepare for another attack, Moltres swept its wings together, and another wall of flames burst up from the ground, right in front of Rudy’s team. The firebird stared down at them with a smirk as though daring them to break past the wall.
I enjoy Moltres challenging him on these things, not angrily just sort of to see how he responds. Moltres took Rudy's initial words as a challenge but really it feels more like Moltres is the one challenging him.

Fearow paused just long enough to let Raichu leap onto her back before flapping harder to gain altitude. The electric-type leaped down from above, landing on Moltres’s back and discharging a flood of lightning. The firebird squinted for a moment as the electricity surged through its body. It began to glow. Then a beam of red shot forward, dissolving Raichu just seconds before flames erupted from the spot where she’d been standing.
I like how Moltres's reaction to a super-effective attack is squinting for a moment. Also the use of recalling to avoid an attack.

“You think I’ll hold back simply because you’re in the way?” it demanded.

Rudy smirked. “It made you pause, didn’t it?” Did he seriously just say that?

Moltres’s eyes went wide for a second. And in that moment’s hesitation, Nidoking burst up from the dirt, horn already crackling with electricity. A bolt of lightning shot through the Legendary. Moltres kicked the ground-type away, annoyed, but then Tauros slammed into it at full force, sparks leaping from his mane.

“I’ve made that mistake before,” Rudy muttered, staring downward, fists clenched. “I put my Pokémon at risk when I wasn’t willing to do the same for him. I’m not letting anything like that happen ever again.”
Aaaaa, good. Rudy really is a person who is extra conscious of his Pokémon taking on risk for him.

Moltres smirked. “Better find an answer, then.” It unleashed another torrent of fire. “Before my patience is through!”

This time Ebony leaped in front, struggling to shield her teammates. Her pelt glowed red, absorbing the flames, but it was too much for her. Fearow flapped her wings, trying in vain to blow away the wall of fire. Raichu retaliated with bursts of lightning. It wasn’t enough. Ebony let out a whimper and sank to the ground. Nidoking struggled to raise a Protect, but it hadn’t been long enough since the last time he’d used it. The barrier flickered with the heat of the flames, then sputtered and died. The lineup broke, Nidoking retreating underground and Raichu hopping on Tauros’s back to escape the Flamethrower.
Hmm, but what about Rudy? He was right next to Raichu, Raichu hops on Tauros's back to get out of the way - is Rudy not still in the way? I would have expected some sort of mention of whether he had to leap out of the way, whether Moltres's flames narrowly avoided him, etc.

Moltres’s eyes twitched from the hit, and it swept another wing forward, sending more fireballs raining down from above. Fearow copied its motions exactly—a shimmering, reflective surface trailed from her wings, spawning an identical barrage to intercept Moltres’s attack.
If the fireballs are raining down from above, how does an identical barrage intercepting it work...? Do they go upwards?

She’d evolved. She’d evolved!! I didn’t think she’d have the strength to pull that off for several more months. Maybe it was the sheer pressure of fighting a Legendary. Maybe it was the force of taking Moltres’s attack. Maybe it was determination alone. But however it happened, she’d evolved.
But determination is supposed to be Jade's thing smh :sadbees:

(I am genuinely mulling over what the real difference between Moltres's passion and Lugia's determination is. When Moltres says humans lack resolve, couldn't the answer to that be determination just as well as passion...? But Jade and Rudy's personalities are quite different. I guess I'm wondering whether the quality they're drawn to is a similar quality in both of them or whether there are two very distinct things they admire.)

Rudy wasn’t fazed. “I want to make a difference. So if you won’t believe me, then let me prove that humans aren’t weak.”

The firebird tilted its head back, looking genuinely surprised. “Such conviction… but I wonder… will it be able to endure the flames of war?”

Rudy grinned. “We’ll find out, won’t we?”

Moltres opened its eyes wide as though it had been slapped, but then immediately broke into reverberating laughter once more. “Speaking as though I have already decided?! Ha! Very well! Let us see how you handle it!”
This all definitely feels like a verbal battle between them more than a physical one.

I'm a little surprised Rudy never quite ended up giving an answer to how Rudy himself will protect his Pokémon and what strength the legends can get from him. Unless, I guess, the answer is just meant to be the bit about how if he combines his strength with Moltres he can help a lot more? But that's an answer he only gives after Moltres has already made the pact.

“So. I’ve sealed my pact, as you wished,” Moltres announced, throwing a sideways glance at Mew. “Does this satisfy you?”

Mew chuckled slightly. <There’s no need to put it like that,> she said with a smile. <But yes… I’m glad.>
Again Mew specifically seems to be pushing for making the pact and fulfilling the prophecy.

Lugia squinted at her. <Need I remind you that you were the one so insistent on keeping the secrecy in the first place?>

<I know…> she said, closing her eyes. <Times have changed.> She refused to look at Lugia.
This is also interesting - Mew used to be insistent on secrecy but not anymore.

Lugia was silent for some time, its mind flitting between two different things. It felt conflicted. <With humans, you can never know when they will turn on you. The Order has already learned that lesson the hard way.>
Stalker and Latios, presumably?

“It’s wild,” Rudy said distantly. “I saw… things.” He closed his eyes and shuddered. All the negative emotions associated with the fight, all at once—that’s what he’d just had to endure. Having gone through that myself, I couldn’t blame him for feeling out of it.
Man, that's got to have been rough for Rudy, after how he lost Wartortle and how that must have stewed in him.

“Wait, seriously? You’re partnered with Lugia?!” Rudy exclaimed, and his tone ripped me back to a distant time. Back when he’d gush about meeting Legendaries and proving himself to them. Back before the weight of the world had crashed down on us.
❤️

“Why didn’t you tell us?” Rudy demanded.

I almost laughed out loud. “Why do you think? I wasn’t allowed to, that’s why.”

He scowled. “That’s dumb, why not?”

I opened my mouth to speak… and then realized that Moltres really hadn’t explained much of anything about the chosen pact to Rudy. Maybe it planned on doing so privately later. Either way, silly as it was, Rudy had a point. While it made sense that we couldn’t go blabbing Legendary secrets to the world, I was absolutely fed up with keeping secrets from friends and allies. No more.

“You’re right. I guess it was dumb.”

Rudy nodded sharply like he’d sure showed me. Like I hadn’t just agreed with him.
Enjoying this Rudy being Rudy, and Jade deciding you know what, screw the secrecy.

This was a fun chapter - some legendary lore, and I liked the battle of wits between Rudy and Moltres, and how Moltres starts off extremely unconvinced about humans but Rudy just wins it over by being extremely shounen protagonist and responding well to its challenges. It really is challenging him more than the other way around, and I enjoy how you show that, and Moltres's increasing amusement and sense that it's just started to like this kid.

I didn't recall this being where they ditch the secrecy - fun to see that, and the hints that Mew used to be big on secrecy but changed its mind recently. All in all, still definitely enjoying revisiting these chapters, picking up more stuff, and thinking about them more.
 

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Oh boy, it’s been a while, huh? Last chapter I read Jade had a… miserable time to say the least. Let’s see how she’s doing now.

(Also am writing this review for the second time after discovering the finished review hadn’t saved properly
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Chapter 21

I didn’t want to answer that. Because the truth was, I didn’t really want to do anything right now. Eating and showering mostly just felt like a chore. Sleeping was nice, I guess. Even if it was impossible to get comfortable and my left arm wouldn’t stop throbbing ever since I’d changed out the bandages and smothered it with every disinfectant I could get my hands on (only because Swift had sat next to my bed and calmly stared at me until I did).

… Yeah, about as well as you’d expect from someone who got tortured >_<

“*Obviously. I used to train by myself, remember?*” When I didn’t respond, he added, “*That doesn’t change the fact that you’re my trainer, and you’re supposed to train me. So you have to do it.*”

He was still trying to pretend he wasn’t worried about me.

It’s nice to see her Pokémon trying to look out for her at least. Firestorm is a good boi.

Rudy would sometimes hold entire conversations with the door, though. This was one of those times.

Same for her friends. I’m sure Jade will pull through this.

Kalos matches that could easily be mistaken for super contests with all the stylish outfits and flashy transformations.

Fucking French people man smh

“How’d you buy this?” I asked. He hadn’t borrowed my wallet—it was still sitting on the bedside table like normal.

Swift: “Uh… someone gave it to me?”

10 minutes earlier:
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“*Stalker gave me money,*” the Pidgeotto replied.

Great, now I had that to worry about. I wasn’t sure why that was worrisome, it just was.

Don’t worry Jade, the interest can’t be that high.

The interest:
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I took a deep breath. “I guess it’s probably time I went outside, yeah. You’ll come with me, right?”

Swift beamed. “*Of course.*”

Swift to the rescue! At least getting out of her room is the first step to recovering from what happened.

“Okay seriously, I know you cheated!” he shouted indignantly.

“Not my fault you don’t know how Follow Me works,” Sasha replied with a giggle.

Oh hey, is that a VGC reference?

The hybrid stood up and slowly shuffled away. But once he’d taken a dozen or so steps, he paused and said, “*Thanks,*” before leaving.

Jade and Chibi’s relationship sure is an interesting one, but I’m all here for it. It’s fun seeing them slowly grow closer.

“Are you the former Kanto commander? I keep hearing all sorts of rumors about him.”

Stalker raised an eyebrow, intrigued. “Is that who the Rockets think I am?”

I shrugged. “They’re not sure if that’s who you are. I think it’s their main theory.”

“That’s interesting,” he said, rubbing his chin. “Well, it’s always good to keep them guessing.”

I stared. He… really hadn’t answered my question at all. “So… are you?”

Stalker gave me a pointed look. “Do you think I am?”

“I don’t know anything at all about the former commander, so I have no idea.”

“I see. Well you wouldn’t have heard much from any Rockets. They don’t like talking about what happened.” More redirecting. He obviously wasn’t going to tell me. I’d learned by now that pushing Stalker to explain something he didn’t intend to was a lost cause.

Yeah, he’s most definitely a Team Rocket commander And I’m not just saying that because of spoilers I’ve seen on Discord

But this was a pretty good chapter! A little slower than usual, but that’s perfectly fine. It makes sense given that it mostly focused on Jade’s recovery of the events of the last chapter. I thought you handled it very well and you can really sympathize with Jade.

At the same time we got more of an insight into Chibi and Razors’ relationship and history, which was pretty interesting. Also I enjoyed that little sparring match between Razors and Firestorm. I don’t have too much to say beyond that, though it will be interesting to see how the rebels’ attempts at freeing Mewtwo will go.

Until next time!
 
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